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* Miku gives Natsumi [[MarshmallowHell a hug]] for her work healing civilians with Haniel. Natsumi is unhappy about this, thinking to herself that she will [[BalefulPolymorph turn Miku into a frog]] if this becomes a common occurrence.
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* When the Spirits manifest their Astral Dresses and Angels for the first time, Yoshino and Natsumi are confused when Zadkiel doesn't immediately appear, right until it appears underneath Yoshino in the form of a [[MiniMecha giant mechanical]] [[HairRaisingHare rabbit]]. This shocks both of them to the point that Natsumi almost passes out.
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* When the Spirits manifest their Astral Dresses and Angels for the first time, Yoshino and Natsumi are confused when Zadkiel doesn't immediately appear, right until it appears underneath Yoshino in the form of a [[MiniMecha giant mechanical]] [[HairRaisingHare rabbit]]. This shocks both of them Natsumi to the point that Natsumi she almost passes out.
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'''Nia:''' ''[Rushes Towards the School, Trips Over A Brick and Falls Breaking Her Glasses]''\\
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* Kurumi, Miku, and Nia are walking toghther when a fan of Miku ask asks for a photo of her, unfortunately, her. Unfortunately, the flash causes Nia to drop her glasses, shattering them, so she asks Kurumi to give her one of her spare glasses, but when Kurumi does:
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** As Mio begins looking for Tohka, she hears the growling of a bear. Tohka is sitting right of it.
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[[AC:Chapter 1]]
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* Kaguya and Yuzuru are racing to school when Yuzuru points out that Kaguya is about to run into two men carrying a sofa, which she dodges. As she turns around to brag to Yuzuru that [[TemptingFate something like that will stop her]], she then [[WatchOutForThatTree runs into a light post]].
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* Kaguya and Yuzuru are racing to school when Yuzuru points out that Kaguya is about to run into two men carrying a sofa, which she dodges. As she turns around to brag to Yuzuru that [[TemptingFate something like that will how such a cliché failed to stop her]], she then [[WatchOutForThatTree runs into a light post]].
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'''Kurumi:''' Probably.\\
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--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? ''[{{Beat}}]'' Wait, why am ''I'' here?
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--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What Why are you doing here? ''[{{Beat}}]'' Wait, why am ''I'' here?here?
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[[AC:Chapter 4]]
