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It's pretty awful\\
But I think the worst game\\
Is SonicLabyrinth\\
-> [[{{Tropers/Awesomekid42}} Awesomekid42]]
But I think the worst game\\
Is SonicLabyrinth\\
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It's pretty awful\\
But I think the worst game is\\
VideoGame/SonicLabyrinth\\
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It's pretty awful\\
But I think the worst game\\
Is SonicLabyrinth\\
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But I think the worst game\\
Is SonicLabyrinth\\
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\"Could of\" =/= Could have/Could\'ve. The syllable structure of a haiku is 5-7-5, not 3-8-5.
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It could of been great\\
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It could of have been great\\
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It's no use\\
These load times take an eternity\\
Time to read a book
-> Tropers/ViperAcidZX
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Fixing some of the formatting and adding my own haikus.
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-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]
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-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]
Tropers/GoldHeartKyogre
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My God, They Killed Blaze!\\
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My God, They Killed Blaze!\\Blaze!
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Had good music, though\\
-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
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Had good music, though\\
though
->[[Tropers.DanGenesis Tropers/DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
Genesis
->
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No one gave a shit.\\
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No one gave a shit.\\
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If only for [[AtomicFBomb "FUUUUUUCK!"]]\\
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If only for [[AtomicFBomb "FUUUUUUCK!"]]\\"FUUUUUUCK!"]]
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I need a hard drink.\\
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I need a hard drink.\\
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Oh, WhatCouldHaveBeen.\\
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Oh, WhatCouldHaveBeen.\\
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To think that was sane?\\
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To think that was sane?\\sane?
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[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading Now it loads. Again.]]\\
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[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading Now it loads. Again.]]\\]]
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-> [[{{Tropers/WilliamSchnell}} WilliamSchnell]]
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-> [[{{Tropers/WilliamSchnell}} WilliamSchnell]]WilliamSchnell]]
It could of been great\\
But Creator/{{Sega}} mucked it all up\\
What a disaster
-> Tropers/ViperAcidZX
It's no use\\
These load times take an eternity\\
Time to read a book
-> Tropers/ViperAcidZX
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It could of been great\\
But Creator/{{Sega}} mucked it all up\\
What a disaster
-> Tropers/ViperAcidZX
It's no use\\
These load times take an eternity\\
Time to read a book
-> Tropers/ViperAcidZX
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Endless loading screens\\
Backed up by sucky physics\\
Also, [[MostAnnoyingSound IT'S NO USE]]\\
-> [[{{Tropers/WilliamSchnell}} WilliamSchnell]]
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They Killed Blaze!\\
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My God, They Killed Blaze!\\
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[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading And now it loads. Again.]]\\
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[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading And now Now it loads. Again.]]\\
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[[DanGreen Dan Green's]] EvilLaugh.\\
-> [[{{Tropers/Cyberlink420}} Cyberlink420]]
-> [[{{Tropers/Cyberlink420}} Cyberlink420]]
to:
[[DanGreen Dan Green's]] EvilLaugh.\\
EvilLaugh.
-> [[{{Tropers/Cyberlink420}}Cyberlink420]]Cyberlink420]]
Aspired to so much\\
But, due to impatience, lived\\
Up to none of it
->[=InTheGallbladder=]
-> [[{{Tropers/Cyberlink420}}
Aspired to so much\\
But, due to impatience, lived\\
Up to none of it
->[=InTheGallbladder=]
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-> Tropers/Cyberlink420
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-> Tropers/Cyberlink420[[{{Tropers/Cyberlink420}} Cyberlink420]]
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-> Tropers/BlueGuy
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-> Tropers/BlueGuyTropers/BlueGuy
This game just plain sucks.\\
Only thing worth playing for:\\
[[DanGreen Dan Green's]] EvilLaugh.\\
-> Tropers/Cyberlink420
This game just plain sucks.\\
Only thing worth playing for:\\
[[DanGreen Dan Green's]] EvilLaugh.\\
-> Tropers/Cyberlink420
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-> [[{{Tropers/Odd1}} 0dd1]]
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-> [[{{Tropers/Odd1}} 0dd1]]0dd1]]
Ah HaHaHaNo\\
[[DiscreditedMeme Everyone knows]] [[ObviousBeta its status-]]\\
[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading And now it loads. Again.]]\\
-> Tropers/BlueGuy
Ah HaHaHaNo\\
[[DiscreditedMeme Everyone knows]] [[ObviousBeta its status-]]\\
[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading And now it loads. Again.]]\\
-> Tropers/BlueGuy
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No meta haikus, please.
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You can't find many\\
haiku's on this page that won't\\
criticise the game.\\
haiku's on this page that won't\\
criticise the game.\\
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You can't find many\\
haiku's on this page that won't\\
criticise the game.\\
haiku's on this page that won't\\
criticise the game.\\
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-> Tropers/{{Odd1}}[[{{Tropers/Odd1}} 0dd1]]
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[[InterspeciesRomance Sonic and Elise]].\\
What the hell were they smoking\\
To think that was sane?\\
-> Tropers/{{Odd1}}
[[InterspeciesRomance Sonic and Elise]].\\
What the hell were they smoking\\
To think that was sane?\\
-> Tropers/{{Odd1}}
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-> Tropers/ProfessorRaine
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-> Tropers/ProfessorRaineTropers/ProfessorRaine
It had potential.\\
But [[MeddlingExecutives executives rushed it]].\\
Oh, WhatCouldHaveBeen.\\
-> Tropers/BonsaiForest
It had potential.\\
But [[MeddlingExecutives executives rushed it]].\\
Oh, WhatCouldHaveBeen.\\
-> Tropers/BonsaiForest
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I need a hard drink.//
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I need a hard drink.//\\
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The characters know\\
that this one haiku alone\\
is insufficient.
-> @/{{Wolfman2000}}
Making a sandwich\\
[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading while the game loads the data]].\\
The game is too slow.
-> @/{{Wolfman2000}}
{{Obvious Beta}}.\\
And to think I wanted this!\\
Well, I've changed my mind.
-> [[Tropers.ReikoKazama Reiko Kazama]]
This game would have rocked\\
But they rushed for Christmas day\\
Now look what we [[ObviousBeta got]].
-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]
Third worst Sonic game\\
Lowest of the low for him\\
They Killed Blaze!\\
-> Tropers/{{Miru}}
This game was so bad\\
It erased itself from time\\
Had good music, though\\
-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
Terrible Story\\
Had plenty of characters\\
No one gave a shit.\\
-> Tropers/TweedlyDee
Irredeemable.\\
At least the Let's Play is good,\\
If only for [[AtomicFBomb "FUUUUUUCK!"]]\\
-> Tropers/KingOfKatamari
It was on clearance.\\
I actually beat this game.\\
I need a hard drink.//
-> Tropers/ProfessorRaine
that this one haiku alone\\
is insufficient.
-> @/{{Wolfman2000}}
Making a sandwich\\
[[LoadsAndLoadsOfLoading while the game loads the data]].\\
The game is too slow.
-> @/{{Wolfman2000}}
{{Obvious Beta}}.\\
And to think I wanted this!\\
Well, I've changed my mind.
-> [[Tropers.ReikoKazama Reiko Kazama]]
This game would have rocked\\
But they rushed for Christmas day\\
Now look what we [[ObviousBeta got]].
-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]
Third worst Sonic game\\
Lowest of the low for him\\
They Killed Blaze!\\
-> Tropers/{{Miru}}
This game was so bad\\
It erased itself from time\\
Had good music, though\\
-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
Terrible Story\\
Had plenty of characters\\
No one gave a shit.\\
-> Tropers/TweedlyDee
Irredeemable.\\
At least the Let's Play is good,\\
If only for [[AtomicFBomb "FUUUUUUCK!"]]\\
-> Tropers/KingOfKatamari
It was on clearance.\\
I actually beat this game.\\
I need a hard drink.//
-> Tropers/ProfessorRaine
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It was on clearance.\\
I actually beat this game.\\
I need a hard drink.//
-> Tropers/ProfessorRaine
It was on clearance.\\
I actually beat this game.\\
I need a hard drink.//
-> Tropers/ProfessorRaine
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-> {{Wolfman2000}}
@/{{Wolfman2000}}
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-> {{Wolfman2000}}
@/{{Wolfman2000}}
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whoops
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-> {{KingOfKatamari}}
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-> {{KingOfKatamari}}Tropers/KingOfKatamari
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-> Tropers/KingOfKatamari
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-> Tropers/KingOfKatamari{{KingOfKatamari}}
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Irredeemable.\\
At least the Let's Play is good,\\
If only for [[AtomicFBomb "FUUUUUUCK!"]]\\
-> Tropers/KingOfKatamari
Irredeemable.\\
At least the Let's Play is good,\\
If only for [[AtomicFBomb "FUUUUUUCK!"]]\\
-> Tropers/KingOfKatamari
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Well, [[{{Understatement}} I've changed my mind.]]
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Had plenty characters\\
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Had plenty of characters\\
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-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
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-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]Genesis]]
Terrible Story\\
Had plenty characters\\
No one gave a shit.\\
-> Tropers/TweedlyDee
Terrible Story\\
Had plenty characters\\
No one gave a shit.\\
-> Tropers/TweedlyDee
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-> Tropers/{{Miru}}
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-> Tropers/{{Miru}}Tropers/{{Miru}}
This game was so bad\\
It erased itself from time\\
Had good music, though\\
-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
This game was so bad\\
It erased itself from time\\
Had good music, though\\
-> [[Tropers.DanGenesis Dan Genesis]]
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Third worst Sonic game
Lowest of the low for him
They Killed Blaze!
Lowest of the low for him
They Killed Blaze!
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Third worst Sonic game
game\\
Lowest of the low forhim
him\\
They KilledBlaze!Blaze!\\
Lowest of the low for
They Killed
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-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]
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-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]Kyogre]]
Third worst Sonic game
Lowest of the low for him
They Killed Blaze!
-> Tropers/{{Miru}}
Third worst Sonic game
Lowest of the low for him
They Killed Blaze!
-> Tropers/{{Miru}}
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-> [[Tropers.ReikoKazama Reiko Kazama]]
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-> [[Tropers.ReikoKazama Reiko Kazama]]Kazama]]
This game would have rocked\\
But they rushed for Christmas day\\
Now look what we [[ObviousBeta got]].
-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]
This game would have rocked\\
But they rushed for Christmas day\\
Now look what we [[ObviousBeta got]].
-> [[Tropers.GoldHeartKyogre Gold Heart Kyogre]]