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--->'''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus]].
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--->'''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus]].Daedalus]].
* When Kathryn starts doubting her ability to land the shuttle, Kevin takes the cue-card book from her says he'll do it. Then, he casually ask Tish (who has a PhotographicMemory) if she ever read a book about flying a shuttle.
* When Kathryn starts doubting her ability to land the shuttle, Kevin takes the cue-card book from her says he'll do it. Then, he casually ask Tish (who has a PhotographicMemory) if she ever read a book about flying a shuttle.
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-->'''Zach''': Tell'em the truth: we launched my wife and five kids from the [=SpaceCamp=]. They'll never believe it.
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-->'''Zach''': Tell'em Tell 'em the truth: we launched my wife and five kids from the [=SpaceCamp=]. They'll never believe it.
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--->'''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus]].
** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having far more acclaim among NASA folks. [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having far more acclaim among NASA folks. [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
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--->'''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus]].
** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having far more acclaim among NASA folks. [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.Daedalus]].
** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having far more acclaim among NASA folks. [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
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** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having more acclaim among NASA and it's fans [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
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** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having far more acclaim among NASA and it's fans folks. [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
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--->'''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus]].
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--->'''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus]].Daedalus]].
** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having more acclaim among NASA and it's fans [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
** It's puzzling that this being an astronaut camp, that Max waxes more about ''Franchise/StarWars'' but never brings up ''Franchise/StarTrek'', the latter having more acclaim among NASA and it's fans [[note]]the first shuttle being named Enterprise for example. Not to mention the fact that Star Trek is about peaceful exploration. Star Wars is about...well, wars.[[/note]]. At least Max didn't say anything about the former being cooler than the latter.
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* Kevin's EstablishingCharacterMoment, when Zack confronts him after he parked in his spot.
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* Kevin's EstablishingCharacterMoment, when Zack Zach confronts him after he parked in his spot.
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* Kevin's EstablishingCharacterMoment, when Zack confronts him after he parked in his spot.
-->'''Zach Bergstrom:''' You want [=SpaceCamp=]?\\
'''Kevin Donaldson:''' No. My father wanted [=SpaceCamp=], but I want my head examined. But it was worth it for the car, don't you think?
-->'''Zach Bergstrom:''' You want [=SpaceCamp=]?\\
'''Kevin Donaldson:''' No. My father wanted [=SpaceCamp=], but I want my head examined. But it was worth it for the car, don't you think?
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--> '''Andie''': Name?
--> '''Rudy''': (''while chewing gum'') Rudy Tyler, Ma'am.
--> '''Andie''': Spit it out, Rudy.
--> '''Rudy''': [[NoIndoorVoice RUDY TYLER, MA'AM!]]
--> '''Andie''': ...I meant the gum, Rudy.
--> '''Rudy''': (''while chewing gum'') Rudy Tyler, Ma'am.
--> '''Andie''': Spit it out, Rudy.
--> '''Rudy''': [[NoIndoorVoice RUDY TYLER, MA'AM!]]
--> '''Andie''': ...I meant the gum, Rudy.
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'''Rudy''': (''while chewing gum'') Rudy Tyler,
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'''Andie''': Spit it out,
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'''Rudy''': [[NoIndoorVoice RUDY TYLER,
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'''Andie''': ...I meant the gum, Rudy.
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--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'') I feel sick... We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
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--> '''Andie''': Come on, everybody, let's think, where are we going to get more oxygen?
--> '''Kevin''': [[DeadpanSnarker I could run down to the 7-Eleven.]]
--> '''Tish''': [[SarcasmMode Great, Kev.]]
--> '''Kevin''': [[DeadpanSnarker I could run down to the 7-Eleven.]]
--> '''Tish''': [[SarcasmMode Great, Kev.]]
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'''Kevin''': [[DeadpanSnarker I could run down to the 7-Eleven.
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'''Tish''': [[SarcasmMode Great, Kev.]]
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--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you![[note]]Which he was anyway (well, that, and to help Andie get the oxygen tanks), so this may just be a coincidence.[[/note]]
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--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'')I feel sick... We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
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--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'')I (''whimpering'') I feel sick... We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
* Grim as the situation has just gotten, Zach can appreciate the sheer absurdity of it when asked what to tell the press.
-->'''Zach''': Tell'em the truth: we launched my wife and five kids from the [=SpaceCamp=]. They'll never believe it.
* Grim as the situation has just gotten, Zach can appreciate the sheer absurdity of it when asked what to tell the press.
-->'''Zach''': Tell'em the truth: we launched my wife and five kids from the [=SpaceCamp=]. They'll never believe it.
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--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'') We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
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--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'') (''whimpering'')I feel sick... We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
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--> '''Andie''': Everybody, let's think, where are we going to get more oxygen?
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--> '''Andie''': Everybody, Come on, everybody, let's think, where are we going to get more oxygen?
--> '''Tish''': [[SarcasmMode Great, Kev.]]
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--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you!
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--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you!you![[note]]Which he was anyway (well, that, and to help Andie get the oxygen tanks), so this may just be a coincidence.[[/note]]
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* While trying to solve the depleting oxygen problem.
--> '''Andie''': Everybody, let's think, where are we going to get more oxygen?
--> '''Kevin''': [[DeadpanSnarker I could run down to the 7-Eleven.]]
--> '''Andie''': Everybody, let's think, where are we going to get more oxygen?
--> '''Kevin''': [[DeadpanSnarker I could run down to the 7-Eleven.]]
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--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you!
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--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you!you!
** After Andie in turn saves Max from drifting away from the station.
--> '''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus.]]
** After Andie in turn saves Max from drifting away from the station.
--> '''Andie''': You think you're scared now? [[CasualDangerDialogue Wait till your parents get the bill for breaking Daedalus.]]
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* Rudy accidentally mistakes Andie for a DrillSergeantNasty.
--> '''Andie''': Name?
--> '''Rudy''': (''while chewing gum'') Rudy Tyler, Ma'am.
--> '''Andie''': Spit it out, Rudy.
--> '''Rudy''': [[NoIndoorVoice RUDY TYLER, MA'AM!]]
--> '''Andie''': ...I meant the gum, Rudy.
--> '''Andie''': Name?
--> '''Rudy''': (''while chewing gum'') Rudy Tyler, Ma'am.
--> '''Andie''': Spit it out, Rudy.
--> '''Rudy''': [[NoIndoorVoice RUDY TYLER, MA'AM!]]
--> '''Andie''': ...I meant the gum, Rudy.
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* Max can't help himself and references Franchise/StarWars when he rescues Andie.
--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you!
--> '''Max''': (''Andie does a JumpScare in surprise'') It's me! I'm here to rescue you!
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* Tish doesn't handle the shuttle launch as well as the others.
--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'') We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
--> '''Tish''': (''whimpering'') We're gonna die... (''opens her eyes and sees the others floating in zero gravity'') We're already dead...
