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'''Celestia:''' Good. I'm sure they were be very interested in hearing all about the magical students with wings.\\
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'''Celestia:''' Good. I'm sure they were will be very interested in hearing all about the magical students with wings.\\
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-->[[spoiler:'''Twilight:''' ''[while pointing at human Twilight]'' Make that the ''second'' strangest.]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Twilight:''' ''[while pointing at human Twilight]'' Make that the ''second'' strangest.]]strangest]].
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* Lemon Zest [[PetTheDog tries to be nice to Twilight]]... By sharing her headphones with her, which are blaring music very, very loudly. Poor Twilight can be seen cringing at this.
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* Lemon Zest [[PetTheDog tries to be nice to Twilight]]... By by sharing her headphones with her, which are blaring music very, very loudly. Poor Twilight can be seen cringing at this.
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-->'''Principal Celestia:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I didn't know Twilight had a twin sister.]]\\
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-->'''Principal Celestia:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I didn't know know]] [[CallBack Twilight had a twin sister.]]\\
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* Pinkie Pie somehow baking the famous Mona Lisa into her cake. [[JawDrop The reaction from the principals says it all]].
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* Pinkie Pie somehow [[RuleOfCool somehow]] baking the famous Mona Lisa into her cake. [[JawDrop The reaction from the principals says it all]].
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* After Twilight finally hits the bullseye, Spike goes and congratulates her... In front of Sour Sweet. [[FunnyBackgroundEvent Who looks quite surprised by the fact, and proceeds to slink away]].
* When Rainbow Dash ponies up during the motocross, Cinch shoots a glare at Celestia. Celestia just smiles and shrugs.
* When Rainbow Dash ponies up during the motocross, Cinch shoots a glare at Celestia. Celestia just smiles and shrugs.
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* After Twilight finally hits the bullseye, Spike goes and congratulates her... In front of Sour Sweet. Sweet, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent Who who looks quite surprised by the fact, and proceeds to slink away]].
* When Rainbow Dash ponies up during the motocross, Cinch shoots a glare atCelestia. Celestia Celestia, who just smiles and shrugs.
* When Rainbow Dash ponies up during the motocross, Cinch shoots a glare at
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* Fluttershy's and Human Twilight's meeting at the yard shows that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler:Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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* Fluttershy's and Human Twilight's meeting at the yard shows that Fluttershy somehow [[RuleOfFunny somehow]] [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler:Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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!!Post-Movie Shorts
[[AC:Friendship Games Blooper Reel]]
[[AC:Friendship Games Blooper Reel]]
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[[AC:Friendship Games Blooper Reel]]
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** [[https://derpibooru.org/1001526?scope=scpef06d7abff65cf9383abd4ed81c971d77f32c1b64 Luna jamming to some music]], while Celestia [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames looks on with a smile]]. Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
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** [[https://derpibooru.org/1001526?scope=scpef06d7abff65cf9383abd4ed81c971d77f32c1b64 org/1001526 Luna jamming to some music]], while Celestia [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames looks on with a smile]]. Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself]] [[https://derpibooru.org/952256?scope=scpe0e111794ff3eac7f2d26c8f7a3d58669c6065acf becomes Photo's latest victim]]. [[OhCrap Her face when she realizes what's about to happen]] sells it.
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself]] [[https://derpibooru.org/952256?scope=scpe0e111794ff3eac7f2d26c8f7a3d58669c6065acf org/952256 becomes Photo's latest victim]]. [[OhCrap Her face when she realizes what's about to happen]] sells it.
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'''Twilight:''' I...I don't know.\\
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'''Twilight:''' I... I don't know.\\
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* The camo part is even better in the Polish dub, where Rainbow snarks it would only work in ''a panty drawer''.
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* The camo part is even better in In the Polish dub, where Rainbow snarks it that the pink camo would only work in ''a panty drawer''.
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* When Luna flubs her line by accenting the wrong word, some people laugh and comment, which leads to:
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* When Luna flubs her line by accenting the wrong word, some people laugh line, laughs and comment, comments are heard, which leads to:
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** [[https://derpibooru.org/1001526?scope=scpef06d7abff65cf9383abd4ed81c971d77f32c1b64 Luna jamming to some music]], while Celestia [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames looks on with a smile]].
*** Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
*** Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
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** [[https://derpibooru.org/1001526?scope=scpef06d7abff65cf9383abd4ed81c971d77f32c1b64 Luna jamming to some music]], while Celestia [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames looks on with a smile]].
***smile]]. Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
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* In one of the deleted scenes, Equestria's Twilight tries to pay her cafe bill ''with Equestrian bits''.
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* In one of the deleted scenes, Equestria's Twilight tries to pay her cafe café bill ''with Equestrian bits''.
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'''Twilight:''' Um...I guess? I-It's just... I mean... I heard that CHS is doing well now. With their reputation. And, I mean, it's not better than ours, of course. But we can't let them do it, you know? Win, I mean? Right?\\
(''everyone on the bus stares at Twilight; Indigo Zap silently mouths the word "[[FlatWhat Huh...?]]"'')
(''everyone on the bus stares at Twilight; Indigo Zap silently mouths the word "[[FlatWhat Huh...?]]"'')
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'''Twilight:''' Um... I guess? I-It's just... I mean... I heard that CHS is doing well now. With their reputation. And, I mean, it's not better than ours, of course. But we can't let them do it, you know? Win, I mean? Right?\\
(''everyone ''[everyone on the bus stares at Twilight; Indigo Zap silently mouths the word "[[FlatWhat Huh...?]]"'')?]]"]''
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(''[[{{Beat}} Celestia opens her mouth to comment, but has none]]'')\\
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-->'''Sour Sweet:''' Actually, we're ''all'' to blame. (''Glares daggers at Principal Cinch.'') Mostly it was ''her''.
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-->'''Sour Sweet:''' Actually, we're ''all'' to blame. (''Glares ''[glares daggers at Principal Cinch.'') Cinch]'' Mostly it was ''her''.
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-->[[spoiler:'''Twilight:''' (''while pointing at human Twilight'') Make that the ''second'' strangest.]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Twilight:''' (''while ''[while pointing at human Twilight'') Twilight]'' Make that the ''second'' strangest.]]
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--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' That's like the opposite of camouflage!
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* Lyra starts her audition for the Friendship Games, only for a RecordNeedleScratch to interrupt her as Bon Bon starts ''her'' act. Things only get weirder.
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* Lyra starts her audition for the Friendship Games, only for a RecordNeedleScratch to interrupt her as Bon Bon Sweetie Drops starts ''her'' act. Things only get weirder.
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* And, of course, their battle while dressed as an owl (Sweetie Drops) and a male peacock (Lyra) -- with a ShoutOut to ''Anime/KillLaKill'' of all things.
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* And, of course, their battle while dressed as an owl (Sweetie Drops) and a male peacock (Lyra) (Lyra Heartstrings) -- with a ShoutOut to ''Anime/KillLaKill'' of all things.
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* At the end, after Lyra and Bonbon both get spots, they make up like nothing has ever happened. While still in their bird costumes. They don't even apologize to each other, they're just instantly back together again.
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* At the end, after Lyra and Bonbon Bon Bon both get spots, they make up like nothing has ever happened. While still in their bird costumes. They don't even apologize to each other, they're just instantly back together again.
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** Her assistants, on the other hand, look utterly bored throughout most of it.
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* Fluttershy's and Human Twilight's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler:Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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* Fluttershy's and Human Twilight's meeting at the yard show's shows that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler:Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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* Rarity flubs a line as only Rarity can.
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* Rarity flubs a line as only Rarity can. More than that, if you watch the corresponding scene of the movie, it does use "frozen again" rather than "refrozen", implying that Rarity got her ways and had the line changed.
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** The camo part is even better in the Polish dub, where Rainbow snarks it would only work in ''a panty drawer''.
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[[AC:Animated Blooper Reel]]
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* Fluttershy's and Human Twilight's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler: Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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* Fluttershy's and Human Twilight's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler: Keep [[spoiler:Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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--> '''Human Rainbow:''' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis THIS! IS! AWESOME!]]
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--> '''Luna:''' Thank you. Thank you. I am a "fropessional".
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* "That's like the opposite of camouflage!"
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--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' That's like the opposite of camouflage!
** The camo part is even better in the Polish dub, where Rainbow snarks it would only work in ''a panty drawer''.
** The camo part is even better in the Polish dub, where Rainbow snarks it would only work in ''a panty drawer''.
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself]] [[https://derpibooru.org/952256?scope=scpe0e111794ff3eac7f2d26c8f7a3d58669c6065acf becomes Photo's latest victim]].
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about to happen]].
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about to happen]].
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself]] [[https://derpibooru.org/952256?scope=scpe0e111794ff3eac7f2d26c8f7a3d58669c6065acf becomes Photo's latest victim]].
** Also,victim]]. [[OhCrap her Her face when she realizes what's about to happen]].happen]] sells it.
** Also,
Given its nature, the ''whole'' short (or at least, most of it) qualifies. The highlights include:
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--> '''Human Rainbow:''' THIS IS AWESOME!
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--> '''Human Rainbow:''' THIS IS AWESOME![[PunctuatedForEmphasis THIS! IS! AWESOME!]]
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* When Luna flubs her line by accenting the wrong word, some people laugh and comment, which leads to:
--> '''Luna:''' Thank you. Thank you. I am a "fropessional".
--> '''Luna:''' Thank you. Thank you. I am a "fropessional".
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--> '''Human!Rainbow:''' THIS IS AWESOME!
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--> '''Human!Rainbow:''' '''Human Rainbow:''' THIS IS AWESOME!
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* Cinch attempts to do her ChairReveal, only for the chair to unexpectedly spin her around several more times, causing everyone in the room to burst out in laughter.
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* Pinkie Pie tries to replace a table of food with cupcakes. Dog Spike sneaks into her bag, gets a BalloonBelly and burps.
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--> '''Human!Rainbow:''' THIS IS AWESOME!
* Rarity flubs a line as only Rarity can.
* Rarity flubs a line as only Rarity can.
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* Human Rainbow Dash riding Pony Rainbow Dash.
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* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler: Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
* At the end of the short, Pony!Pinkie and Human!Pinkie are seen meeting at the portal before switching places between the worlds, complete with one of the two [[AsideGlance winking at the screen.]]
* At the end of the short, Pony!Pinkie and Human!Pinkie are seen meeting at the portal before switching places between the worlds, complete with one of the two [[AsideGlance winking at the screen.]]
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* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's Human Twilight's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler: Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
* At the end of the short,Pony!Pinkie Pony Pinkie and Human!Pinkie Human Pinkie are seen meeting at the portal before switching places between the worlds, complete with one of the two [[AsideGlance winking at the screen.]]
* At the end of the short,
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* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag.
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* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag. [[spoiler: Keep in mind, these animals include several birds, chickens, bunnies and squirrels, three cats, a pig, a toucan, ''a flamingo, a seal, an eagle, a tiger, Harry the Bear,'' '''''a cow, and a buffalo.''''']]
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* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BahOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag.
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* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BahOfHolding [[BagOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag.
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!!Post-Movie Shorts
[[AC:Animated Blooper Reel]]
* Fluttershy's and Human!Twiligh's meeting at the yard show's that Fluttershy somehow [[BahOfHolding carries a horde of animals in her bag.]] The reel cuts back to them a total of [[RuleOfThree three times]] while more and bigger animals are seen ''still'' coming out of her bag.
* At the end of the short, Pony!Pinkie and Human!Pinkie are seen meeting at the portal before switching places between the worlds, complete with one of the two [[AsideGlance winking at the screen.]]
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-->'''Cinch:''' Obviously my students have been infected with your magic. But I plan on taking all of this up with the school board! \\
'''Celestia:''' Good. I'm sure they were be very interested in hearing all about the magical students with wings. \\
'''Luna:''' Oh, and the portals to different dimensions. \\
'''Cadance:''' And don't forget to tell them about the talking dog. \\
'''Celestia:''' Good. I'm sure they were be very interested in hearing all about the magical students with wings. \\
'''Luna:''' Oh, and the portals to different dimensions. \\
'''Cadance:''' And don't forget to tell them about the talking dog. \\
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-->'''Cinch:''' Obviously my students have been infected with your magic. But I plan on taking all of this up with the school board! \\
board!\\
'''Celestia:''' Good. I'm sure they were be very interested in hearing all about the magical students with wings. \\
'''Luna:''' Oh, and the portals to different dimensions. \\
'''Cadance:''' And don't forget to tell them about the talking dog. \\
'''Celestia:''' Good. I'm sure they were be very interested in hearing all about the magical students with wings.
'''Luna:''' Oh, and the portals to different dimensions.
'''Cadance:''' And don't forget to tell them about the talking dog.
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** Celestia staring at Luna's jamming to the pep rally music. (Crossover with [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames Heartwarming]].)
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** Celestia staring at Luna's [[https://derpibooru.org/1001526?scope=scpef06d7abff65cf9383abd4ed81c971d77f32c1b64 Luna jamming to the pep rally music. (Crossover with some music]], while Celestia [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames Heartwarming]].)looks on with a smile]].
*** Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
*** Even funnier when one remembers [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the way Princess Luna partied]] [[Funny/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicSeason2 at Princess Cadance and Shining Armor's wedding]].
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* Rainbow Dash [[WithCatlikeTread screaming at Pinkie that they need to be quiet]] gets them noticed.
* The fact that's what gets them noticed, and not Pinkie's antics such as being a bit loud herself, using a very big boom mike [[FailedASpotCheck right in front and on top of a pair of students]] and bright pink camo.
* The fact that's what gets them noticed, and not Pinkie's antics such as being a bit loud herself, using a very big boom mike [[FailedASpotCheck right in front and on top of a pair of students]] and bright pink camo.
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* "That's like the opposite of camouflage!"
* The fact that what gets them noticed is RainbowDash [[WithCatlikeTread screaming at Pinkie that they need to be quiet]] gets them noticed.
* The fact that's what gets them noticed,quiet]], and not Pinkie's antics such as being a bit loud herself, herself or using a very big boom mike [[FailedASpotCheck right in front and on top of a pair of students]] and bright pink camo.
* The fact that what gets them noticed is Rainbow
* The fact that's what gets them noticed,
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself becomes Photo's latest victim]].
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about to happen]] is hilarious.
* The pictures Photo presents to Luna, what with the BishieSparkles and everyone looking exaggeratedly prettier.
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about to happen]] is hilarious.
* The pictures Photo presents to Luna, what with the BishieSparkles and everyone looking exaggeratedly prettier.
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself herself]] [[https://derpibooru.org/952256?scope=scpe0e111794ff3eac7f2d26c8f7a3d58669c6065acf becomes Photo's latest victim]].
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about tohappen]] is hilarious.
happen]].
* The pictures Photo presents to Luna, what with theBishieSparkles BishieSparkles, and everyone looking exaggeratedly prettier.
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about to
* The pictures Photo presents to Luna, what with the
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-->'''Sour Sweet:''' Actually, we're ''all'' to blame -- But mostly it was ''her''.
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-->'''Sour Sweet:''' Actually, we're ''all'' to blame -- But mostly blame. (''Glares daggers at Principal Cinch.'') Mostly it was ''her''.
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* In one of the deleted scenes, [[spoiler:Equestria's Twilight tries to pay her cafe bill ''with Equestrian bits''.]]
* In the deleted alternate ending, [[spoiler: Pinkie ponies up and starts floating away -- so Applejack uses a lasso to stop her. Pinkie Pie is now a balloon!]]
* In the deleted alternate ending, [[spoiler: Pinkie ponies up and starts floating away -- so Applejack uses a lasso to stop her. Pinkie Pie is now a balloon!]]
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* In one of the deleted scenes, [[spoiler:Equestria's Equestria's Twilight tries to pay her cafe bill ''with Equestrian bits''.]]
bits''.
* In the deleted alternate ending,[[spoiler: Pinkie ponies up and starts floating away -- so Applejack uses a lasso to stop her. Pinkie Pie is now a balloon!]]
balloon!
* In the deleted alternate ending,
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* At the end, after Lyra and Bonbon both get spots, they make up like nothing has ever happened. While still in their bird costumes.
** They don't even apologize to each other, they're just instantly back together again.
** They don't even apologize to each other, they're just instantly back together again.
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* At the end, after Lyra and Bonbon both get spots, they make up like nothing has ever happened. While still in their bird costumes.
**costumes. They don't even apologize to each other, they're just instantly back together again.
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* Sugarcoat, very bluntly, telling Twilight that was an awful speech and that she should consider avoid speaking in public. It's quite accurate and probably echoes the thoughts of more than one member of the audience.
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* Sugarcoat, very bluntly, telling Twilight that was an awful speech and that she should consider avoid avoiding speaking in public. It's quite accurate and probably echoes the thoughts of more than one member of the audience.
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-->'''Sugarcoat:''' At least they didn't manipulate Twilight into [[spoiler:releasing all the stolen magic and turning into a power-crazed magical creature that tried to rip the world apart just to win a game]].\\
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-->'''Sugarcoat:''' At least they didn't manipulate Twilight into [[spoiler:releasing [[spoiler:into releasing all the stolen magic and turning into a power-crazed magical creature that tried to rip the world apart apart]] just to win a game]].game.\\
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself becomes her latest victim]].
* The utterly bored expressions on Photo Finish's assistants throughout most of it.
* The pictures she presents to Luna, what with the BishieSparkles and everyone looking exaggeratedly prettier.
* The utterly bored expressions on Photo Finish's assistants throughout most of it.
* The pictures she presents to Luna, what with the BishieSparkles and everyone looking exaggeratedly prettier.
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** Her assistants, on the other hand, look utterly bored throughout most of it.
* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself becomesher Photo's latest victim]].
* The utterly bored expressions on Photo Finish's assistants throughout most of it.
** Also, [[OhCrap her face when she realizes what's about to happen]] is hilarious.
* The picturesshe Photo presents to Luna, what with the BishieSparkles and everyone looking exaggeratedly prettier.
* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself becomes
* The pictures
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* Flash and Pinkie heckling Celestia and Rainbow Dash.
-->'''Flash Sentry:''' You mean other than us losing?!\\\
-->'''Flash Sentry:''' You mean other than us losing?!\\\
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* Flash and Pinkie heckling Celestia and Rainbow Dash.
Dash, respectively.
-->'''Flash Sentry:''' [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu You mean other than uslosing?!\\\losing?!]]\\\
-->'''Flash Sentry:''' [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu You mean other than us
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* Flash and Sweetie Drops' entry for the cake baking event -- [[EpicFail a loaf of bread with sprinkles on top]]. Their sheepish expressions sells it.
* Pinkie Pie somehow baking the famous Mona Lisa into her cake. [[JawDrop The reaction from the principals say it all.]]
* Pinkie Pie somehow baking the famous Mona Lisa into her cake. [[JawDrop The reaction from the principals say it all.]]
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* Flash and Sweetie Drops' entry for the cake baking event -- [[EpicFail a loaf of bread with sprinkles on top]]. Their sheepish expressions sells sell it.
* Pinkie Pie somehow baking the famous Mona Lisa into her cake. [[JawDrop The reaction from the principalssay says it all.]]all]].
* Pinkie Pie somehow baking the famous Mona Lisa into her cake. [[JawDrop The reaction from the principals
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* Rarity's somewhat crazed OF COURSE! after being asked whether she has made motorcross outfits.
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* Rarity's somewhat crazed OF COURSE! after being asked whether she has made motorcross motocross outfits.
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** Celestia staring at Luna's jamming to the pep rally music.
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** Celestia staring at Luna's jamming to the pep rally music. (Crossover with [[Heartwarming/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames Heartwarming]].)
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** Before things loosen up at the party, Wiz Kid selfies a ''"Yikes."'' expression at the arrival of the extremely dour-looking Crystal Prep students.
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** Before things loosen up at the party, Wiz Kid selfies a ''"Yikes."'' ''"Yikes!"'' expression at the arrival of the extremely dour-looking Crystal Prep students.
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* Sunset Shimmer's failures include Fluttershy's butterfly landing on Sunset Shimmer's nose to being pelted by Rainbow Dash's... rainbow.
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* Sunset Shimmer's failures include Fluttershy's butterfly landing on Sunset Shimmer's nose to nose, and being pelted by Rainbow Dash's... rainbow.
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* At the end, Luna herself becomes her latest victim.
* The utterly bored expressions on her assistants throughout most of it.
* The utterly bored expressions on her assistants throughout most of it.
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* At the end, [[DidntThinkThisThrough Luna herself becomes her latest victim.
victim]].
* The utterly bored expressions onher Photo Finish's assistants throughout most of it.
* The utterly bored expressions on
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-->'''Photo Finish:''' Jump! Jump! Like a beautiful gresshopper! Like a graceful gazelle! You are striving to place the orb of desire in the net of the future!
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-->'''Photo Finish:''' Jump! Jump! Like a beautiful gresshopper! grasshopper! Like a graceful gazelle! You are striving to place the orb of desire in the net of the future!
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** They don't even apologize to each other, they're just instantly back together again.
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* Twilight crashing into Flash Sentry... again (although technically, it isn't the same Twilight). It's hilarious because how overdone the gag already was from the previous movies; now it veers into OverlyLongGag.
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* Twilight crashing into Flash Sentry... again (although technically, it isn't the same Twilight). It's hilarious because how overdone the gag already was from the previous movies; now it veers into OverlyLongGag.OverusedRunningGag.
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** He ends up as a ButtMonkey in the Academic Decathlon, turning in a misshapen loaf of bread with Sweetie Drops.
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* Rarity preparing ''dozens'' of outfits for the Games, to the point where she has motocross outfits despite the fact that she didn't know it was an event. The best thing about it is the fact the outfits range from the reasonable (Hockey Goalie outfit, Soccer uniform, Motocross suits) to the... weird (Police uniform, pirate costume, wizard robe). Pinkie can be seen wearing the last two during some shots, before she settles for the Cowgirl costume. And then Twilight enters the room, and for a moment seems pretty weirded out by the scene of five girls wearing ridiculous costumes (and Rarity sitting on the ground).
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* Rarity preparing ''dozens'' of outfits for the Games, to the point where she has motocross outfits despite the fact that she didn't know it was an event. The best thing about it is the fact the outfits range from the reasonable (Hockey Goalie outfit, Soccer uniform, Motocross suits) to the... weird (Police (police uniform, pirate costume, wizard robe). Pinkie can be seen wearing the last two during some shots, before she settles for the Cowgirl costume. And then Twilight enters the room, and for a moment seems pretty weirded out by the scene of five girls wearing ridiculous costumes (and Rarity sitting on the ground).
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* After Spike gets zapped by Fluttershy's magic, Twilight asks if he's OK. Spike responds, [[SuddenlyVoiced "Um, I think so".]] Twilight smiles in relief...[[DelayedReaction and then both start screaming.]]
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* After Spike gets zapped by Fluttershy's magic, Twilight asks if he's OK. Spike responds, [[SuddenlyVoiced "Um, I think so".]] Twilight smiles in relief... [[DelayedReaction and then both start screaming.]]
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-->'''Sugarcoat:''' At least they didn't manipulate Twilight into [[spoiler: releasing all the stolen magic and turning into a power-crazed magical creature that tried to rip the world apart just to win a game]].\\
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-->'''Sugarcoat:''' At least they didn't manipulate Twilight into [[spoiler: releasing [[spoiler:releasing all the stolen magic and turning into a power-crazed magical creature that tried to rip the world apart just to win a game]].\\
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** In the Wondercolts group photo, Bon Bon looks like she was just about to sneeze.
** One of the pictures has Cranky Doodle Donkey's human counterpart surrounded by smiling students, including a girl actually hugging him... And he's as grumpy as always.
** One of the pictures has Cranky Doodle Donkey's human counterpart surrounded by smiling students, including a girl actually hugging him... And he's as grumpy as always.
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** In the Wondercolts group photo, Bon Bon looks like she was is just about to sneeze.
** One of the pictures has Cranky Doodle Donkey's human counterpart surrounded by smiling students, including a girl actually hugging him...And and he's as grumpy as always.
** One of the pictures has Cranky Doodle Donkey's human counterpart surrounded by smiling students, including a girl actually hugging him...
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** As noted below, when you realize that after ''four failures'', all of which were surprising and three of which were not too pleasant, she decided to observe from a separate room... which ''still'' didn't protect her.
* As noted below, when you realize that after ''four failures'', all of which were surprising and three of which were not too pleasant, she decided to observe from a separate room... which ''still'' doesn't protect her.
* Lyra somehow ''blocks out the sun'' (they're outside, apparently) just to have a spotlight.
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** Highlights include Bon Bon's feats of strength and Lyra stuffing hot dogs into her mouth.
** And, of course, their battle while dressed as an owl (Sweetie Drops) and a male peacock (Lyra) -- with a ShoutOut to ''Anime/KillLaKill'' of all things.
** '''''"UWAA!!! UWAA!!! UWAA!!!" "HOO!!! HOO!!! HOO!!!"'''''
** In fact, they get ''so'' caught up in their competition that they don't even notice that the judging is over till Sandalwood says that the results are up.
** And, of course, their battle while dressed as an owl (Sweetie Drops) and a male peacock (Lyra) -- with a ShoutOut to ''Anime/KillLaKill'' of all things.
** '''''"UWAA!!! UWAA!!! UWAA!!!" "HOO!!! HOO!!! HOO!!!"'''''
** In fact, they get ''so'' caught up in their competition that they don't even notice that the judging is over till Sandalwood says that the results are up.
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* At the end, after Lyra and Bonbon both get spots, they make up like nothing has ever happened.
** While still in their bird costumes.
* Lyra somehow ''blocks out the sun'' (they're outside, apparently) just to have a spotlight.
** While still in their bird costumes.
* Lyra somehow ''blocks out the sun'' (they're outside, apparently) just to have a spotlight.
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* At the end, after Lyra and Bonbon both get spots, they make up like nothing has ever happened.
**happened. While still in their bird costumes.
* Lyra somehow ''blocks out the sun'' (they're outside, apparently) just to have a spotlight.
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* The ridiculous, rapid-fire poses Photo goes through as she snaps pictures.
** Sometimes not even looking! And:
--> Yes! No! Yes! No! Yes! No!
** Sometimes not even looking! And:
--> Yes! No! Yes! No! Yes! No!
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* The ridiculous, rapid-fire poses Photo goes through as she snaps pictures.
**pictures. Sometimes not even looking! And:
--> -->'''Photo Finish:''' Yes! No! Yes! No! Yes! No!
* Not to mention when she veers into FauxlosophicNarration...
-->'''Photo Finish:''' Jump! Jump! Like a beautiful gresshopper! Like a graceful gazelle! You are striving to place the orb of desire in the net of the future!
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* Not to mention when she veers into FauxlosophicNarration...
-->'''Photo Finish:''' Jump! Jump! Like a beautiful gresshopper! Like a graceful gazelle! You are striving to place the orb of desire in the net of the future!
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** He ends up as a ButtMonkey in the Academic Decathlon, turning in a misshapen loaf of bread (with Sweetie Drops) and a tumbledown wreck of a birdhouse (with Micro Chips and Sandalwood).
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** He ends up as a ButtMonkey in the Academic Decathlon, turning in a misshapen loaf of bread (with with Sweetie Drops) and a tumbledown wreck of a birdhouse (with Micro Chips and Sandalwood).Drops.
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* Pinkie goofing around during the speed skating race while Sunny Flare and Lemon Zest can only watch helplessly at the starting line.
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** He ends up as a ButtMonkey in the Academic Decathlon, turning in a misshapen loaf of bread (with Sweetie Drops) and a tumbledown wreck of a birdhouse (with Micro Chips and Sandalwood).
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** As noted below, when you realize that after ''four failures'', all of which were surprising and three of which were not too pleasant, she decided to observe from a separate room... which ''still'' didn't protect her.
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** While still in their bird costumes.
* Lyra somehow ''blocks out the sun'' (they're outside, apparently) just to have a spotlight.
* Lyra somehow ''blocks out the sun'' (they're outside, apparently) just to have a spotlight.
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** Sometimes not even looking! And:
--> Yes! No! Yes! No! Yes! No!
--> Yes! No! Yes! No! Yes! No!