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When I glanced at Elia, she looked not at me, but at [[LoveMartyr Mea]], squinting, like she was saying, “You’re okay with that?”.
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When I glanced at Elia, she looked not at me, but at [[LoveMartyr Mea]], squinting, like she was saying, “You’re “[[LampshadeHanging You’re okay with that?”.that?]]”.
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* After such an awkward first impression with the Collector, Altamir and Abel... [[NonViolentInitialConfrontation sit down and watch the Collector showing off his collection]]! Once the Collector pulls off the "[[GreatBigBookOfEverything Great God’s Treasure Book]]".. both [[TheArchmage Abel and Altamir]] become really interested in the book, and asks [[BadassBookworm the Collector]] if he managed to decipher anything from it. The three of them ends looking at a page illustrating the [[ForeShadowing Goddess Kudor]], and begin discussing in great detail their takes on the illustration, and [[MagiBabble comparing notes and theories]]. [[BreatherEpisode It's such a weird breather]] after Abel's battle with Altamir.. [[spoiler: and before Abel's battle with The Collector]]. However, [[TheWoobie poor Mea gets left behind]], because she's not as versed in magic as them.
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* After such an awkward first impression with the Collector, Altamir and Abel... [[NonViolentInitialConfrontation sit down and watch the Collector showing off his collection]]! Once the Collector pulls off the "[[GreatBigBookOfEverything Great God’s Treasure Book]]".. both [[TheArchmage Abel and Altamir]] become really interested in the book, and asks [[BadassBookworm the Collector]] if he managed to decipher anything from it. The three of them ends looking at a page illustrating the [[ForeShadowing Goddess Kudor]], and begin discussing in great detail their takes on the illustration, and [[MagiBabble comparing notes and theories]]. [[BreatherEpisode It's such a weird breather]] after Abel's battle with Altamir.. [[spoiler: and before Abel's battle with The Collector]]. However, [[TheWoobie [[HatesBeingAlone poor Mea gets left behind]], because she's not as versed in magic as them.
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-->'''Abel''': “W-Where! Where is it! Can’t you show it to me!?” \\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.” \\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the edge?” \\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn apart!” \\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you want!]]” \\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious thing!” \\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.” \\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the edge?” \\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn apart!” \\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you want!]]” \\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious thing!” \\
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-->'''Abel''': “W-Where! Where is it! Can’t you show it to me!?” \\
me!?”\\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.” \\
”\\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me theedge?” \\
edge?”\\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be tornapart!” \\
apart!”\\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever youwant!]]” \\
want!]]”\\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a preciousthing!” \\thing!”\\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious
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-->'''Abel''': “W-Where! Where is it! Can’t you show it to me!?”\\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.”\\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the edge?”\\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn apart!”\\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you want!]]”\\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious thing!”\\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.”\\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the edge?”\\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn apart!”\\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you want!]]”\\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious thing!”\\
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-->'''Abel''': “W-Where! Where is it! Can’t you show it to me!?”\\
me!?” \\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.”\\
” \\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me theedge?”\\
edge?” \\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be tornapart!”\\
apart!” \\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever youwant!]]”\\
want!]]” \\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a preciousthing!”\\thing!” \\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious
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'''Abel''': “Please! If it’s not possible, [[MovingTheGoalpost just a look! I just want to look at it]]! Please take off your cloak and let me see! If you okay, let me touch it!”
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'''Abel''': “Please! If it’s not possible, [[MovingTheGoalpost [[MovingTheGoalposts just a look! I just want to look at it]]! Please take off your cloak and let me see! If you okay, let me touch it!”
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* Abel, initailly on-edge from seeing [[LivingLegend the Collector]] in front of him and is demanding something from him , [[SquEe quickly forgets himself]] and [[AdmiringTheAbomination approaches the clearly dangerous adventurer]], who just pointed a BigFreakingSword at him a minute ago, and asks him to show him his legendary item: "[[BagOfHolding Ravenous Dragon Tool Bag]]". When the Collector tells him he can't show it to him, Abel keeps finding a way to ask again and again:
-->'''Abel''': “W-Where! Where is it! Can’t you show it to me!?”\\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.”\\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the edge?”\\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn apart!”\\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you want!]]”\\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious thing!”\\
'''Abel''': “Please! If it’s not possible, [[MovingTheGoalpost just a look! I just want to look at it]]! Please take off your cloak and let me see! If you okay, let me touch it!”
** When Mea tries [[DraggedByTheCollar pulling Abel away from the Collector]], she's having trouble doing so. Apparently, [[PatheticallyWeak Abel]]'s strength increases with his tenaciousness [[ForScience toward science]]:
-->'''Mea''': “A-Abel!? [[WhatTheHellHero W-What selfish thing are you saying]]? Mea thinks that’s not a good idea!?”\\
'''Abel''': “Me, Mea! Let go of me! My lifelong dream might come true!”\\
'''Mea''': “Please calm down, Abel! For God’s sake! Wha-, [[StrongAsTheyNeedToBe you’re only powerful when you’re like this]]!”\\
'''Mea''': “I’m sorry! When Abel gets a little excited, he sometimes says things that I don’t understand! I’m sorry! Mea will apologize as much as she can, so please forgive him!”\\
'''Abel''': “Don’t stop me, Mea! Be-Because, the ravenous dragon’s tool bag is just right over there ……!”\\
'''Mea''': “[[LampshadeHanging It’s really only at a time like you’re really powerful! Why]]!? Altamir-san! Please help me hold Abel down!”
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* After such an awkward first impression with the Collector, Altamir and Abel... [[NonViolentInitialConfrontation sit down and watch the Collector showing off his collection]]! Once the Collector pulls off the "[[GreatBigBookOfEverything Great God’s Treasure Book]]".. both [[TheArchmage Abel and Altamir]] become really interested in the book, and asks [[BadassBookworm the Collector]] if he managed to decipher anything from it. The three of them ends looking at a page illustrating the [[ForeShadowing Goddess Kudor]], and begin discussing in great detail their takes on the illustration, and [[MagiBabble comparing notes and theories]]. [[BreatherEpisode It's such a weird breather]] after Abel's battle with Altamir.. [[spoiler: and before Abel's battle with The Collector]]. However, [[TheWoobie poor Mea gets left behind]], because she's not as versed in magic as them.
-->'''Mea''': “Y-You’re talking about something difficult …… Ehhh …… Mea doesn’t understand at all…”
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-->'''Abel''': “W-Where! Where is it! Can’t you show it to me!?”\\
'''Collector''': “Fufun, I can’t ever let it go, though. I’ve used the power of other magic tools to blend in with my body and forcefully assimilate it.”\\
'''Abel''': “Did you assimilate it into your body? Ah, the edge! Can you just give me the edge?”\\
'''Collector''': “Huh! What a funny thing to say! This is the magical organ of the ravenous dragon that the sorcerers of long ago [[MadeOfIndestructium could not destroy]] and had to dispose of in another dimension, you know? In the first place, there are [[PocketDimension complex other dimensions unfolding inside]]. It’s not something that can be torn apart!”\\
'''Abel''': “[[TryEverything So it’s okay if I can]]? The old alchemists were able to process it, so there must be some way to do it! Le-, let me try it! [[AintTooProudToBeg I’ll give you the Wand of Destruction or whatever you want!]]”\\
'''Collector''': “Ha! No, no! Of course, you can’t! The ravenous dragon’s tool bag role is also to [[PocketProtector protect my heart]], too, you know? I will not allow a child like you to touch such a precious thing!”\\
'''Abel''': “Please! If it’s not possible, [[MovingTheGoalpost just a look! I just want to look at it]]! Please take off your cloak and let me see! If you okay, let me touch it!”
** When Mea tries [[DraggedByTheCollar pulling Abel away from the Collector]], she's having trouble doing so. Apparently, [[PatheticallyWeak Abel]]'s strength increases with his tenaciousness [[ForScience toward science]]:
-->'''Mea''': “A-Abel!? [[WhatTheHellHero W-What selfish thing are you saying]]? Mea thinks that’s not a good idea!?”\\
'''Abel''': “Me, Mea! Let go of me! My lifelong dream might come true!”\\
'''Mea''': “Please calm down, Abel! For God’s sake! Wha-, [[StrongAsTheyNeedToBe you’re only powerful when you’re like this]]!”\\
'''Mea''': “I’m sorry! When Abel gets a little excited, he sometimes says things that I don’t understand! I’m sorry! Mea will apologize as much as she can, so please forgive him!”\\
'''Abel''': “Don’t stop me, Mea! Be-Because, the ravenous dragon’s tool bag is just right over there ……!”\\
'''Mea''': “[[LampshadeHanging It’s really only at a time like you’re really powerful! Why]]!? Altamir-san! Please help me hold Abel down!”
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* After such an awkward first impression with the Collector, Altamir and Abel... [[NonViolentInitialConfrontation sit down and watch the Collector showing off his collection]]! Once the Collector pulls off the "[[GreatBigBookOfEverything Great God’s Treasure Book]]".. both [[TheArchmage Abel and Altamir]] become really interested in the book, and asks [[BadassBookworm the Collector]] if he managed to decipher anything from it. The three of them ends looking at a page illustrating the [[ForeShadowing Goddess Kudor]], and begin discussing in great detail their takes on the illustration, and [[MagiBabble comparing notes and theories]]. [[BreatherEpisode It's such a weird breather]] after Abel's battle with Altamir.. [[spoiler: and before Abel's battle with The Collector]]. However, [[TheWoobie poor Mea gets left behind]], because she's not as versed in magic as them.
-->'''Mea''': “Y-You’re talking about something difficult …… Ehhh …… Mea doesn’t understand at all…”
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* When they reached the [[TowerDungeon Witch Tower of Altamir]], Mea realizes that Abel is planning on holding off fully exploring the tower, [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies because he's fearing for her safety]]. This leads to a rather awkward quarrel between the two, from [[ShipperOnDeck Eila]]'s point of view:
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* When they reached the [[TowerDungeon Witch Tower of Altamir]], Mea realizes that Abel is planning on holding off fully exploring the tower, [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies because he's fearing for her safety]]. This leads to a rather awkward quarrel between the two, from [[ShipperOnDeck Eila]]'s Elia]]'s point of view:
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* When they reached the [[TowerDungeon Witch Tower of Altamir]], Mea realizes that Abel is planning on holding off fully exploring the tower, [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies because he's fearing for her safety]]. This leads to a rather weird form of a lovers' quarrel, from [[ShipperOnDeck Eila]]'s point of view:
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* When they reached the [[TowerDungeon Witch Tower of Altamir]], Mea realizes that Abel is planning on holding off fully exploring the tower, [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies because he's fearing for her safety]]. This leads to a rather weird form of a lovers' quarrel, awkward quarrel between the two, from [[ShipperOnDeck Eila]]'s point of view:
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'''Abel (narrating)''': There was a [[ProneToTears thin tear in Mea’s eyes]]. I was caught off guard by the stability lately, but I think Mea has a fragile side, or perhaps a wave of instability from time to time. \\
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'''Abel (narrating)''': There was a [[ProneToTears thin tear in Mea’s eyes]]. I was caught off guard by the stability lately, but I think [[WomenAreDelicate Mea has a fragile side, side]], or perhaps a [[MoodSwinger wave of instability from time to time.time]]. \\
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When I glanced at Elia, she looked not at me, but at Mea, squinting, like she was saying, “[[LoveMartyr You’re okay with that?]]”.
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When I glanced at Elia, she looked not at me, but at Mea, [[LoveMartyr Mea]], squinting, like she was saying, “[[LoveMartyr You’re “You’re okay with that?]]”.that?”.
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* When they reached the [[TowerDungeon Witch Tower of Altamir]], Mea realizes that Abel is planning on holding off fully exploring the tower, [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies because he's fearing for her safety]]. This leads to a rather weird form of a lovers' quarrel, from [[ShipperOnDeck Eila]]'s point of view:
-->'''Mea''': “You still want to go, don’t you? You don’t have to worry about Mea too much, you know? If [[TheLoad I’m a hindrance]]…… [[OptOut Mea will be waiting outside]] with Elia-san ……” \\
'''Abel (narrating)''': Elia is peeking at me from in front of me, [[DisapprovingLook staring at me with narrowed eyes]] as if to say, “Ahhhh, you made her cry”. \\
'''Abel''': “N, no, I want Mea to come too!” \\
'''Mea''': “But [[CantCatchUp Mea doesn’t help you anyway]]……” \\
'''Abel (narrating)''': There was a [[ProneToTears thin tear in Mea’s eyes]]. I was caught off guard by the stability lately, but I think Mea has a fragile side, or perhaps a wave of instability from time to time. \\
'''Abel''': “Just you being there makes me feel better or something …… Well, look, I’d like to ask you to [[HumanPackMule help me with my luggage too]]……!” \\
'''Mea''': “Really? Mea can be of help to Abel?” \\
Finally, the light returned to Mea’s face. I was relieved to see it for the moment. \\
When I glanced at Elia, she looked not at me, but at Mea, squinting, like she was saying, “[[LoveMartyr You’re okay with that?]]”.
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-->'''Mea''': “You still want to go, don’t you? You don’t have to worry about Mea too much, you know? If [[TheLoad I’m a hindrance]]…… [[OptOut Mea will be waiting outside]] with Elia-san ……” \\
'''Abel (narrating)''': Elia is peeking at me from in front of me, [[DisapprovingLook staring at me with narrowed eyes]] as if to say, “Ahhhh, you made her cry”. \\
'''Abel''': “N, no, I want Mea to come too!” \\
'''Mea''': “But [[CantCatchUp Mea doesn’t help you anyway]]……” \\
'''Abel (narrating)''': There was a [[ProneToTears thin tear in Mea’s eyes]]. I was caught off guard by the stability lately, but I think Mea has a fragile side, or perhaps a wave of instability from time to time. \\
'''Abel''': “Just you being there makes me feel better or something …… Well, look, I’d like to ask you to [[HumanPackMule help me with my luggage too]]……!” \\
'''Mea''': “Really? Mea can be of help to Abel?” \\
Finally, the light returned to Mea’s face. I was relieved to see it for the moment. \\
When I glanced at Elia, she looked not at me, but at Mea, squinting, like she was saying, “[[LoveMartyr You’re okay with that?]]”.
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* In the webnovel, Abel and Mea were hunting in the forest path, with [[PatheticallyWeak Abel]] forcing through despite his clear exhaustion, and Mea is begging to take a break (so that Abel would rest his legs). Suddenly, Abel feels an intense pain, like something had snapped in his calf, and suddenly fell and he's in rapid sharp pain, frightening Mea. Abel [[SuddenlyShouting hysterically shouts]] at Mea that it's a magic beast attack, or... A Demon!! He begs Mea to [[IWillOnlySlowYouDown leave him and run to safety]] before he gets her legs too. [[TrueCompanions Mea refuse to leave him alone]], and Abel calls her [[YouFool an idiot]] and that demon will kill her too, she replies that [[WouldRatherSuffer she'd rather die than abandon him]], then [[CryCute she starts crying]] and [[StayWithMeUntilIDie holds Abel's head in her hands as she cries some more]]. Five minutes of Abel's ranting and Mea's screaming, Abel discovered that it wasn't a magical beast nor a demon: [[MinorInjuryOverreaction it was just a cramp in his leg]]. After all this drama, Abel concludes this scene with an Aesop:
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* In the webnovel, Abel and Mea were hunting in the forest path, with [[PatheticallyWeak Abel]] forcing through despite his clear exhaustion, and Mea is begging to take a break (so that Abel would rest his legs). Suddenly, Abel feels an intense pain, like something had snapped in his calf, and suddenly fell and he's in rapid sharp pain, frightening Mea. Abel [[SuddenlyShouting hysterically shouts]] at Mea that it's a magic beast attack, or... A Demon!! He begs Mea to [[IWillOnlySlowYouDown leave him and run to safety]] before he gets her legs too. [[TrueCompanions Mea refuse to leave him alone]], and Abel calls her [[YouFool an idiot]] and that demon will kill her too, she replies that [[WouldRatherSuffer she'd rather die than abandon him]], then [[CryCute she starts crying]] crying and [[StayWithMeUntilIDie holds Abel's head in her hands as she cries some more]]. Five minutes of Abel's ranting and Mea's screaming, Abel discovered that it wasn't a magical beast nor a demon: [[MinorInjuryOverreaction it was just a cramp in his leg]]. After all this drama, Abel concludes this scene with an Aesop:
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* After Abel and Mea succeed in capturing a female Balm Bird to use in [[MadScientist Abel's new bio-Magic experiment]], he asks Mea to hand him a magic stone and a bottle from his pack before [[MeatgrinderSurgery he guts the poor bird]]. Mea hands him the bottle and the magic stone, '''but she won't let go of it'''! When he asks her what's wrong, she answers in a [[CryCute tearful voice]]:
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* After Abel and Mea succeed in capturing a female Balm Bird to use in [[MadScientist Abel's new bio-Magic experiment]], he asks Mea to hand him a magic stone and a bottle from his pack before [[MeatgrinderSurgery he guts the poor bird]]. Mea hands him the bottle and the magic stone, '''but she won't let go of it'''! When he asks her what's wrong, she answers in a [[CryCute tearful voice]]:voice:
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* [[TheInformant Shame]], after reuniting with Abel and Mea after Palgas village's fiasco, mentions that she was in Russel village for an adventurer job to [[BringNewsBack check on someones' girlfriend]], who got trapped in said village because of [[BeefGate Nalgarn]]. When Mea, concerned, asks about the girlfriend, Shame tells her to cheer up for she's alright... [[BabiesMakeEverythingBetter She had 2 kids and she's happy]]!! Mea becomes very happy and recognizes the woman in-question as someone from Lark's private army and asks Abel if they could visit her someday, while Abel realizes that the Fage territory was isolated for '''2 years''', and figures that the boyfriend [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder is in for a surprise he wouldn't like]].
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* [[TheInformant Shame]], after reuniting with Abel and Mea after Palgas village's fiasco, mentions that she was in Russel village for an adventurer job to [[BringNewsBack check on someones' someone's girlfriend]], who got trapped in said village because of [[BeefGate Nalgarn]]. When Mea, concerned, asks about the girlfriend, Shame tells her to cheer up for she's alright... [[BabiesMakeEverythingBetter She had 2 kids and she's happy]]!! Mea becomes very happy and recognizes the woman in-question as someone from Lark's private army and asks Abel if they could visit her someday, while Abel realizes that the Fage territory was isolated for '''2 years''', and figures that the boyfriend [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder is in for a surprise he wouldn't like]].
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* [[TheInformant Shame]], after reuniting with Abel and Mea after Palgas village's fiasco, mentions that she was in Russel village for an adventurer job to [[BringNewsBack check on someones' girlfriend]], who got trapped in said village because of [[BeefGate Nalgarn]]. When Mea, concerned, asks about the girlfriend, Shame tells her to cheer up for she's alright... [[BabiesMakeThingsBetter She had 2 kids and she's happy]]!! Mea becomes very happy and recognizes the woman in-question as someone from Lark's private army and asks Abel if they could visit her someday, while Abel realizes that the Fage territory was isolated for '''2 years''', and figures that the boyfriend [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder is in for a surprise he wouldn't like]].
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* [[TheInformant Shame]], after reuniting with Abel and Mea after Palgas village's fiasco, mentions that she was in Russel village for an adventurer job to [[BringNewsBack check on someones' girlfriend]], who got trapped in said village because of [[BeefGate Nalgarn]]. When Mea, concerned, asks about the girlfriend, Shame tells her to cheer up for she's alright... [[BabiesMakeThingsBetter [[BabiesMakeEverythingBetter She had 2 kids and she's happy]]!! Mea becomes very happy and recognizes the woman in-question as someone from Lark's private army and asks Abel if they could visit her someday, while Abel realizes that the Fage territory was isolated for '''2 years''', and figures that the boyfriend [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder is in for a surprise he wouldn't like]].
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* [[TheInformant Shame]], after reuniting with Abel and Mea after Palgas village's fiasco, mentions that she was in Russel village for an adventurer job to [[BringNewsBack check on someones' girlfriend]], who got trapped in said village because of [[BeefGate Nalgarn]]. When Mea, concerned, asks about the girlfriend, Shame tells her to cheer up for she's alright... [[BabiesMakeThingsBetter She had 2 kids and she's happy]]!! Mea becomes very happy and recognizes the woman in-question as someone from Lark's private army and asks Abel if they could visit her someday, while Abel realizes that the Fage territory was isolated for '''2 years''', and figures that the boyfriend [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder is in for a surprise he wouldn't like]].
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* Abel's "fight" with [[OurHydrasAreDifferent Nalgarn]]. a [[MultipleHeadCase Three-Headed]] Dragon, that was shown in the previous chapter [[TheWorfEffect wiping the floor with the Fage territory's private army]]. Abel test it with [[RazorWind Wind Blade magic]] and [[OffWithHisHead lops the yellow head's neck]], only for its [[HealingFactor magic circle to activate and regrow it back]]. Abel then [[EurekaMoment decides]] to [[MainliningTheMonster 'farm the heads']] and start cutting [[HydraProblem Nalgarn's heads]] with wind magic, leaving one head alive [[GeminiDestructionLaw so it'll not die]], while the magic circle regrow the missing heads again. [[OhCrap The poor dragon realize]] what is it up against and [[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted runs away]], only for Abel to turn the earth underneath it to a swamp, trapping it. And then this line:
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* Abel's "fight" with [[OurHydrasAreDifferent Nalgarn]]. a [[MultipleHeadCase Three-Headed]] Dragon, that was shown in the previous chapter [[TheWorfEffect wiping the floor with the Fage territory's private army]]. Abel test it with [[RazorWind Wind Blade magic]] and [[OffWithHisHead lops the yellow head's neck]], only for its [[HealingFactor magic circle to activate and regrow it back]]. Abel then [[EurekaMoment decides]] to [[MainliningTheMonster [[MonsterOrganTrafficking 'farm the heads']] and start cutting [[HydraProblem Nalgarn's heads]] with wind magic, leaving one head alive [[GeminiDestructionLaw so it'll not die]], while the magic circle regrow the missing heads again. [[OhCrap The poor dragon realize]] realizes]] what is it up against and [[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted runs away]], only for Abel to turn the earth underneath it to a swamp, trapping it. And then this line:
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* As much as Abel's fight with [[spoiler: Marias]] was an AntiClimax, one cannot deny the sheer hilarity of how the fight concluded. After Ashura 5000 destroys [[spoiler: her]] biggest demons, [[spoiler: Marias]] orders the demon [[spoiler: she]]'s riding, [[AnimalisticAbomination a big red bull demon with countless snakes coming from the neck]], to [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere withdraw]]. The bull demon, however, [[HorsingAround lowered its posture and threw]] [[spoiler: her]] off its back and sat still QuakingwithFear. [[MoodyMount It favored its own safety rather then its rider's]]! The rest of the demons ran away however, erasing their summon crests away from [[spoiler: Marias]]'s body, leaving [[spoiler: her]] defenseless.
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* As much as Abel's fight with [[spoiler: Marias]] Marias was an AntiClimax, one cannot deny the sheer hilarity of how the fight concluded. After Ashura 5000 destroys [[spoiler: her]] her biggest demons, [[spoiler: Marias]] Marias orders the demon [[spoiler: she]]'s she's riding, [[AnimalisticAbomination a big red bull demon with countless snakes coming from the neck]], to [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere withdraw]]. The bull demon, however, [[HorsingAround lowered its posture and threw]] [[spoiler: her]] her off its back and sat still QuakingwithFear. QuakingWithFear. [[MoodyMount It favored its own safety rather then its rider's]]! The rest of the demons ran away however, erasing their summon crests away from [[spoiler: Marias]]'s Marias's body, leaving [[spoiler: her]] her defenseless.
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-->'''[[GreenEyedMonster Abel]]''': “…… Maybe this guy is an [[ProfessionalKiller assassin from Chloe’s faction]]. From there, and I think he has a [[CallBack similar vibe to the missionary Ringus]]. Be careful, the next time you’re approached, don’t worry about it, just call me first, okay?” \\
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I let the burlap sack that was thrown at me play in my hand. Is it the thing stuffed inside wheat?
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I let the burlap sack that was thrown at me play in my hand. Is it the thing It is stuffed inside with wheat?
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-->'''Horned Girl''': “[[TheDitz I’m going to give you a pillow]], [[ComicallyMissingThePoint so you can sleep on the side of the road as long as you like!]]” \\
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-->'''Horned Girl''': “[[TheDitz I’m going to give you a pillow]], so [[ComicallyMissingThePoint so you can sleep on the side of the road as long as you like!]]” \\
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* [[MsImagination Mea]]'s Quest Report, about [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s fight and subjagation of [[WhenTreesAttack Evil Bound]]: Gaston [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower snapped Evil Bound into pieces with his bare hands]], then finished off the magical roots with [[FrictionBurn frictional heat!!]]. Abel realized the Gaston was still missing his sword, so he had Mea write the report like that.
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* [[MsImagination Mea]]'s Quest Report, about [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s fight and subjagation subjugation of [[WhenTreesAttack Evil Bound]]: Gaston [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower snapped Evil Bound into pieces with his bare hands]], then finished off the magical roots with [[FrictionBurn frictional heat!!]]. Abel realized the Gaston was still missing his sword, so he had Mea write the report like that.
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* This scene in the webnovel. [[DespairEventHorizon Abel was bemoaning his situation]] after his wooden totem truck broke down, foiling his escape from the village. He suddenly hear the sound of animal hoofs moving and turns around to find a horse-driven carriage, carrying burlap bags. He then hears a voice, not coming from the driver, telling him to stop sleeping on the side of the road, and the voice owner comes out from under the burlap bags pile. It's a girl with blue hair with sheep horns on her head, who then tells him this:
-->'''Horned Girl''': “[[TheDitz I’m going to give you a pillow]], [[ComicallyMissingThePoint so you can sleep on the side of the road as long as you like!]]” \\
The sheep girl threw one of the burlap bags at me. \\
'''Carriage Driver''': “Hey, hey, Mea-san, please don’t throw my goods!” \\
The man sitting on the driver’s seat screams out in grief as he looks back at the sheep girl. \\
I let the burlap sack that was thrown at me play in my hand. Is it the thing stuffed inside wheat?
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-->'''Horned Girl''': “[[TheDitz I’m going to give you a pillow]], [[ComicallyMissingThePoint so you can sleep on the side of the road as long as you like!]]” \\
The sheep girl threw one of the burlap bags at me. \\
'''Carriage Driver''': “Hey, hey, Mea-san, please don’t throw my goods!” \\
The man sitting on the driver’s seat screams out in grief as he looks back at the sheep girl. \\
I let the burlap sack that was thrown at me play in my hand. Is it the thing stuffed inside wheat?
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** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to warn him not to play with the shackles. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the [[PersonOfMassDestruction Abel]]'s fiddling [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy charged the stone over its maximum capacity and caused it to burn out]], rendering the shackles useless.
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** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to warn him not to play with the shackles. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the [[PersonOfMassDestruction Abel]]'s fiddling [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy charged the stone over its maximum capacity and caused it to burn out]], rendering the shackles useless.
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** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to warn him not to play with the shackles. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the Abel's fiddling [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy overcharged the stone over its maximum capacity and cause it to burn out]], rendering the shackles useless.
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** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to warn him not to play with the shackles. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the Abel's [[PersonOfMassDestruction Abel]]'s fiddling [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy overcharged charged the stone over its maximum capacity and cause caused it to burn out]], rendering the shackles useless.
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'''Abel''': “[[MoodWhiplash…… Isn’t this too one-sided]]? For a sorcerer, magic is a lifeline. Being able to hold it down is tougher than being tied up all over your body and having a knife held to your neck.”
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'''Abel''': “[[MoodWhiplash…… “[[MoodWhiplash …… Isn’t this too one-sided]]? For a sorcerer, magic is a lifeline. Being able to hold it down is tougher than being tied up all over your body and having a knife held to your neck.”
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** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to tell him that has that weird look on his face. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the AntiMagic SupernormalBindings has a limit, or [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy
weren't designed with someone like him in mind]].
weren't designed with someone like him in mind]].
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** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to tell warn him that has that weird look on his face.not to play with the shackles. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the AntiMagic SupernormalBindings has a limit, or [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy
weren't designed with someone like him in mind]].Abel's fiddling [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy overcharged the stone over its maximum capacity and cause it to burn out]], rendering the shackles useless.
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* After [[FrameUp Chloe accuses Abel of being a devil]], she tells him about the Devil's Trial, and how he'll be torched with a flame to [[BurnTheWitch determine if he's a devil or not]], and that he's required to wear [[SupernormalBindings Arogua stone shackles]], special kind of shackles to block his magic, and shows it to him. His reaction? [[SqUee He gushes about seeing the shackles, and thinks of how expensive and powerful these materials are,
and how it's rarely seen in Dinrat Kingdom]], and proceed to ask Chloe:
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* After [[FrameUp Chloe accuses Abel of being a devil]], she tells him about the Devil's Trial, and how he'll be torched with a flame to [[BurnTheWitch determine if he's a devil or not]], and that he's required to wear [[SupernormalBindings Arogua stone shackles]], special kind of shackles to block his magic, and shows it to him. His reaction? [[SqUee He gushes about seeing the shackles, and thinks of how expensive and powerful these materials are,
are]], and how it's rarely seen in Dinrat Kingdom]], Kingdom, and proceed to ask Chloe:
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* After [[FrameUp Chloe accuses Abel of being a devil]], she tells him about the Devil's Trial, and how he'll be torched with a flame to [[BurnTheWitch determine if he's a devil or not]], and that he's required to wear [[SupernormalBindings Arogua stone shackles]], special kind of shackles to block his magic, and shows it to him. His reaction? [[SqueE He gushes about seeing the shackles, and thinks of how expensive and powerful these materials are,
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* After [[FrameUp Chloe accuses Abel of being a devil]], she tells him about the Devil's Trial, and how he'll be torched with a flame to [[BurnTheWitch determine if he's a devil or not]], and that he's required to wear [[SupernormalBindings Arogua stone shackles]], special kind of shackles to block his magic, and shows it to him. His reaction? [[SqueE [[SqUee He gushes about seeing the shackles, and thinks of how expensive and powerful these materials are,
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-->'''Abel''': “[[CasualDangerDialoge C-, can I get that …… after the trial is over?]]”
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-->'''Abel''': “[[CasualDangerDialoge “[[CasualDangerDialog C-, can I get that …… after the trial is over?]]”over?]]” \\
Chloe stared at me with [[DeathGlare narrowed eyes]]. \\
I suddenly came to my senses and fooled myself by interjecting a cough. \\
'''Abel''': “[[MoodWhiplash…… Isn’t this too one-sided]]? For a sorcerer, magic is a lifeline. Being able to hold it down is tougher than being tied up all over your body and having a knife held to your neck.”
** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to tell him that has that weird look on his face. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the AntiMagic SupernormalBindings has a limit, or [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy
weren't designed with someone like him in mind]].
Chloe stared at me with [[DeathGlare narrowed eyes]]. \\
I suddenly came to my senses and fooled myself by interjecting a cough. \\
'''Abel''': “[[MoodWhiplash…… Isn’t this too one-sided]]? For a sorcerer, magic is a lifeline. Being able to hold it down is tougher than being tied up all over your body and having a knife held to your neck.”
** Later when Abel is in shackles and imprisoned, he [[CuriousAsAMonkey decides to fiddle around]] with the shackles nullifying his magic, by feeding it some of his magic to absorb, [[ForScience to experiment on them]]. [[TooKinkyToTorture He gets excited and feels great]] as he continues feeding the shackles small amounts of his magic for it to absorb. Mea then comes to check on him with the guard watching them. She's relieved seeing him having fun, as he proceeds to show her the shackles and feed its more magic power, prompting her to tell him that has that weird look on his face. Suddenly, the [[ExplosiveInstrumentation stone shackles become discolored, and a faint smell and a strange sound came from them]]. Turns out the AntiMagic SupernormalBindings has a limit, or [[GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy
weren't designed with someone like him in mind]].
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and how it's rarely seen in Dinrat Kingdom]], and proceed to ask Chloe:
-->'''Abel''': “[[CasualDangerDialoge C-, can I get that …… after the trial is over?]]”
and how it's rarely seen in Dinrat Kingdom]], and proceed to ask Chloe:
-->'''Abel''': “[[CasualDangerDialoge C-, can I get that …… after the trial is over?]]”
