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*** "Live a little. Drink a little. Do donuts in a stolen police car. You know, normal Archimedean things.”
*** Lev throwing Monopoly into the fire. "This game has plagued family game nights for decades, ripping children from their mothers’ arms and shattering full and happy marriages!"
** “They brought booze and Monopoly" is enough to get everyone screaming.
*** Lev throwing Monopoly into the fire. "This game has plagued family game nights for decades, ripping children from their mothers’ arms and shattering full and happy marriages!"
** “They brought booze and Monopoly" is enough to get everyone screaming.
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** Everyone's reactions to Yang bringing Monopoly.
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** Manny and Hellen talk about Pakmar's newest business, and Ben gets a SneezeCut when the former wonders who is responsible for Pakmar's enterprises getting wrecked.
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* Chapter 30
** Psyphon's drug is called "Crystal Dolphin".
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** Ben explains to Ruby that Rook stays with his family because the rent in Bellwood is rather high. Later, as Rath, he guesses that the bank robbers are trying to pay off either student loans or a really big rent, prompting one of them to nudge another and to say that he gets it.
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** Roman being MistakenForJunkie by a cop when he asks about "Dust"."Dust", thinking that he means PCP and not a type of crystal with mystical powers.
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** Roman being MistakenForJunkie by a cop when he asks about "Dust".
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* 27
** Kylie comes into the meeting room, telling Kevin that Max is apparently plotting something before she notices Ben is in the room too. She then asks him to ignore what she just said, only for him to bring it up again after he recognizes her. Kevin even gives her a look and asks why she thought that he'd drop it.
** Everyone in Zeta Squadron's disgusted reaction to the idea of "mandatory fun".
* Chapter 28
** Ben tries to turn into Big Chill, but ends up as Rath, who Ruby refers to as a steroid-fueled [[ComicStrip/CalvinAndHobbes Hobbes]], and tries to suplex a ''wall''.
** Kylie apparently kept demanding pictures of Echo Echo, with Ben finally giving her some as an early birthday present.
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** Kevin's reaction to finding out that Kwarrel is a therapist.
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** A quick TakeThat to the Ultimate Alien era of Ben 10.
--> Ben: It's kind of a shame that he doesn't use the ultimates more often.
--> Ruby: Yeah, kind of defeats the whole gimmick of the series. And even when he does, they're usually small. Remember when he used it against the Lord of all Evil during the Hero Generation finale? That was a cool time to use it. Not during some stupid battle in a tunnel.
--> Ben: Yeah. Plus, when anti-Ishyama used it against him? Totally awesome. Seeing the Jurassic techniques at their fullest were some of the coolest moments of Hero Generation.
--> Ruby: I'm glad someone sees where I'm coming from! Mega Sumos is just a lame continuation of Hero Generation.
--> Ben: It's kind of a shame that he doesn't use the ultimates more often.
--> Ruby: Yeah, kind of defeats the whole gimmick of the series. And even when he does, they're usually small. Remember when he used it against the Lord of all Evil during the Hero Generation finale? That was a cool time to use it. Not during some stupid battle in a tunnel.
--> Ben: Yeah. Plus, when anti-Ishyama used it against him? Totally awesome. Seeing the Jurassic techniques at their fullest were some of the coolest moments of Hero Generation.
--> Ruby: I'm glad someone sees where I'm coming from! Mega Sumos is just a lame continuation of Hero Generation.
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** Animo wonders if Ruby even attends school, due to her biting him on the neck earlier that summer.
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** Ben and Ruby's intense game of mini golf, especially the brief verbal fight.
--> Ben: And that's what I call a hole in one!
--> Ruby: Show off.
--> Ben: Says the girl with the giant scythe.
--> Ruby: You really wanna call me out, chandelier face? That was less of an insult and more of a compliment.
--> Ben: Chandelier face? Oh, you're FUNNY.
--> Ben: And that's what I call a hole in one!
--> Ruby: Show off.
--> Ben: Says the girl with the giant scythe.
--> Ruby: You really wanna call me out, chandelier face? That was less of an insult and more of a compliment.
--> Ben: Chandelier face? Oh, you're FUNNY.
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** This exchange;
--> Ruby: You two certainly...destroyed this place.
--> Ben: Believe me, his aliens are a lot worse than mine. Look what he did to my shirt!
--> Ruby: [[LimitedWardrobe Ben, you have like ten of the same shirt.]] Why does it even matter?
** This exchange;
--> Ruby: You two certainly...destroyed this place.
--> Ben: Believe me, his aliens are a lot worse than mine. Look what he did to my shirt!
--> Ruby: [[LimitedWardrobe Ben, you have like ten of the same shirt.]] Why does it even matter?
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*** [[TeenyWeenie Apparently that's Tiayang's go to joke whenever Qrow uses Harbinger]], according to Ruby.
** The MoodWhiplash in future Ruby's note about Ben 10k and his power.
--> Future Ruby: Ben is the strongest thing in this universe. And by far, the scariest. [Beat] Anyways, you guys want cookies?
** Future Ruby revealing to Ben 10k that she's pregnant.
*** [[TeenyWeenie Apparently that's Tiayang's go to joke whenever Qrow uses Harbinger]], according to Ruby.
** The MoodWhiplash in future Ruby's note about Ben 10k and his power.
--> Future Ruby: Ben is the strongest thing in this universe. And by far, the scariest. [Beat] Anyways, you guys want cookies?
** Future Ruby revealing to Ben 10k that she's pregnant.
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** Max's visible confusion upon seeing Sunny.
** Joel cringing upon hearing his father's AWFUL jokes about marriage.
** Lucy and Sunny playing the knife game. Carl is unnerved.
** Joel cringing upon hearing his father's AWFUL jokes about marriage.
** Lucy and Sunny playing the knife game. Carl is unnerved.
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** This exchange;
--> Ben: Alright...now to awkwardly wait to time out and rejoin society!
--> [Beat]
--> Ruby: ...this is a dumb plan.
--> Ben: Yeah, I know.
--> Ben: Alright...now to awkwardly wait to time out and rejoin society!
--> [Beat]
--> Ruby: ...this is a dumb plan.
--> Ben: Yeah, I know.
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** This exchange;
-->Ben: Why didn't [Yang] come on the road trip?
-->Ruby: Training.
-->Ben: Oh, is she on some sport team?
-->Ruby: [[NotEvenBotheringWithAnExcuse Yeah that works.]]
-->Ben: Why didn't [Yang] come on the road trip?
-->Ruby: Training.
-->Ben: Oh, is she on some sport team?
-->Ruby: [[NotEvenBotheringWithAnExcuse Yeah that works.]]
** This exchange;
--> Zombozo: What, are you some kind of...Spidermonkey?
--> Spidermonkey: [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, actually. I figured it was more obvious.]]
--> Zombozo: What, are you some kind of...Spidermonkey?
--> Spidermonkey: [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, actually. I figured it was more obvious.]]
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** The Echo Echo's unwillingness to enter the girls room.
*** The bit about Ruby parting the group like the Red Sea is a funny description.
** The Echo Echo's unwillingness to enter the girls room.
*** The bit about Ruby parting the group like the Red Sea is a funny description.
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** Ben DESTROYING Cardin in the cage match. The camp learned how loud Cardin could scream that day.
** A brief cameo from someone...
--> Nora: Ten bucks on Yang! BREAK HIS LEGS!
** A brief cameo from someone...
--> Nora: Ten bucks on Yang! BREAK HIS LEGS!
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** The VERY reserved reaction of the Tennyson family when they find out Ben can transform into aliens.
*** Carl and Sandra are more concerned about ice cream than the fact their kid is a superhero.
*** Carl and Sandra are more concerned about ice cream than the fact their kid is a superhero.
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** Max's reaction to Super Alien Hero Buddies.
** The Super Alien Hero Buddies version of Water Hazard wets himself, much to Ben and Ruby's annoyance.
** Bit of a meta example; a reviewer praised Emerald and Charmcaster's [[AmbiguouslyGay "friendship"]].
** The Super Alien Hero Buddies version of Water Hazard wets himself, much to Ben and Ruby's annoyance.
** Bit of a meta example; a reviewer praised Emerald and Charmcaster's [[AmbiguouslyGay "friendship"]].
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* Chapter 18
** Steam Smythe getting angry at Ben and Ruby for destroying his blimp, noting how much it costs.
** Kevin managed to escape from the Vreedle Brothers because they threw the ''pin'' instead of the grenade and blew themselves up.
* Chapter 19
** The kids are admiring the scenery... until Kevin runs out of camera film and suggests that they play Sumo Slammers.
* Chapter 20
** None of the kids are very sorry that Max couldn't find what he was looking for at the mall, though they pretend otherwise to spare his feelings.
* Chapter 21
** Animo had a dolphin/raccoon hybrid idea as some kind of inside joke with himself.
* Chapter 22
** Apparently Ben [[NoodleIncident once nearly burned down the kitchen trying to make macaroni and cheese]].
* Chapter 23
** At one point in the fight Ben takes a bite out of Vilgax and swallows it... and ''still'' finds it better than Max's cooking.
* Chapter 24
** Ruby's reaction to Vilgax turning out to still be alive.
* Chapter 25
** Ben expressing disbelief that high school could be worse than middle school.
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** The version of Madcow in this timeline has DNA from ''Rath''.
** Ben 10k's reaction to present Ben making a "cool alien" joke about Big Chill.
* Chapter 15
** Ben uses his aliens to help set up the wedding and gets paid as a result... the amount being big enough that his parents are flabbergasted.
** The suit being burned.
* Chapter 16
** One of the Bens initially wants to name Slapback [[CallForward Bullfrag]].
* Chapter 17
** When Wes hears the name Blitwolfer, he asks Ben if he really named an alien after a CNN host. Ben has no idea what CNN ''is''.
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* Chapter 10
** When Ben sees Crescent Rose, he briefly wants to trade with Ruby.
* Chapter 11
** Ruby playing [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Pokémon Ruby]], of all games.
* Chapter 12
** Max doesn't get why Ruby and Ben find his cooking so nasty, thinking that they're just picky.
** Ben calling Anna from the camp a "weird lady", which she's rather hurt by. Ruby thinks that Anna is weird too, but ''she'' didn't say anything.
* Chapter 13
** Anna and Verdona just watching the fight and eating.
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** Steam Smythe is described as the "baby boomer's baby boomer".
** Smythe interrupting his rant to wonder what the heck Ben is doing with Cannonbolt (seeing if he has magnetism powers).
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** When Ruby first meets Gwen, she finds her ''worse'' than what Ben described, and wondered who put "salt in her milk". Ben finds the analogy weird.
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** Ben and Ruby pointing out to Gwen that saying that a trophy is solid gold is just ''asking'' for it to be stolen.
** Ben and Ruby pointing out to Gwen that saying that a trophy is solid gold is just ''asking'' for it to be stolen.
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** The whiplash of Ruby threatening to ''break Ben's teeth'' if he uses his aliens to sneak into the room with the Sumo Slammers game, then returning to her cheery self.
** The author's note about the kids playing a Smash Brothers arcade game, saying that they can do whatever they want because it's an AU.
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** Edwin wondering how the heck Ben turns into different aliens.
* Chapter 7
** Ben turning into Spidermonkey to fight the Circus Freaks and making a joke about it being the wind when Acid Breath hears the transformation, with Acid Breath taking a second to notice the monkey-like alien above him even after he starts to respond.
** Acid Breath's half-hearted attempt to recruit Ben.
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** When Ruby first meets Gwen, she finds her ''worse'' than what Ben described, and wondered who put "salt in her milk".
* Chapter 5
** The whiplash of Ruby threatening to ''break Ben's teeth'' if he uses his aliens to sneak into the room with the Sumo Slammers game, then returning to her cheery self.
** The author's note about the kids playing a Smash Brothers arcade game, saying that they can do whatever they want because it's an AU.
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** Edwin wondering how the heck Ben turns into different aliens.
* Chapter 7
** Ben turning into Spidermonkey to fight the Circus Freaks and making a joke about it being the wind when Acid Breath hears the transformation, with Acid Breath taking a second to notice the monkey-like alien above him even after he starts to respond.
** Acid Breath's half-hearted attempt to recruit Ben.
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** When Ruby first meets Gwen, she finds her ''worse'' than what Ben described, and wondered who put "salt in her milk".
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** When Ben asks what Badminton is, Ruby calls it "tennis for people in denial".
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** When Ruby realizes that the Omnitrix an alien device, she's awestruck, which weirds Ben out a bit since she's ignoring the fire around her. When he asks how she knows that it's "alien stuff", she points out that it "came from the sky" while crossing her arms.
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** Ruby debating whether Astrodactyl could take down Animo's T-Rex.
--> "Well, given dinosaur facts…" Ruby said. "I think the T-Rex would win given the smaller, frailer form of the pterodactyl. You know, cause the T-rex has a large jaw, size…"
--> Ben gasped, offended. "Oh? Really then!" He opened his mouth wide, and fired a flurry of strange, green wisps that flew at the bird, exploding upon contact. The bird fell to the ground, with a big SPLAT! "CAN PTERODACTYLS DO THAT?"
--> Ruby blinked. "Ok, yeah, I think you win the matchup."
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** The opening pokes fun at the original opening scene of the episode.
--> "And for you?" The older employee asked Ben. Ben thought for a second, before hearing a loud, metal thrash outside. He mischievously grinned, knowing something was up.
--> "I'm gonna go with rocky road," he quipped. He then turned out the door, activating the watch. The man just stared at him as he ran outside.
--> ("...the heck was that about? Kid can't just run away when he's giving his order," the employee thought.)
** Ruby debating whether Astrodactyl could take down Animo's T-Rex.
--> "Well, given dinosaur facts…" Ruby said. "I think the T-Rex would win given the smaller, frailer form of the pterodactyl. You know, cause the T-rex has a large jaw, size…"
--> Ben gasped, offended. "Oh? Really then!" He opened his mouth wide, and fired a flurry of strange, green wisps that flew at the bird, exploding upon contact. The bird fell to the ground, with a big SPLAT! "CAN PTERODACTYLS DO THAT?"
--> Ruby blinked. "Ok, yeah, I think you win the matchup."
* Chapter 3
** The opening pokes fun at the original opening scene of the episode.
--> "And for you?" The older employee asked Ben. Ben thought for a second, before hearing a loud, metal thrash outside. He mischievously grinned, knowing something was up.
--> "I'm gonna go with rocky road," he quipped. He then turned out the door, activating the watch. The man just stared at him as he ran outside.
--> ("...the heck was that about? Kid can't just run away when he's giving his order," the employee thought.)
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** Their first scene together ends with Ruby asking why Ben was hanging from a tree branch by his undies.
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** "Uh, we got a grab-and-dash in Electronics. Male, five-foot-six, riding on a giant frog or a toad. Trust me, you can't miss him...and beware the frog."
** Ruby wears heelies.
** Their first scene together ends with Ruby asking why Ben was hanging from a tree branch by his undies.
** Ruby chasing Echo Echo through the forest.
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** "Uh, we got a grab-and-dash in Electronics. Male, five-foot-six, riding on a giant frog or a toad. Trust me, you can't miss him...and beware the frog."
** Ruby wears heelies.
