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->"Dude, the freaking thug\\

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->"I broke my shoelace!\\

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->"C'mere you bastard!\\

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->'''Kino''': I wouldn't say "uncomfortable" in the ordinary sense of the word, but the pool and the beach are the fundamental part of summer, and I think in order to get a true summer experience and take advantage of the season, you have to feel the sun on your skin and the wind in your hair. Not to mention swimwear fashion changes every year, and as an artist, I think it's important to observe and analyze those sorts of trends from an anesthetic standpoint. Don't you think?

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->'''Kino''': -->'''Kino''': I wouldn't say "uncomfortable" in the ordinary sense of the word, but the pool and the beach are the fundamental part of summer, and I think in order to get a true summer experience and take advantage of the season, you have to feel the sun on your skin and the wind in your hair. Not to mention swimwear fashion changes every year, and as an artist, I think it's important to observe and analyze those sorts of trends from an anesthetic standpoint. Don't you think?
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* Nanako gets asked how she would tell others whenever she had to go to the restroom due to being mute. She responds by pointing towards the entrance to the girls' restroom while conveying that her bladder was about to burst.

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* Nanako gets asked how she would tell others whenever she had to go to the restroom due to being mute. She responds by pointing towards the entrance to the girls' restroom [[PottyDance while conveying that her bladder was about to burst.burst]].

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* Eiji and his tendency to scare the crap out of people on accident because of his FaceOfAThug features that gives off a DeathGlare.


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* Nanako is ''NotAMorningPerson''. Enough said.
* Hiro asks why Nanako doesn't wear makeup, who replies with that if she had time for makeup, she'd rather sleep instead. Hiro tells her she won't get a boyfriend if she continues, but finds out she likes someone. Their father goes dramatic about this.
* When one of her friends asks her if she could borrow her eyelash curler, she replies that she doesn't own a makeup set. Cue the other girls poking her face and touching hair.
* Nanako is terrible at making smiles while making selfies.
* When Nanako surprisingly wakes up early, she starts applying makeup while Hiro reacts to her waking up early and their dad looking like he's having a stroke. Cue selfies, and he is seen ((Fainting}} in the background.
* On her way to school, an old man rides by on a bike and and splashes a puddle on Nanako. She then goes to see Amane if she could use her makeup, who then wants to put her makeup on her herself while Eiji is standing behind the clubroom door.

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* Eiji decides to go to a senryu meeting where it is full of grown adult men and Nanako. Predictably, he scares the crap out of everyone there except Nanako.
* Nanako writes her senryu as part of its Christmas theme about her father dressing up as a reindeer for Christmas whhile Eiji writes his wanting Santa beat up his father for smoking on his bed. this predictably has taken the men aback while Nanako laughs.
* In the next morning, Yoshihiko tries to feed Nanako an octopus hotdog, and [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents being the man that he is]], thinks Nanako is rebelling. Chifuyu however notices immediately that she's thinking about Eiji
* Whereas in the anime, Nanako undergoes an AdaptationalAngstUpgrade when the kindly old woman told Nanako Eiji stopped visiting the senryu centre, in the manga she comically outright ''panics'' asking some old men if they seen Eiji. Then she trips on a rock while maintaining its humor.
* Eiji ''[[InsaneTrollLogic shomehow]]'' compares a cherry tree with a ''hippo'.
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* People wondering where Nanako stashes her tanzaku boards (the board she writes her senryu on).
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* The main trio goes to a fireworks festival and Amane wonders how the hell did he have so much goldfishes. (Subtitles point out Eiji arrived early).
* Nanako explains she couldn't sleep the previous night because she was excited while Eiji got a full night of sleep because he was catching bugs. Amane asks if he's still a child.
* Eiji and Nanako decide to play festival games together. Aname then suddenly realizes she was being a third wheel.
* Eiji and Amane decide to play raffles. Eiji wins a light up ring and Amane wins a game console Eiji actually wanted. Eiji decides to give Nanako the ring, unaware that he puts it on her ring finger to which she becomes purely embarrassed while Amane wishes to win a boyfriend.
* Nanako explains how her father confessed to her mother with an Peony flower. The manga has an additional one about Eiji's parents, where his father did his confession with a rice ticket.
* Aname then decides to explain that peony embodies YamatoNadeshiko, in which Aname is aware Eiji thinks something different. And when she uses women as a metaphor for flowers, Eiji predictably misinterprets it as a three stages of a plant monster. Amane gets frustrated and tells him they're gonna have a serious literature lesson.
* Eiji finds Amane who tells him Nanako's classmates found her and takes her to see the fireworks. Before he goes, he needs to finish using the restroom. Amane asks why he didn't just finish.
* Nanako explains she was planning to see the fireworks with someone else, but her friends correctly guesses it was Eiji. Cue embarrassment mode and tanzaku boards flying out of her yukata.
* When Eiji finally finds Nanako in a huge crowd thanks to her ring, her classmates react thinking Nanako is on a date with Eiji in which he denies.

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* Because of the above, who knew Kino, of all people, is a NightmareFetishist?
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* Nanako and Eiji hear something in the dark tunnel, with Amane being frighten, with Eiji telling her he hears a voice saying "Excuse me, can I get a refill?".
* The anime and manga have different outcomes while the anime version adds in Kino and Tao (and Koto) with Amane's plot as a Test of courage:
** In the manga, Amane invites Eiji and Nanako, and when she uses a flashlight to make a NightmareFace, which promptly scares off Eiji and Nanako running together, leaving Amane behind.
** The anime has Kino with red eyes while drawing a female ghost, then she asks what she was doing. They enter the tunnel with Tao scared out of her mind. When Amane goes missing, she starts flinging playing cards and Eiji notices Kino has gone missing. Kino (in shadow) then collapse on the ground and Eiji embraces Nanako, who blushes. Then Tao gets terrified out of her mind until she gets snatched, causing Eiji and Nanako to run. Amane then admits she set the whole thing up.
* The anime and manga have a near identical scene with the fireflies, but the manga has Amane getting lost in the woods.
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* Amane suggests going out at night to see fireflies, but warns there might be a ghost. Nanako misinterprets her pose, thinking it's a cat.
* Nanako suggests using salt and charms, while Eiji thinks he should beat up the ghost. Amane even tels him physical attacks don't work on ghosts.
* Eiji asks Nanako if she's afraid of ghosts, which she gives a frightening expression, but wants to see fireflies. He contiues to do this until Amane demands him to stop.
* In the manga, Eiji face gets swollen by mosquito bites.
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* Eiji's friend Fujimaru Tora tells him in a flashback that girls find it embarrassing showing their feet as much as been seen their breasts. Eiji misses the point and improperly apologizes to Nanako for it.
Spmehow, Nanako wrote her senryu while still hiccuping.
* Eiji attempts to scare her, but Nanako isn't intimidated meanwhile Amane tells them to stop flirting.
* The next day, Eiji gets a hiccup, and Nanako manages to scare it off by using a delinquent app that says "DON'T LOOK DOWN ON ME, YOU F*CKING BRAT!".
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* In the manga, Yoshihiko's face harden just for trying to keep an intense face for so long.

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* In Nanako's Morning, she needs to go to the bathroom, but her father is busy, and playing a puzzle game. And on her way, she makes a senryu about a dandelion and ''a dog's butthole''.
* In Eiji's Morning, a couple of delinquents challenges Eiji to a fight but pulls out a tanzaku board to right a senryu, only for them to run like hell when they thought he pulled out a knife. Then he sees a dandelion and writes a senryu about it, only for a child to pull it out of the ground and becomes depressed.
* Eiji decides to eat lunch by himself, only for Nanako to ask if she can join him. Cue Eiji telling her they're in ''the boys' bathroom''.
* When Eiji and Nanako decide to have lunch out in the field, she says the octopus hotdog is the shape of a devil, and when Eiji gives her an animal cracker, she asks "What kind of devil are you?" Note that said animal cracker is in a shape of a giraffe.
* One portion excised from the manga is an old man with a deep expression. Amane asks what expression he has, but Nanako and Eiji goes off-rails, with Nanako ComicallyMissingThePoint.
* The ending has Eiji write "Spring-> Get caught by the cops".

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* Eiji, being the InnocentlyInsensitive idiot that he is, tells Nanako that she's gaining weight. Nanako gets crestfallen when he said that.
* Nanako has hiccups, and so Eiji tries his best to get rid of them.
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