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-->Before she'd met Harry Potter she hadn't had anyone she'd wanted to crush. If someone wasn't doing as well as her in class, it was her job to help them, not rub it in. That was what it meant to be Good.\\
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->'''Harry''':"If we lose, theHeadmaster set fire to whole universe just blinks out like a chicken!", "He wha-"light bulb. And now I realize that most of you don't know what a light bulb is."
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(truthful)'' Professor Mcgonagall [=McGonagall=] says that I'm the most Ravenclaw person she's ever seen or heard tell of in legend, so much so that Rowena herself would tell me to get out more, whatever that means, and that I'll undoubtedly end up in Ravenclaw House if the Sorting Hat isn't screaming in horror too loudly for the rest of us to make out any words, end quote.
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-->Minerva Mcgonagall, [=McGonagall=], enter stage left.
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-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor Mcgonagall:''' WHAT?!?
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-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor Mcgonagall! [=McGonagall=]! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
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-->'''Professor Mcgonagall:''' [=McGonagall=]:''' ''(borderline hysterical)'' Draco Malfoy said in front of his father that he wanted to be sorted into Gryffindor! Joking around isn't enough to do that! What part of "get fitted for robes" sounded to you like please cast a Confundus Charm on the entire universe!
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-->'''Professor Mcgonagall:''' [=McGonagall=]:''' No. Don't explain. I don't want to know what happened in here. Ever. There are some things I was not meant to know, and this is one of them. Whatever demonic force of chaos inhabits you, it is contagious, and I don't want to end up like poor Draco Malfoy, poor Madam Malkin and her two poor assistants.
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* The result of Harry's experiment with the Time Turner in Chapter 17. [[supersecretspoiler:DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
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* Harry's Pet Rock died, nuff said...
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*CANNIBALISM!!
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* The exchange at the end of Chapter 47:
-->'''Draco''': You're a Parselmouth, you can speak Parseltongue, it's the language of all snakes everywhere. You can understand any snake when it talks, and they can understand when you talk to them... Harry, you can't ''possibly'' believe you were Sorted into Ravenclaw! ''You're the Heir of Slytherin!''
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-->'''Draco''': You're a Parselmouth, you can speak Parseltongue, it's the language of all snakes everywhere. You can understand any snake when it talks, and they can understand when you talk to them... Harry, you can't ''possibly'' believe you were Sorted into Ravenclaw! ''You're the Heir of Slytherin!''
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-->'''Harry:''' So they've been told their whole lives that they're going to be your minions and they've spent years imagining what minions are supposed to be like and what's worse, they '''do'' ''do'' know each other and they've been ''practicing''
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-->'''Harry:''' Hey Draco--Oh my god you have ''minions''!
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-->'''Harry:''' Hey Draco--Oh Draco? What are you doing in--oh my god you have ''minions''!''minions''!
-->'''Draco:''' Potter, I introduce to you Mr. Crabbe, Mr. Goyle. Vincent, Gregory, this is Harry Potter.
-->'''Crabbe:''' ''(false accent)'' Pleased ta meetcha.
-->'''Harry:''' You have minions! Where do ''I'' get minions?
--> [...]
-->'''Harry:''' Um... hold on, this was arranged ''years'' ago?
-->'''Draco:''' Exactly, Potter. I'm afraid you're out of luck.
-->'''Harry:''' And, Lucius insisted that you were not to grow up knowing your bodyguards, and that you were only to meet them on your first day of school.
-->'''Draco:''' Yes, Potter, we all know you're brilliant, the whole school knows by now, you can stop showing off--
-->'''Harry:''' So they've been told their whole lives that they're going to be your minions and they've spent years imagining what minions are supposed to be like and what's worse, they '''do'' know each other and they've been ''practicing''
-->'''Draco:''' Potter, I introduce to you Mr. Crabbe, Mr. Goyle. Vincent, Gregory, this is Harry Potter.
-->'''Crabbe:''' ''(false accent)'' Pleased ta meetcha.
-->'''Harry:''' You have minions! Where do ''I'' get minions?
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-->'''Harry:''' Um... hold on, this was arranged ''years'' ago?
-->'''Draco:''' Exactly, Potter. I'm afraid you're out of luck.
-->'''Harry:''' And, Lucius insisted that you were not to grow up knowing your bodyguards, and that you were only to meet them on your first day of school.
-->'''Draco:''' Yes, Potter, we all know you're brilliant, the whole school knows by now, you can stop showing off--
-->'''Harry:''' So they've been told their whole lives that they're going to be your minions and they've spent years imagining what minions are supposed to be like and what's worse, they '''do'' know each other and they've been ''practicing''
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-->''Professor Mcgonagall:''' No. Don't explain. I don't want to know what happened in here. Ever. There are some things I was not meant to know, and this is one of them. Whatever demonic force of chaos inhabits you, it is contagious, and I don't want to end up like poor Draco Malfoy, poor Madam Malkin and her two poor assistants.
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(truthful)'' Professor McGonagall says that I'm the most Ravenclaw person she's ever seen or heard tell of in legend, so much so that Rowena herself would tell me to get out more, whatever that means, and that I'll undoubtedly end up in Ravenclaw House if the Sorting Hat isn't screaming in horror too loudly for the rest of us to make out any words, end quote.
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(truthful)'' Professor McGonagall Mcgonagall says that I'm the most Ravenclaw person she's ever seen or heard tell of in legend, so much so that Rowena herself would tell me to get out more, whatever that means, and that I'll undoubtedly end up in Ravenclaw House if the Sorting Hat isn't screaming in horror too loudly for the rest of us to make out any words, end quote.
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-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor McGonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor McGonagall:''' WHAT?!?
--> Lucius drags Draco outside.
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' ''(horrified)'' What are you saying, Mr. Potter?
-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor McGonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor McGonagall:''' WHAT?!?
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-->Minerva McGonagall, Mcgonagall, enter stage left.
-->'''ProfessorMcGonagall:''' Mcgonagall:''' ''(horrified)'' What are you saying, Mr. Potter?
-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor McGonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor McGonagall:''' WHAT?!?
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-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor McGonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
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-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor Mcgonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor Mcgonagall:''' WHAT?!?
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-->'''ProfessorMcGonagall:''' Mcgonagall:''' Madam Malkin, what has been happening here?
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-->''Professor McGonagall:''' Mcgonagall:''' No. Don't explain. I don't want to know what happened in here. Ever. There are some things I was not meant to know, and this is one of them. Whatever demonic force of chaos inhabits you, it is contagious, and I don't want to end up like poor Draco Malfoy, poor Madam Malkin and her two poor assistants.
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Lucius Malfoy! ''The'' Lucius Malfoy?
-->'''Malfoy? Your son has been telling me all about you. But of course I knew about you all before then, everyone knows about you, the great Lucius Malfoy! The most honored laureate of all the House of Slytherin, I've been thinking about trying to get into Slytherin House myself just because I heard you were in it as a child--
-->Minerva McGonagall, enter stage left.
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' ''(horrified)'' What are you saying, Mr. Potter?
-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor McGonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor McGonagall:''' WHAT?!?
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--> ''(beat)''
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' Madam Malkin, what has been happening here?
--> ''Madam Malkin looked back silently for four seconds, and then cracked up. She fell against the wall, wheezing out laughter, and that set off both of her assistants, one of whom fell to her hands and knees on the floor, giggling hysterically.''
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' I leave you alone for five minutes. Five minutes, Mr. Potter, by the very clock.
-->'''Harry:''' I was only joking around.
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' ''(borderline hysterical)'' Draco Malfoy said in front of his father that he wanted to be sorted into Gryffindor! Joking around isn't enough to do that! What part of "get fitted for robes" sounded to you like please cast a Confundus Charm on the entire universe!
-->'''Harry:''' [[ItMakesSenseInContext He was in a situational context where those actions made internal sense--]]
-->''Professor McGonagall:''' No. Don't explain. I don't want to know what happened in here. Ever. There are some things I was not meant to know, and this is one of them. Whatever demonic force of chaos inhabits you, it is contagious, and I don't want to end up like poor Draco Malfoy, poor Madam Malkin and her two poor assistants.
* The result of Harry's experiment with the Time Turner in Chapter 17.
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-->Minerva McGonagall, enter stage left.
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' ''(horrified)'' What are you saying, Mr. Potter?
-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Professor McGonagall! Is it really you? I've heard so much about you from my father, I've been thinking of trying to get Sorted into Gryffindor so I can--
-->'''Lucius''' and '''Professor McGonagall:''' WHAT?!?
--> Lucius drags Draco outside.
--> ''(beat)''
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' Madam Malkin, what has been happening here?
--> ''Madam Malkin looked back silently for four seconds, and then cracked up. She fell against the wall, wheezing out laughter, and that set off both of her assistants, one of whom fell to her hands and knees on the floor, giggling hysterically.''
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' I leave you alone for five minutes. Five minutes, Mr. Potter, by the very clock.
-->'''Harry:''' I was only joking around.
-->'''Professor McGonagall:''' ''(borderline hysterical)'' Draco Malfoy said in front of his father that he wanted to be sorted into Gryffindor! Joking around isn't enough to do that! What part of "get fitted for robes" sounded to you like please cast a Confundus Charm on the entire universe!
-->'''Harry:''' [[ItMakesSenseInContext He was in a situational context where those actions made internal sense--]]
-->''Professor McGonagall:''' No. Don't explain. I don't want to know what happened in here. Ever. There are some things I was not meant to know, and this is one of them. Whatever demonic force of chaos inhabits you, it is contagious, and I don't want to end up like poor Draco Malfoy, poor Madam Malkin and her two poor assistants.
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-->Harry could predict where this conversation was about to go, and he decided in anice climax.split second of frustration that enough was enough.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(cheerfully sarcastic)'' Good heavens! It couldn't be! Your name, sir?
-->'''Draco:''' Draco Malfoy.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' It is you! Draco Malfoy. I never thought I'd be so honored, sir.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(completely serious)'' Oh. It's good to meet someone who knows his place.
-->'''Harry:''' I'm delighted to meet you, Mr. Malfoy. Just unutterably delighted. And to be attending Hogwarts in your very year! It makes my heart swoon.
-->'''Draco:''' And it lightens my heart as well to see that I can expect to be treated with the respect due the Malfoy family.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(cheerfully sarcastic)'' Might you deign to shake my hand? I should wish nothing more to put the capper upon this day, nay, this month, indeed, my whole lifetime.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(still completely serious)'' I think you ask an unwarranted familiarity with my person! What have you ever done for the Malfoy family that entitles you to such a request?
-->'''Harry:''' No, no, sir, I understand. I'm sorry for asking. I should be honored to clean your boots, rather.
-->'''Draco:''' Indeed. Though your wish is understandable enough. Tell me, what House do you think you might be sorted into? I'm bound for Slytherin House, of course, like my father Lucius before me. And for you, I should guess House Hufflepuff, or possibly House Elf.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(truthful)'' Professor McGonagall says that I'm the most Ravenclaw person she's ever seen or heard tell of in legend, so much so that Rowena herself would tell me to get out more, whatever that means, and that I'll undoubtedly end up in Ravenclaw House if the Sorting Hat isn't screaming in horror too loudly for the rest of us to make out any words, end quote.
-->'''Draco:''' Wow. Your flattery was great, or I thought so, anyway--you'd do well in Slytherin House, too. Usually it's only my father who gets that sort of groveling. I'm hoping the other Slytherins will suck up to me now I'm at Hogwarts... I guess this is a good sign, then.
-->'''Harry:''' Actually, sorry, I've got no idea who you are really.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(crestfallen)'' Oh come on! Why'd you go and do that then? And how do you not know about the Malfoys? And what are those clothes you're wearing? Are your parents Muggles?
-->'''Harry:''' Two of my parents are dead. My other two parents are Muggles, and they're the ones that raised me.
-->'''Draco:''' What? Who ''are'' you?
-->'''Harry:''' Harry Potter. Pleased to meet you.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(aghast)'' Harry Potter?! ''The'' Harry--
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Harry Potter? ''The'' Harry Potter? Gosh, I've always wanted to meet you!
-->'''Harry:''' Shut up.
-->'''Draco:''' Can I have your autograph? No, wait, I want a picture with you first!
-->'''Harry:''' Shutupshutupshutup.
-->'''Draco:''' I'm just so inexpressibly delighted to meet you!
-->'''Harry:''' ''(politely)'' Burst into flames and die.
-->'''Draco:''' But you're Harry Potter, the glorious saviour of the wizarding world, defeater of the Dark Lord! Everyone's hero, Harry Potter! I've always wanted to be just like you when I grow up so I can defeat Dark Lords too--
--> Lucius Malfoy, enter stage left.
-->'''Lucius:''' ''(outraged)'' Draco, ''what'' are you ''saying''?
--> ''(beat)''
-->'''Harry:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Lucius Malfoy! ''The'' Lucius Malfoy?
-->'''
* When Harry meets Crabbe and Goyle for the first time.
-->'''Harry:''' Hey Draco--Oh my god you have ''minions''!
-->Harry could predict where this conversation was about to go, and he decided in a
-->'''Harry:''' ''(cheerfully sarcastic)'' Good heavens! It couldn't be! Your name, sir?
-->'''Draco:''' Draco Malfoy.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' It is you! Draco Malfoy. I never thought I'd be so honored, sir.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(completely serious)'' Oh. It's good to meet someone who knows his place.
-->'''Harry:''' I'm delighted to meet you, Mr. Malfoy. Just unutterably delighted. And to be attending Hogwarts in your very year! It makes my heart swoon.
-->'''Draco:''' And it lightens my heart as well to see that I can expect to be treated with the respect due the Malfoy family.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(cheerfully sarcastic)'' Might you deign to shake my hand? I should wish nothing more to put the capper upon this day, nay, this month, indeed, my whole lifetime.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(still completely serious)'' I think you ask an unwarranted familiarity with my person! What have you ever done for the Malfoy family that entitles you to such a request?
-->'''Harry:''' No, no, sir, I understand. I'm sorry for asking. I should be honored to clean your boots, rather.
-->'''Draco:''' Indeed. Though your wish is understandable enough. Tell me, what House do you think you might be sorted into? I'm bound for Slytherin House, of course, like my father Lucius before me. And for you, I should guess House Hufflepuff, or possibly House Elf.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(truthful)'' Professor McGonagall says that I'm the most Ravenclaw person she's ever seen or heard tell of in legend, so much so that Rowena herself would tell me to get out more, whatever that means, and that I'll undoubtedly end up in Ravenclaw House if the Sorting Hat isn't screaming in horror too loudly for the rest of us to make out any words, end quote.
-->'''Draco:''' Wow. Your flattery was great, or I thought so, anyway--you'd do well in Slytherin House, too. Usually it's only my father who gets that sort of groveling. I'm hoping the other Slytherins will suck up to me now I'm at Hogwarts... I guess this is a good sign, then.
-->'''Harry:''' Actually, sorry, I've got no idea who you are really.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(crestfallen)'' Oh come on! Why'd you go and do that then? And how do you not know about the Malfoys? And what are those clothes you're wearing? Are your parents Muggles?
-->'''Harry:''' Two of my parents are dead. My other two parents are Muggles, and they're the ones that raised me.
-->'''Draco:''' What? Who ''are'' you?
-->'''Harry:''' Harry Potter. Pleased to meet you.
-->'''Draco:''' ''(aghast)'' Harry Potter?! ''The'' Harry--
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Draco:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Harry Potter? ''The'' Harry Potter? Gosh, I've always wanted to meet you!
-->'''Harry:''' Shut up.
-->'''Draco:''' Can I have your autograph? No, wait, I want a picture with you first!
-->'''Harry:''' Shutupshutupshutup.
-->'''Draco:''' I'm just so inexpressibly delighted to meet you!
-->'''Harry:''' ''(politely)'' Burst into flames and die.
-->'''Draco:''' But you're Harry Potter, the glorious saviour of the wizarding world, defeater of the Dark Lord! Everyone's hero, Harry Potter! I've always wanted to be just like you when I grow up so I can defeat Dark Lords too--
--> Lucius Malfoy, enter stage left.
-->'''Lucius:''' ''(outraged)'' Draco, ''what'' are you ''saying''?
--> ''(beat)''
-->'''Harry:''' ''(mock enthusiasm)'' Lucius Malfoy! ''The'' Lucius Malfoy?
-->'''
* When Harry meets Crabbe and Goyle for the first time.
-->'''Harry:''' Hey Draco--Oh my god you have ''minions''!
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