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** How Yona is taken out of the war: DefeatByModesty. And Yuko's reaction to taking a pie to the face is [[BigNo a bit over the top.]]
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** How Yona is taken out of the war: DefeatByModesty. And Yuko's reaction to taking a pie to the face is [[BigNo a bit over the top.]]]]
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* Weiss Reacts to Beginnings:
** Velvet becomes Pyrrha's tutor in insanity.
-->''"Do we do it?" Pyrrha whispered.''\\
''"NOW!" Velvet yelled.''\\
''Weiss and Jaune looked up, only having time to release a half-uttered 'What' before the burlap sacks descended upon them.''
** Apparently, Nora once tried to '''eat''' [[Franchise/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Kyubey]].
** Weiss escapes from her bindings and walks off, leaving Jaune still tied up.
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* Weiss Reacts to Beginnings:
** Velvet becomes Pyrrha's tutor in insanity.
-->''"Do we do it?" Pyrrha whispered.''\\
''"NOW!" Velvet yelled.''\\
''Weiss and Jaune looked up, only having time to release a half-uttered 'What' before the burlap sacks descended upon them.''
** Apparently, Nora once tried to '''eat''' [[Franchise/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Kyubey]].
** Weiss escapes from her bindings and walks off, leaving Jaune still tied up.
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** Glynda's increasingly desperate insisting that [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial she is not sexually frustrated]].
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** Glynda's increasingly desperate insisting insistence that [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial she is not sexually frustrated]].
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* Weiss trying to play DwarfFortress and having her fortresses shut down by ice wolves, evil weather, giant keas, fire snakes, [[OverlyLongGag kobold kidnappers and blind cave ogres]].
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* Weiss trying to play DwarfFortress and having her fortresses shut down by ice wolves, evil weather, giant keas, fire snakes, [[OverlyLongGag kobold kidnappers and blind cave ogres]].ogres]].
* The Great Antic War arc:
** The reason said war is fought? Ren and Yang called the other out on being fanboys/girls of the Arc sisters.
** Ruby pulls a HeroicSacrifice, TakingTheBullet for Weiss. Only said bullet is a custard pie and she isn't fatally injured. Weiss' is more than understandably [[FacePalm irritated.]]
** Pyrrha and Lucina take the entire war as seriously as a ''real'' war and sympathise with Weiss 'losing' Ruby, despite the fact that ''Ruby is literally in the room next to them, playing on Weiss' computer.''
** Cardin and Melanie pretend to be StarCrossedLovers and 'die' together when several stray shots hit them. Pretty much everyone except Weiss mourns their loss.
** How Yona is taken out of the war: DefeatByModesty. And Yuko's reaction to taking a pie to the face is [[BigNo a bit over the top.]]
* The Great Antic War arc:
** The reason said war is fought? Ren and Yang called the other out on being fanboys/girls of the Arc sisters.
** Ruby pulls a HeroicSacrifice, TakingTheBullet for Weiss. Only said bullet is a custard pie and she isn't fatally injured. Weiss' is more than understandably [[FacePalm irritated.]]
** Pyrrha and Lucina take the entire war as seriously as a ''real'' war and sympathise with Weiss 'losing' Ruby, despite the fact that ''Ruby is literally in the room next to them, playing on Weiss' computer.''
** Cardin and Melanie pretend to be StarCrossedLovers and 'die' together when several stray shots hit them. Pretty much everyone except Weiss mourns their loss.
** How Yona is taken out of the war: DefeatByModesty. And Yuko's reaction to taking a pie to the face is [[BigNo a bit over the top.]]
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** Also, Blake's [[FelonyMisdemeanor reac]][[YouMonster tion]] to Weiss taking her GurrenLagann anime and merch for a week if she wins.
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** Also, Blake's [[FelonyMisdemeanor reac]][[YouMonster tion]] to Weiss taking her GurrenLagann anime and merch for a week if she wins.wins.
* Weiss trying to play DwarfFortress and having her fortresses shut down by ice wolves, evil weather, giant keas, fire snakes, [[OverlyLongGag kobold kidnappers and blind cave ogres]].
* Weiss trying to play DwarfFortress and having her fortresses shut down by ice wolves, evil weather, giant keas, fire snakes, [[OverlyLongGag kobold kidnappers and blind cave ogres]].
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** Also, Blake's [[FelonyMisdemeanour reac]][[YouMonster tion]] to Weiss taking her GurrenLagann anime and merch for a week if she wins.
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** Also, Blake's [[FelonyMisdemeanour [[FelonyMisdemeanor reac]][[YouMonster tion]] to Weiss taking her GurrenLagann anime and merch for a week if she wins.
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** Apparently, Pyrrha thinks [[TokenMiniMoe Aspasia]] is a [[BrotherSisterIncest brocon]]. Much to the latter's [[Squick horror]] and [[UnstoppableRage irritation]].
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** Apparently, Pyrrha thinks [[TokenMiniMoe Aspasia]] is a [[BrotherSisterIncest brocon]]. Much to the latter's [[Squick [[{{Squick}} horror]] and [[UnstoppableRage irritation]].irritation]].
** Also, Blake's [[FelonyMisdemeanour reac]][[YouMonster tion]] to Weiss taking her GurrenLagann anime and merch for a week if she wins.
** Also, Blake's [[FelonyMisdemeanour reac]][[YouMonster tion]] to Weiss taking her GurrenLagann anime and merch for a week if she wins.
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* Weiss Reacts to Civilization V:
** Yang [[FailedASpotCheck failing a spot check]] and not noticing that ''Weiss just captured her entire territory'' while she was conquering Ren.
** Lucina trying to pull a BigDamnHeroes.....and being horribly stomped by Yang and Ren.
** Ruby snatching victory from both Weiss and Blake by building the equivalent of the [[OmniscientCouncilOfVagueness Illuminati]].
** Fionn being knocked out by [[CurbStompBattle Yang's Mongol hordes]] after making literally ONE city on the mainland. [[ButtMonkey Poor guy can't catch a break]].
** Apparently, Pyrrha thinks [[TokenMiniMoe Aspasia]] is a [[BrotherSisterIncest brocon]]. Much to the latter's [[Squick horror]] and [[UnstoppableRage irritation]].
** Yang [[FailedASpotCheck failing a spot check]] and not noticing that ''Weiss just captured her entire territory'' while she was conquering Ren.
** Lucina trying to pull a BigDamnHeroes.....and being horribly stomped by Yang and Ren.
** Ruby snatching victory from both Weiss and Blake by building the equivalent of the [[OmniscientCouncilOfVagueness Illuminati]].
** Fionn being knocked out by [[CurbStompBattle Yang's Mongol hordes]] after making literally ONE city on the mainland. [[ButtMonkey Poor guy can't catch a break]].
** Apparently, Pyrrha thinks [[TokenMiniMoe Aspasia]] is a [[BrotherSisterIncest brocon]]. Much to the latter's [[Squick horror]] and [[UnstoppableRage irritation]].
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** Part 2 has Pyrrha attempting to find badass quotes.
** Part 3 has Blake interrupting the [[ItMakesSenseInContext duel between Minako and Pyrrha]], Velvet kidnapping Weiss (again) and Cinder [[NoodleIncident causing explosions trying to acquire burritos]].
* The RunningGag that Weiss sucks at video games gets amped up in Weiss Reacts to Weiss The Gamer, where it's mentioned that ''[[EpicFail she somehow broke Mario Kart into not letting her respawn]]'', among other things.
* Jaune Reacts to Badass Families:
** [[TokenMiniMoe Aspasia]] utterly stomping Dove.
** Maeve and [[FireEmblemAwakening Lucina]] get introduced beating up [[JerkAss Russell]] and [[ButtMonkey Sky]] respectively. Maeve even puts the fear of god in [[OnlySaneMan Weiss]], of all people.
** [[CodeGeass Euphemia]] apparently doesn't know the difference between [[TheDitz a canteen and a catering classroom]].
** Yin referring to the Antic War and [[HaruhiSuzumiya O-Mikuru-sama]].
** Part 3 has Blake interrupting the [[ItMakesSenseInContext duel between Minako and Pyrrha]], Velvet kidnapping Weiss (again) and Cinder [[NoodleIncident causing explosions trying to acquire burritos]].
* The RunningGag that Weiss sucks at video games gets amped up in Weiss Reacts to Weiss The Gamer, where it's mentioned that ''[[EpicFail she somehow broke Mario Kart into not letting her respawn]]'', among other things.
* Jaune Reacts to Badass Families:
** [[TokenMiniMoe Aspasia]] utterly stomping Dove.
** Maeve and [[FireEmblemAwakening Lucina]] get introduced beating up [[JerkAss Russell]] and [[ButtMonkey Sky]] respectively. Maeve even puts the fear of god in [[OnlySaneMan Weiss]], of all people.
** [[CodeGeass Euphemia]] apparently doesn't know the difference between [[TheDitz a canteen and a catering classroom]].
** Yin referring to the Antic War and [[HaruhiSuzumiya O-Mikuru-sama]].
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* [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Teams MAMI, SYKA, KYKO, HMRA and MDKA]] in Diary. They are all [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplayers]] who cosplay as the character their team is named for. Glynda is even invited to join Team MAMI for [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold various]] [[BuxomIsBetter related]] [[RegalRinglets reasons]].
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* [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Teams MAMI, SYKA, KYKO, HMRA and MDKA]] in Diary. They are all [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplayers]] who cosplay as the character their team is named for. Glynda is even invited to join Team MAMI for [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold various]] [[BuxomIsBetter related]] [[RegalRinglets reasons]].reasons]].
* The Beacon Dance, Part 1:
** Apparently, [[DynamicEntry Nora and Ren plan to enter the dance with a Tantor, Blake with Neko-Lagann, and Minako with a rocket-propelled shipping cart.]] Jaune's reaction is utterly priceless, as well as Minako casually shaking him off like it was nothing.
** Blake punching Pyrrha in the face to get her to quit moping. It's also awesome, too.
** Melanie and Miltiades arguing about tuxedos and leather jackets.
** Nora BreakingTheFourthWall.
* The Beacon Dance, Part 1:
** Apparently, [[DynamicEntry Nora and Ren plan to enter the dance with a Tantor, Blake with Neko-Lagann, and Minako with a rocket-propelled shipping cart.]] Jaune's reaction is utterly priceless, as well as Minako casually shaking him off like it was nothing.
** Blake punching Pyrrha in the face to get her to quit moping. It's also awesome, too.
** Melanie and Miltiades arguing about tuxedos and leather jackets.
** Nora BreakingTheFourthWall.
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* [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Teams MAMI, SYKA, KYKO, HMRA and MDKA]] in Diary. They are all [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplayers]] who cosplay as the character their team is named for. Glynda is even invited to join Team MAMI for [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold various]] [[BuxomIsBetter related]] [[MegaTwindrills reasons]].
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* [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Teams MAMI, SYKA, KYKO, HMRA and MDKA]] in Diary. They are all [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplayers]] who cosplay as the character their team is named for. Glynda is even invited to join Team MAMI for [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold various]] [[BuxomIsBetter related]] [[MegaTwindrills [[RegalRinglets reasons]].
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--> ''You monster.....''
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--> ''You monster.....''''
* [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Teams MAMI, SYKA, KYKO, HMRA and MDKA]] in Diary. They are all [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplayers]] who cosplay as the character their team is named for. Glynda is even invited to join Team MAMI for [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold various]] [[BuxomIsBetter related]] [[MegaTwindrills reasons]].
* [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Teams MAMI, SYKA, KYKO, HMRA and MDKA]] in Diary. They are all [[CosplayOtakuGirl cosplayers]] who cosplay as the character their team is named for. Glynda is even invited to join Team MAMI for [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold various]] [[BuxomIsBetter related]] [[MegaTwindrills reasons]].
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** Weiss' hilarious [[TsunDere responses]] to all fifty chapters of Weiss Reacts during her first recap chapter.
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** Weiss' hilarious [[TsunDere responses]] to all fifty chapters of Weiss Reacts during her first recap chapter.chapter.
* Blake [[BadAss LITERALLY shaking the earth with]] [[ThePowerOfRock incredibly badass songs and playing]]......all to make Yang dress like [[GurrenLagann Nia]]. Yang's reaction when she realises that she'll have to [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dye her hair]] for it is priceless.
--> ''You monster.....''
* Blake [[BadAss LITERALLY shaking the earth with]] [[ThePowerOfRock incredibly badass songs and playing]]......all to make Yang dress like [[GurrenLagann Nia]]. Yang's reaction when she realises that she'll have to [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dye her hair]] for it is priceless.
--> ''You monster.....''
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** Cinder turning into a MadBomber and [[CodeGeass Jeremiah's]] response.
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** Cinder turning into a MadBomber and [[CodeGeass Jeremiah's]] response.response.
* All the Recap chapters. It helps that they heavily [[LampshadeHanging lampshade]] a lot of the chapters in the fic itself while making fun of them.
** Velvet chanting about flat chests in her recap chapter and generally being obsessed with Weiss as usual.
** Minako using a ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome rocket-propelled office chair]]'' to make her getaway from Dove and Russell.
** Weiss' hilarious [[TsunDere responses]] to all fifty chapters of Weiss Reacts during her first recap chapter.
* All the Recap chapters. It helps that they heavily [[LampshadeHanging lampshade]] a lot of the chapters in the fic itself while making fun of them.
** Velvet chanting about flat chests in her recap chapter and generally being obsessed with Weiss as usual.
** Minako using a ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome rocket-propelled office chair]]'' to make her getaway from Dove and Russell.
** Weiss' hilarious [[TsunDere responses]] to all fifty chapters of Weiss Reacts during her first recap chapter.
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** Vivi being a DeadpanSnarker despite being TheUnintelligible. And Yatsuhashi remaining TheComicallySerious throughout.
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** Vivi being a DeadpanSnarker despite being TheUnintelligible. And Yatsuhashi remaining TheComicallySerious throughout.throughout.
** In Part 2, ''Tohru'' gives up on Velvet. ThePollyanna actually gives up on Velvet. [[EpicFail Well done.]]
** Velvet being rendered a ButtMonkey by Vivi, cementing the latter's LittleMissSnarker status.
** Cinder turning into a MadBomber and [[CodeGeass Jeremiah's]] response.
** In Part 2, ''Tohru'' gives up on Velvet. ThePollyanna actually gives up on Velvet. [[EpicFail Well done.]]
** Velvet being rendered a ButtMonkey by Vivi, cementing the latter's LittleMissSnarker status.
** Cinder turning into a MadBomber and [[CodeGeass Jeremiah's]] response.
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** [[ButtMonkey Poor Tohru cannot catch a break at all.]] She spends her appearances caught in an antic or caught being glomped by Nora.
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** [[ButtMonkey Poor Tohru cannot catch a break at all.]] She spends her appearances caught in an antic or caught being glomped by Nora.Nora.
* [[ADayInTheLimelight Velvet Reacts to Velvet's Obsession, Part 1]]
** Tohru's ButtMonkey status is cemented when she spends half the chapter unconscious due to Espresso groping her and uncovering her HiddenBuxom.
** Espresso then proceeds to do the same to a very horrified Fox, and gets absolutely owned by Yatsuhashi.
** Velvet ignoring everything entirely and fixating entirely on trying to get tips so she can get her Weiss. She even qualifies Weiss and Ruby [[OfficialCouple getting together]] as a ''minor setback''.
** Vivi being a DeadpanSnarker despite being TheUnintelligible. And Yatsuhashi remaining TheComicallySerious throughout.
* [[ADayInTheLimelight Velvet Reacts to Velvet's Obsession, Part 1]]
** Tohru's ButtMonkey status is cemented when she spends half the chapter unconscious due to Espresso groping her and uncovering her HiddenBuxom.
** Espresso then proceeds to do the same to a very horrified Fox, and gets absolutely owned by Yatsuhashi.
** Velvet ignoring everything entirely and fixating entirely on trying to get tips so she can get her Weiss. She even qualifies Weiss and Ruby [[OfficialCouple getting together]] as a ''minor setback''.
** Vivi being a DeadpanSnarker despite being TheUnintelligible. And Yatsuhashi remaining TheComicallySerious throughout.
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** [[{{Yandere}} Pyrrha]] acting ridiculously jealous towards Tohru when it comes to Jaune- or rather, towards [[{{VideoGame/Persona3}} Minako]].
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** [[{{Yandere}} Pyrrha]] acting ridiculously jealous towards Tohru when it comes to Jaune- or rather, towards [[{{VideoGame/Persona3}} Minako]].Minako]].
* A Melodic Comedy:
** Apparently everyone in the Reactsverse is yandere.
** Lukas' tablet getting hacked and [[BadassBoast Team Antic's motto]] playing.
* Coco-chan's Power Hour:
** Coco having a SplitPersonality or four. Definitely, though, the funniest is either [[{{Yandere}} Mocha]] or [[LoveableSexManiac Espresso]].
** [[ButtMonkey Poor Tohru cannot catch a break at all.]] She spends her appearances caught in an antic or caught being glomped by Nora.
* A Melodic Comedy:
** Apparently everyone in the Reactsverse is yandere.
** Lukas' tablet getting hacked and [[BadassBoast Team Antic's motto]] playing.
* Coco-chan's Power Hour:
** Coco having a SplitPersonality or four. Definitely, though, the funniest is either [[{{Yandere}} Mocha]] or [[LoveableSexManiac Espresso]].
** [[ButtMonkey Poor Tohru cannot catch a break at all.]] She spends her appearances caught in an antic or caught being glomped by Nora.
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** The contents of the diary itself. A MaidCafe, Nora's mother being a much worse CloudCuckooLander than her daughter and blowing up the east wing [[RunningGag (twice)]] and Alexander constantly using DynamicEntry via chariot.
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** The contents of the diary itself. A MaidCafe, Nora's mother being a much worse CloudCuckooLander than her daughter and blowing up the east wing [[RunningGag (twice)]] and Alexander constantly using DynamicEntry via chariot.chariot.
* Part 2 is even funnier:
** Roman actually pulls a ScrewThisImOuttaHere because of the insanity.
** Glynda's increasingly desperate insisting that [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial she is not sexually frustrated]].
** And, of course, Cinder, Yuko and Ozpin trolling her the entire time.
* Weiss Reacts to Transfer Students:
** No, [[TheDitz Sky]], [[FruitsBasket Tohru]] '''[[TeamMom Honda]]''' is a different person from [[{{VideoGame/Persona4}} Tohru]] '''[[TheSociopath Adachi]].'''
** [[{{Yandere}} Pyrrha]] acting ridiculously jealous towards Tohru when it comes to Jaune- or rather, towards [[{{VideoGame/Persona3}} Minako]].
* Part 2 is even funnier:
** Roman actually pulls a ScrewThisImOuttaHere because of the insanity.
** Glynda's increasingly desperate insisting that [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial she is not sexually frustrated]].
** And, of course, Cinder, Yuko and Ozpin trolling her the entire time.
* Weiss Reacts to Transfer Students:
** No, [[TheDitz Sky]], [[FruitsBasket Tohru]] '''[[TeamMom Honda]]''' is a different person from [[{{VideoGame/Persona4}} Tohru]] '''[[TheSociopath Adachi]].'''
** [[{{Yandere}} Pyrrha]] acting ridiculously jealous towards Tohru when it comes to Jaune- or rather, towards [[{{VideoGame/Persona3}} Minako]].
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* [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent The Diary of Glynda Goodwitch, Part 1]]:
** Highlights of the chapter include: [[DeadpanSnarker Roman]] commenting on everything, [[TsunDere Glynda]] being flustered by absolutely everybody and everything, [[{{Troll}} Cinder]] and [[TheGadfly Ozpin]] taking advantage of it and the wholly confused [[OnlySaneMan Chieri]] just casually reading the eponymous diary.
** [[LoveableSexManiac Yuko's]] appearance at the end, where [[SkinshipGrope she ends up groping Glynda]], much to the latter's discontent.
** The contents of the diary itself. A MaidCafe, Nora's mother being a much worse CloudCuckooLander than her daughter and blowing up the east wing [[RunningGag (twice)]] and Alexander constantly using DynamicEntry via chariot.
** Highlights of the chapter include: [[DeadpanSnarker Roman]] commenting on everything, [[TsunDere Glynda]] being flustered by absolutely everybody and everything, [[{{Troll}} Cinder]] and [[TheGadfly Ozpin]] taking advantage of it and the wholly confused [[OnlySaneMan Chieri]] just casually reading the eponymous diary.
** [[LoveableSexManiac Yuko's]] appearance at the end, where [[SkinshipGrope she ends up groping Glynda]], much to the latter's discontent.
** The contents of the diary itself. A MaidCafe, Nora's mother being a much worse CloudCuckooLander than her daughter and blowing up the east wing [[RunningGag (twice)]] and Alexander constantly using DynamicEntry via chariot.
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** Pyrrha in general, due to her {{Flanderization}} into a StalkerWithACrush for Jaune.....and yet retaining her [TheComicallySerious seriousness]] and BadAss creds. See the Crowning Moment of Awesome page for the latter.
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** Pyrrha in general, due to her {{Flanderization}} into a StalkerWithACrush for Jaune.....and yet retaining her [TheComicallySerious [[TheComicallySerious seriousness]] and BadAss creds. See the Crowning Moment of Awesome page for the latter.
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** Yang ComicallyMissingThePoint and being absolutely [[OhCrap terrified]] by Pyrrha when she finds her
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** Yang ComicallyMissingThePoint and being absolutely [[OhCrap terrified]] by Pyrrha when she finds herher, assuming Pyrrha wants some indecent sketches of hers.
* In an earlier chapter featuring the story 'Pyrrha(c) victory', Pyrrha's various reactions to the stuff in the story. Basically, by the end of it, she wants to, among other things, ''invoke ClothingDamage to catch [[ChivalrousPervert Jaune's]] attention.''
** Pyrrha in general, due to her {{Flanderization}} into a StalkerWithACrush for Jaune.....and yet retaining her [TheComicallySerious seriousness]] and BadAss creds. See the Crowning Moment of Awesome page for the latter.
* In an earlier chapter featuring the story 'Pyrrha(c) victory', Pyrrha's various reactions to the stuff in the story. Basically, by the end of it, she wants to, among other things, ''invoke ClothingDamage to catch [[ChivalrousPervert Jaune's]] attention.''
** Pyrrha in general, due to her {{Flanderization}} into a StalkerWithACrush for Jaune.....and yet retaining her [TheComicallySerious seriousness]] and BadAss creds. See the Crowning Moment of Awesome page for the latter.
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* The protocol for calming down Weiss when she goes on a [[UnstoppableRage rant]]? Summon [[CompanionCube Sharkie-chan]] and invoke CutenessProximity in Weiss.
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* The protocol for calming down Weiss when she goes on a [[UnstoppableRage rant]]? Summon [[CompanionCube Sharkie-chan]] and invoke CutenessProximity in Weiss.Weiss.
* [[{{VideoGame/Persona3}} Yukari]] [[WhatTheHellHero calling the author]] out on including her in Weiss Reacts for his own purposes. Counts as SelfDeprecation.
** The author then proceeds to apologise- probably to the readers, but it's not a stretch to imagine, considering the fic has NoFourthWall that he's apologising to her instead.
* Everytime Velvet gets a chapter to herself, it's implied she [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou goes over to the author's house and knocks him out to use his computer and make herself the protagonist.]]
** Despite this, she still gets curbstomped by Ruby. [[ButtMonkey In her own chapter.]]
** In fact, pretty much any time the author does anything. He's a ButtMonkey of his ''own characters''.
* Pyrrha's [[TranquilFury reaction]] to 'Here by the Altar', due to it shipping Jaune with Weiss. The trick? The TwistEnding is that Jaune was getting married to Pyrrha in the fic.
** Yang ComicallyMissingThePoint and being absolutely [[OhCrap terrified]] by Pyrrha when she finds her
* [[{{VideoGame/Persona3}} Yukari]] [[WhatTheHellHero calling the author]] out on including her in Weiss Reacts for his own purposes. Counts as SelfDeprecation.
** The author then proceeds to apologise- probably to the readers, but it's not a stretch to imagine, considering the fic has NoFourthWall that he's apologising to her instead.
* Everytime Velvet gets a chapter to herself, it's implied she [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou goes over to the author's house and knocks him out to use his computer and make herself the protagonist.]]
** Despite this, she still gets curbstomped by Ruby. [[ButtMonkey In her own chapter.]]
** In fact, pretty much any time the author does anything. He's a ButtMonkey of his ''own characters''.
* Pyrrha's [[TranquilFury reaction]] to 'Here by the Altar', due to it shipping Jaune with Weiss. The trick? The TwistEnding is that Jaune was getting married to Pyrrha in the fic.
** Yang ComicallyMissingThePoint and being absolutely [[OhCrap terrified]] by Pyrrha when she finds her
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** She loses to ''[[EpicFail the first Gym Leader]]''. Who's weak to her element to boot. Cue RageQuit.
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** She loses to ''[[EpicFail the first Gym Leader]]''. Who's weak to her element to boot. Cue RageQuit.RageQuit.
* The protocol for calming down Weiss when she goes on a [[UnstoppableRage rant]]? Summon [[CompanionCube Sharkie-chan]] and invoke CutenessProximity in Weiss.
* The protocol for calming down Weiss when she goes on a [[UnstoppableRage rant]]? Summon [[CompanionCube Sharkie-chan]] and invoke CutenessProximity in Weiss.
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* [[EverythingsCoolerWithDinosaurs Sir]] [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman Lyserg]]. For the four chapters he features, he fails to not be somewhat funny.
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* [[EverythingsCoolerWithDinosaurs [[EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs Sir]] [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman Lyserg]]. For the four chapters he features, he fails to not be somewhat funny.
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--> '''[[StalkerWithACrush Velvet]]''': ''([[ItMakesSenseInContext rubbing her face in Weiss' chest]]) [[ACupAngst "So flat...."]]''
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--> '''[[StalkerWithACrush Velvet]]''': ''([[ItMakesSenseInContext rubbing her face in Weiss' chest]]) [[ACupAngst "So flat...."]]''"]]''
* [[EverythingsCoolerWithDinosaurs Sir]] [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman Lyserg]]. For the four chapters he features, he fails to not be somewhat funny.
* Cinder trolling Glynda:
--> '''Cinder''': Like what I left you?
--> '''Glynda''': (covered in soot and maple syrup, clenching her fists) You.....
** Later, in the fic 'Homecoming':
--> '''Glynda'''': CINDER FALL I WILL MURDER YOU RIGHT HERE AND NOW IF YOU DO NOT RELINQUISH MY DIARY
** How Cinder acquired the diary: She bribed Yang with pizza for her safe password.
* Nora Reacts to Wrath of the Valkyrie:
** Nora hurling around sloth plushies and raving about [[RunningGag breaking people's knees]].
--> '''Cardin''': I don't see how you [put up with Nora].
** 'Wrath of the Valkyrie' is a fanfic about Nora pranking everyone in Beacon for various reasons, usually [[DisproportionateRetribution minor ones]]. The fic by itself is already a CrowningMomentOfFunny, but Nora's reactions to it are even funnier:
---> '''Nora''': (reacting to the idea of taking her beloved sweets) NO PYRRHA I WONT LET YOU TOUCH MY BABIES
---> '''Nora''': Okay, this one has knee-breaking....BUT I'M NOT OBSESSED WITH REN ENOUGH
** [[FlatWhat Cardin's reaction to Nora.]] Also, Pyrrha's DeathGlare making even [[CrazyAwesome Nora]] back down. ''Nora''.
* 'Weiss Reacts to Pokemon':
** Weiss picks [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins Pip]][[MakingASplash lup]] because it's [[CutenessProximity adorable]]. She also names the rival Yang.
** Weiss constantly getting [[ComMons Bidoof]] when trying to catch a Starly, before [[YankTheDogsChain losing the Starly to a critical hit.]]
** Later, she loses to a [[PlayingWithFire Ponyta]] with Momo (the aformentioned Piplup). Keep in mind that in Pokemon, Water trumps Fire.
--> "THESE TRAINERS ARE FAR TOO POWERFUL"
** She loses to ''[[EpicFail the first Gym Leader]]''. Who's weak to her element to boot. Cue RageQuit.
* [[EverythingsCoolerWithDinosaurs Sir]] [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman Lyserg]]. For the four chapters he features, he fails to not be somewhat funny.
* Cinder trolling Glynda:
--> '''Cinder''': Like what I left you?
--> '''Glynda''': (covered in soot and maple syrup, clenching her fists) You.....
** Later, in the fic 'Homecoming':
--> '''Glynda'''': CINDER FALL I WILL MURDER YOU RIGHT HERE AND NOW IF YOU DO NOT RELINQUISH MY DIARY
** How Cinder acquired the diary: She bribed Yang with pizza for her safe password.
* Nora Reacts to Wrath of the Valkyrie:
** Nora hurling around sloth plushies and raving about [[RunningGag breaking people's knees]].
--> '''Cardin''': I don't see how you [put up with Nora].
** 'Wrath of the Valkyrie' is a fanfic about Nora pranking everyone in Beacon for various reasons, usually [[DisproportionateRetribution minor ones]]. The fic by itself is already a CrowningMomentOfFunny, but Nora's reactions to it are even funnier:
---> '''Nora''': (reacting to the idea of taking her beloved sweets) NO PYRRHA I WONT LET YOU TOUCH MY BABIES
---> '''Nora''': Okay, this one has knee-breaking....BUT I'M NOT OBSESSED WITH REN ENOUGH
** [[FlatWhat Cardin's reaction to Nora.]] Also, Pyrrha's DeathGlare making even [[CrazyAwesome Nora]] back down. ''Nora''.
* 'Weiss Reacts to Pokemon':
** Weiss picks [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins Pip]][[MakingASplash lup]] because it's [[CutenessProximity adorable]]. She also names the rival Yang.
** Weiss constantly getting [[ComMons Bidoof]] when trying to catch a Starly, before [[YankTheDogsChain losing the Starly to a critical hit.]]
** Later, she loses to a [[PlayingWithFire Ponyta]] with Momo (the aformentioned Piplup). Keep in mind that in Pokemon, Water trumps Fire.
--> "THESE TRAINERS ARE FAR TOO POWERFUL"
** She loses to ''[[EpicFail the first Gym Leader]]''. Who's weak to her element to boot. Cue RageQuit.
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** Weiss' attempt to not make [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee Ruby]] look like a stalker failing entirely and only being saved by the timely arrival of Cardin.
** [[ThoseTwoBadGuys Dove and Russell]] getting [[CurbStompBattle treated to a]] [[ShockAndAwe Ziodyne]] courtesy of [[BigBrotherInstinct Yu Narukami]]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
** [[ThoseTwoBadGuys Dove and Russell]] getting [[CurbStompBattle treated to a]] [[ShockAndAwe Ziodyne]] courtesy of [[BigBrotherInstinct Yu Narukami]]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* [[ThoseTwoBadGuys Dove and Russell]] getting [[CurbStompBattle treated to a]] [[ShockAndAwe Ziodyne]] courtesy of [[BigBrotherInstinct Yu Narukami]]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* During 'Blake and the Great Mecha Battle', an [[RealRobot Atlesian Paladin]] piloted by Cinder attempts to intervene in a fight between Blake with Yang and Weiss with Ruby in Blake's recreations of the Gurren Lagann and the Nirvash. Cue Cinder's OhCrap moment at realising that both of their [[SuperRobot mecha]] are taller and more powerful than hers, and then a casual [[CurbStompBattle punch from the Gurren]] disassembling the Paladin entirely.
** Also, Velvet:
-> '''[[TsunDere Weiss]]''': ''"I-I just haven't had t-time to grow out yet! L-Let go of me!"''
-> '''[[StalkerWithACrush Velvet]]''': ''([[ItMakesSenseInContext rubbing her face in Weiss' chest]]) [[ACupAngst "So flat...."]]''
** Also, Velvet:
-> '''[[TsunDere Weiss]]''': ''"I-I just haven't had t-time to grow out yet! L-Let go of me!"''
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* To start with, ''the entire fanfic''. However, here are some specific examples.
* The first chapter:
** Weiss being a CovertPervert and having an implied EroticDream about Ruby.
** Ruby acting [[LuminescentBlush flustered]].....followed by her approving of [[{{Rule34}} the fic in question]].
** The ending. [[{{Troll}} Ren]] [[ShipperOnDeck wrote the lemon between Weiss and Ruby]]. This chapter simply sets the tune for the rest of the fic.
* The StylisticSuck of the MarySue fanfic Weiss reads and how hilariously OutOfCharacter Weiss and Blake are- Weiss is subjected to {{Chickification}} while Blake is subjected to RonTheDeathEater.
** Likewise, the ending; [[{{Yandere}} Vel]][[PsychoLesbian vet]] wrote the fic. [[SchmuckBait Also, her happy reaction to the one review she got; Weiss bashing the fic.]]
* Yang utterly trashing the dorm in search of a bottle of shampoo in 'RWBY Reacts to RWBY Trailers, Part 2'. And just afterwards, Weiss's [[GroinAttack punishment]] towards an innocent [[ButtMonkey Cardin]].
-> ''...the sounds of screaming left terror in the hearts of men in all of Beacon and nearby houses for a week.''
* 'Weiss Reacts to Yanderes'. Specifically, [[{{Yandere}} Velvet]] kidnapping Weiss, forcing her to read terrible smut featuring thinly-veiled expies of her and Weiss, and then Weiss getting rescued by Ruby, who proceeds to get into a [[CatFight cheek-pinching fight with Velvet over Weiss!]]
* [[BreakingTheFourthWall 'Weiss Reacts]] [[SelfDeprecation to Elf's Badfic'.]] This is where the fic starts to pick up its reputation for being one of the most meta fanfics in the archive, to be exact.
* 'RWBY at Animecon'. All of it. From [[GRatedDrug Blake getting stoned on catnip]], [[LuckyStar Kagami and Konata forcing Weiss to take a picture with them]], [[WholesomeCrossdresser Jaune being groped]] [[HoYay by Ren and ogled by other men]], to [[{{Troll}} Ozpin]] forcing [[TsunDere Glynda]] to call him the God-Emperor of Swag....and the implication that this all happened [[NoodleIncident last year as well]].
* 'Weiss Reacts to Dear Fanfiction'.
->'''The author''': ''(talking to Velvet about getting a larger part in future chapters)'' [[NoFourthWall GODDAMMIT I'M TRYING TO HANDLE ENOUGH META HERE I DONT NEED YOUR YANDERE FANTASIES CLOGGING UP MY STORIES]]
* [[{{VideoGame/Persona4}} The Nanako Incident]]:
** Firstly, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee Ruby and Yang's reaction to realising that Nanako and Yu are in Vale.]] [[LoveableSexManiac Then Yang's]] FemaleGaze as Yu leaves....
** [[TheCutie Nanako]] calling [[ThePornomancer Jaune]] a manwhore. Doubles as a CallBack:
->''Oooooh....even NANAKO calls you a manwhore!''
* Weiss' attempt to not make [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee Ruby]] look like a stalker failing entirely and only being saved by the timely arrival of Cardin.
* [[ThoseTwoBadGuys Dove and Russell]] getting [[CurbStompBattle treated to a]] [[ShockAndAwe Ziodyne]] courtesy of [[BigBrotherInstinct Yu Narukami]]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
* [[LoveIsInTheAir The Xiao Long Incident]]:
** Almost half the students in Beacon want [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer Weiss]]. And [[EvenTheGuysWantHim Jaune]]. Cue [[SingleTargetSexuality Cardin]] having to save them both.
** The reason it happened? [[CloudCuckooLander Nora]] [[TooDumbToLive tried to add a grenade launcher to her grenade launcher]].
** [[LaserGuidedKarma Yang finally having an antic done on her]]: She's tied to a flagpost by her ankles. By WEISS of all people.
* The first chapter:
** Weiss being a CovertPervert and having an implied EroticDream about Ruby.
** Ruby acting [[LuminescentBlush flustered]].....followed by her approving of [[{{Rule34}} the fic in question]].
** The ending. [[{{Troll}} Ren]] [[ShipperOnDeck wrote the lemon between Weiss and Ruby]]. This chapter simply sets the tune for the rest of the fic.
* The StylisticSuck of the MarySue fanfic Weiss reads and how hilariously OutOfCharacter Weiss and Blake are- Weiss is subjected to {{Chickification}} while Blake is subjected to RonTheDeathEater.
** Likewise, the ending; [[{{Yandere}} Vel]][[PsychoLesbian vet]] wrote the fic. [[SchmuckBait Also, her happy reaction to the one review she got; Weiss bashing the fic.]]
* Yang utterly trashing the dorm in search of a bottle of shampoo in 'RWBY Reacts to RWBY Trailers, Part 2'. And just afterwards, Weiss's [[GroinAttack punishment]] towards an innocent [[ButtMonkey Cardin]].
-> ''...the sounds of screaming left terror in the hearts of men in all of Beacon and nearby houses for a week.''
* 'Weiss Reacts to Yanderes'. Specifically, [[{{Yandere}} Velvet]] kidnapping Weiss, forcing her to read terrible smut featuring thinly-veiled expies of her and Weiss, and then Weiss getting rescued by Ruby, who proceeds to get into a [[CatFight cheek-pinching fight with Velvet over Weiss!]]
* [[BreakingTheFourthWall 'Weiss Reacts]] [[SelfDeprecation to Elf's Badfic'.]] This is where the fic starts to pick up its reputation for being one of the most meta fanfics in the archive, to be exact.
* 'RWBY at Animecon'. All of it. From [[GRatedDrug Blake getting stoned on catnip]], [[LuckyStar Kagami and Konata forcing Weiss to take a picture with them]], [[WholesomeCrossdresser Jaune being groped]] [[HoYay by Ren and ogled by other men]], to [[{{Troll}} Ozpin]] forcing [[TsunDere Glynda]] to call him the God-Emperor of Swag....and the implication that this all happened [[NoodleIncident last year as well]].
* 'Weiss Reacts to Dear Fanfiction'.
->'''The author''': ''(talking to Velvet about getting a larger part in future chapters)'' [[NoFourthWall GODDAMMIT I'M TRYING TO HANDLE ENOUGH META HERE I DONT NEED YOUR YANDERE FANTASIES CLOGGING UP MY STORIES]]
* [[{{VideoGame/Persona4}} The Nanako Incident]]:
** Firstly, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee Ruby and Yang's reaction to realising that Nanako and Yu are in Vale.]] [[LoveableSexManiac Then Yang's]] FemaleGaze as Yu leaves....
** [[TheCutie Nanako]] calling [[ThePornomancer Jaune]] a manwhore. Doubles as a CallBack:
->''Oooooh....even NANAKO calls you a manwhore!''
* Weiss' attempt to not make [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee Ruby]] look like a stalker failing entirely and only being saved by the timely arrival of Cardin.
* [[ThoseTwoBadGuys Dove and Russell]] getting [[CurbStompBattle treated to a]] [[ShockAndAwe Ziodyne]] courtesy of [[BigBrotherInstinct Yu Narukami]]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
* [[LoveIsInTheAir The Xiao Long Incident]]:
** Almost half the students in Beacon want [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer Weiss]]. And [[EvenTheGuysWantHim Jaune]]. Cue [[SingleTargetSexuality Cardin]] having to save them both.
** The reason it happened? [[CloudCuckooLander Nora]] [[TooDumbToLive tried to add a grenade launcher to her grenade launcher]].
** [[LaserGuidedKarma Yang finally having an antic done on her]]: She's tied to a flagpost by her ankles. By WEISS of all people.
