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* Chell, realizing that she is finally free.
* Chell's reaction once she sees what life is like in Equestria. After all the crap she went through in both Portal games, she definitely deserves to live in such a (normally) happy and carefree place like that.
--> ''It was a long night, but the whole time Chell was smiling... smiling so much that her jaw started to hurt. A smile she continued to wear despite the soreness in her cheeks. Chell couldn't stop herself; for the first time she had so much to smile about.''
** Relatedly, the friendship that develops between Chell and Ditzy Doo. In this story (written before The Last Roundup), Ditzy[=/=]Derpy suffers from a form of Aphasia that causes her to mix up words when speaking. Between that and Chell's [[SilentProtagonist muteness]], they quickly develop a rapport that [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged overshadows their difficulties communicating with other ponies.]]
* Chell's reaction once she sees what life is like in Equestria. After all the crap she went through in both Portal games, she definitely deserves to live in such a (normally) happy and carefree place like that.
--> ''It was a long night, but the whole time Chell was smiling... smiling so much that her jaw started to hurt. A smile she continued to wear despite the soreness in her cheeks. Chell couldn't stop herself; for the first time she had so much to smile about.''
** Relatedly, the friendship that develops between Chell and Ditzy Doo. In this story (written before The Last Roundup), Ditzy[=/=]Derpy suffers from a form of Aphasia that causes her to mix up words when speaking. Between that and Chell's [[SilentProtagonist muteness]], they quickly develop a rapport that [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged overshadows their difficulties communicating with other ponies.]]
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* Chell's reaction once she sees what life is like in Equestria. After all the crap she went through in bothPortal ''Portal'' games, she definitely deserves to live in such a (normally) happy and carefree place like that.
--> ''It -->''It was a long night, but the whole time Chell was smiling... smiling so much that her jaw started to hurt. A smile she continued to wear despite the soreness in her cheeks. Chell couldn't stop herself; for the first time she had so much to smile about.''
** Relatedly, the friendship that develops between Chell and Ditzy Doo. In this story (written beforeThe "The Last Roundup), Roundup"), Ditzy[=/=]Derpy suffers from a form of Aphasia that causes her to mix up words when speaking. Between that and Chell's [[SilentProtagonist muteness]], they quickly develop a rapport that [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged overshadows their difficulties communicating with other ponies.]]ponies]].
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* Chell's reaction once she sees what life is like in Equestria. After all the crap she went through in both
** Relatedly, the friendship that develops between Chell and Ditzy Doo. In this story (written before
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* In a twisted sort of way, [=GLaDOS=] making a note to rebuild ATLAS and P-BODY after they [[spoiler: save her from the destruction of Aperture.]]
* Luna's reward to Chell at the end [[spoiler: of an enchanted necklace that allows her to project her thoughts as speech, finally giving her a chance to speak her mind, as Luna puts it.]]
* Luna's reward to Chell at the end [[spoiler: of an enchanted necklace that allows her to project her thoughts as speech, finally giving her a chance to speak her mind, as Luna puts it.]]
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* Princess Luna's reward to Chell at the end[[spoiler: of [[spoiler:of an enchanted necklace that allows her to project her thoughts as speech, speech - finally giving her a chance to speak her mind, as Luna puts it.]]it]].
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* When a fan wrote a side story involving Celestia and GLaDOS, the writers [[AscendedFanon recut the story to make it canon with the rest of the fic]]. That's some true Brony collaboration right there.
* In a twisted sort of way, GLaDOS making a note to rebuild ATLAS and P-BODY after they [[spoiler: save her from the destruction of Aperture.]]
* In a twisted sort of way, GLaDOS making a note to rebuild ATLAS and P-BODY after they [[spoiler: save her from the destruction of Aperture.]]
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* When a fan wrote a side story involving Celestia and GLaDOS, [=GLaDOS=], the writers [[AscendedFanon recut the story to make it canon with the rest of the fic]]. That's some true Brony collaboration right there.
* In a twisted sort of way,GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] making a note to rebuild ATLAS and P-BODY after they [[spoiler: save her from the destruction of Aperture.]]
* In a twisted sort of way,
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* When a fan wrote a side story involving Celestia and GLaDOS, the writers [[SureWhyNot [[AscendedFanon recut the story to make it canon with the rest of the fic]]. That's some true Brony collaboration right there.
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* Chell's reaction once she sees what life is like in Equestria. After all the crap she went through in both Portal games, she defently definitely deserves to live in such a (normally) happy and carefree place like that.
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** Relatedly, the friendship that develops between Chell and Ditzy Doo. In this story (written before The Last Roundup), Ditzy[=/=]Derpy suffers from a form of Aphasia that causes her to mix up words when speaking. Between that and Chell's [[SilentProtagonist muteness]], they quickly develop a rapport that [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged overshadows their difficulties communicating with other ponies.]]
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* Luna's reward to Chell at the end [[spoiler: of an enchanted necklace that allows her to project her thoughts as speech, finally giving her a chance to speak her mind, as Luna puts it.]]
* Luna's reward to Chell at the end [[spoiler: of an enchanted necklace that allows her to project her thoughts as speech, finally giving her a chance to speak her mind, as Luna puts it.]]
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* When a fan wrote a side story involving Celestia and GLaDOS, the writers [[SureWhyNot recut the story to make it canon with the rest of the fic]]. That's some true Brony collaboration right there.there.
* In a twisted sort of way, GLaDOS making a note to rebuild ATLAS and P-BODY after they [[spoiler: save her from the destruction of Aperture.]]
* In a twisted sort of way, GLaDOS making a note to rebuild ATLAS and P-BODY after they [[spoiler: save her from the destruction of Aperture.]]
