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** After slamming the doors to his quarters shut behind a traumatized Elizabeth, Barbossa turns to his men and gives a deep belly laugh. The crew burst out laughing as well. Barbossa's reply? ''[[MoodWhiplash "What are you looking at? Back to work!"]]'' Cue a bunch of skeletons awkwardly stumbling around and bumping into each other.
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** After slamming the doors to his quarters shut behind a traumatized Elizabeth, Barbossa turns to his men and gives a deep belly laugh. The crew burst out laughing as well. Barbossa's reply? ''[[MoodWhiplash "What are you looking lookin' at? Back to work!"]]'' Cue a bunch of skeletons awkwardly stumbling around and bumping into each other.
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'''Jack:''' ''(quietly to himself)'' Parsley? Partner? Partner...\\
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'''Jack:''' ''(quietly to himself)'' Parlili... Parsley? Parsnip? Partner? Partner...\\
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'''Pintel''' ''(gives Ragetti a DeathGlare)'' Parley? Damn to the depths whatever muttonhead thought of parley!\\
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'''Pintel''' ''(gives Ragetti Ragetti, who looks genuinely proud of himself, a DeathGlare)'' Parley? '''''Parley?''''' Damn to the depths whatever muttonhead thought of parley!\\
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** One of Barbossa's men spends most of the final battle trying to get his head unstuck from a golden vase (courtesy of Jack). The moment he finally frees himself with a victorious laugh, Elizabeth uses the bannister to whack him across the face.
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--> '''Pintel:''' Any of you so much as thinks the word ''[[BrickJoke "parlay"]]'', I'll have your guts for garters!
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--> '''Pintel:''' Any of you so much as thinks the word ''[[BrickJoke "parlay"]]'', "parley"]]'', I'll have your guts for garters!
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** After slamming the doors to his quarters shut behind a traumatized Elizabeth, Barbossa turns to his men and gives a deep belly laugh. The crew burst out laughing as well. Barbossa's reply? ''[[MoodWhiplash "What are you looking at? Back to work!"]]'' Cue a bunch of skeletons awkwardly stumbling around and bumping into each other.
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--->'''Elizabeth:''' That's ''it''?\\
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* Pintel showing that he's learned from past mistakes as he threatens Jack's crew.
--> '''Pintel:''' Any of you so much as thinks the word ''[[BrickJoke "parlay"]]'', I'll have your guts for garters!
--> '''Pintel:''' Any of you so much as thinks the word ''[[BrickJoke "parlay"]]'', I'll have your guts for garters!
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* Pintel and Ragetti overturning a chest of what they think is gold, only for a bunch of ladies umbrellas to spill out. [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide Ragetti]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} immediately uses one}}.
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* Pintel and Ragetti overturning a chest of what they think is gold, only for a bunch of ladies umbrellas to spill out. [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide Ragetti]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} immediately uses one}}.one]].
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--->'''Grapple:''' Say goodbye! [gets a falling shop sign to the face]\\
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--->'''Grapple:''' Say goodbye! [gets ''[gets a falling shop sign to the face]\\face]''\\
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'''Will:'" ...Goodbye.
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* The fact that the cursed crew [[{{Troll}} deliberately went out of their way to terrify Elizabeth further by making zombie-like moans and grunts when she first saw their undead forms]], even though they're perfectly capable of human speech even as skeletons.
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* The fact that the cursed crew [[{{Troll}} deliberately went out of their way to terrify Elizabeth further by making zombie-like moans and grunts when she first saw their undead forms]], even though they're perfectly capable of human speech even as skeletons.skeletons.
* Pintel and Ragetti overturning a chest of what they think is gold, only for a bunch of ladies umbrellas to spill out. [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide Ragetti]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} immediately uses one}}.
* Pintel and Ragetti overturning a chest of what they think is gold, only for a bunch of ladies umbrellas to spill out. [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide Ragetti]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} immediately uses one}}.
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'''Will:'"" ...Goodbye.
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** After building up that Elizabeth will be a blood sacrifice, Barbossa makes just one small cut on the palm of her hand. Elizabeth almost sounds disappointed.
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* After building up that Elizabeth will be a blood sacrifice, Barbossa makes just one small cut on the palm of her hand. Elizabeth almost sounds disappointed.
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-->'''Jack:''' ...[[NoodleIncident "...and then they made me ]][[OrphanedPunchline their chief."]]
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* Governor Swann gives Murtogg a DeathGlare upon seeing him holding Elizabeth's butchered corset after she was rescued. Murtogg immediately hides the garment and points at Jack.
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** This exchange:"Say goodbye!" *falling shop sign to the face* "...Goodbye."
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** This exchange:"Say goodbye!" *falling exchange:
--->'''Grapple:''' Say goodbye! [gets a falling shop sign to theface* "...face]\\
'''Will:'"" ...Goodbye."
--->'''Grapple:''' Say goodbye! [gets a falling shop sign to the
'''Will:'"" ...Goodbye.
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--->'''Jacoby:''' Hello! ''[Throws a bomb on the ground. It fails to explode. The pirate looks dejected. Will happily reaches for his sword. A second pirate runs past him.]''\\
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--->'''Jacoby:''' Hello! ''[Throws ''[throws a bomb on the ground. It fails to explode. The pirate looks dejected. Will happily reaches for his sword. A second pirate runs past him.]''\\
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* Jack's terrible attempt at coaxing Koehler into letting him go as he's about to be marooned. It should be noted that this is the same man Jack encountered and insulted while in jail at the beginning of the movie.
-->'''Jack:''' [[BlatantLies I've always liked you.]] \\
'''Koehler:''' ''[grunts]''
-->'''Jack:''' [[BlatantLies I've always liked you.]] \\
'''Koehler:''' ''[grunts]''
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** [[FunnyBackgroundEvent As a bonus]], several members of the crew actually ''do'' look confused at Barbossa's initial reply, before laughing once he clarifies.
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* Governor Swann's fight with the skeleton arm--after he smashes it with a hammer for trying to steal his wig.
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* Governor Swann's fight with the skeleton arm--after arm -- he smashes it with a hammer for trying to steal his wig.wig, then locks it up inside a drawer which he struggles to keep shut as the limb furiously tries to free itself.
** Once the curse is lifted and the Governor no longer feels the dresser shaking, he carefully opens the drawer, [[BloodyHorror retches]], and immediately shuts it again.
** Once the curse is lifted and the Governor no longer feels the dresser shaking, he carefully opens the drawer, [[BloodyHorror retches]], and immediately shuts it again.
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* Will accidentally pulling one of the candle fixtures free, and quickly having to hide it when Governor Swann comes to see him.
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* Will accidentally pulling one of the candle fixtures free, free while waiting for Governor Swann, and quickly having to hide it when Governor Swann comes to see him.one of the domestics walks by.
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** Ragetti gives the navy several high-pitched "yoo-hoo"s, much to Pintel's dismay. When he complains about it, Ragetti tells him that he looks nice, which angers Pintel enough to strangle him -- dropping his umbrella and blowing their cover in the process.
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** Ragetti gives the navy several high-pitched "yoo-hoo"s, much to Pintel's dismay. When he complains about it, feeling like an idiot, Ragetti tells him that he looks nice, which angers Pintel enough to strangle him -- dropping his umbrella and blowing their cover in the process.
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-->'''Jack:''' All hands to the boats!\\
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'''Pintel:''' [exasperated eye roll]
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'''Pintel:''' [exasperated ''[exasperated eye roll]roll]''
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** Ragetti gives the navy several high-pitched "yoo-hoo"s, much to Pintel's dismay. When he complains about it, Ragetti tells him that he looks nice, which angers him enough to strangle him -- dropping his umbrella and blowing their cover in the process.
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** Ragetti gives the navy several high-pitched "yoo-hoo"s, much to Pintel's dismay. When he complains about it, Ragetti tells him that he looks nice, which angers him Pintel enough to strangle him -- dropping his umbrella and blowing their cover in the process.
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-->'''Bo'sun:''' Did it work?\\
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'''Bo'sun:''' [[CaptainObvious You're not dead!]]\\
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* As the pirates make their way inside the treasure cave, we get this dialogue:
-->'''Pintel:''' ''(to Will)'' No reason to fret. Just a prick of the finger, a few drops of blood...\\
'''Twigg:''' ''(shoving Will forward)'' No mistake this time. He's only half Turner. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill We SPILL IT ALL!]]\\
'''Pintel:''' ''(to Ragetti)'' [[CaptainObvious Guess there is a reason to fret.]]
-->'''Pintel:''' ''(to Will)'' No reason to fret. Just a prick of the finger, a few drops of blood...\\
'''Twigg:''' ''(shoving Will forward)'' No mistake this time. He's only half Turner. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill We SPILL IT ALL!]]\\
'''Pintel:''' ''(to Ragetti)'' [[CaptainObvious Guess there is a reason to fret.]]
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* Instead of joining the battle against the royal navy, Pintel and Ragetti get sent out as a distraction on a small boat... [[DisguisedInDrag wearing dresses]]. It works.
--> '''Ragetti:''' ''(giggling)'' [[GeniusDitz This is just like what the Greeks done at Troy!]] ...'Cept they was in a horse instead o' dresses. Wooden 'orse.\\
'''Pintel:''' [exasperated eye roll]
** Ragetti gives the navy several high-pitched "yoo-hoo"s, much to Pintel's dismay. When he complains about it, Ragetti tells him that he looks nice, which angers him enough to strangle him -- dropping his umbrella and blowing their cover in the process.
--> '''Ragetti:''' ''(giggling)'' [[GeniusDitz This is just like what the Greeks done at Troy!]] ...'Cept they was in a horse instead o' dresses. Wooden 'orse.\\
'''Pintel:''' [exasperated eye roll]
** Ragetti gives the navy several high-pitched "yoo-hoo"s, much to Pintel's dismay. When he complains about it, Ragetti tells him that he looks nice, which angers him enough to strangle him -- dropping his umbrella and blowing their cover in the process.
