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* Dan actually thanking Twilight for his HyperspaceArsenal. She is understandably speechless.
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* Dan actually thanking Twilight for his HyperspaceArsenal. She is understandably speechless.speechless.
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** Dan and Pinkie [[spoiler: Having their first BigDamnKiss, while in the ensuing carnage.]]
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** Dan and Pinkie [[spoiler: Having their first BigDamnKiss, TheBigDamnKiss, while in the ensuing carnage.]]
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** To a lesser extent, Dan and Spike managing bond over his ability breathe fire.
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** To a lesser extent, Dan and Spike managing to bond over his ability to breathe fire.
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* Dan not being able to say anything bad about Fluttershy and later having a friendly talk with her, which evolved into sharing their feelings. Capped off with Dan actually giving Fluttershy good and surprisingly non-violent advice, on how to stand up to Angel Bunny.
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* Dan not being able to say anything bad about Fluttershy and later having a friendly talk with her, which evolved into sharing their feelings. Capped off with Dan actually giving Fluttershy good and surprisingly non-violent advice, advice on how to stand up to Angel Bunny.
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* Every one being genuinely worried about Dan, when he seems way too [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness calm and absent minded to be himself.]]
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* Every one Everyone being genuinely worried about Dan, when he seems way too [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness calm and absent minded absentminded to be himself.]]
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* Pinkie telling ''Elise'' off, after she tries act like she is any better than Dan.
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* Pinkie telling ''Elise'' off, off after she tries to act like she is any better than Dan.
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* Dan realizing he truly loves Pinkie and '''hasn't''' been nice to her, solely for selfish reasons.
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* Dan realizing he truly loves Pinkie and '''hasn't''' been nice to her, her solely for selfish reasons.
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* Despite Terry-Guy embodying SuperDickery and trying to kill his friends, Chris actually tries to comfort him and convince Terry to get back into ''actual'' superhero work, by giving up on his obsession with Dr. Jerk (Dan) and burying the hatchet. [[spoiler: [[IgnoredEmpathy It doesn't work]] and he makes a full FaceHeelTurn immediately afterwards, but it was still an admiral try none the less.]]
* Dan willing to stand up to someone, who is literally powerful enough to give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with just his pinkie, because he through Pinkie Pie through a window.
* Dan willing to stand up to someone, who is literally powerful enough to give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with just his pinkie, because he through Pinkie Pie through a window.
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* Despite Terry-Guy embodying SuperDickery and trying to kill his friends, Chris actually tries to comfort him and convince Terry to get back into ''actual'' superhero work, by giving up on his obsession with Dr. Jerk (Dan) and burying the hatchet. [[spoiler: [[IgnoredEmpathy [[IgnoredEpiphany It doesn't work]] and he makes a full FaceHeelTurn immediately afterwards, but it was still an admiral try none the less.nonetheless.]]
* Dan willing to stand up to someone, who is literally powerful enough to give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with just his pinkie, because hethrough threw Pinkie Pie through a window.
* Dan willing to stand up to someone, who is literally powerful enough to give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with just his pinkie, because he
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* The gangs interactions, while relaxing at a bar, after a long and physically draining arc ''and'' a bad day at work.
** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan kind of girlfriend.]] Even if Dan, abuses said honor for a little fun.
** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan kind of girlfriend.]] Even if Dan, abuses said honor for a little fun.
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* The gangs gang's interactions, while relaxing at a bar, after a long and physically draining arc ''and'' a bad day at work.
** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriendwill "will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan Dan" kind of girlfriend.]] Even if Dan, Dan abuses said honor for a little fun.
** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend
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* Dan not being able to say anything bad about Fluttershy and later having a friendly talk with her, which evolved into sharing their feelings. Capped off with Dan actually giving Fluttershy good and surprisingly non-violent advice, on how to stand up to Angle Bunny.
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* Dan not being able to say anything bad about Fluttershy and later having a friendly talk with her, which evolved into sharing their feelings. Capped off with Dan actually giving Fluttershy good and surprisingly non-violent advice, on how to stand up to Angle Angel Bunny.
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* Dan and Elise, actually managing to have friendly small talk in the car, while Pinkie and Chris are "asleep".
* The ''readers'' get one, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commentators from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
* The ''readers'' get one, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commentators from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
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* Dan and Elise, Elise actually managing to have friendly small talk in the car, car while Pinkie and Chris are "asleep".
* The ''readers'' getone, one when, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commentators from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
* The ''readers'' get
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]] [[note]] Chris, Pinkie, D.H. (Human Derpy), Crunchy, and Ninja Dave.[[note/]]
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]] [[note]] Chris, Pinkie, D.H. (Human Derpy), Crunchy, and Ninja Dave.[[note/]][[/note]]
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]] [[note: Chris, Pinkie, D.H. (Human Derpy), Crunchy, and Ninja Dave.]]
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]] [[note: [[note]] Chris, Pinkie, D.H. (Human Derpy), Crunchy, and Ninja Dave.]][[note/]]
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]]
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]] [[note: Chris, Pinkie, D.H. (Human Derpy), Crunchy, and Ninja Dave.]]
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** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan.]] Even if Dan, abuses said honor for a little fun.
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** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan.Dan kind of girlfriend.]] Even if Dan, abuses said honor for a little fun.
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* Dan realizing that through his and Pinkie's misadventures, [[TrueCompanions he has created a small circle of friends for the first time in his life.]]
* Dan actually thanking Twilight for his HyperspaceArsenal. She is understandably speechless.
* Dan actually thanking Twilight for his HyperspaceArsenal. She is understandably speechless.
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* Dan, Pinkie, Elise, and the mechanic having fun, while playing a super villains.
* Despite Terry-Guy embodying SuperDickery and trying to kill his friends, Chris actually tries to comfort him and convince Terry to get back into ''actual'' superhero work, by giving up on his obsession with Dr. Jerk (Dan) and burying the hatchet. [[spoiler: [[IgnoredEmpathy It doesn't work]] and he makes a full FaceHeelTurn immediately afterwards, but it was still an admiral try none the less.]]
* Dan willing to stand up to someone, who is literally powerful enough to give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with just his pinkie, because he through Pinkie Pie through a window.
* Pinkie showing said JerkAss, why beating on Dan like that ''is a bad idea''.
* The gangs interactions, while relaxing at a bar, after a long and physically draining arc ''and'' a bad day at work.
** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan.]] Even if Dan, abuses said honor for a little fun.
** Dan carrying Pinkie Pie back to the apartment.
* Dan doing his trademark "swearing vengeance into the heavens" opening to start the Vs. Vampires arc, only to stop and ask Pinkie (Who is still out from a ''very tiring day''), if she would like to sleepily join in.
--> Pinkie: Vampirezzzzz...
--> '''Dan and Pinkie vs Vampires'''
* Despite Terry-Guy embodying SuperDickery and trying to kill his friends, Chris actually tries to comfort him and convince Terry to get back into ''actual'' superhero work, by giving up on his obsession with Dr. Jerk (Dan) and burying the hatchet. [[spoiler: [[IgnoredEmpathy It doesn't work]] and he makes a full FaceHeelTurn immediately afterwards, but it was still an admiral try none the less.]]
* Dan willing to stand up to someone, who is literally powerful enough to give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with just his pinkie, because he through Pinkie Pie through a window.
* Pinkie showing said JerkAss, why beating on Dan like that ''is a bad idea''.
* The gangs interactions, while relaxing at a bar, after a long and physically draining arc ''and'' a bad day at work.
** Pinkie showing she is a [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend will not let ''anyone'' harm Dan.]] Even if Dan, abuses said honor for a little fun.
** Dan carrying Pinkie Pie back to the apartment.
* Dan doing his trademark "swearing vengeance into the heavens" opening to start the Vs. Vampires arc, only to stop and ask Pinkie (Who is still out from a ''very tiring day''), if she would like to sleepily join in.
--> Pinkie: Vampirezzzzz...
--> '''Dan and Pinkie vs Vampires'''
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* The ''readers'' get one, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commenters from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
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* The ''readers'' get one, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commenters commentators from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
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* Every one being genuinely worried about Dan, when he seems way too [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBuissness calm and absent minded to be himself.]]
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* Every one being genuinely worried about Dan, when he seems way too [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBuissness [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness calm and absent minded to be himself.]]
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* Chris and Pinkie becoming fast friends.
* Dan actually trying to make up for his revenge attempt of [[spoiler: burning Pinkie's photo album]], by putting a party for her together.
* Dan and Elise, bonding over getting back at someone.
* Dan letting Chris choose something to get revenge on, when Chris starts getting jealous of him and Pinkie.
* Pinkie becoming Elise's best friend.
* Dan not being able to say anything bad about Fluttershy and later having a friendly talk with her, which evolved into sharing their feelings. Capped off with Dan actually giving Fluttershy good and surprisingly non-violent advice, on how to stand up to Angle Bunny.
** To a lesser extent, Dan and Spike managing bond over his ability breathe fire.
* After getting into a fight which leads to trying to bludgeon each other to death, the next time Dan and Pinkie fight, it's with tickling and pillows.
* Dan and Elise, actually managing to have friendly small talk in the car, while Pinkie and Chris are "asleep".
* The ''readers'' get one, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commenters from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
* Elise, Chris, Pinkie, and even ''Dan'' standing together, when Elise's parents go too far.
* Elise, her parents, Pinkie, and Dan, putting aside their differences to save Chris.
** Dan and Pinkie [[spoiler: Having their first BigDamnKiss, while in the ensuing carnage.]]
* After the battle with the Wendigo, the rest of that chapter is pretty touching.
* This exchange:
--> Dan: It never ends does it?
--> Pinkie: That's fine. (To herself) ''I'll go on a never ending stream of silly and dangerous adventures... just so long as I'm with you.''
* Dan '''GETTING A JOB''', just to buy Pinkie a good present. Every single character is both shocked and touched by this.
* Every one being genuinely worried about Dan, when he seems way too [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBuissness calm and absent minded to be himself.]]
** Chris managing to get the old Dan back, is both this and hilarious.
* Pinkie telling ''Elise'' off, after she tries act like she is any better than Dan.
--> Elise: Maybe my moral high ground is less a mountain, and more a bathmat.
* Dan realizing he truly loves Pinkie and '''hasn't''' been nice to her, solely for selfish reasons.
* In a morbid kind of way, both Dan ''and'' Pinkie Pie's first two ideas on getting each other a gift to show how much they care about each other, were to start a city wide fire to spell "I Love You" or to decapitate the other's enemies.
* Pinkie bonding with Becky at the comic book store.
* Dan and Pinkie finally becoming an OfficialCouple.
* Dan actually trying to make up for his revenge attempt of [[spoiler: burning Pinkie's photo album]], by putting a party for her together.
* Dan and Elise, bonding over getting back at someone.
* Dan letting Chris choose something to get revenge on, when Chris starts getting jealous of him and Pinkie.
* Pinkie becoming Elise's best friend.
* Dan not being able to say anything bad about Fluttershy and later having a friendly talk with her, which evolved into sharing their feelings. Capped off with Dan actually giving Fluttershy good and surprisingly non-violent advice, on how to stand up to Angle Bunny.
** To a lesser extent, Dan and Spike managing bond over his ability breathe fire.
* After getting into a fight which leads to trying to bludgeon each other to death, the next time Dan and Pinkie fight, it's with tickling and pillows.
* Dan and Elise, actually managing to have friendly small talk in the car, while Pinkie and Chris are "asleep".
* The ''readers'' get one, after the state Idaho tries to go after Pinkie Pie, several commenters from various states, speaking for said states, gave reason why Idaho shouldn't mess Pinkie Pie.
* Elise, Chris, Pinkie, and even ''Dan'' standing together, when Elise's parents go too far.
* Elise, her parents, Pinkie, and Dan, putting aside their differences to save Chris.
** Dan and Pinkie [[spoiler: Having their first BigDamnKiss, while in the ensuing carnage.]]
* After the battle with the Wendigo, the rest of that chapter is pretty touching.
* This exchange:
--> Dan: It never ends does it?
--> Pinkie: That's fine. (To herself) ''I'll go on a never ending stream of silly and dangerous adventures... just so long as I'm with you.''
* Dan '''GETTING A JOB''', just to buy Pinkie a good present. Every single character is both shocked and touched by this.
* Every one being genuinely worried about Dan, when he seems way too [[OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBuissness calm and absent minded to be himself.]]
** Chris managing to get the old Dan back, is both this and hilarious.
* Pinkie telling ''Elise'' off, after she tries act like she is any better than Dan.
--> Elise: Maybe my moral high ground is less a mountain, and more a bathmat.
* Dan realizing he truly loves Pinkie and '''hasn't''' been nice to her, solely for selfish reasons.
* In a morbid kind of way, both Dan ''and'' Pinkie Pie's first two ideas on getting each other a gift to show how much they care about each other, were to start a city wide fire to spell "I Love You" or to decapitate the other's enemies.
* Pinkie bonding with Becky at the comic book store.
* Dan and Pinkie finally becoming an OfficialCouple.
