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* Zapp and Fili's mistakes lead to an ice block being sent flying into a nearby pet shop.
-->'''Fili-second:''' Oops. Uh...better not tell Saddle Rager about that.
* Zapp and Fili's mistakes lead to an ice block being sent flying into a nearby pet shop.
-->'''Fili-second:''' Oops. Uh...better not tell Saddle Rager about that.
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!!Longhorn’s Journey into the Night
* Apple Bloom’s comment when Fluttershy talks to Delancey in the kitchen.
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!!Longhorn’s Journey into the Night
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* Discord robs several stores in succession. The first, he phase through the window to grab something. The second, he lifts up the window, grabs something, and drops the window (which shatters it). The third, he just forties subtlety and smashes it to grab the item.
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* Discord robs several stores in succession. The first, he phase through the window to grab something. The second, he lifts up the window, grabs something, and drops the window (which shatters it). The third, he just forties forgoes subtlety and smashes it to grab the item.
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* Discord takes an entire section of books from the library.
-->'''Random Pony''': WHAT HAPPENED TO ALL THE ROMANCE NOVELS?
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* Discord casually asks a random pony for directions after he grabbed her from her apartment.
* Discord doesn't realize that it's the mare who wears the wedding dress. When the Power Ponies gather to fight him, he's wearing a bright orange wedding dress.
**Pinkie Pie even compliments him on it while they're fighting.
* Discord casually asks a random pony for directions after he grabbed her from her apartment.
* Discord doesn't realize that it's the mare who wears the wedding dress. When the Power Ponies gather to fight him, he's wearing a bright orange wedding dress.
**Pinkie Pie even compliments him on it while they're fighting.
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--> Matter-Horn: She loves me. It's...unsettling, having somepony so...so morally ambiguous...loving you.
--> Saddle-Rager: I know what that's like.
--> Filli-second: Me too. Still waiting for Sonata to call me.
--> Radiance: The Mane-iac might not have loved me but she certainly cared about me to some degree.
--> Mare-vellous: Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.
--> Saddle-Rager: I know what that's like.
--> Filli-second: Me too. Still waiting for Sonata to call me.
--> Radiance: The Mane-iac might not have loved me but she certainly cared about me to some degree.
--> Mare-vellous: Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.
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--> Matter-Horn: '''Matter-Horn''': She loves me. It's...unsettling, having somepony so...so morally ambiguous...loving you.
-->Saddle-Rager: '''Saddle-Rager''': I know what that's like.
-->Filli-second: '''Filli-second''': Me too. Still waiting for Sonata to call me.
-->Radiance: '''Radiance''': The Mane-iac might not have loved me but she certainly cared about me to some degree.
-->Mare-vellous: '''Mare-vellous''': Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.
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* The When the Mane-iac breaks into Rarity and Coco's apartment, who are both understandably freaked but try to stay calm for fear of angering her. At one point in their conversation Rarity mentions that it's as if she's become a criminal mastermind and after a beat the Mane-iac starts laughing wildly. Coco and Rarity both awkwardly join in.laugh along with her.
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--> Mare-vellous: Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.
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--> Mare-vellous: Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.Trixie.
!!The Pharaoh's Curse
The Power Ponies (with Twilight and Applejack absent) get word that someone has broken Trixie out of jail and suspect he or she mind-controlled the guards into turning the security cameras off.
--> '''Rarity:''' Hypnotism?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' The Sirens?
--> '''Pinkie Pie :''' ''(excitedly)'' Sonata?
!!The Pharaoh's Curse
The Power Ponies (with Twilight and Applejack absent) get word that someone has broken Trixie out of jail and suspect he or she mind-controlled the guards into turning the security cameras off.
--> '''Rarity:''' Hypnotism?
--> '''Fluttershy:''' The Sirens?
--> '''Pinkie Pie :''' ''(excitedly)'' Sonata?
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-->'''Filli-second''': I speak hippie.
-->'''Filli-second''': I speak hippie.
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* Mistress Mare-vellous figures out that Zapp is Rainbow Dash and points out that she should not have revealed that she knows Fluttershy - thereby allowing Zapp to figure out that Mare-vellous' secret identity is Applejack. Followed by the Masked Matter-horn revealing that she has known Mare-vellous' secret identity for weeks.
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* Mistress Mare-vellous figures out that giving Zapp is Rainbow Dash and points out that she should not have revealed a dressing-down for revealing that she knows Fluttershy - thereby allowing Zapp to figure out that Mare-vellous' ''her'' secret identity is Applejack.identity. Followed by the Masked Matter-horn revealing that she has known Mare-vellous' secret identity for weeks.
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* Mistress Mare-vellous figures out that Zapp is Rainbow Dash and points out that she should not have revealed that she knows Fluttershy - thereby allowing Zapp to figure out that Mare-vellous' secret identity is Applejack. Followed by the Masked Matter-horn revealing that she has known Mare-vellous' secret identity for weeks.
--> '''Mare-vellous''': Smart aleck.
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--> '''Mare-vellous''': Smart aleck.
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* Rainbow Dash getting her superhero name:
--> Rainbow rubbed her chin. "Uh…let's see. I have Zeus' powers, so wouldn't that make me…Zeus?"
--> The earth mare folded her hooves. "That's blasphemy. Ya don't hear me callin' myself Demeter just cuz I have her rope, do ya?"
--> "Okay, okay! Then how about…" She glanced down at her necklace and smiled. "Zap?"
--> Mare-velous cocked her head. "Kinda short, ain't it?"
--> Rainbow thought further. "With...two P's?"
--> She shrugged. "Better."
--> Rainbow rubbed her chin. "Uh…let's see. I have Zeus' powers, so wouldn't that make me…Zeus?"
--> The earth mare folded her hooves. "That's blasphemy. Ya don't hear me callin' myself Demeter just cuz I have her rope, do ya?"
--> "Okay, okay! Then how about…" She glanced down at her necklace and smiled. "Zap?"
--> Mare-velous cocked her head. "Kinda short, ain't it?"
--> Rainbow thought further. "With...two P's?"
--> She shrugged. "Better."
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* The Mane-iac breaks into Rarity and Coco's apartment, who are both understandably freaked but try to stay calm for fear of angering her. At one point in their conversation Rarity mentions that it's as if she's become a criminal mastermind and after a beat the Mane-iac starts laughing wildly. Coco and Rraity Rarity both awkwardly join in.
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!!The Siren's Song
* Pinkie Pie and Sonata's date. Sonata tries her first taco, rushes off to jump in a fountain and gets warned by Pinkie Pie about getting a cramp before having a friendly conversation about each others' lives as a superhero and an evil siren.
* Rainbow Dash going into shock when she catches Sonata and Pinkie Pie canoodling in the cupboard.
** Pinkie tells her later that it was all her idea.
* Pinkie Pie and Sonata's date. Sonata tries her first taco, rushes off to jump in a fountain and gets warned by Pinkie Pie about getting a cramp before having a friendly conversation about each others' lives as a superhero and an evil siren.
* Rainbow Dash going into shock when she catches Sonata and Pinkie Pie canoodling in the cupboard.
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* Throughout Fluttershy's conversation with Discord, the Power Ponies are listening to them in over the commlink. At one point they get into distracted and start up an argument about hair care products, prompting Fluttershy to take it off.
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!!The Mane-Raising Joke
* The Mane-iac breaks into Rarity and Coco's apartment, who are both understandably freaked but try to stay calm for fear of angering her. At one point in their conversation Rarity mentions that it's as if she's become a criminal mastermind and after a beat the Mane-iac starts laughing wildly. Coco and Rraity both awkwardly join in.
** Immediately after, this exchange:
--> "You really think," the Mane-iac said, still cackling, "that I'm a criminal mastermind?" She thrust her face into Rarity's. "Mastermind's a bit of a stretch, but I appreciate the flattery."
--> Rarity stopped laughing.
* The Mane-iac breaks into Rarity and Coco's apartment, who are both understandably freaked but try to stay calm for fear of angering her. At one point in their conversation Rarity mentions that it's as if she's become a criminal mastermind and after a beat the Mane-iac starts laughing wildly. Coco and Rraity both awkwardly join in.
** Immediately after, this exchange:
--> "You really think," the Mane-iac said, still cackling, "that I'm a criminal mastermind?" She thrust her face into Rarity's. "Mastermind's a bit of a stretch, but I appreciate the flattery."
--> Rarity stopped laughing.
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* The MoodWhiplash towards the end of the arc, when the Power Ponies are discussing Phoenix.some of the villains who have formed attachments to them.
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* The way the Power Ponies calm down an out-of-control Fluttershy; by singing a lullaby and offering her a stuffed bunny.
!!Heart of Stone
* Throughout Fluttershy's conversation with Discord, the Power Ponies are listening to them over the commlink. At one point they get into an argument about hair care products, prompting Fluttershy to take it off.
!!Heart of Stone
* Throughout Fluttershy's conversation with Discord, the Power Ponies are listening to them over the commlink. At one point they get into an argument about hair care products, prompting Fluttershy to take it off.
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!!Don't Cry After Sunset
* The MoodWhiplash towards the end of the arc, when the Power Ponies discussing Phoenix.
--> Matter-Horn: She loves me. It's...unsettling, having somepony so...so morally ambiguous...loving you.
--> Saddle-Rager: I know what that's like.
--> Filli-second: Me too. Still waiting for Sonata to call me.
--> Radiance: The Mane-iac might not have loved me but she certainly cared about me to some degree.
--> Mare-vellous: Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.
!!Don't Cry After Sunset
* The MoodWhiplash towards the end of the arc, when the Power Ponies discussing Phoenix.
--> Matter-Horn: She loves me. It's...unsettling, having somepony so...so morally ambiguous...loving you.
--> Saddle-Rager: I know what that's like.
--> Filli-second: Me too. Still waiting for Sonata to call me.
--> Radiance: The Mane-iac might not have loved me but she certainly cared about me to some degree.
--> Mare-vellous: Next thing ya know, Rainbow will be gettin' it on with Trixie.
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!!General
Mistress Mare-vellous is like the snarker and lampshader on the zany or corny sides of superhero fiction.
!!Origins
*You have to admit, seeing Rainbow being Daring Do's assistant
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*Mistress Mare-vellous' (initial) staunch refusal to become part of the group, with calling the Power Ponies name corny.
!!General
Mistress Mare-vellous is like the snarker and lampshader on the zany or corny sides of superhero fiction.
!!Origins
*You have to admit, seeing Rainbow being Daring Do's assistant
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*Mistress Mare-vellous' (initial) staunch refusal to become part of the group, with calling the Power Ponies name corny.
