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-->'''Shen:''' Part of you here, part of you there...
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-->'''Shen:''' Part of you here, part of you there...there, part of you ''way'' over there, STAINING THE WALL.
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* Po surrendering to the wolf army, while playing his little sleight of hand to get Mantis out of sight.
--> '''Po:''' Don't forget the little guy!
--> '''Mantis:''' [[BerserkButton DID YOU JUST CALL ME--!]] ''(cuts off as he's swapped with his action figure)''
* Tigress gets tired of being jabbed by a spear and kicks it out of Wolf Boss' grip while she still has her paws cuffed. The OhCrap look on Wolf Boss' face really sells it.
--> '''Po:''' Don't forget the little guy!
--> '''Mantis:''' [[BerserkButton DID YOU JUST CALL ME--!]] ''(cuts off as he's swapped with his action figure)''
* Tigress gets tired of being jabbed by a spear and kicks it out of Wolf Boss' grip while she still has her paws cuffed. The OhCrap look on Wolf Boss' face really sells it.
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* Po surrendering to the wolf army, while playing his little sleight of hand to get Mantis out of sight.
--> '''Po:''' Don't forget the little guy!
--> '''Mantis:''' [[BerserkButton DID YOU JUST CALL ME--!]] ''(cuts off as he's swapped with his action figure)''
--> '''Po:''' Don't forget the little guy!
--> '''Mantis:''' [[BerserkButton DID YOU JUST CALL ME--!]] ''(cuts off as he's swapped with his action figure)''
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* When the Tower was collapsing, Crane injured his wing so he had to stay on ground. The funny part was during the whole escape, Monkey felt it necessary to keep Crane's hat with him the entire time. It's the little things you know.
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* When the Tower was collapsing, Crane injured his wing so he had to stay on ground. The funny part was during the whole escape, Monkey felt it necessary to keep Crane's hat with him the entire time. It's the little things things, you know.
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* Tigress gets tired of being jabbed by a spear and kicks it out of Wolf Boss' grip while she still has her paws cuffed. The OhCrap look on Wolf Boss' face really sells it.
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--> '''Po:''' Inner pea--\\
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''(raindrop lands on Po's head, Po looks up to see the mast dripping water)''\\
''(Po begins meditating)''\\
'''Po:''' Inner pea--\\
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'''Po:''' ''[[RageBreakingPoint (starts puffing his cheeks)]]'' Pffffft... ''[[{{Angrish}} AAARRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!]]'' ''(punches the mast)''\\
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'''Po:''' ''[[RageBreakingPoint (starts puffing his cheeks)]]'' Pffffft... ''(raindrop)'' ''[[{{Angrish}} AAARRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!]]'' ''(punches the mast)''\\
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'''Po:''' '''''RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!''''' ''(starts beating his head on the mast)'' INNER PEACE! INNER PEACE! INNER PEACE! [=InnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceRRARRUGRARRHGHH=]!
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'''Po:''' '''''RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!''''' '''''RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!!!''''' ''(starts beating his head on the mast)'' INNER PEACE! INNER PEACE! INNER PEACE! [=InnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceRRARRUGRARRHGHH=]!
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* "Inner peace." ''(raindrop)'' "Pea..." ''(raindrop)'' "Inner peace." ''(raindrop)'' [[{{Angrish}} "AAARRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!"]] ''(more raindrops, beat)'' "RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!" ''(Po starts beating his head on the mast)'' "Inner peace! Inner peace! Innerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeacerrarrugrarrhghh!"
** SPLASH!
** (Annoyed look)
** (Raindrop)
** SPLASH!
** (Annoyed look)
** (Raindrop)
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* "Inner peace." ''(raindrop)'' "Pea..." ''(raindrop)'' "Inner peace." ''(raindrop)'' [[{{Angrish}} "AAARRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!"]] ''(more raindrops, beat)'' "RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!" ''(Po starts [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7RbYhuhO9RI This scene]]:
--> '''Po:''' Inner pea--\\
''(raindrop, annoyed grunt)''\\
'''Po:''' Pea--\\
''(raindrop, clears throat)''\\
'''Po:''' P--\\
''(raindrop, sputter)''\\
'''Po:''' Inner peace...\\
''(raindrop, raindrop, raindrop)''\\
'''Po:''' ''[[RageBreakingPoint (starts puffing his cheeks)]]'' Pffffft... ''[[{{Angrish}} AAARRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!]]'' ''(punches the mast)''\\
''(SPLASH! Multitude of raindrops)''\\
''(beat, Po gives an annoyed look, another raindrop)''\\
'''Po:''' '''''RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!''''' ''(starts beating his head on the mast)''"Inner peace! Inner peace! Innerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeacerrarrugrarrhghh!"
** SPLASH!
** (Annoyed look)
** (Raindrop)INNER PEACE! INNER PEACE! INNER PEACE! [=InnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceinnerpeaceRRARRUGRARRHGHH=]!
--> '''Po:''' Inner pea--\\
''(raindrop, annoyed grunt)''\\
'''Po:''' Pea--\\
''(raindrop, clears throat)''\\
'''Po:''' P--\\
''(raindrop, sputter)''\\
'''Po:''' Inner peace...\\
''(raindrop, raindrop, raindrop)''\\
'''Po:''' ''[[RageBreakingPoint (starts puffing his cheeks)]]'' Pffffft... ''[[{{Angrish}} AAARRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!]]'' ''(punches the mast)''\\
''(SPLASH! Multitude of raindrops)''\\
''(beat, Po gives an annoyed look, another raindrop)''\\
'''Po:''' '''''RRRRRARGRRAUGRRHHHHH!!''''' ''(starts beating his head on the mast)''
** SPLASH!
** (Annoyed look)
** (Raindrop)
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** The ToiletHumor gets kind of ridiculous, really. At one point, they take out mooks by beating up ones in front of them and throwing them out of the back of the dragon costume - which looks very much like they're nailing mooks by pooping at them at high velocity.
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** The ToiletHumor gets kind of ridiculous, really. At one point, they take out mooks by beating up ones in front of them and throwing them out of the back of the dragon costume - which looks very much like they're nailing mooks by pooping at them at high velocity. Adding to this, Monkey accidentally gets tossed out as well. He just gives a sheepish chuckle before rejoining the group.
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-->'''Tigress:''' ...your dad?
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-->'''Tigress:''' ...your dad?dad, the goose?
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-->'''Tigress:''' The ''goose.''
-->'''Po:''' ''[nods again]''
-->'''Po:''' ''[nods again]''
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** Followed by Po's... er... [[EpicFail unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he turns away and covers his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them.
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** Followed by Po's... er... [[EpicFail unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he turns away and covers his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them. And it actually hurt.
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** [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Even Tigress]] is in on the action. NotSoAboveItAll much?
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** [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Even Tigress]] Tigress is in on the action. action.]] NotSoAboveItAll much?
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** Even Tigress is in on the action. NotSoAboveItAll much?
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** [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Even Tigress Tigress]] is in on the action. NotSoAboveItAll much?
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** During the flashback, while it's mostly heartwarming with a bit of tear jerker, there's this funny line from Mr. Ping:
-->"There was no note. Of course you could have eaten it."
-->"There was no note. Of course you could have eaten it."
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* Tigress gets tired of being jabbed by a spear and kicks it out of Wolf Boss' grip while she still has her paws cuffed. The OhCrap look on Wolf Boss' face really sells it.
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* Tigress gets tired of being jabbed by a spear and kicks it out of Wolf Boss' grip while she still has her paws cuffed. The OhCrap look on Wolf Boss' face really sells it.it.
* After first arriving in Gongmen Palace, Shen finds his father's throne and wistfully remembers how he used to let him play there, and promised some day it would be his. [[DaddyIssues Cut to outside the palace as it is thrown out the window.]]
* After first arriving in Gongmen Palace, Shen finds his father's throne and wistfully remembers how he used to let him play there, and promised some day it would be his. [[DaddyIssues Cut to outside the palace as it is thrown out the window.]]
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** Her "[[PreemptiveDeclaration fortune-telling]]" in that scene.
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** Her "[[PreemptiveDeclaration fortune-telling]]" fortune]]-[[DeadpanSnarker telling]]" in that scene.
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** Her "[[DeadpanSnarker fortune-telling]]" in that scene.
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** Her "[[DeadpanSnarker "[[PreemptiveDeclaration fortune-telling]]" in that scene.
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** Followed by Po's... er... [[EpicFail unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he covers his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them.
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** Followed by Po's... er... [[EpicFail unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he turns away and covers his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them.
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'''Shen''': (''confused'') [[FlatWhat What?]]
** Followed by Po's... er... [[{{EpicFail}} unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he covered his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them.
** Followed by Po's... er... [[{{EpicFail}} unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he covered his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them.
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'''Shen''': (''confused'') [[FlatWhat [[ICantHearYou What?]]
** Followed by Po's... er...[[{{EpicFail}} [[EpicFail unsuccessful]] attempt at WeaponizedHeadgear. It's so bad that he covered covers his face in embarrassment. What makes it funnier is that you can hear the pained cries of some of the wolves, implying it hit them.
** Followed by Po's... er...
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''*His straw hat floats downwards, then hits a rooftop and bounces into the water.*''
** Po is so embarrassed by his failure, he turns away and tries to hide his face behind his hand. He peeks out for a second before hiding again.
** Po is so embarrassed by his failure, he turns away and tries to hide his face behind his hand. He peeks out for a second before hiding again.
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** Po is so embarrassed by his failure, he turns away and tries to hide his face behind his hand. He peeks out for a second before hiding again.
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** Po is so embarrassed by his failure, he turns away and tries to hide his face behind his hand. He peeks out for a second before hiding again.
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dewicking Knife Nut per TRS
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* Lord Shen is practicing the speech he'll give to a defeated Po. Then a [[SinisterSilhouettes huge shadow]] appears on the staircase, accompanied by growls and panting. Shen nervously reaches for one of his [[KnifeNut knives]] and...it turns out to be one of his gorilla {{Mooks}} carrying Po, exhausted from the dozens of stairs leading up to Shen's throne room.
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* Lord Shen is practicing the speech he'll give to a defeated Po. Then a [[SinisterSilhouettes huge shadow]] appears on the staircase, accompanied by growls and panting. Shen nervously reaches for one of his [[KnifeNut knives]] knives and...it turns out to be one of his gorilla {{Mooks}} carrying Po, exhausted from the dozens of stairs leading up to Shen's throne room.
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** When the Soothsayer jesters for Po to drink some medicine, Po refuses, until she uses acupuncture to paralyze his face and mouth wide open and basically forces it down his throat.
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** When the Soothsayer jesters gestures for Po to drink some medicine, Po refuses, until she uses acupuncture to paralyze his face and mouth wide open and basically forces it down his throat.
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* Po's father making the monumental decision of...no longer using radishes.
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** Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
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** Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
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--> '''Shifu''' -I have ever experienced. *''Hugs himself and shudders''\\
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--> '''Shifu''' -I have ever experienced. *''Hugs himself and shudders''\\shudders''
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--> '''Shifu''' -I have ever experienced. *''Hugs himself and shudders''
--> Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
--> Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
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--> '''Shifu''' -I have ever experienced. *''Hugs himself and shudders''
-->shudders''\\
** Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
-->
** Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
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--> '''Shifu''': Po, the day you were chosen as Dragon Warrior was [[BrutalHonesty the worst day of my life.]]
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--> '''Shifu''': Po, the day you were chosen as Dragon Warrior Warrior... was [[BrutalHonesty the worst day of my life.]]
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--> '''Shifu''' -I have ever experienced. *''Hugs himself and shudders''*
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--> '''Shifu''' -I have ever experienced. *''Hugs himself and shudders''*shudders''
--> Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
--> Even funnier when you realize that Shifu considers the day that Po became the Dragon Warrior worse than the day his adopted son turned evil, rampaged through the Valley of Peace, attacked him while trying to steal the Dragon Scroll and was sent to prison for life. Po REALLY got on his wick that day...*
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* When all looks hopeless, Po pulls a BigDamnedHeroes moment to rescue the Five before the climax, appearing on a tall rooftop to the waterway below. Shen can't even hide how incredulous he is at this.
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* When all looks hopeless, Po pulls a BigDamnedHeroes BigDamnHeroes moment to rescue the Five before the climax, appearing on a tall rooftop to the waterway below. Shen can't even hide how incredulous he is at this.
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** Po then proceeds to challenge Shen, but given the height and the distance, [[ICantHearYou nobody can understand what Po's saying.]]
--> '''Po''': ''(almost inaudible)'' [--Your reign of terror comes to an end!--]\\
--> '''Po''': ''(almost inaudible)'' [--Your reign of terror comes to an end!--]\\
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** Po then proceeds to challenge Shen, but [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome given the height and the distance, distance]], [[ICantHearYou nobody can understand what Po's saying.]]
--> ---> '''Po''': ''(almost inaudible)'' [--Your reign of terror comes to an end!--]\\