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* Everyone including Hilda's mom was bored by the slideshow at the parent-teacher conference, until the projector gets knocked over causing everyone to gasp in horror.
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* [[NapInducingSpeak Everyone including Hilda's mom was bored by the slideshow at the parent-teacher conference, conference]], until the projector gets knocked over causing everyone to gasp in horror.
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-->'''Woodman''': I would prefer not to lie to you.
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* Johanna coming into Hilda's room to check on her, only to find David in her bed. Cue the ReactiveContinuousScream.
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* Johanna coming into Hilda's room to check on her, only to find David in her bed. Cue the ReactiveContinuousScream.
[[https://twitter.com/j_dubba_m/status/1180324962432933888 It has to be seen to be believed.]]
** Twig's visible discomfort at David's snoring.
** Twig's visible discomfort at David's snoring.
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* Johanna coming into Hilda's room to check on her, only to find David in her bed. Cue the ReactiveContinuousScream.
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* When Hilda talks about finding the ghost's grave, the Librarian accidentally speaks the exact location of it, before coming to realization that she just said that in front of the kids and spooking them for memorizing every grave in the city. She then immediately discards it, and pretend to read it from city's records, before discarding the fact that it is the same with the former one when Hilda brought it up.
-->'''Hilda:''' That's what you've just said before!\\
'''Librarian:''' Was it? I don't think so.
-->'''Hilda:''' That's what you've just said before!\\
'''Librarian:''' Was it? I don't think so.
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* Alfar's Alfur's name is plural. His name isn't "elf" it's "elves".
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* Frida thinking rooms just clean themselves, since she [[spoiler: could just throw her things everywhere at night]], go to sleep, and then the next morning, everything was tidy.
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* David telling Frida, "You could just learn to tidy your own flipping room."
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* Frida thinking rooms just clean themselves, since she [[spoiler: could just throw her things everywhere at night]], night, go to sleep, and then the next morning, everything was tidy.
* While it's during a TearJerker, David telling Frida, "You could just learn to tidy your own flipping room."
* While it's during a TearJerker, David telling Frida, "You could just learn to tidy your own flipping room."
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* In a meta-sense; the whole problem in this episode comes from the fact that Hilda used a spell without reading the warning first, which come ''after'' the spell (in a footnote). Yeah...[[Film/DoctorStrange2016 You're not the first one that happens to Hilda]].
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* In a meta-sense; the whole problem in this episode comes from the fact that Hilda used uses a spell without reading the warning first, which come comes ''after'' the spell (in a footnote). Yeah...[[Film/DoctorStrange2016 You're you're not the first one that happens to Hilda]].
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* In a meta-sense; the whole problem in this episode comes from the fact that Hilda used a spell without reading the warning first, which come ''after'' the spell (in a footnote). Yeah...[[Film/DoctorStrange2016 You're not the first one that happens to Hilda]].
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* The lost clan capture David and keep him as a hostage... except they have no idea on what to do with him since they never took anyone hostage before, leading to some awkward conversations. David not being able to see them due to not signing elf's paperwork doesn't make things easier.
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* The lost clan capture David and keep him as a hostage... except they have no idea on what to do with him since they never took anyone hostage before, leading to some awkward conversations. conversations, including an elf asking David what they should do, only for David to admit that this is also his first time being a hostage. David not being able to see them due to not signing elf's paperwork doesn't make things easier.
easier. By the time the conflict is resolved, the lost clan leader admits David set the bar pretty high for future hostages.
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'''Hilda:''' You know, this isn't much of a pep talk. Can't you just say, "You can do it!"
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'''Hilda:''' You know, this isn't much of a pep talk. Can't you just say, "You can do it!"it!"\\
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!! General
* The RunningGag of David always having a bug on him.
* The RunningGag of David always having a bug on him.
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-->'''Alfur:''' You can do it! (''deadpan'') For encouragement purposes only, you may not be actually able to do it.
-->'''Alfur:''' You can do it! (''deadpan'') For encouragement purposes only, you may not be actually able to do it.
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* Hilda trying to pump herself up, and asking Alfur to tell her "you can do it", to which he obliges. And adds a footnote.
-->'''Alfur:'''disclaimer for Hilda.
--> '''Alfur:''' Eh, this is precisely why an elf would never make a promise without a written document. That way you can include disclaimers that absolve responsibility in the event the promise cannot be upheld.\\
'''Hilda:''' You know, this isn't much of a pep talk. Can't you just say, "You can do it!"
'''Alfur:''' Sure! You can do it! (''deadpan'')For Statement for encouragement purposes only, you may not be actually be able to do it.
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--> '''Alfur:''' Eh, this is precisely why an elf would never make a promise without a written document. That way you can include disclaimers that absolve responsibility in the event the promise cannot be upheld.\\
'''Hilda:''' You know, this isn't much of a pep talk. Can't you just say, "You can do it!"
'''Alfur:''' Sure! You can do it! (''deadpan'')
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!!Chapter 1: The Hidden People
!!Chapter 2: The Midnight Giant
!!Chapter 3: The Bird Parade
!!Chapter 2: The Midnight Giant
!!Chapter 3: The Bird Parade
!!Chapter 4: The Sparrow Scouts
!!Chapter 5: The Troll Rock
!!Chapter 6: The Nightmare Spirit
!!Chapter 7: The Lost Clan
!!Chapter 8: The Tide Mice
!!Chapter 9: The Ghost
!!Chapter 10: The Storm
!!Chapter 11: The House in the Woods
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-->'''Woodman:''' She doesn't speak for me.me.
!!Chapter 12: The Nisse
!!Chapter 13: The Black Hound
!!Chapter 12: The Nisse
!!Chapter 13: The Black Hound
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** First example is her asking why King Olaf lost the battle when he had a superior fleet. Without raising her hand. During ''science'' class.
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** Finally, her standing on the teacher's desk and making a philosophical question that addresses a math problem involving apples... after school is over and everyone else in her class has left.
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** Finally, her standing on the teacher's desk and making a philosophical question addressing a math problem involving apples... after school is over and everyone else in her class has left.
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** First example is her asking why King Olaf lost the battle when he had a superior fleet. Without raising her hand. During ''science'' class.
** Second is her refusing to follow the procedures of a "troll drill" which is to duck under a desk (similar to an earthquake drill), bluntly pointing out it wouldn't help during an actual troll attack.
** Finally, her standing on the teacher's desk and making a philosophical question addressing a math problem involving apples... after school is over and everyone else in her class has left.
** Second is her refusing to follow the procedures of a "troll drill" which is to duck under a desk (similar to an earthquake drill), bluntly pointing out it wouldn't help during an actual troll attack.
** Finally, her standing on the teacher's desk and making a philosophical question addressing a math problem involving apples... after school is over and everyone else in her class has left.
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* Frida and David having to explain to Hilda that Ms. Hallgrim doesn't love her, by pointing out the times she was being disruptive in class.
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* Hilda chasing the Vittra who has taken away Frida's sash, at one point accidentally barging into a home where a Vittra is painting his muse which is a small cow.
-->'''Hilda''': Whoops.
* Hilda chasing the Vittra who has taken away Frida's sash, at one point accidentally barging into a home where a Vittra is painting his muse which is a small cow.
-->'''Hilda''': Whoops.
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* Woodman claiming he was retrieving items from the giant that he lost to him, but when Hilda asks if the crown actually belonged to him, Woodman takes a moment to answer.
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* Hilda trying to pump herself up, and asking Alfur to tell her "you can do it", to which he obliges. And adds a footnote.
--> '''Alfur:''' You can do it! (''deadpan'') For encouragement purposes only, you may not be actually able to do it.
* Woodman barges into the mysterious house and Hilda apologizes for them coming in without being invited and hopes the owner forgives them.
--> '''Woodman:''' She doesn't speak for me.
--> '''Alfur:''' You can do it! (''deadpan'') For encouragement purposes only, you may not be actually able to do it.
* Woodman barges into the mysterious house and Hilda apologizes for them coming in without being invited and hopes the owner forgives them.
--> '''Woodman:''' She doesn't speak for me.
