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*** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
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* After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.
** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
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* Chapter 28:
** After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.
** --> "For those of you keeping track at home, that's now three children for Rafael, and zero sex. #rafaelthevirgin"
*** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
** After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.
*** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
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* The Narrator quarrelling with Adam's narrator and changing the title to "Jane the Person This Story Is Actually About"
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* The Narrator quarrelling with Adam's narrator and changing the title to "Jane the Person This Story Is Actually About"About"
* Chapter 66, Jane and Rafael are arguing by texting. It gets so intense that Jane is tickling Mateo really hard.
* Rogelio in [[spoiler: drag infiltrating the Focus group]].
* Chapter 66, Jane and Rafael are arguing by texting. It gets so intense that Jane is tickling Mateo really hard.
* Rogelio in [[spoiler: drag infiltrating the Focus group]].
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* Adam has his own narrator, who is ''very'' protective of him and refuses to even remember Petra's name since she's such a distraction from the love story.
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* Adam has his own narrator, who is ''very'' protective of him and refuses to even remember Petra's name since she's such a distraction from the love story.story.
** "Adam the Vir[[BaitAndSwitch go]]"
* The Narrator quarrelling with Adam's narrator and changing the title to "Jane the Person This Story Is Actually About"
** "Adam the Vir[[BaitAndSwitch go]]"
* The Narrator quarrelling with Adam's narrator and changing the title to "Jane the Person This Story Is Actually About"
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* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song]].
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* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song]].song]].
* Adam has his own narrator, who is ''very'' protective of him and refuses to even remember Petra's name since she's such a distraction from the love story.
* Adam has his own narrator, who is ''very'' protective of him and refuses to even remember Petra's name since she's such a distraction from the love story.
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* Petra and Rafael's ImagineSpot which has them celebrating over the fact that Scott's death had nothing to do with the infamous hotel.
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* Petra and Rafael's ImagineSpot which has them celebrating over the fact that Scott's death had nothing to do with the infamous hotel.hotel.
* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song]].
* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song]].
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* Anezka remembers Magda's words, "Chase two rabbits you don't catch either", and then she remembers that one time she did. Cue photograph of her holding two large rabbit carcasses and grinning.
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* Anezka remembers Magda's words, "Chase two rabbits you don't catch either", and then she remembers that one time she did. Cue photograph of her holding two large rabbit carcasses and grinning.grinning.
* The Narrator changing the title from "Jane the Virgin" to "Jane the Lackey" and then deciding he's going to be optimistic about Jane's future and changing it again to "Jane the Soon-To-Be-Published-Author".
* Petra and Rafael's ImagineSpot which has them celebrating over the fact that Scott's death had nothing to do with the infamous hotel.
* The Narrator changing the title from "Jane the Virgin" to "Jane the Lackey" and then deciding he's going to be optimistic about Jane's future and changing it again to "Jane the Soon-To-Be-Published-Author".
* Petra and Rafael's ImagineSpot which has them celebrating over the fact that Scott's death had nothing to do with the infamous hotel.
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'''Luisa''': And then, we made love. ''cue the two women naked in the pool'') Raw, passionate, desperate love.
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'''Luisa''': And then, we made love. ''cue (''cue the two women naked making love in the pool'') pool under the fireworks'') Raw, passionate, desperate love.
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'''Luisa''': We made love again. ([[AnswerCut Scene flashes]] back to a naked Luisa and [[spoiler:Rose]] making out in the pool again under the fireworks)\\
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'''Luisa''': We made love again. ([[AnswerCut (''[[AnswerCut Scene flashes]] back to a naked Luisa and [[spoiler:Rose]] making out in the pool again under the fireworks)\\fireworks'')\\
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'''Luisa''': [[RunningGag And yet again]].([[AnswerCut Scene cuts back to the pool]])\\
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'''Luisa''': [[RunningGag And yet again]].([[AnswerCut (''[[AnswerCut Scene cuts back to the pool]])\\pool]]'')\\
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'''Michael''': [[{{Squick}} Okay well]], let's assume you guys had sex a bunch of times. Can we skip ahead?\\
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'''Michael''': [[{{Squick}} [[TooMuchInformation Okay well]], let's assume you guys had sex a bunch of times. Can we skip ahead?\\
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* When Michael finally confronts Rafael with the truth [[spoiler:about Rose being Sin Rostro the whole time:]]
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* Chapter 14:
** When Michael finally confronts Rafael with the truth [[spoiler:about Rose being Sin Rostro the whole time:]]
** When Michael finally confronts Rafael with the truth [[spoiler:about Rose being Sin Rostro the whole time:]]
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* ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.
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** Luisa and Michael's interview at the police station [[spoiler:about how her and Rose first met i.e. The Greatest Love Story Ever Told]]
*** When [[spoiler:Rose]] offers to buy Luisa a drink.
-->'''Luisa''': 34 days sober.\\
'''[[spoiler:Rose]]''': Gotcha, [[IgnoredConfession I'm just getting out of the drug world myself.]]\\
'''Michael''': Course, when she was talking about the drug world, she was referring to her former half a billion dollar a year business.
-->'''Luisa''': Yeah ({{Beat}}), [[DistractedByTheSexy I didn't pick up on that]]. [[LadyInRed I mentioned the red dress, right?]].
** And how they first made out in the pool.
-->'''Luisa''': And then, she kissed me. And then, there were [[DoubleEntendre fireworks]].\\
'''Narrator''': [[ContrivedCoincidence It was also the 4th of July.]]\\
'''Luisa''': And then, we made love. ''cue the two women naked in the pool'') Raw, passionate, desperate love.
-->'''Michael''': Okay, then what?\\
'''Luisa''': We made love again. ([[AnswerCut Scene flashes]] back to a naked Luisa and [[spoiler:Rose]] making out in the pool again under the fireworks)\\
'''Michael''': Okay, after that?\\
'''Luisa''': [[RunningGag And yet again]].([[AnswerCut Scene cuts back to the pool]])\\
'''Michael''': [[{{Squick}} Okay well]], let's assume you guys had sex a bunch of times. Can we skip ahead?\\
'''Luisa''': I'd thought I'd never see her again.
* Chapter 15:
** ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.
*** When [[spoiler:Rose]] offers to buy Luisa a drink.
-->'''Luisa''': 34 days sober.\\
'''[[spoiler:Rose]]''': Gotcha, [[IgnoredConfession I'm just getting out of the drug world myself.]]\\
'''Michael''': Course, when she was talking about the drug world, she was referring to her former half a billion dollar a year business.
-->'''Luisa''': Yeah ({{Beat}}), [[DistractedByTheSexy I didn't pick up on that]]. [[LadyInRed I mentioned the red dress, right?]].
** And how they first made out in the pool.
-->'''Luisa''': And then, she kissed me. And then, there were [[DoubleEntendre fireworks]].\\
'''Narrator''': [[ContrivedCoincidence It was also the 4th of July.]]\\
'''Luisa''': And then, we made love. ''cue the two women naked in the pool'') Raw, passionate, desperate love.
-->'''Michael''': Okay, then what?\\
'''Luisa''': We made love again. ([[AnswerCut Scene flashes]] back to a naked Luisa and [[spoiler:Rose]] making out in the pool again under the fireworks)\\
'''Michael''': Okay, after that?\\
'''Luisa''': [[RunningGag And yet again]].([[AnswerCut Scene cuts back to the pool]])\\
'''Michael''': [[{{Squick}} Okay well]], let's assume you guys had sex a bunch of times. Can we skip ahead?\\
'''Luisa''': I'd thought I'd never see her again.
* Chapter 15:
** ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.
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-->'''Narrator''': With Michael's words ringing in his ears, Rafael decided not to go with his brother. (''Rafael walks down the pier where his brother is waiting'') Well, it was worth a shot.
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-->'''Narrator''': With Michael's words ringing in his ears, Rafael decided not to go with his brother. (''Rafael walks down the pier where his brother is waiting'') Well, it was worth a shot.shot.
* Anezka remembers Magda's words, "Chase two rabbits you don't catch either", and then she remembers that one time she did. Cue photograph of her holding two large rabbit carcasses and grinning.
* Anezka remembers Magda's words, "Chase two rabbits you don't catch either", and then she remembers that one time she did. Cue photograph of her holding two large rabbit carcasses and grinning.
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--> ''(cue montage of Emilo drowning in cement, Rafael being drugged, Rose ripping off her Wig and Anezka appearing in Petra's doorway)''
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--> ''(cue montage of Emilo drowning in cement, Rafael being drugged, Rose ripping off her Wig and Anezka appearing in Petra's doorway)''doorway)''
* Rafael is beckoned by his brother to go alone on a boat with him, despite Michael's warnings.
-->'''Narrator''': With Michael's words ringing in his ears, Rafael decided not to go with his brother. (''Rafael walks down the pier where his brother is waiting'') Well, it was worth a shot.
* Rafael is beckoned by his brother to go alone on a boat with him, despite Michael's warnings.
-->'''Narrator''': With Michael's words ringing in his ears, Rafael decided not to go with his brother. (''Rafael walks down the pier where his brother is waiting'') Well, it was worth a shot.
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* Petra's simultaneously horrified and glazed over expression as she's forced to participate in a TastesLikeDiabetes introductory song in a new mothers group.
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* Petra's simultaneously horrified and glazed over expression as she's forced to participate in a TastesLikeDiabetes introductory song in a new mothers group.group.
* Rogelio gently reminding his shows new overly enthusiastic technical advisor Michael, that the fifteenth century fighting doesn't have to be totally believable due to it [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall being a telenovela.]]
-->'''Narrator''': That's an ''understatement''
--> ''(cue montage of Emilo drowning in cement, Rafael being drugged, Rose ripping off her Wig and Anezka appearing in Petra's doorway)''
* Rogelio gently reminding his shows new overly enthusiastic technical advisor Michael, that the fifteenth century fighting doesn't have to be totally believable due to it [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall being a telenovela.]]
-->'''Narrator''': That's an ''understatement''
--> ''(cue montage of Emilo drowning in cement, Rafael being drugged, Rose ripping off her Wig and Anezka appearing in Petra's doorway)''
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* In one of the greatest pieces of ProductPlacement ever, the voice service in Jane's car reads out Rogelio's absurd Tweets. And later she imagines it berating her for the awkward scene with Jonathan.
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* In one of the greatest pieces of ProductPlacement ever, the voice service in Jane's car reads out Rogelio's absurd Tweets. And later she imagines it berating her for the awkward scene with Jonathan.Jonathan.
* Petra's simultaneously horrified and glazed over expression as she's forced to participate in a TastesLikeDiabetes introductory song in a new mothers group.
* Petra's simultaneously horrified and glazed over expression as she's forced to participate in a TastesLikeDiabetes introductory song in a new mothers group.
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** Rogelio finally decides he cannot wait and tracks down Jane in the bridal shop just to say LukeIAmYourFather - while still in a BananaRepublic dress uniform from his show.
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** Rogelio finally decides he cannot wait and tracks down Jane in the bridal shop just to say LukeIAmYourFather - while LukeIAmYourFather--while still in a BananaRepublic dress uniform from his show.
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* Finally, TheReveal of how Michael and Jane met - it was her alcohol-fueled 21st birthday, the neighbours complained about the noise, and the cop they sent over was actually Michael back when he was in uniform. And with enough alcohol, [[StripperCopConfusion a cop showing up at a girl's legal-age birthday party usually means one thing...]] And the real kicker is how the truth gets out - [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything when Jane plays with his gun and it goes off!]]
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* Finally, TheReveal of how Michael and Jane met - it met--it was her alcohol-fueled 21st birthday, the neighbours complained about the noise, and the cop they sent over was actually Michael back when he was in uniform. And with enough alcohol, [[StripperCopConfusion a cop showing up at a girl's legal-age birthday party usually means one thing...]] thing…]] And the real kicker is how the truth gets out - [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything out--[[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything when Jane plays with his gun and it goes off!]]
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows Him...
* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose, whatever - and along comes one bugger [[UncannyValley who needs so many arrows that]] ''even they get confused.''
* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose, whatever - and along comes one bugger [[UncannyValley who needs so many arrows that]] ''even they get confused.''
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows Him...
Him…
* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose,whatever - and whatever--and along comes one bugger [[UncannyValley who needs so many arrows that]] ''even they get confused.''
* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose,
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--> I'd like to thank God... for making me in His image...
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--> I'd like to thank God... for God--for making me in His image...image.
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'''Michael''': She's been surgically changing the faces of criminals...\\
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'''Michael''': She's been surgically changing the faces of criminals...\\criminals…\\
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'''Jane''': ''WAIT, YOU KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE, ACTUALLY...''\\
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'''Jane''': ''WAIT, YOU KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE, ACTUALLY...''\\ACTUALLY…''\\
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--> (''prerecorded singing'') "It's another beautiful day to be Rogelio, wake up Rogelio, wake up Rogelio..."
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--> (''prerecorded singing'') "It's another beautiful day to be Rogelio, wake up Rogelio, wake up Rogelio..."Rogelio…"
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* Lee Reherman and John Salley AdamWesting to provide color commentary on Jane's attempts to get Mateo to sleep through the night.
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* Lee Reherman and John Salley AdamWesting to provide color commentary on Jane's attempts to get Mateo to sleep through the night.night.
* In one of the greatest pieces of ProductPlacement ever, the voice service in Jane's car reads out Rogelio's absurd Tweets. And later she imagines it berating her for the awkward scene with Jonathan.
* In one of the greatest pieces of ProductPlacement ever, the voice service in Jane's car reads out Rogelio's absurd Tweets. And later she imagines it berating her for the awkward scene with Jonathan.
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* When Rogelio telling the Villaneuvas what blackmail material his ex-wife has on him, he has to explain what Scientology is to Alba. Jane silently laughs through the whole thing.
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* When Rogelio telling the Villaneuvas what blackmail material his ex-wife has on him, he has to explain what Scientology is to Alba. Jane silently laughs through the whole thing.thing.
* Lee Reherman and John Salley AdamWesting to provide color commentary on Jane's attempts to get Mateo to sleep through the night.
* Lee Reherman and John Salley AdamWesting to provide color commentary on Jane's attempts to get Mateo to sleep through the night.
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* Rogelio's alarm ringtone. That is all.
--> (''prerecorded singing'') "It's another beautiful day to be Rogelio, wake up Rogelio, wake up Rogelio..."
--> (''prerecorded singing'') "It's another beautiful day to be Rogelio, wake up Rogelio, wake up Rogelio..."
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* Jane has to narrate everything for Mateo, to develop his language skills. This leads to the Latin Lover Narrator feeling threatened.
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* Jane has to narrate everything for Mateo, to develop his language skills. This leads to the Latin Lover Narrator feeling threatened.threatened.
* When Rogelio telling the Villaneuvas what blackmail material his ex-wife has on him, he has to explain what Scientology is to Alba. Jane silently laughs through the whole thing.
* When Rogelio telling the Villaneuvas what blackmail material his ex-wife has on him, he has to explain what Scientology is to Alba. Jane silently laughs through the whole thing.
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* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose, whatever - and along comes one bugger [[UncannyValley who needs so many arrows that]] ''even they get confused.''
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* After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.
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* After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.replay.
** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
--> Yes, Rafael, ''you'' are the poor sucker.
* Jane has to narrate everything for Mateo, to develop his language skills. This leads to the Latin Lover Narrator feeling threatened.
** Made better because this is kind of a LaserGuidedKarma for Rafael, who just laughed at whoever the unfortunate father was. The narrator lampshades the hell out of it.
--> Yes, Rafael, ''you'' are the poor sucker.
* Jane has to narrate everything for Mateo, to develop his language skills. This leads to the Latin Lover Narrator feeling threatened.
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* ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.
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* ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.massage.
* After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.
* After realizing [[spoiler:Petra made herself pregnant with the rest of his sperm sample]], Rafael has such a beautiful OhCrap reaction that the narrator gives a full instant replay.
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* When Michael finally confronts Rafael with the truth [[spoiler:about Rose being Sin Rostro the whole time:]]
-->'''Narrator''': I don't want to interrupt, but it's important for you to know what Jane is thinking.\\
'''Jane''': (in chyrons) ''THIS IS FRIGGING CRAZY!''\\
'''Michael''': All the evidence leads to her. She's been running her own plastic surgery ring.\\
'''Jane''': ''ACT LIKE THIS IS COMPLETELY NORMAL.''\\
'''Michael''': She's been surgically changing the faces of criminals...\\
'''Jane''': ''EVEN THOUGH THIS IS FRIGGING CRAZY!!''\\
'''Michael''': We believe she may have also altered her own face.\\
'''Jane''': ''WAIT, YOU KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE, ACTUALLY...''\\
([[ImagineSpot cue the rest of the scene playing out like an actual telenovela]])
-->'''Narrator''': I don't want to interrupt, but it's important for you to know what Jane is thinking.\\
'''Jane''': (in chyrons) ''THIS IS FRIGGING CRAZY!''\\
'''Michael''': All the evidence leads to her. She's been running her own plastic surgery ring.\\
'''Jane''': ''ACT LIKE THIS IS COMPLETELY NORMAL.''\\
'''Michael''': She's been surgically changing the faces of criminals...\\
'''Jane''': ''EVEN THOUGH THIS IS FRIGGING CRAZY!!''\\
'''Michael''': We believe she may have also altered her own face.\\
'''Jane''': ''WAIT, YOU KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE, ACTUALLY...''\\
([[ImagineSpot cue the rest of the scene playing out like an actual telenovela]])
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows him...
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows him...Him...
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--> I'd like to thank God... for making me in His image...
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--> I'd like to thank God... for making me in His image...image...
* ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.
* ''All'' of Jane's facial expressions when she's somehow suckered into giving sex novelist Angelique Harper a full body massage.
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows him...
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows him...him...
* The start of the speech when Rogelio's great acting rival beats him at an awards ceremony:
--> I'd like to thank God... for making me in His image...
* The start of the speech when Rogelio's great acting rival beats him at an awards ceremony:
--> I'd like to thank God... for making me in His image...
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--> '''Narrator''': Suddenly, Jane's ''quincineara'' [[{{Understatement}} was no longer the worst party she had ever been to.]]
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--> '''Narrator''': Suddenly, Jane's ''quincineara'' ''quinceañera'' [[{{Understatement}} was no longer the worst party she had ever been to.]]
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* Finally, TheReveal of how Michael and Jane met - it was her alcohol-fueled 21st birthday, the neighbours complained about the noise, and the cop they sent over was actually Michael back when he was in uniform. And with enough alcohol, [[StripperCopConfusion a cop showing up at a girl's legal-age birthday party usually means one thing...]] And the real kicker is how the truth gets out - [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything when Jane plays with his gun and it goes off!]]
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* Finally, TheReveal of how Michael and Jane met - it was her alcohol-fueled 21st birthday, the neighbours complained about the noise, and the cop they sent over was actually Michael back when he was in uniform. And with enough alcohol, [[StripperCopConfusion a cop showing up at a girl's legal-age birthday party usually means one thing...]] And the real kicker is how the truth gets out - [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything when Jane plays with his gun and it goes off!]]off!]]
* Chapter 7:
** The nuns at the school have been shamelessly touting the Jane The Virgin thing behind Jane's back, leading to hopeful mothers showing up just to give her a hug and catch some of her "fertility" in return. Jane assumes it's because her dad is a big TV star at first:
--> '''Jane''': I'm sorry, do you know my dad?\\
'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows him...
* Chapter 7:
** The nuns at the school have been shamelessly touting the Jane The Virgin thing behind Jane's back, leading to hopeful mothers showing up just to give her a hug and catch some of her "fertility" in return. Jane assumes it's because her dad is a big TV star at first:
--> '''Jane''': I'm sorry, do you know my dad?\\
'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows him...
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--> '''Narrator''': When Xo told Jane her father was a military man, ''this was not what she meant.''
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--> '''Narrator''': When Xo told Jane her father was a military man, ''this was not what she meant.''''
* Finally, TheReveal of how Michael and Jane met - it was her alcohol-fueled 21st birthday, the neighbours complained about the noise, and the cop they sent over was actually Michael back when he was in uniform. And with enough alcohol, [[StripperCopConfusion a cop showing up at a girl's legal-age birthday party usually means one thing...]] And the real kicker is how the truth gets out - [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything when Jane plays with his gun and it goes off!]]
* Finally, TheReveal of how Michael and Jane met - it was her alcohol-fueled 21st birthday, the neighbours complained about the noise, and the cop they sent over was actually Michael back when he was in uniform. And with enough alcohol, [[StripperCopConfusion a cop showing up at a girl's legal-age birthday party usually means one thing...]] And the real kicker is how the truth gets out - [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything when Jane plays with his gun and it goes off!]]
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--> '''Narrator''': Suddenly, Jane's ''quincineara'' [[{{Understatement}} was no longer the worst party she had ever been to.]]
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--> '''Narrator''': Suddenly, Jane's ''quincineara'' [[{{Understatement}} was no longer the worst party she had ever been to.]]]]
* Chapter 4:
** Rogelio finally decides he cannot wait and tracks down Jane in the bridal shop just to say LukeIAmYourFather - while still in a BananaRepublic dress uniform from his show.
--> '''Narrator''': When Xo told Jane her father was a military man, ''this was not what she meant.''
* Chapter 4:
** Rogelio finally decides he cannot wait and tracks down Jane in the bridal shop just to say LukeIAmYourFather - while still in a BananaRepublic dress uniform from his show.
--> '''Narrator''': When Xo told Jane her father was a military man, ''this was not what she meant.''
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* Chapter 2:
** Alba reaches the part of ''[[ShowWithinAShow The Passions of Santos]]'' where Rogelio's character survives his DisneyDeath, and rushes to tell Xo ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext only to find her in bed with him.]]''
** After TheReveal that Petra is going to save her marriage and somehow write off Zaz, the episode ends with Zaz ''[[MoodWhiplash impaled on an ice marlin in front of Jane's eyes.]]''
--> '''Narrator''': Suddenly, Jane's ''quincineara'' [[{{Understatement}} was no longer the worst party she had ever been to.]]
** Alba reaches the part of ''[[ShowWithinAShow The Passions of Santos]]'' where Rogelio's character survives his DisneyDeath, and rushes to tell Xo ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext only to find her in bed with him.]]''
** After TheReveal that Petra is going to save her marriage and somehow write off Zaz, the episode ends with Zaz ''[[MoodWhiplash impaled on an ice marlin in front of Jane's eyes.]]''
--> '''Narrator''': Suddenly, Jane's ''quincineara'' [[{{Understatement}} was no longer the worst party she had ever been to.]]
