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*** At which point the other Mournival members enjoy a good chuckle at how thoroughly this wrongfoots Abaddon ([[ActuallyPrettyFunny who eventually does chuckle at it]])
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** When Loken's about to lead Tenth Company into combat for the first time since elevation to the Mournival, Abaddon very seriously tells him, "Get this right." Loken's response is an utterly deadpan;
-->"I'm glad you told me that, Ezekyle. I was considering making a mess of it."
*** At which point the other Mournival members enjoy a good chuckle at how thoroughly this wrongfoots Abaddon ([[ActuallyPrettyFunny who eventually does chuckle at it]])
-->"I'm glad you told me that, Ezekyle. I was considering making a mess of it."
*** At which point the other Mournival members enjoy a good chuckle at how thoroughly this wrongfoots Abaddon ([[ActuallyPrettyFunny who eventually does chuckle at it]])
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* ''The Last Church'': When Revelation first tells Uriah Olathaire that nobody is coming to his sermon, Uriah jokes that it was because he scared his congregation away with how poorly he aged.
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* ''The Last Church'': Church'':
** When Revelation first tells Uriah Olathaire that nobody is coming to his sermon, Uriah jokes that it was because he scared his congregation away with how poorly he aged.
** When Revelation first tells Uriah Olathaire that nobody is coming to his sermon, Uriah jokes that it was because he scared his congregation away with how poorly he aged.
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** While telling his life story, Uriah recounts his first encounter with the Emperor's Thunder Warriors. A very, ''very'' drunk encounter where he decides it's a good idea to [[TooDumbToLive hurl insults at them.]] He gets thrown off a cliff and into the water.
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* " After Garviel Loken assaults Iacton Qruze for not telling him Mersadie Oliton was alive, Ares Voitek of the Iron Hands whips up a traditional Medusan drink used to heal rifts within a clan, and passes it around among Rogal Dorn and the Knights-Errant. The resultant brew is so strong that [[TheStoic Dorn]] cocks an eyebrow, while the rest of the Knights act like Voitek just tried to poison them. The only ones who enjoyed the brew are Bror Tyrfinger (Space Wolf) and Altan Nohai (White Scar).
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** Later when Guilliman manages to meet with Thiel in his private armoury, Guilliman vents privately about an informal communication he'd just had with Lorgar and Horus' perceived attempts to heal the rift between the two legions. He laments Lorgar's [[ManChild tendencies]] and darkly comments what he'd do with him (put a boot up his ass). Thiel offers to demonstrate how which seems to earn a rebuke from Guilliman. When Thiel attempts to apologise for his attempt at humour, Guilliman admits the joke was [[ActuallyPrettyFunny actually pretty funny]].
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** Later when Guilliman manages to meet with Thiel in his private armoury, Guilliman vents privately about an informal communication he'd just had with Lorgar and Horus' perceived attempts to heal the rift between the two legions. He laments Lorgar's [[ManChild tendencies]] and darkly comments what he'd do with him if Lorgar weren't a brother primach (put a boot up his ass). Thiel offers to demonstrate how which seems to earn seemingly earns a rebuke from Guilliman. When Thiel attempts to apologise for his attempt at humour, Guilliman admits the joke was [[ActuallyPrettyFunny actually pretty funny]].
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** Later when Guilliman manages to meet with Thiel in his private armoury, Guilliman vents privately about an informal communication he'd just had with Lorgar and Horus' perceived attempts to heal the rift between the two legions. He laments Lorgar's [[ManChild tendencies]] and darkly comments what he'd do with him (put a boot up his ass). Thiel offers to demonstrate how which seems to earn a rebuke from Guilliman. When Thiel attempts to apologise for his attempt at humour, Guilliman admits the joke was [[ActuallyPrettyFunny actually pretty funny]].
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--->'Ventanus, Captain, Fourth Company, First Chapter, Thirteenth,' Ventanus replies. 'I am looking for-'
--->He has memorised the names.
--->'-Seneschals Arbute, Darial and Eterwin. Or, in fact, any senior municipal servant whose portfolio encompasses the starport.'
--->'They are all in the building,' the footman replies. He is clearly being fed behind the eyes by some direct-to-retina datasystem. Ventanus can tell from the slightly glassy way his eyes de-focus to verify the names.
--->'Could you fetch them?' asks Ventanus.
--->'They are in session all afternoon,' replies the footman. 'Is it urgent?'
--->Ventanus chooses his next word carefully. It’s not so much the word as the hesitation he places in front of it, the hesitation that says ''I am wearing battleplate, I am armed, and I am doing my very best to be polite.''
--->'Yes,' he says.
--->The footmen hurry away.
--->He has memorised the names.
--->'-Seneschals Arbute, Darial and Eterwin. Or, in fact, any senior municipal servant whose portfolio encompasses the starport.'
--->'They are all in the building,' the footman replies. He is clearly being fed behind the eyes by some direct-to-retina datasystem. Ventanus can tell from the slightly glassy way his eyes de-focus to verify the names.
--->'Could you fetch them?' asks Ventanus.
--->'They are in session all afternoon,' replies the footman. 'Is it urgent?'
--->Ventanus chooses his next word carefully. It’s not so much the word as the hesitation he places in front of it, the hesitation that says ''I am wearing battleplate, I am armed, and I am doing my very best to be polite.''
--->'Yes,' he says.
--->The footmen hurry away.
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--->He has memorised the names.
--->'-Seneschals
--->'They
--->'''Footman:''' They are all in the
--->'Could
--->'''Ventanus:''' Could you fetch
--->'They
--->'''Footman:''' They are in session all
--->Ventanus chooses his next word carefully. It’s not so much the word as the hesitation he places in front of it, the hesitation that says ''I am wearing battleplate, I am armed, and I am doing my very best to be polite.''
--->'Yes,' he says.
--->The
--->''({{Beat}})''
--->'''Ventanus:''' ''Yes''.
--->''(The footmen
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-->'''Gage''': ''[standing in a ruined corridor of Guilliman's flagship]''...''That'' was his infraction?
-->'''Jaer''': Looks bloody pitiful from where we’re standing, doesn’t it?
-->'''Jaer''': Looks bloody pitiful from where we’re standing, doesn’t it?
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-->'''Jaer''':
'''Jaer''': [[LampshadeHanging Looks bloody pitiful from where we’re standing, doesn’t
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* In ''Warhawk'', one of the viewpoints is a relatively new captain in the Sons of Horus, Archeta. He's introduced in this novel and shown to have an array of allies, enemies, opinions and ambitions over the course of his chapters. Then he runs into Sigismund and begins posturing for an epic duel, [[CurbStompBattle only to be cut down in three blows.]]
--> '''Fafnir Rann:''' A captain. Who, though?\\
'''Sigismund:''' No idea. Keep moving.
--> '''Fafnir Rann:''' A captain. Who, though?\\
'''Sigismund:''' No idea. Keep moving.
