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** In that vein, the ''entire story of Dad 1/Pol's 40th birthday.''
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* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNoReaction just a tad freaked out.]]
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* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/10817466927/dave-what-do-you-think-of-dr-terezi Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Terezi.]] Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNoReaction just a tad freaked out.]]
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* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/92421152504/ta-so-where-are-we-goiing-agaiin-ta-what Sollux and Gamzee interacting with Calliope]]. In particular, Sollux complaining that Gamzee "dragged him away from VideoGame/CandyCrushSaga, then asking Gamzee if they're [[MakeOutKids going to the laundry room]] (Gamzee confirms that they'll do that later), Gamzee ''not'' swearing in front of Calliope and Calliope's adorable comic about [[CatsAreMean a cat that steals rent money from a mouse]] before getting kicked by a knight who bears a very strong resemblance to Dave. And then there's Calliope's little message at the end:
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* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/92421152504/ta-so-where-are-we-goiing-agaiin-ta-what Sollux and Gamzee interacting with Calliope]]. In particular, Sollux complaining that Gamzee "dragged him away from VideoGame/CandyCrushSaga, VideoGame/CandyCrushSaga", then asking Gamzee if they're [[MakeOutKids going to the laundry room]] (Gamzee confirms that they'll do that later), Gamzee ''not'' swearing in front of Calliope and Calliope's adorable comic about [[CatsAreMean a cat that steals rent money from a mouse]] before getting kicked by a knight who bears a very strong resemblance to Dave. And then there's Calliope's little message at the end:
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* Gamzee and Jade [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/27222576527/tc-know-the-dove-is-on-the-motherfuckin-wing-gg#notes singing]] "Come Together" by the Youngbloods, though Gamzee alters some of the lyrics. Then there's Karkat's hilariously over the top response.
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* Gamzee and Jade [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/27222576527/tc-know-the-dove-is-on-the-motherfuckin-wing-gg#notes singing]] "Come Together" by the Youngbloods, though Gamzee alters some of the lyrics. Then there's Karkat's hilariously over the top response.response.
* Karkat's reaction to fall is to kick trees and scream 'Turn green, you fuckers!' at the leaves.
* Karkat's reaction to fall is to kick trees and scream 'Turn green, you fuckers!' at the leaves.
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* Jade got angry at Karkat and told him to go boil his shirt. Karkat just said, "Boil my what?"
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* Jade got angry at Karkat and told him to go boil his shirt. Karkat [[SarcasmFailure just said, said]], "Boil my what?"
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** When Gamzee says that they're going to meet 'Bright Eyes' (his nickname for Calliope), Sollux assumes that he's talking about the band. Gamzee has no clue what he's talking about, and when they actually meet Calliope, Sollux's first line is 'oh, uh, hello liittle giirl who ii2 not conor ober2t'.
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* Gamzee and Jade [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/27222576527/tc-know-the-dove-is-on-the-motherfuckin-wing-gg#notes singing]] "Come Together" by the Youngbloods, though Gamzee alters some of the lyrics. Then there's Karkat's hilariously over the top response.
* Gamzee and Jade [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/27222576527/tc-know-the-dove-is-on-the-motherfuckin-wing-gg#notes singing]] "Come Together" by the Youngbloods, though Gamzee alters some of the lyrics. Then there's Karkat's hilariously over the top response.
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** At one point, a man asks for advice about an ''extremely'' homoerotic dream he had (as in, "all male orgy" levels of homoerotic), Rose and Kanaya's first response is to [[YaoiFangirl hound him]] [[GuyOnGuyIsHot for more details]].
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** At one point, a man asks for advice about an ''extremely'' homoerotic dream he had (as in, "all male orgy" levels of homoerotic), Rose and Kanaya's first response is to [[YaoiFangirl hound him]] [[GuyOnGuyIsHot for more details]].details]].
* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/92421152504/ta-so-where-are-we-goiing-agaiin-ta-what Sollux and Gamzee interacting with Calliope]]. In particular, Sollux complaining that Gamzee "dragged him away from VideoGame/CandyCrushSaga, then asking Gamzee if they're [[MakeOutKids going to the laundry room]] (Gamzee confirms that they'll do that later), Gamzee ''not'' swearing in front of Calliope and Calliope's adorable comic about [[CatsAreMean a cat that steals rent money from a mouse]] before getting kicked by a knight who bears a very strong resemblance to Dave. And then there's Calliope's little message at the end:
-->that's only ok for my comic we dont kick real cats its mean
* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/92421152504/ta-so-where-are-we-goiing-agaiin-ta-what Sollux and Gamzee interacting with Calliope]]. In particular, Sollux complaining that Gamzee "dragged him away from VideoGame/CandyCrushSaga, then asking Gamzee if they're [[MakeOutKids going to the laundry room]] (Gamzee confirms that they'll do that later), Gamzee ''not'' swearing in front of Calliope and Calliope's adorable comic about [[CatsAreMean a cat that steals rent money from a mouse]] before getting kicked by a knight who bears a very strong resemblance to Dave. And then there's Calliope's little message at the end:
-->that's only ok for my comic we dont kick real cats its mean
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* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness."
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* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, [[ARareSentence with Nicki Minaj as our witness.witness]]."
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* Rose and Kanaya playing dream therapists. And what happens when Equius finds out.
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* Rose and Kanaya playing dream therapists. And what happens when Equius finds out.out.
** At one point, a man asks for advice about an ''extremely'' homoerotic dream he had (as in, "all male orgy" levels of homoerotic), Rose and Kanaya's first response is to [[YaoiFangirl hound him]] [[GuyOnGuyIsHot for more details]].
** At one point, a man asks for advice about an ''extremely'' homoerotic dream he had (as in, "all male orgy" levels of homoerotic), Rose and Kanaya's first response is to [[YaoiFangirl hound him]] [[GuyOnGuyIsHot for more details]].
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* Gamzee wishing Dave luck twice, because he forget he already did it the first time.
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* Gamzee wishing Dave luck twice, because he forget he already did it the first time.time.
* Rose and Kanaya playing dream therapists. And what happens when Equius finds out.
* Rose and Kanaya playing dream therapists. And what happens when Equius finds out.
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* Kanaya explaining about how plants can be edible, and then started explaining all the ways in which one can [[AccidentalInnuendo eat roses.]]
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* Kanaya explaining about how plants can be edible, and then started explaining all the ways in which one can [[AccidentalInnuendo eat roses.]]]]
* Gamzee wishing Dave luck twice, because he forget he already did it the first time.
* Gamzee wishing Dave luck twice, because he forget he already did it the first time.
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* Kanaya explaining about how plants can be edible, and then started explaining all the ways in which one can eat roses.
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* Kanaya explaining about how plants can be edible, and then started explaining all the ways in which one can [[AccidentalInnuendo eat roses.]]
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* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNoReaction just a tad freaked out.]]
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* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNoReaction just a tad freaked out.]]]]
* Kanaya explaining about how plants can be edible, and then started explaining all the ways in which one can eat roses.
* Kanaya explaining about how plants can be edible, and then started explaining all the ways in which one can eat roses.
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** Earlier in the story, Sollux takes the liberty of kindly informing the new orderly that getting a urethral piercing at home can only end badly- i.e. his penis will 'get infected and fall off, for fuck’th thake!'. He would have been punched, had Gamzee not come to the rescue.
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** Earlier in the story, Sollux takes the liberty of kindly informing the new orderly that getting a (who's busy reading stuff about urethral piercing on his smartphone instead of watching them) that getting such body modification at home can only end badly- i.e. his penis will 'get "get infected and fall off, for fuck’th thake!'.thake!". He would have been punched, had Gamzee not come to the rescue.
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* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNo just a tad freaked out.]]
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* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNo [[NoJustNoReaction just a tad freaked out.]]
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** The ending, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee where Karkat is suddenly distracted from his blind rage upon seeing Clubs Deuce]] (Karkat's portrayed as a Midnight Crew fanboy in Brainbent).
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** The ending, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee where Karkat is suddenly distracted from his blind rage upon seeing Clubs Deuce]] (Karkat's portrayed as a Midnight Crew fanboy in Brainbent).Brainbent).
* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNo just a tad freaked out.]]
* Dave was asked what he thought of Terezi. Rose summed up his response as 'Fascinating. So, in essence, Ms Pyrope can best be described in your opinion as being too legit to quit.' Dave was... [[NoJustNo just a tad freaked out.]]
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** Mituna's... X-rated comments during that entire post.
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* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/9473551319/karkat-is-a-vengeful-god Karkat Is A Vengeful God]]. Title says it all, really.
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* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/9473551319/karkat-is-a-vengeful-god Karkat Is A Vengeful God]]. Title says it all, really.really.
** The ending, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee where Karkat is suddenly distracted from his blind rage upon seeing Clubs Deuce]] (Karkat's portrayed as a Midnight Crew fanboy in Brainbent).
** The ending, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee where Karkat is suddenly distracted from his blind rage upon seeing Clubs Deuce]] (Karkat's portrayed as a Midnight Crew fanboy in Brainbent).
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* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness."
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* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness.""
* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/9473551319/karkat-is-a-vengeful-god Karkat Is A Vengeful God]]. Title says it all, really.
* [[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/9473551319/karkat-is-a-vengeful-god Karkat Is A Vengeful God]]. Title says it all, really.
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* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness.”"
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* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness.”""
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* Gamzee going [[BerserkButton berserk]]...[[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/18611915426/gamzee-do-you-ever-get-sober-freakouts over Paula Deen]].
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* Gamzee going [[BerserkButton berserk]]...[[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/18611915426/gamzee-do-you-ever-get-sober-freakouts over Paula Deen]].Deen]].
* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness.”"
* Clubs Deuce telling Sollux that he has to promise to apologise, "Right here, in this car, with Nicki Minaj as our witness.”"
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* At one point, Dave complains that they name everything after him. Sollux named the new computer Dave, and when Dave tried to rename it, it quoted ''2001: A Space Odyssey at him''.
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* At one point, Dave complains that they name everything after him. Sollux named the new computer Dave, and when Dave tried to rename it, it quoted ''2001: A Space Odyssey at him''.him''.
* Gamzee going [[BerserkButton berserk]]...[[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/18611915426/gamzee-do-you-ever-get-sober-freakouts over Paula Deen]].
* Gamzee going [[BerserkButton berserk]]...[[http://brainbent.tumblr.com/post/18611915426/gamzee-do-you-ever-get-sober-freakouts over Paula Deen]].
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* Sollux: "Who ii2 thii2 tiiny walkiing ragega2m and why doe2 hii2 head keep makiing noii2e2?"
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* Sollux: "Who ii2 thii2 tiiny walkiing ragega2m and why doe2 hii2 head keep makiing noii2e2?"noii2e2?"
* At one point, Dave complains that they name everything after him. Sollux named the new computer Dave, and when Dave tried to rename it, it quoted ''2001: A Space Odyssey at him''.
* At one point, Dave complains that they name everything after him. Sollux named the new computer Dave, and when Dave tried to rename it, it quoted ''2001: A Space Odyssey at him''.
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* Nepeta: Be the bacon Cthulhu.Cthulhu.
* Sollux: "Who ii2 thii2 tiiny walkiing ragega2m and why doe2 hii2 head keep makiing noii2e2?"
* Sollux: "Who ii2 thii2 tiiny walkiing ragega2m and why doe2 hii2 head keep makiing noii2e2?"
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* Jade got angry at Karkat and told him to go boil his shirt. Karkat just said, "Boil my what?"
* Nepeta: Be the bacon Cthulhu.
* Nepeta: Be the bacon Cthulhu.
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** Earlier in the story, Sollux takes the liberty of kindly informing the new orderly that getting a urethral piercing at home will result in his penis, quote, 'get infected and fall off, for fuck’th thake!', unquote. He would have been punched, had Gamzee not come to the rescue.
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** Earlier in the story, Sollux takes the liberty of kindly informing the new orderly that getting a urethral piercing at home can only end badly- i.e. his penis will result in his penis, quote, 'get infected and fall off, for fuck’th thake!', unquote.thake!'. He would have been punched, had Gamzee not come to the rescue.
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** Earlier in the story, Sollux takes the liberty of kindly informing the new orderly that getting a urethral piercing at home will result in his penis, quote, 'get infected and fall off, for fuck’th thake!', unquote. He would have been punched, had Gamzee not come to the rescue.
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* Sollux and Gamzee made a cake... cake and had a fight with icing... and ended up getting it on, right on the kitchen floor, while still covered in icing.
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* [=VastDerp=] kindly provided a translation of everything Latula and Mituna said (i.e. provided a non-quirk version) and translated Mituna answering Latula with 'Fuck you' as 'As you wish, my flower'.
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* John's reaction when he's asked why he's in the institution:
-->'''John''': (''blushing'') I did the "Windy Thing" inpublic.public.
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-->'''John''': (''blushing'') I did the "Windy Thing" in
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John's reaction when he's asked why he's in the institution:
-->'''John''': (''blushing'') I did the "Windy Thing" in public.
-->'''John''': (''blushing'') I did the "Windy Thing" in public.