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** When Spike tries to debunk their claim that he's a vampire by pointing out that he's out in the sun, Bon Bon walks by and claims that "[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Vampires sparkle in the sunlight!]]" Cue a "[[TakeThat NO THEY DON'T!]]" - several font sizes bigger than normal - from every stallion and colt in a ''three block radius''.
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** When Spike tries to debunk their claim that he's a vampire by pointing out that he's out in the sun, Bon Bon walks by and claims that "[[Literature/{{Twilight}} "[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Vampires sparkle in the sunlight!]]" Cue a "[[TakeThat NO THEY DON'T!]]" - several font sizes bigger than normal - from every stallion and colt in a ''three block radius''.
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Wiki/ namespace clean up.
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** Also, defender's complaint about this story not having a Wiki/TVTropes page yet. [[HilariousInHindsight Only hours later]]...
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** Also, defender's complaint about this story not having a Wiki/TVTropes Website/TVTropes page yet. [[HilariousInHindsight Only hours later]]...
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Tastes Like Diabetes is no longer a trope. Moving examples to other tropes when applicable.
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* Fluttershy's story, contrary to Twilight's [[TastesLikeDiabetes expectations]], is a caper thriller.
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* Fluttershy's story, contrary to Twilight's [[TastesLikeDiabetes expectations]], expectations, is a caper thriller.
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** As of the seventh chapter, [[spoiler: Celestia, Cadence and Luna herself now believe it.]]
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** As of the seventh chapter, [[spoiler: Celestia, Cadence and Luna herself now believe it.]]
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* Chapter 10 is essentially a retelling of the pilot episode of the original ''[[Series/MightyMorphinPowerRangers Power Rangers]]'', but with Nightmare Moon as Rita Repulsa, and it turns out [[spoiler: CELESTIA is Nightmare Moon.]]
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* Chapter 10 is essentially a retelling of the pilot episode of the original ''[[Series/MightyMorphinPowerRangers Power Rangers]]'', but with Nightmare Moon as Rita Repulsa, and it turns out [[spoiler: CELESTIA is Nightmare Moon.]]
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* Shining Armor's rendition of Music/TheLonelyIsland's [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin I Just Had Sex]]. First it's just Shining Armor. [[spoiler:Then Cadence joins him, making it "WE JUST HAD SEX!", THEN they sing that anyone who had sex in the past thirty minutes is qualified to sing along. Cue Cadence, Shining, Derpy, the Doctor, [[OriginalCharacter Tydal]], half of the Wonderbolts, Gilda and Trixie all singing:]]
--->WE JUST HAD SEX!
--->And it felt so good!
--->A mare let a stallion put his junk inside of her!
--->We just had sex!
--->And we'll never go back!
--->To not having sex is a thing of the past!
--->WE JUST HAD SEX!
--->And it felt so good!
--->A mare let a stallion put his junk inside of her!
--->We just had sex!
--->And we'll never go back!
--->To not having sex is a thing of the past!
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* Shining Armor's rendition of Music/TheLonelyIsland's [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin I Just Had Sex]]. First it's just Shining Armor. [[spoiler:Then Then Cadence joins him, making it "WE JUST HAD SEX!", THEN they sing that anyone who had sex in the past thirty minutes is qualified to sing along. Cue Cadence, Shining, Derpy, the Doctor, [[OriginalCharacter Tydal]], half of the Wonderbolts, Gilda and Trixie all singing:]]
singing:
--->WE JUST HADSEX!
--->AndSEX!\\
And it felt sogood!
--->Agood!\\
A mare let a stallion put his junk inside ofher!
--->Weher!\\
We just hadsex!
--->Andsex!\\
And we'll never goback!
--->Toback!\\
To not having sex is a thing of the past!
--->WE JUST HAD
--->And
And it felt so
--->A
A mare let a stallion put his junk inside of
--->We
We just had
--->And
And we'll never go
--->To
To not having sex is a thing of the past!
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* Chapter 10 is essentially a retelling of the pilot episode of [[MightyMorphinPowerRangers the original Power Rangers]], but with Nightmare Moon as Rita Repulsa, and it turns out [[spoiler: CELESTIA is Nightmare Moon.]]
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* Chapter 10 is essentially a retelling of the pilot episode of [[MightyMorphinPowerRangers the original ''[[Series/MightyMorphinPowerRangers Power Rangers]], Rangers]]'', but with Nightmare Moon as Rita Repulsa, and it turns out [[spoiler: CELESTIA is Nightmare Moon.]]
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** During said story, there's this exchange:
-->'''Twilight:''' Wait a minute…how can a sun blow up? The alicorn in charge of it would never let that happen!\\
'''Pinkie:''' There was no alicorn in charge of it, Twilight. Colton had no goddess that moved the sun or the moon…the planet moved around the sun by its own gra-\\
'''Twilight:''' Pinkie, that is crazy talk.
-->'''Twilight:''' Wait a minute…how can a sun blow up? The alicorn in charge of it would never let that happen!\\
'''Pinkie:''' There was no alicorn in charge of it, Twilight. Colton had no goddess that moved the sun or the moon…the planet moved around the sun by its own gra-\\
'''Twilight:''' Pinkie, that is crazy talk.
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** Also, Pinkie Pie apparently once ran into the Equestrian equivalent of the KU KLUX KLAN. I swear to God, I am NOT making this up.
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** Also, Pinkie Pie apparently once ran into the Equestrian equivalent of the KU KLUX KLAN. I swear to God, I am NOT making this up.''Ku Klux Klan''.
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* Fluttershy's story, contrary to Twilight's [[TastesLikeDiabetes expectations]], is a caper thriller.
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* The RunningGag that everypony thinks Twilight is (somehow) the daughter of Nightmare Moon. By the fourth chapter, even she seems to be starting to wonder a little.
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* The RunningGag that everypony thinks Twilight is (somehow) the daughter of Nightmare Moon. By the fourth chapter, even she seems to be she's starting to wonder a little.
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* Shining Armor's rendition of Akon's [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin I Just Had Sex]]. First it's just Shining Armor. [[spoiler:Then Cadence joins him, making it "WE JUST HAD SEX!", THEN they sing that anyone who had sex in the past thirty minutes is qualified to sing along. Cue Cadence, Shining, Derpy, the Doctor, [[OriginalCharacter Tydal]], half of the Wonderbolts, Gilda and Trixie all singing:]]
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* Shining Armor's rendition of Akon's Music/TheLonelyIsland's [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin I Just Had Sex]]. First it's just Shining Armor. [[spoiler:Then Cadence joins him, making it "WE JUST HAD SEX!", THEN they sing that anyone who had sex in the past thirty minutes is qualified to sing along. Cue Cadence, Shining, Derpy, the Doctor, [[OriginalCharacter Tydal]], half of the Wonderbolts, Gilda and Trixie all singing:]]
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** Also, defender's complaint about this story not having a TVTropes page yet. [[HilariousInHindsight Only hours later]]...
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** Also, defender's complaint about this story not having a TVTropes Wiki/TVTropes page yet. [[HilariousInHindsight Only hours later]]...
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** And the fifth has her dream about it, complete with the obligatory ''TheEmpireStrikesBack'' [[LukeIAmYourFather reference]].
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** And the fifth has her dream about it, complete with the obligatory ''TheEmpireStrikesBack'' ''Film/TheEmpireStrikesBack'' [[LukeIAmYourFather reference]].
