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* Princess and Prince's flirting love letters, sending the entire nation from local woman to male city guards into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]].
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*Chalotte criticizes Violet for being utterly un-emotive. Violet's response is to stretch her own cheeks.
* Princess and Prince's flirting love letters, sending the entire nationfrom local woman to male city guards into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]].
overload]]. Most egregious one had to be when the Prince claims that he isn't a great man himself:
-->'''Male soldier #1''': "What are you even doing!?"
-->'''Male soldier #2''': "If you're a man, be one and tell her to walk with you!"
* Princess and Prince's flirting love letters, sending the entire nation
-->'''Male soldier #1''': "What are you even doing!?"
-->'''Male soldier #2''': "If you're a man, be one and tell her to walk with you!"
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*Princess and Prince's flirting love letters, sending the entire nation from local woman to male city guards into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]].
*Princess and Prince's flirting love letters, sending the entire nation from local woman to male city guards into collective [[SickeninglySweethearts diabetes overload]].
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** Her reason for picking the dog is hilarious.
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*** When Violet sees them sitting drinking together, she notes they were arguing previously, which immediately causes them to start yelling at each other again.
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* The serious adult Hodgins suddenly presents Violet with not one but three animal dolls.
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* The serious adult Hodgins suddenly presents Violet with not one but three animal dolls. When she tries to demur, he insists that no, she has to pick one ''right now'': "Quick, the world is ending--!"
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** God knows what compel them to go from huffing at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea together at the end.
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** God knows what compel them to go from huffing sending DeathGlare at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea together at the end.
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* Train-wreck of a love letter Violet wrote for her client. Probably a BlackComedy more than anything, though.
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* Train-wreck The train-wreck of a love letter Violet wrote for her client. Probably a BlackComedy more than anything, though.
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* Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual.
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* Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting...conveying thoughts in a letter... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual.
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* Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual. Some people just don't learn...
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* Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual. Some people just don't learn...
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** God knows what compel them to go from huffing at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea at the end.
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** God knows what compel them to go from huffing at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea together at the end.
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* Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual.
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* Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual. Some people just don't learn...
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*Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual.
**God knows what compel them to go from huffing at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea at the end.
*Violet comes back from her 'mission' having learned lessons in ghostwriting... only to see Benedict and Cattleya going at it as usual.
**God knows what compel them to go from huffing at each other to sitting down for a cup of tea at the end.
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*Train-wreck of a love letter Violet wrote for her client. Probably a BlackComedy more than anything, though.
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* Hodgins on his way back from bank discovering some postman making delivery at night to his surprise. Then he saw the logo...
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* Hodgins on his way back from bank discovering some postman making delivery at night to his surprise. Then he saw the logo...logo on mail cart...
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[[AC:Novel]]
*Claudia's alcoholism raring its head during Violet's hospital stay:
-->'''Violet''': “President Hodgins, you told me before that, in your early childhood, you would nestle with a stuffed toy that resembled this black cat one to deceive your own loneliness whenever you cried from not being cared for by your parents…”
-->'''Claudia''': “Did I… tell you even about that!?”
-->'''Violet''': “You once came here drunk on the way back from a business negotiation and talked about half of your life for nearly two hours.”
-->''Now Hodgins wanted to cry for a different motive.''
*Claudia's alcoholism raring its head during Violet's hospital stay:
-->'''Violet''': “President Hodgins, you told me before that, in your early childhood, you would nestle with a stuffed toy that resembled this black cat one to deceive your own loneliness whenever you cried from not being cared for by your parents…”
-->'''Claudia''': “Did I… tell you even about that!?”
-->'''Violet''': “You once came here drunk on the way back from a business negotiation and talked about half of your life for nearly two hours.”
-->''Now Hodgins wanted to cry for a different motive.''
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%%**“No! Don’t write that! I wasn’t reciting!”
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%%*Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time.
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%%*Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time.time..
%%**His co-workers' reaction:
%%-->"Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
%%**His co-workers' reaction:
%%-->"Uwah, I feel like a parent watching my son grow up.”
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%%-->(Violet proceed to removes more and more concealed weapons)\\
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%%-->(Violet proceed to removes more and more concealed weapons)\\
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%%*In a bit of BlackComedy; the reason Hodgins is able to kick-starts CH Postal Company is that he bet his entire fortune on who would win the Northeast-Southwest War.
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** A moment later he walks into Cattleya playfully hugging Hodgins just to rub salt in the wound.
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** A moment later he walks into Cattleya playfully hugging Hodgins (to the latter's ire) just to rub salt in the wound.
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[[AC:Episode 2]]
* Benedict trying to charm the ladies in CH Postal to lunch only for them to brush him off. Eventually he's left to eat with no one but an old male co-worker.
-->'''Old man''': "I'll gladly share your noodles."
-->(Tears of joy coming out of Benedict's face)
**A moment later he walks into Cattleya playfully hugging Hodgins just to rub salt in the wound.
* Benedict trying to charm the ladies in CH Postal to lunch only for them to brush him off. Eventually he's left to eat with no one but an old male co-worker.
-->'''Old man''': "I'll gladly share your noodles."
-->(Tears of joy coming out of Benedict's face)
**A moment later he walks into Cattleya playfully hugging Hodgins just to rub salt in the wound.
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%%-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”
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%%-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”right?”
%%*In a bit of BlackComedy; the reason Hodgins is able to kick-starts CH Postal Company is that he bet his entire fortune on who would win the Northeast-Southwest War.
%%*In a bit of BlackComedy; the reason Hodgins is able to kick-starts CH Postal Company is that he bet his entire fortune on who would win the Northeast-Southwest War.
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%%-->(Violet proceed to removes more and more concealed weapon)\\
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%%-->(Violet proceed to removes more and more concealed weapon)\\weapons)\\
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%%-->(Violet removes potential weapons from her luggage per staff's request)
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her turn?]]”
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her turn?]]”
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%%-->(Violet removes potential weapons from her luggage per staff's request)
request)\\
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during herturn?]]”turn?]]”\\
%%-->(Violet proceed to removes more and more concealed weapon)\\
%%-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her
%%-->(Violet proceed to removes more and more concealed weapon)\\
%%-->'''Violet''': "...The sole thing left is the fact that I myself am a living weapon, yet I cannot do my job if I am not allowed to pass, so is this all right?”
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* It wasn't clear that the farmer who showed up for ghostwriting service at the end was smitten for the work he received or Cattleya.
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* It wasn't clear that the farmer who showed up for ghostwriting service at the end was smitten for the work he received or Cattleya.Cattleya.
%%*Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time.
%%*During prison visit in Chapter 5, volume 1 when Violet reached the underground jail cell her client is located:
%%-->(Violet removes potential weapons from her luggage per staff's request)
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her turn?]]”
%%*Leon the woman-hater's [[NotSoAboveItAll reaction]] to meeting Violet for the first time.
%%*During prison visit in Chapter 5, volume 1 when Violet reached the underground jail cell her client is located:
%%-->(Violet removes potential weapons from her luggage per staff's request)
%%-->'''Prison Guard''': “[[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy Hey, what were the inspectors doing during her turn?]]”
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* "[[{{Narm}} I am not on fire]]. You're not making any sense."
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* "[[{{Narm}} "[[LiteralMinded I am not on fire]]. You're not making any sense."
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* Violet changes into her CH postman uniform [[InnocentFanserviceGirl right in]] [[NoSocialSkills front of Benedict]] to his alarm... Then he still [[CovertPervert sneaked in a look anyway]].
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* Violet changes into her CH postman uniform [[InnocentFanserviceGirl right in]] [[NoSocialSkills front of Benedict]] to his alarm... Then he still [[CovertPervert sneaked in a look in anyway]].
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* It wasn't clear that the farmer who showed up for ghostwriting service at the end was smitten for the service or Cattleya.
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* It wasn't clear that the farmer who showed up for ghostwriting service at the end was smitten for the service work he received or Cattleya.
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* "[[{{Narm}} I am not on fire]]. You're not making any sense.""
*It wasn't clear that the farmer who showed up for ghostwriting service at the end was smitten for the service or Cattleya.
*It wasn't clear that the farmer who showed up for ghostwriting service at the end was smitten for the service or Cattleya.
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* Violet changes into her CH postman uniform [[InnocentFanserviceGirl right in front of Benedict]] to his alarm... Then he still [[CovertPervert sneaked in a look anyway]].
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* Violet changes into her CH postman uniform [[InnocentFanserviceGirl right in in]] [[NoSocialSkills front of Benedict]] to his alarm... Then he still [[CovertPervert sneaked in a look anyway]].
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* The serious adult Hodgins suddenly presents Violet with not one but three animal dolls.
* Violet changes into her CH postman uniform [[InnocentFanserviceGirl right in front of Benedict]] to his alarm... Then he still [[CovertPervert sneaked in a look anyway]].
* Hodgins on his way back from bank discovering some postman making delivery at night to his surprise. Then he saw the logo...
* "[[{{Narm}} I am not on fire]]. You're not making any sense."
* The serious adult Hodgins suddenly presents Violet with not one but three animal dolls.
* Violet changes into her CH postman uniform [[InnocentFanserviceGirl right in front of Benedict]] to his alarm... Then he still [[CovertPervert sneaked in a look anyway]].
* Hodgins on his way back from bank discovering some postman making delivery at night to his surprise. Then he saw the logo...
* "[[{{Narm}} I am not on fire]]. You're not making any sense."
