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** While the scene where Slightly plays "doctor" to Tinker Bell is not played for laughs, there is a funny detail in that the thermometer he uses is simply marked "GOOD -- OK -- VERY BAD," and Slightly's diagnose after checking the thermometer is that it "looks kinda bad."

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** While the scene where Slightly plays "doctor" to Tinker Bell is not played for laughs, there is a funny detail in that the thermometer he uses is simply marked "GOOD -- OK -- VERY BAD," and Slightly's diagnose diagnosis after checking the thermometer is that it "looks kinda bad."
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'''Smee:''' Uh um, I said that, uh, [[LameRhymeDodge searching for Pan is, um, uh...fun galore!]] ''[nervously laughs]'\\

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'''Smee:''' Uh um, I said that, uh, [[LameRhymeDodge searching for Pan is, um, uh...fun galore!]] ''[nervously laughs]'\\laughs]''\\

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''[crew groans]''\\



'''Smee:''' Uh, I-I-I s-said, uh, "[[LameRhymeDodge searching for Pan is, um, uh...fun galore!]]"\\

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'''Smee:''' Uh, I-I-I s-said, Uh um, I said that, uh, "[[LameRhymeDodge [[LameRhymeDodge searching for Pan is, um, uh...fun galore!]]"\\galore!]] ''[nervously laughs]'\\
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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face]].
* When the Jolly Roger sinks, Hook begs Peter to save him from going into the water. [[TheGadfly Peter being Peter]], of course, takes some time to remind him of the classic maritime code:
-->'''Peter:''' You know the rules, Hook! (''takes off his hat and mockingly holds it over his chest'') [[GoingDownWithTheShip A good Captain]] ''[[GoingDownWithTheShip always]]'' [[GoingDownWithTheShip goes down with his ship!]]
-->'''Hook:''' (''{{beat}}, before panicking'') I DON'T ''WANNA'' BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
* Captain Hook's final encounter with the octopus in the climax.

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face]].
* When the Jolly Roger sinks, Hook begs Peter to save him from going into the water. [[TheGadfly Peter being Peter]], of course, takes some time to remind him of the classic maritime code:
-->'''Peter:''' You know the rules, Hook! (''takes off his hat and mockingly holds it over his chest'') [[GoingDownWithTheShip A good Captain]] ''[[GoingDownWithTheShip always]]'' [[GoingDownWithTheShip goes down with his ship!]]
-->'''Hook:''' (''{{beat}}, before panicking'') I DON'T ''WANNA'' BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
* Captain Hook's final encounter with the octopus in the climax.
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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.face]].
* When the Jolly Roger sinks, Hook begs Peter to save him from going into the water. [[TheGadfly Peter being Peter]], of course, takes some time to remind him of the classic maritime code:
-->'''Peter:''' You know the rules, Hook! (''takes off his hat and mockingly holds it over his chest'') [[GoingDownWithTheShip A good Captain]] ''[[GoingDownWithTheShip always]]'' [[GoingDownWithTheShip goes down with his ship!]]
-->'''Hook:''' (''{{beat}}, before panicking'') I DON'T ''WANNA'' BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
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* Captain Hook's final encounter with the octopus in the climax.
** The dazed Captain Hook having the broken bucket turned briefly to a tutu, and he ''danced like a ballerina''!
* As his ship sank, when Captain Hook was told by Peter Pan that "a good captain always goes down with his ship"...
-->'''Captain Hook:''' (banging like a tantruming child) I DON'T WANNA BE A '''GOOD CAPTAIN!!!'''

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* Captain Hook's final encounter with the octopus in the climax.
** The dazed Captain Hook having the broken bucket turned briefly to a tutu, and he ''danced like a ballerina''!
* As his ship sank, when Captain Hook was told by Peter Pan that "a good captain always goes down with his ship"...
-->'''Captain Hook:''' (banging like a tantruming child) I DON'T WANNA BE A '''GOOD CAPTAIN!!!'''
climax.
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Slapstick Knows No Gender is no longer a trope.


[[caption-width-right:350:SlapstickKnowsNoGender in Neverland.]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:SlapstickKnowsNoGender [[caption-width-right:350:Slapstick knows no gender in Neverland.]]
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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.face.
* Captain Hook's final encounter with the octopus in the climax.
** The dazed Captain Hook having the broken bucket turned briefly to a tutu, and he ''danced like a ballerina''!
* As his ship sank, when Captain Hook was told by Peter Pan that "a good captain always goes down with his ship"...
-->'''Captain Hook:''' (banging like a tantruming child) I DON'T WANNA BE A '''GOOD CAPTAIN!!!'''
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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.
* Hook's final defeat. First, he ends up falling though his ship holding onto the [[HoistByHisOwnPetard same anchor he tried to drown Peter with]], then gets ''chased back up'' by the octopus, defies GoingDownWithTheShip, and gets [[ExitPursuedByABear pursued]] along with his crew by the octopus, who mistook them ''all'' as codfish!
-->'''Hook:''' I DON'T WANNA BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.
* Hook's final defeat. First, he ends up falling though his ship holding onto the [[HoistByHisOwnPetard same anchor he tried to drown Peter with]], then gets ''chased back up'' by the octopus, defies GoingDownWithTheShip, and gets [[ExitPursuedByABear pursued]] along with his crew by the octopus, who mistook them ''all'' as codfish!
-->'''Hook:''' I DON'T WANNA BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
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Still no explanation as to why this was cut.


* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.face.
* Hook's final defeat. First, he ends up falling though his ship holding onto the [[HoistByHisOwnPetard same anchor he tried to drown Peter with]], then gets ''chased back up'' by the octopus, defies GoingDownWithTheShip, and gets [[ExitPursuedByABear pursued]] along with his crew by the octopus, who mistook them ''all'' as codfish!
-->'''Hook:''' I DON'T WANNA BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.
* Hook's final defeat. First, he ends up falling though his ship holding onto the [[HoistByHisOwnPetard same anchor he tried to drown Peter with]], then gets ''chased back up'' by the octopus, defies GoingDownWithTheShip, and gets [[ExitPursuedByABear pursued]] along with his crew by the octopus, who mistook them ''all'' as codfish!
-->'''Hook:''' I DON'T WANNA BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.
* Hook's final defeat. First, he ends up falling though his ship holding onto the [[HoistByHisOwnPetard same anchor he tried to drown Peter with]], then gets ''chased back up'' by the octopus, defies GoingDownWithTheShip, and gets [[ExitPursuedByABear pursued]] along with his crew by the octopus, who mistook them ''all'' as codfish!
-->'''Hook:''' I DON'T WANNA BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
face.
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'''Smee:''' Aww! Oh, goodness. Haven't we searched the island a thousand times before?\\

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'''Smee:''' Aww! Oh, goodness. Haven't we searched the island a thousand times before?\\
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I don't see why this was cut.


* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.

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* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.face.
* Hook's final defeat. First, he ends up falling though his ship holding onto the [[HoistByHisOwnPetard same anchor he tried to drown Peter with]], then gets ''chased back up'' by the octopus, defies GoingDownWithTheShip, and gets [[ExitPursuedByABear pursued]] along with his crew by the octopus, who mistook them ''all'' as codfish!
-->'''Hook:''' I DON'T WANNA BE A GOOD CAPTAIN!
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** Due to the excessive amount of fairy dust, Jane ends up sneezing. Cue Tink getting blown away by the sneeze, bouncing like a pinball off numerous things, including every one of the Lost Boys, before landing in a knothole and stumbling out, fuming mad with a mushroom on her head while the Lost Boys all laugh.
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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the sack down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.

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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the sack down on a rock and opens it--only it--[[TalkToTheFist only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head.head]]. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.
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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.

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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag sack down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.
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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by [[DeadHatShot Peter's hat bobbing in the water]]. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms, unscathed.

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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag sack Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by [[DeadHatShot Peter's hat bobbing in the water]]. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag sack in his arms, unscathed.
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** In fact, their whole banter during this scene, with Peter's bragging so much that "[[Theatre/PeterPan1954 I've Gotta Crow]]" wouldn't have been too out of place in there.

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** In fact, their whole banter during this scene, with Peter's Peter bragging so much that "[[Theatre/PeterPan1954 I've Gotta Crow]]" wouldn't have been too out of place in there.
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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.

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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.Wendy.
* Peter finds Jane setting up her makeshift raft, and concludes she must be leaving. Tinker Bell's first reaction? To just wave goodbye with the happiest grin on her face.
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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head.

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** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head. It's such a hard hit that he's still rubbing his face when he realizes she isn't Wendy.
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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by [[DeadHatShot Peter's hat bobbing in the water]]. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms, unscathed.

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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by [[DeadHatShot Peter's hat bobbing in the water]]. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms, unscathed.unscathed.
** After that first confrontation with Hook, Peter settles the bag down on a rock and opens it--only to be quickly met with a sucker punch from Jane that nearly knocks his hat off his head.
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** In fact, their whole banter during this scene, with Peter's constant bragging, to the point that "[[Theatre/PeterPan1954 I've Gotta Crow]]" wouldn't have been too out of place in there.

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** In fact, their whole banter during this scene, with Peter's constant bragging, to the point bragging so much that "[[Theatre/PeterPan1954 I've Gotta Crow]]" wouldn't have been too out of place in there.
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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by Peter's hat bobbing in the water. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms, unscathed.

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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by [[DeadHatShot Peter's hat bobbing in the water.water]]. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms, unscathed.
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*** Then again, the Hangman's Tree does have an entire pond suspended on the ceiling...
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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by Peter's hat bobbing in the water. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms.

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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by Peter's hat bobbing in the water. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms.arms, unscathed.
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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by Peter's hat bobbing in the water. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's familiar cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms.

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* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by Peter's hat bobbing in the water. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's familiar signature cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms.
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'''Hook''': NO, you imbecile! ''[chuckles]'' We'll get me treasure...''and'' the boy.

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'''Hook''': NO, you imbecile! ''[chuckles]'' We'll get me treasure...''and'' the boy.boy.
* Early on, when Peter dives into the ocean to rescue the duffel bag Jane is in (under the impression that she's Wendy), Hook and Smee look down and are met with a cloud of ink smoke, followed by Peter's hat bobbing in the water. Hook begans to prematurely gloat over his victory, ordering his crew to cheer for him--but it's soon cut short by Peter's familiar cockerel cry as he proudly emerges from the water with the duffel bag in his arms.

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