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** When ordering the ice sculpture for the party, Petra [[MondegreenGag was misheard]]; she ordered a sculpture of a ''marlin'', but got one of ''Myth/{{Merlin}}'' instead.
** The narrator says it's important to remember that Michael was not a virgin when he met Jane… well, it was important to Michael. [[LemonyNarrator The narrator doesn't care]].
** The narrator says it's important to remember that Michael was not a virgin when he met Jane… well, it was important to Michael. [[LemonyNarrator The narrator doesn't care]].
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* In Chapter 36, Petra has the twins. Jane asks her what the girls' names are to which Petra replies Anna and Elsa. Jane points out to her that those are the names of the sisters from ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'' and Petra says that she's the only person who'd think that.
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* In Chapter 36, Petra has the twins. Jane asks her what the girls' names are to which Petra replies Anna and Elsa. Jane points out to her that those are the names of the sisters from ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'' ''Franchise/{{Frozen}}'' and Petra says that she's the only person who'd think that.
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* Chapter 66, Jane and Rafael are arguing by texting. It gets so intense that Jane is tickling Mateo really hard.
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* In Chapter 66, Jane and Rafael are arguing by texting. It forced to argue through text messages as they put Mateo to sleep. Jane gets so intense angry that Jane is Mateo complains she's tickling Mateo really hard. him too hard.
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* Anna playing in the coffin in Chapter Seventy-One
-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'': Mommy, Anna died!
-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'': Mommy, Anna died!
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* Anna playing in the coffin in Chapter Seventy-One
-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'':Seventy-One.
-->'''Elsa:''' ''(flippantly)'' Mommy, Anna died!
-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'':
-->'''Elsa:''' ''(flippantly)'' Mommy, Anna died!
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-->'''Magda''': I have one hand. It takes time.
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* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose, whatever--and along comes one bugger [[UncannyValley who needs so many arrows that]] ''even they get confused.''
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* The EurekaMoment where Michael figures out that the hidden surgery underneath the Marbella was intended for plastic surgery: he's casually scoping out the clientele, then notes that some of them may have had work done, with an overlay with arrows showing where it looks the most likely. Eyes, nose, whatever--and along comes one bugger [[UncannyValley who needs so many arrows that]] that ''even they get confused.''
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* Petra's simultaneously horrified and glazed over expression as she's forced to participate in a TastesLikeDiabetes introductory song in a new mothers group.
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* Petra's simultaneously horrified and glazed over expression as she's forced to participate in a TastesLikeDiabetes SickeninglySweet introductory song in a new mothers group.
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* In Chapter 36, Petra has the twins. Jane asks her what the girls' names are to which Petra replies Anna and Elsa. Jane points out to her that those are the names of the sisters from ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' and Petra says that she's the only person who'd think that.
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* In Chapter 36, Petra has the twins. Jane asks her what the girls' names are to which Petra replies Anna and Elsa. Jane points out to her that those are the names of the sisters from ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'' and Petra says that she's the only person who'd think that.
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* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song, with the pipe connecting with his skull ''the literal second'' the chorus starts up]].
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* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song, with the pipe connecting with his skull ''the ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SG16MXTzVRA&t=19s the literal second'' second]]'' the chorus starts up]].
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* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song]].
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* The reveal of Scott's killer: [[spoiler:The real Eileen. To which Luisa gives an understandable "Come on, Eileen?", which naturally leads to the flashback of the murder being scored with that song]].song, with the pipe connecting with his skull ''the literal second'' the chorus starts up]].
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* Chapter 86: Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.
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* Chapter 86: Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.angle.
* Chapter 96: Petra's ongoing struggles trying to get rid of her now seriously injured mother.
-->'''Dr. Price''': We amputated your mother's leg, but she's taken a turn for the worse. Sorry to have to tell you this, but she's now on life support.
-->'''Petra''': I told you before, you can pull the plug.
-->'''Dr. Price''': Actually, you need to put that in writing.
-->'''Petra''': I did put it in writing.
-->'''Dr. Price''': A text with a plug emoji and a thumbs up doesn't count. You need to do it in person.
-->'''Petra''': Fine.
* Chapter 96: Petra's ongoing struggles trying to get rid of her now seriously injured mother.
-->'''Dr. Price''': We amputated your mother's leg, but she's taken a turn for the worse. Sorry to have to tell you this, but she's now on life support.
-->'''Petra''': I told you before, you can pull the plug.
-->'''Dr. Price''': Actually, you need to put that in writing.
-->'''Petra''': I did put it in writing.
-->'''Dr. Price''': A text with a plug emoji and a thumbs up doesn't count. You need to do it in person.
-->'''Petra''': Fine.
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* Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.
* Chapter 79: Alba successfully passes her citizenship test is a Moment of Awesome, but what makes it a funny moment is when she imagines the portrait of Trump hanging in the office transforming into Obama. And to top it off he winks at her.
* Chapter 79: Alba successfully passes her citizenship test is a Moment of Awesome, but what makes it a funny moment is when she imagines the portrait of Trump hanging in the office transforming into Obama. And to top it off he winks at her.
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* Chapter 86: Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.
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* Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.angle.
* Chapter 79: Alba successfully passes her citizenship test is a Moment of Awesome, but what makes it a funny moment is when she imagines the portrait of Trump hanging in the office transforming into Obama. And to top it off he winks at her.
* Chapter 79: Alba successfully passes her citizenship test is a Moment of Awesome, but what makes it a funny moment is when she imagines the portrait of Trump hanging in the office transforming into Obama. And to top it off he winks at her.
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* The repeated use of the ''Series/LawAndOrder'' theme as Petra consults with J.R to get herself cleared of murder.
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* The repeated use of the ''Series/LawAndOrder'' theme as Petra consults with J.R to get herself cleared of murder.murder.
* Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.
* Jane has trouble proving she's Mateo's mother with a photo of the original actor, which she says is from a weird angle.
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* In Chapter 36, Petra has the twins. Jane asks her what the girls' names are to which Petra replies Anna and Elsa. Jane points out to her that those are the names of the sisters from ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' and Petra says that she's the only person who'd think that.
-->'''Narrator''': Let it go, Jane. Let it go.
-->'''Narrator''': Let it go, Jane. Let it go.
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* Every second Music/BritneySpears is onscreen, AdamWesting as a [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold good-natured]] [[TheDitz ditz]] to a truly hilarious and hammy degree. Especially when she's followed her troupe of backup dancers.
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* Rogelio gently reminding his shows new overly enthusiastic technical advisor Michael, that the fifteenth century fighting doesn't have to be totally believable due to it [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall being a telenovela.]]
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* Rogelio gently reminding his shows new overly enthusiastic technical advisor adviser Michael, that the fifteenth century fighting doesn't have to be totally believable due to it [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall being a telenovela.]]
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* Jane and Rafael finally come clean about their relationship, only to find everyone knew from the start, complete with a montage of how they weren't exactly subtle about it. And Alba won the bet over when they'd reveal it.
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* Jane and Rafael finally come clean about their relationship, only to find everyone knew from the start, complete with a montage of how they weren't exactly subtle about it. And Alba won the bet over when they'd reveal it.it.
* The repeated use of the ''Series/LawAndOrder'' theme as Petra consults with J.R to get herself cleared of murder.
* The repeated use of the ''Series/LawAndOrder'' theme as Petra consults with J.R to get herself cleared of murder.
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* The Narrator's outraged "Move your head!" when Jane shifts in the frame and blocks a saucy text from Rafael.
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* The Narrator's outraged "Move your head!" when Jane shifts in the frame and blocks a saucy text from Rafael.Rafael.
* Jane and Rafael finally come clean about their relationship, only to find everyone knew from the start, complete with a montage of how they weren't exactly subtle about it. And Alba won the bet over when they'd reveal it.
* Jane and Rafael finally come clean about their relationship, only to find everyone knew from the start, complete with a montage of how they weren't exactly subtle about it. And Alba won the bet over when they'd reveal it.
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) Everyone knows Him…
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'''Woman''': Of course. (eyes cast skyward) ''(casts eyes skyward)'' Everyone knows Him…
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* Rogelio in [[spoiler: drag infiltrating the Focus group]].
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* Rogelio in [[spoiler: drag infiltrating [[spoiler:infiltrating the Focus group]].group in drag]].
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-->'''Magda''': I have one hand. It takes time.
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-->'''Magda''': I have one hand. It takes time.time.
* The Narrator's outraged "Move your head!" when Jane shifts in the frame and blocks a saucy text from Rafael.
* The Narrator's outraged "Move your head!" when Jane shifts in the frame and blocks a saucy text from Rafael.
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-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'': Mommy, Anna died!
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-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'': Mommy, Anna died!died!
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-->'''Magda''': I have one hand. It takes time.
* "Petra" trying to kick Magda out of the hotel, hurrying up her packing.
-->'''Magda''': I have one hand. It takes time.
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* Rogelio in [[spoiler: drag infiltrating the Focus group]].
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* Rogelio in [[spoiler: drag infiltrating the Focus group]].group]].
* Anna playing in the coffin in Chapter Seventy-One
-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'': Mommy, Anna died!
* Anna playing in the coffin in Chapter Seventy-One
-->'''Elsa''' ''(flippantly)'': Mommy, Anna died!
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'''Narrator''': [[LiteralMetaphor It was also the]][[ContrivedCoincidence 4th of July.]]\\
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'''Narrator''': [[LiteralMetaphor It was also the]][[ContrivedCoincidence the]] [[ContrivedCoincidence 4th of July.]]\\
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'''Narrator''': [[ContrivedCoincidence It was also the 4th of July.]]\\
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'''Narrator''': [[ContrivedCoincidence [[LiteralMetaphor It was also the the]][[ContrivedCoincidence 4th of July.]]\\
