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-->"He's normally more PINK than black and blue, your wretchedness," purred Sister Cat. She was perched on Razor Rex's lap, gazing down at Coach Oop with a pompous, feline sneer. "Perhaps now that Ape's shown you his true colors, he'll have the decency to BLUSH, and then we'll get to see a happy medium--I know I'd rather see THAT than this SAD ONE! AH-ha ha HA!\\
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-->"He's normally more PINK than black and blue, your wretchedness," purred Sister Cat. She was perched on Razor Rex's lap, gazing down at Coach Oop with a pompous, feline sneer. "Perhaps now that Ape's shown you his true colors, he'll have the decency to BLUSH, and then we'll get to see a happy medium--I know I'd rather see THAT than this SAD ONE! AH-ha ha HA!\\HA!"\\
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* Baxter (Sister Cat) spends the entire party shamelessly sucking up to Razor Rex, using cat puns, and dunking on her fellow cultists.
-->"He's normally more PINK than black and blue, your wretchedness," purred Sister Cat. She was perched on Razor Rex's lap, gazing down at Coach Oop with a pompous, feline sneer. "Perhaps now that Ape's shown you his true colors, he'll have the decency to BLUSH, and then we'll get to see a happy medium--I know I'd rather see THAT than this SAD ONE! AH-ha ha HA!\\
Razor Rex pet Baxter like the lapcat of a villain in a James Bond movie, which everyone thought was honestly a little bit much.\\
"I COULDN'T HAVE SAID IT BETTER MYSELF, SISTER CAT," the goddess lied. She totally could have said it better, because she had a beautiful voice, like a dying pterodactyl, and because Oop wasn't a medium so the wordplay didn't quite work. It was bad form to undermine your flunkies' dunks, though, and she'd sound like a huge nerd correcting a math teacher, so Razor Rex just went with it instead.
-->"He's normally more PINK than black and blue, your wretchedness," purred Sister Cat. She was perched on Razor Rex's lap, gazing down at Coach Oop with a pompous, feline sneer. "Perhaps now that Ape's shown you his true colors, he'll have the decency to BLUSH, and then we'll get to see a happy medium--I know I'd rather see THAT than this SAD ONE! AH-ha ha HA!\\
Razor Rex pet Baxter like the lapcat of a villain in a James Bond movie, which everyone thought was honestly a little bit much.\\
"I COULDN'T HAVE SAID IT BETTER MYSELF, SISTER CAT," the goddess lied. She totally could have said it better, because she had a beautiful voice, like a dying pterodactyl, and because Oop wasn't a medium so the wordplay didn't quite work. It was bad form to undermine your flunkies' dunks, though, and she'd sound like a huge nerd correcting a math teacher, so Razor Rex just went with it instead.
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* After years of foreshadowing and build-up, the leader of Mayview's Death Cult is revealed. We finally get to see Razor Rex, in all her glory... [[https://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-8-page-56 Singing karaoke with Davy Jones.]] She looks ''ridiculous.''
** She also proves the depths of her villainy to Hijack by challenging anyone in the audience to... ''[[FauxHorrific Kinect]]'' Sports. [[BreadEggsMilkSquick And then blithely threatening to murder anyone who beats her.]]
** She also proves the depths of her villainy to Hijack by challenging anyone in the audience to... ''[[FauxHorrific Kinect]]'' Sports. [[BreadEggsMilkSquick And then blithely threatening to murder anyone who beats her.]]
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* Stephen's mother Captain Henchman notices a conflict brewing between Fauxbia and Cody, and attempts to defuse the tension by [[StageMagician pulling quarter from behind the Witch's ear]]. [[AncientEvil Fauxbia's]] response?
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* Stephen's mother Captain Henchman notices a conflict brewing between Fauxbia and Cody, and attempts to defuse the tension by [[StageMagician pulling a quarter from behind the Witch's ear]]. [[AncientEvil Fauxbia's]] response?
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-->'''[[{{Troll}} Fauxbia]]''': "That's mine. Put it back."
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* Spender thinks that the bowl Jean is bringing with him is a curative poultice.
-->Jean: It's spaghetti. What in the hell is a poultice.
-->Jean: It's spaghetti. What in the hell is a poultice.
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-->'''Amy:''' Don't sass me! Spectral or not, I have a sixth sense for sass!
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* Cody's plan to escape to find his missing mom involves having to make sure his father thinks he's completely away from danger by making sure he gives him a command to stay in his room so powerful that wouldn't ever believe he could escape. Or, as the Hijacks put it...
-->'''Hijack''': "You... you want your dad to ''[[YouAreGrounded ground you]]'' ''with a vampire command?''"
-->'''Cody''': "I want him to ULTRA SUPER MEGA ''EXTRA'' ground me!"
-->'''Hijack''': "You... you want your dad to ''[[YouAreGrounded ground you]]'' ''with a vampire command?''"
-->'''Cody''': "I want him to ULTRA SUPER MEGA ''EXTRA'' ground me!"
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'''Ed (thinking):''' No good, I have to dig deeper! What would [[Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles my]] '''[[Franchise/{{Spiderman}} fictional]]''' [[Franchise/PowerRangers mentors]] [[Franchise/WinnieThePooh say]] in a situation like this??
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'''Ed (thinking):''' No good, I have to dig deeper! What would [[Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles my]] '''[[Franchise/{{Spiderman}} '''[[ComicBook/SpiderMan fictional]]''' [[Franchise/PowerRangers mentors]] [[Franchise/WinnieThePooh say]] in a situation like this??
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* Fun Mayview activities: The local arcade is a lawless wasteland where customers hunt each other for prizes.
-->"Well, I--oh, just a moment. That's my target over there." Max's dad pulled a wanted poster from within the ball pit to double check his bounty's mugshot, then revealed a laser pistol in a similar manner and fired off a few blasts over Max's shoulder. A six-year-old waddling past a nearby craps table screeched and ducked for cover; there wasn't enough room at Jackpot Junior's for a dedicated laser tag arena, so a rolling gunfight with haphazard cowboy LARP elements dominated the casino floor instead. "Walk with me, son," Mr. Puckett said, wading towards the pit's edge to coup de grace his target at close range.
* It's been mentioned before that Suzy is being blackmailed by Lisa. She has some secret that she will do ''anything'' to keep hidden. Most of all, she wants to keep it from Isabel, [[EveryoneCanSeeIt who she definitely doesn't have a crush on]]. So what is her secret? What terrible thing lies in her past? She's Mr. Starchman's daughter.
-->Isabel, however, had missed her English teacher's intimation for the much less subtle gossip that preceded it. "Wait, Mr. Starchman is your dad?" she asked, stating Suzy's greatest, most humiliating secret--the one she'd lied and bribed and schemed and suffered under Lisa's thumb to hide--with all too mild surprise. Besides the School Store's blackmailing proprietress, no one but the Journalism Club, for whom Starchman was advisor in name only, knew that Suzy was related to the world's most mortifying jester of a man. But now... now... "You're Suzy ''Starchman?'' Huh! I guess there ''was'' something I didn't know about you."\\
Suzy's banshee shriek echoed out across both Mayview hills and up into a rosy twilight sky.
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* Fun Mayview activities: The local arcade is a lawless wasteland where customers hunt each other for prizes.
-->"Well, I--oh, just a moment. That's my target over there." Max's dad pulled a wanted poster from within the ball pit to double check his bounty's mugshot, then revealed a laser pistol in a similar manner and fired off a few blasts over Max's shoulder. A six-year-old waddling past a nearby craps table screeched and ducked for cover; there wasn't enough room at Jackpot Junior's for a dedicated laser tag arena, so a rolling gunfight with haphazard cowboy LARP elements dominated the casino floor instead. "Walk with me, son," Mr. Puckett said, wading towards the pit's edge to coup de grace his target at close range.
* It's been mentioned before that Suzy is being blackmailed by Lisa. She has some secret that she will do ''anything'' to keep hidden. Most of all, she wants to keep it from Isabel, [[EveryoneCanSeeIt who she definitely doesn't have a crush on]]. So what is her secret? What terrible thing lies in her past? She's Mr. Starchman's daughter.
-->Isabel, however, had missed her English teacher's intimation for the much less subtle gossip that preceded it. "Wait, Mr. Starchman is your dad?" she asked, stating Suzy's greatest, most humiliating secret--the one she'd lied and bribed and schemed and suffered under Lisa's thumb to hide--with all too mild surprise. Besides the School Store's blackmailing proprietress, no one but the Journalism Club, for whom Starchman was advisor in name only, knew that Suzy was related to the world's most mortifying jester of a man. But now... now... "You're Suzy ''Starchman?'' Huh! I guess there ''was'' something I didn't know about you."\\
Suzy's banshee shriek echoed out across both Mayview hills and up into a rosy twilight sky.
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** From the same page, Ms Baxter goes all [[Creator/PabloPicasso Guernica]].
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** From the same page, Ms Baxter goes all [[Creator/PabloPicasso Guernica]].''Art/{{Guernica}}'' (as in, Creator/PabloPicasso's painting).
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** [[UpToEleven Then]] it's revealed that Dimitri had '''never pressed the button to record the audio.''' The next panel cuts with a caption of "Five minutes of screaming later".
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* "[[http://paranatural.net/chapter-4-page-5 A swift jab becomes two dolphins!]]" and the ridiculous comment chain it sent off.
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