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* Caul's introduction is pretty funny in itself as well, as he combines evil monologuing and being all suave and fake-affable with continually asking for a pair of pants (since at the moment he's butt-naked).
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*After Jake announces that the first hollow is dead, Barron and his allies have a brief conversation regarding the fact that Barron was upset with that one.
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* Mr Barron complaining to the other Hollowgasts and Wights about his time undercover as Jake's therapist... in [[PlaceWorseThanDeath Florida]]. The fact he treats the whole thing as a FateWorseThanDeath makes it doubly hilarious.
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* Mr Barron complaining to the other Hollowgasts and Wights about his time undercover as Jake's therapist... in [[PlaceWorseThanDeath Florida]]. The fact he treats the whole thing as a FateWorseThanDeath makes it doubly hilarious. hilarious, and the confused expression of his co-conspirator shaking his head is just the cherry on top.
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-->'''Mr. Barron:''' I masqueraded as a therapist in Florida for three weeks! Have you ever been to Florida?!
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-->'''Mr. Barron:''' I masqueraded had to masquerade as a therapist in Florida psychiatrist for three weeks! ''three weeks'' in Florida! Have you ever been to Florida?!
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-->'''Mr. Barron:''' Jake, when are you going to realise that you're a terrible shot with that thing?!
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-->'''Mr. Barron:''' You missed me, Jake! [[DeadpanSnarker I take it accuracy is not your peculiarity!]]...Jake, when are you going to realise that you're a terrible shot with that thing?!
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* Mr Barron complaining to the other Hollowgasts and Wights about his time [[spoiler: undercover as Jake's therapist... in [[PlaceWorseThanDeath Florida]].]] The fact he treats the whole thing as a FateWorseThanDeath makes it doubly hilarious.
-->'''Mr. Barron:''' I masqueraded[[spoiler: as a therapist in Florida]] for three weeks! Have you ever been to [[spoiler: Florida?!]]
-->'''Mr. Barron:''' I masqueraded[[spoiler: as a therapist in Florida]] for three weeks! Have you ever been to [[spoiler: Florida?!]]
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* Mr Barron complaining to the other Hollowgasts and Wights about his time [[spoiler: undercover as Jake's therapist... in [[PlaceWorseThanDeath Florida]].]] The fact he treats the whole thing as a FateWorseThanDeath makes it doubly hilarious.
-->'''Mr. Barron:''' Imasqueraded[[spoiler: masqueraded as a therapist in Florida]] Florida for three weeks! Have you ever been to [[spoiler: Florida?!]]Florida?!
-->'''Mr. Barron:''' I
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--> Emma: (Stares at him) [[spoiler: The Germans were about to drop a bomb on us.]]
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--> Emma: (Stares at him) [[spoiler: The Germans were about to drop a bomb on us.]]
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* Miss Peregrin, trapped in bird form, has to pretend to be a wind up so the children can smuggle her onto a train.
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* Miss Peregrin, Peregrine, trapped in bird form, has to pretend to be a wind up so the children can smuggle her onto a train.
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** Later, he laments spending "two, no ''three'' days in Wales ''pretending'' to look at birds."
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* Barron lamenting how his plan to get Abe to give up the location of Miss Pregerine's loop was ruined by one of his hollows killing Abe:
-->'''Barron:''' Instead, I had to masquerade as a psychiatrist. For ''three weeks.'' ''In Florida!'' Have you ever ''been'' to Florida?
-->'''Barron:''' Instead, I had to masquerade as a psychiatrist. For ''three weeks.'' ''In Florida!'' Have you ever ''been'' to Florida?
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-->'''Barron:''' Instead, I had to masquerade as a psychiatrist. For ''three weeks.'' ''In Florida!'' Have you ever ''been'' to Florida?
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* Barron lamenting how his plan to get Abe to give up the location of Miss Pregerine's loop was ruined by one of his hollows killing Abe:
-->'''Barron:''' Instead, I had to masquerade as a psychiatrist. For ''three weeks.'' ''In Florida!'' Have you ever ''been'' to Florida?
-->'''Barron:''' Instead, I had to masquerade as a psychiatrist. For ''three weeks.'' ''In Florida!'' Have you ever ''been'' to Florida?
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These are hilarious. Why weren't they already here?
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-->'''Horace:''' Too scary. I heard an owl.
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* Enoch's over-the-top dramatism.
-->'''Enoch''': ''RISE'', dead man!
-->'''Enoch''': ''RISE'', dead man!
* Jacob trying to explain to other children what crossing a loop sounds like to him. Twenty first century comparisons fall flat.
* The children jokingly mocking Enoch's obsession with London upon arriving in the city. He really did overdo his advertising campaign.
* The children jokingly mocking Enoch's obsession with London upon arriving in the city. He really did overdo his advertising campaign.
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-->'''Emma:''' No, and you’re a heartless bastard for talking about killing babies at a time like this. Or ever.
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-->'''Emma:''' No, and you’re a heartless bastard ####### for talking about killing babies at a time like this. Or ever.
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* The children jokingly mocking Enoch's obsession with London upon arriving in the city. He really did overdo his advertising campaign.
* Enoch's over-the-top dramatism.
-->'''Enoch''': ''RISE'', dead man!
* Enoch's over-the-top dramatism.
-->'''Enoch''': ''RISE'', dead man!
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-->'''Jake:''' ({{Beat}} Millard? Are... You naked?
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-->'''Jake:''' ({{Beat}} ({{Beat}}) Millard? Are... You naked?
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* Millard is invisible, and [[InvisibleStreaker enjoys making use of that.]]
**After the incident in the pub, Jake thinks that ''he's'' the one who did it.
-->'''Millard:''' ''No'', that was me.
-->'''Jake:''' ({{Beat}} Millard? Are... You naked?
-->'''Millard:''' Yup.
-->(Another {{beat}})
-->'''Jake:''' Oh.
**After the incident in the pub, Jake thinks that ''he's'' the one who did it.
-->'''Millard:''' ''No'', that was me.
-->'''Jake:''' ({{Beat}} Millard? Are... You naked?
-->'''Millard:''' Yup.
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-->'''Jake:''' Oh.
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**Emma's explanation right before that is pretty chuckle-worthy too:
-->'''Emma:''' Millard broke some things, and Olive... May have... Started a [[BlatantLies tiny fire.]]
-->'''Emma:''' Millard broke some things, and Olive... May have... Started a [[BlatantLies tiny fire.]]
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[A Hollow knocks something over]
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-->'''Mr Barron:''' Jake, when are you going to realise that you're a terrible shot with that thing?!
* Mr Barron's final threat to Emma as she holds him back with her breath.
-->'''Mr Barron:''' Eventually, you're going to run out of breath! And then it'll all be over! Death for your beloved Jake and Miss Peregrine! Everlasting life for me! [sniffs the air] Eww! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And a mint for you!]]
* Mr Barron's final threat to Emma as she holds him back with her breath.
-->'''Mr Barron:''' Eventually, you're going to run out of breath! And then it'll all be over! Death for your beloved Jake and Miss Peregrine! Everlasting life for me! [sniffs the air] Eww! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And a mint for you!]]
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* Basically Mr Barron in general. Creator/SamuelLJackson is having a fantastic time [[LargeHam hamming it up on screen]] and it's hard not to find him hilarious.
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* Barron finally losing his patience and vastly underestimating the children when Emma taunts him. Barron's exasperation makes the line hilarious.
-->'''Miss Edwards:''' It's probably a trap.\\
'''Mr. Barron:''' Of course it's a trap! But it's a group of children against four Hollows! Let's get this over with!
** Just after this, Barron tries to find the Hollows to give them orders, only he can't... because they're invisible. Cue Barron spinning around the room looking for them.
-->'''Mr. Barron:''' Where are you?! I know you're in here somewhere!\\
[A Hollow knocks something over]
'''Mr. Barron:''' THERE you are!
* Two of the Wights, Mr. Clark and Mr. Archer, chase after the children with a group of Hollowgasts... [[FailedASpotCheck only for Mr. Archer to be suddenly hit by a tram]]. Mr. Clark however, only looks mildly irritated over his fellow's death.
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-->'''Mr Barron:''' I masqueraded[[spoiler: as a therapist in Florida]] for theee three weeks! Have you ever been to [[spoiler: Florida?!]]
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* Upon bringing Jake to the house, Miss Peregrine asks Emma, Olive and Millard how much chaos they caused in the village because she doesn't want another visit from the pub's manager and the Police, especially since [[ItMakesSenseInContext she's already had to kill them twice this month.]]
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* Upon bringing Jake to the house, Miss Peregrine asks Emma, Olive and Millard how much chaos they caused in the village because she doesn't want another visit from the pub's manager and the Police, especially since [[ItMakesSenseInContext she's already had to kill them twice this month.that month already.]]
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* Upon bringing Jake to the house, Miss Peregrine asks Emma, Olive and Millard how much chaos they caused in the village because she doesn't want another visit from the pub's manager and the Police, especially since [[ItMakesSenseInContext she's already had to kill them twice this month.]]
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-->'''Mr Barron:''' I spent three weeks [[spoiler: masqueraded[[spoiler: as a therapist in Florida!!]] Florida]] for theee weeks! Have you ever been to [[spoiler: Florida?!!]]Florida?!]]
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* The day after Jake meets the children and experiences the Reset, Emma explains that Miss Peregrine made their Loop in a hurry.
-->Jake: Why's that?
--> Emma: (Stares at him) The Germans were about to drop a bomb on us.
-->Jake: Why's that?
--> Emma: (Stares at him) The Germans were about to drop a bomb on us.
