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--->'''Max''': Fortunately, I did not remember to tell them I was once a communist.
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* Max telling all of his past jobs to Mary. One being working for the United States Army... Stationary Supply department. When they did a security check on him and asked if he was a part of any ''Radical'' groups, Max showed his science fiction fan club card. They say it didn't count, but they still dismissed him. The funny thing is, Max said he was lucky to not have remembered that he was once a communist, which would have likely gone even worse for him if he did.
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* Max telling all of his past jobs to Mary. One being working fired from the U.S Army supply apartment for the United States Army... Stationary Supply department. When they did a security check on him and asked if he was a part of any ''Radical'' groups, basically no reason. But Max showed his science fiction fan club card. They say ends it didn't count, but they still dismissed him. The with a funny thing is, Max said he was lucky to not have remembered revelation that he really saved him from a huge problem.
--->'''Max''': Fortunately, I did not remember to tell them I was once acommunist, which would have likely gone even worse for him if he did.communist.
--->'''Max''': Fortunately, I did not remember to tell them I was once a
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* Max telling all of his past jobs to Mary. One being working for the United States Army... Stationary Supply department. When they did a security check on him and asked if he was a part of any ''Radical'' groups, Max showed his science fiction fan club card. They say it didn't count, but they still dismissed him. The funny thing is, Max said he was lucky to not have remembered that he was once a communist, which would have likely gone even worse for him if he did.
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* Max having to go to jury for a man who killed all his friends... at his own surprise birthday party.
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* Max having to go to jury for a man who killed all his friends... at his own surprise birthday party.party.
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* Max having to go to jury for a man who killed all his friends... at this own surprise birthday party.
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* Max having to go to jury for a man who killed all his friends... at this his own surprise birthday party.
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* The deaths of the Henrys, especially when one jumps out of the window trying to catch a fly.
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* The deaths of the Henrys, especially when one jumps out of the window trying to catch a fly.fly.
* Max having to go to jury for a man who killed all his friends... at this own surprise birthday party.
* Max having to go to jury for a man who killed all his friends... at this own surprise birthday party.
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* The deaths of the Henrys, especially when one jumps out of the window trying to catch a fly
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* The deaths of the Henrys, especially when one jumps out of the window trying to catch a flyfly.
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-->The hurt felt like when I accidentally stapled my lips together. (''Cue Young!Max doing just that'')
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-->The hurt felt like when I accidentally stapled my lips together. (''Cue Young!Max doing just that'')that'')
*The deaths of the Henrys, especially when one jumps out of the window trying to catch a fly
*The deaths of the Henrys, especially when one jumps out of the window trying to catch a fly
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** Then it turns out he actually ''was'' a registered member of the Communist party.
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** Then it turns out he actually ''was'' a registered member of the Communist party.party.
* In the middle of his otherwise emotional letter to Mary, Max drops this gem.
-->The hurt felt like when I accidentally stapled my lips together. (''Cue Young!Max doing just that'')
* In the middle of his otherwise emotional letter to Mary, Max drops this gem.
-->The hurt felt like when I accidentally stapled my lips together. (''Cue Young!Max doing just that'')
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** Then it turns he actually ''was'' a registered member of the Communist party.
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** Then it turns out he actually ''was'' a registered member of the Communist party.
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* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any radical groups]], replying that he was [[ComicallyMissingThePoint a member of the New York Science-Fiction Fan-club.]]
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* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any radical groups]], replying that he was [[ComicallyMissingThePoint a member of the New York Science-Fiction Fan-club.]]]]
** Then it turns he actually ''was'' a registered member of the Communist party.
** Then it turns he actually ''was'' a registered member of the Communist party.
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* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any groups]], replying that he ''is'' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint a member of the Sci-Fi Fan-club.]]
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* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any radical groups]], replying that he ''is'' was [[ComicallyMissingThePoint a member of the Sci-Fi New York Science-Fiction Fan-club.]]
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* Max's harmless pretending to be "an intergalactical robot" scared a woman so badly she rushed to the phone booth to call 911.
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* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any groups]], replying that he ''is'' a member of the Sci-Fi Fan-club.
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* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any groups]], replying that he ''is'' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint a member of the Sci-Fi Fan-club.]]
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* Some of Max's LiteralMinded moments fall into this, particularly the "Take a Seat" portion.
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* Some of Max's LiteralMinded moments fall into this, particularly the "Take a Seat" portion.portion.
* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any groups]], replying that he ''is'' a member of the Sci-Fi Fan-club.
* While in the Army, Max is asked whether he's [[RedScare a member of any groups]], replying that he ''is'' a member of the Sci-Fi Fan-club.
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* Some of Max's LiteralMinded moments fall into this, particularly the "Take a Seat" portion.
