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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor girl inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment with no parole for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.

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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. Before that he had the non-Quirk users kids and camp staff on the bus gunned down to LeaveNoWitnesses [[spoiler:and fathered Arla one of the kidnapped teens via PrisonRape]], proving himself a hypocrite in his talks about protecting humanity. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor girl inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment with no parole for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.

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* Kennedy Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who's [[TeensAreMonsters only 17-years old and spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money]], even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].)
** [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].


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* Kennedy Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who's [[TeensAreMonsters only 17-years old and spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money]], even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].)
** [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
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* Martin Johnson, the sheriff of Gravesfield. It’s hard to feel much sympathy for him for losing his nephew, Cody, to Luz's hands, considering he bribed businesses and schools to ban Luz and only Luz in order to ruin her life as much as possible and try to drive her out of town.

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* Martin Johnson, the sheriff of Gravesfield. It’s hard to feel much sympathy for him for losing his nephew, Cody, to Luz's hands, considering he bribed businesses and schools to ban Luz and only Luz in order to ruin her life as much as possible and try to drive her out of town. Many cheered after he was killed by Luz.
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a 19-year-old PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]], [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a 19-year-old PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]], [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but many more thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* Martin Johnson the sheriff of Gravesfield. It’s hard to feel much sympathy for him for losing his nephew, Cody, to Luz's hands, considering he bribed businesses and schools to ban Luz and only Luz in order to ruin her life as much as possible and try to drive her out of town.

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* Martin Johnson Johnson, the sheriff of Gravesfield. It’s hard to feel much sympathy for him for losing his nephew, Cody, to Luz's hands, considering he bribed businesses and schools to ban Luz and only Luz in order to ruin her life as much as possible and try to drive her out of town.
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* Martin Johnson the sheriff of Gravesfield. It’s hard to feel much sympathy for him for losing his nephew, Cody, to Luz's hands, considering he bribed businesses and schools to ban Luz and only Luz in order to ruin her life as much as possible and try to drive her out of town.
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a 19-year-old PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a 19-year-old PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] Sophia]], [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor girl inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.

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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor girl inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment with no parole for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.

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* Kennedy Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who's [[TeensAreMonsters only 17-years old and spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money]], even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].) [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].

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* Kennedy Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who's [[TeensAreMonsters only 17-years old and spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money]], even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].) )
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[[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a 19-year-old PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField.DeadlyForceField to give her a HeroicBSOD. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] who's a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp as he died terrified of her but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is who's a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] comrades]], he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]].corpse]] with her DeadlyForceField. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.

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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor girl inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people.people, something it appears to take pleasure in. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor inside]]. Many readers believed him getting life imprisonment for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.

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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor inside]]. Many readers believed that him getting life imprisonment for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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* Kennedy Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money, even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].) [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s only 19-years old and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Kennedy Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who [[spoiler:who's [[TeensAreMonsters only 17-years old and spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money, money]], even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].) [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s [[TeensAreMonsters only 19-years old old]] and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Kennedy Jennkins acts cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way, with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]]. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s a disgusting monster who killed and raped his wife and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[EvilIsCool Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he murders Camila and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Kennedy Jennkins Jennkins, TheLeader of Heaven's Devil's [[spoiler:who spearheaded the attack that slaughtered half of Luz's teammates so that they could have a better chance to kill Luz for money, even going as far as to deliver LastDisrespects on Julia's corpse]]. He acts [[SmugSnake cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way, way]], with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and likes barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. Kennedy even tries to invoke ThePromise on [[NiceGuy Stanley]] to betray Luz and tries to attack when he refuses. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and winning the DeadlyGame was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. ([[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all]].) [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]]. Smith]] is a PsychoForHire for the Wittebane Mega Church. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s only 19-years old and is already a disgusting monster who [[DomesticAbuse killed and raped his wife wife]] and has committed some pretty gruesome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[EvilIsCool [[WorthyOpponent Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he [[HeroKiller murders Camila Camila]] and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. He even went as far as to give an EvilLaugh and say it was the [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor funniest thing he's ever done]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].more]].
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Oooh boy, ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'' has [[HateSink some pretty loathsome and hatable characters]] for their evil actions In-Universe, and also, readers will most likely hate them because of this:as well.



* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]]. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s a disgusting monster who killed and raped his wife and has committed some pretty grusome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[EvilIsCool Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he murders Camila and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]]. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s a disgusting monster who killed and raped his wife and has committed some pretty grusome gruesome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[EvilIsCool Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he murders Camila and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].
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Oooh boy, ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'' has [[HateSink some pretty loathsome and hatable characters]] for their evil actions In-Universe, and also, readers will most likely hate them because of this:
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* The first ArcVillain, the AntagonisticGovernor, Rodger Maxwell, is blatantly played out to be a massive {{Jerkass}} and overall a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children [[WouldHurtAChild between ages 14-18]] into a [[DeadlyGame literal death game]] for his sick kicks and [[FantasticRacism hatred toward those with powers]], literally a day after the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, having [[ILied lied]] about letting the winners go alive with their prize money. His short-sighted EvilPlan involved [[spoiler:making Luz take all of the powers of those in Connecticut with her PowerParasite Quirk while contained in the forest, before then bombing the area with the poor inside]]. Many readers believed him getting life imprisonment for it wasn't enough and wished he had been brutally killed by Luz's hands in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* Kennedy Jennkins acts cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way, with his team backing him up outnumbering his enemies and barking orders at them. However, he gets easily frustrated and scared when things start to go south for him. He stupidly believes [[ConsummateLiar The Governor]] intends to honor his agreement to pay him billions for killing [[TheHero Luz]], with no intention of sharing any of it with any of his teammates, when reality the ArcVillain doesn't intend to let any of kids live out of FantasticRacism. [[spoiler:When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere abandoning his comrades to [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off]].
* Then there's [[GiantMook Jonah Smith]]. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even for Riley and his fellow assassin comrades]] he’s a disgusting monster who killed and raped his wife and has committed some pretty grusome assassinations against innocent people. He’s pretty awful from the readers’ perspective, as well, when compared to [[RegretfulTraitor Riley]] and [[EvilIsCool Sophia]] [[spoiler:especially after he murders Camila and tricks Luz into believing she killed her [[LudicrousGibs after blowing up her corpse]]. Many cheered after Luz killed him with a FinishingStomp but thought he deserved to suffer a lot more]].

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