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* Jaune got a mission for Team JNPR... but unfortunately, it was with Port. Then he shows up behind Jaune when he's telling them this, and Jaune manages to backtrack in time.
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* Jaune got a mission for Team JNPR... but unfortunately, it was with Port. Then [[RightBehindMe he shows up behind Jaune when he's telling them this, this]], and Jaune manages to backtrack [[VerbalBackPedal backtrack]] in time.
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--->'''Ruby:''' I didn't even know someone could get that kind of distance with a spit take! Too bad about that girl's shirt, though.
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--->'''Ruby:''' I didn't even know someone could get that kind of distance with a spit take! SpitTake! Too bad about that girl's shirt, though.
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** Gladion's attempt to intimidate them fails miserably, especially since he's overheating because he was dumb enough to wear all black in the tropical Alola - when he tries to say that underestimating him is a mistake, Casey shoots back that the only mistake is his outfit.
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** Gladion's attempt to intimidate them fails miserably, especially since he's overheating because he was dumb enough to wear all black in the tropical Alola - when he tries to say that underestimating him is a mistake, Casey shoots back that the only mistake is his outfit. Even funnier is that this fic is one of the few places to actually show Gladion overheating because he wears all black in Alola, the games, anime and manga never mentioned this as a problem.
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* Seeing Nebby evolve into Solgaleo and start tearing the Grimm apart, Yang decides to make a quip to help break the tension everyone's been feeling since the Grimm stopped acting docile. Lillie can't help but double over in laughter in response to the quip.
-->'''Yang:''' "Did Nebby get a haircut, or something? Because I just can't place it, but…"
-->'''Yang:''' "Did Nebby get a haircut, or something? Because I just can't place it, but…"
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* Yang forces Damien to battle Torchic himself. Ruby steals his belt so he cannot use his other Pokémon, but it also makes his pants fall. As he tries to run away while pulling up his pants, Torchic blasts him in the butt with Ember.
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* A large group of Grimm Attack Azalea Town, but have to go through a Pokémon habitat to do so. See the epic battle between... a horde of Apathy and a herd of Slowpokes.
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* A large group of Grimm Attack attack Azalea Town, but have to go through a Pokémon habitat to do so. See the epic battle between... a horde of Apathy and a herd of Slowpokes.
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* When a Wormhole opens up at Beacon, Fox Alistair, who's blind, asks if the others can fill him in on what has the rest of them StunnedSilent.
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* When a Wormhole opens up at Beacon, Fox Alistair, who's blind, asks if the others can fill him in on what has the rest of them StunnedSilent.in StunnedSilence.
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* When a Wormhole opens up at Beacon, Fox Alistair, who's blind, asks if the others can fill him in on what has the rest of them StunnedSilent.
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* To figure out where the Wormholes they were making opened up the research team used what Ruby calls the "Mark I Ultra Wormhole Scanning Device". Or, as Blake interjects, a camera duct-taped to a broom handle.
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* After months of worrying about team RWBY stuck in another world, the rescue team is a little indignant to find out they've essentially been spending their time in a tropical paradise.
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* Ruby, Weiss, and Blake fall over each other when they get out of the Wormhole at Beacon.
** Ruby uses her Semblance to get out of the pile, leaving the other two to fall to the ground.
** Ruby uses her Semblance to get out of the pile, leaving the other two to fall to the ground.
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-->'''Ruby:''' I didn't even know someone could get that kind of distance with a spit take! Too bad about that girl's shirt, though.
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* As a gun nut, Ruby dismissing the Desert Braviary owned by Lt. Surge on the basis of it not being powerful enough is hilarious. The [[HandCannon Desert Eagle]] is known for being impractical due to high recoil, high weight, high encumbrance, and low magazine size, with its [[AwesomeYetImpractical overkill factor not getting even close to justifying all these flaws]]. Yet to Ruby, the Desert Eagle might as well be a snub nosed pistol trying to be a Thompson machine gun.
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* As a gun nut, Ruby dismissing the Desert Braviary owned by Lt. Surge on the basis of it not being powerful enough is hilarious. The [[HandCannon Desert Eagle]] is known for being impractical due to high recoil, high weight, high encumbrance, and low magazine size, with its [[AwesomeYetImpractical [[AwesomeButImpractical overkill factor not getting even close to justifying all these flaws]]. Yet to Ruby, the Desert Eagle might as well be a snub nosed pistol trying to be a Thompson machine gun.
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* Salem bluntly noting that [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder Faba]] is going to "betray the ''shit'' out of [her]".
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* Faba and Watts are forced to escape to Remnant, but Faba takes the time to copy the data from the computers and then wipe them clean. He gloats to Salem that it will take them years to recover the data. Cut to an IT technician saying it will take an hour and mocking Faba for not considering the backup servers.
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*** Someone has made [[https://www.deviantart.com/kijker0/art/Fanart-Boldores-And-Boomsticks-Gary-shot-down-922707748 fanart of the picture.]]
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* When a Salandit attacks Yang when team RWBY arrives at Lusamine's office, the Aether Foundation workers inside thinking that she's a Grimm, Yang not only snarks at the person stating the obvious, but notes that she's detecting a pattern with the species.
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** Prior to this, one of the Team Rocket Pokémon manages to [[BerserkButton graze Yang's hair]]. We then cut away to a nearby Gyrados who notices the commotion and [[HorrifyingTheHorror decides to spend its day on the other side of the lake]].
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** Prior to this, one of the Team Rocket Pokémon manages to [[BerserkButton graze Yang's hair]]. We then cut away to a nearby Gyrados Gyarados who notices the commotion and [[HorrifyingTheHorror decides to spend its day on the other side of the lake]].
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** Ruby, of course, acts exactly like you think she would at the sight of a huge doggy.
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** Ruby, of course, acts [[CutenessProximity exactly like you think she would would]] at the sight of a huge doggy.
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* When the group arrives at Professor Oak's lab, Weiss is ambushed by a Glomp from Muk (and saved by Bulbasaur).
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* Noticing how nervous Weiss is around the Evolution Stones, Oak takes the time to troll her and juggle them.
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* Noticing how nervous Weiss is around the Evolution Stones, Stones[[note]]They're the form Dust takes in this universe, and are essentially hyper-charged Dust crystals[[/note]], Oak takes the time to troll her and juggle them.
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* Blake is oddly quiet when Gary shows off his Arcanine. Weiss pokes her shoulder, only for Blake to dissolve into shadows. The real Blake is already up the nearest tree, [[BlatantLies gaining the high ground]].
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* Blake is oddly quiet when Gary shows off his Arcanine. Weiss Yang pokes her shoulder, only for Blake to dissolve into shadows. The real Blake is already up the nearest tree, [[BlatantLies gaining the high ground]].
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* Faba releases the hundred or so Grimm held in Aether Paradise, confident that Team RWBY will never able to get through them. Watts facepalms in response before explaining that's only a speed bump. Faba's reaction is loud enough to be heard through his soundproofing.
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* Blake is oddly quiet when Gary shows off his Arcanine. Yang pokes her shoulder, only for Blake to dissolve into shadows. The real Blake is already up the nearest tree, [[BlatantLies gaining the high ground]].
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* Blake is oddly quiet when Gary shows off his Arcanine. Yang Weiss pokes her shoulder, only for Blake to dissolve into shadows. The real Blake is already up the nearest tree, [[BlatantLies gaining the high ground]].
** When Arcanine shows off its Flamethrower, Blake starts muttering that it's a Hellhound, then pinches herself and asks why she can't wake up.
* As a gun nut, Ruby dismissing the Desert Braviary owned by Lt. Surge on the basis of it not being powerful enough is hilarious. The [[HandCannon Desert Eagle]] is known for being impractical due to high recoil, high weight, high encumbrance, and low magazine size, with its [[AwesomeYetImpractical overkill factor not getting even close to justifying all these flaws]]. Yet to Ruby, the Desert Eagle might as well be a snub nosed pistol trying to be a Thompson machine gun.
* A Geist attempts to possess a porta-potty, and instantly regrets it.
* A Geist attempts to possess a porta-potty, and instantly regrets it.
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* As a gun nut, Ruby dismissing the Desert Braviary owned by Lt. Surge on the basis of it not being powerful enough is hilarious. The [[HandCannon Desert Eagle]] is known for being impractical due to high recoil, high weight, high encumbrance, and low magazine size, with its [[AwesomeYetImpractical overkill factor not getting even close to justifying all these flaws]]. Yet to Ruby, the Desert Eagle might as well be a snub nosed pistol trying to be a Thompson machine gun.
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* When Ruby and Weiss go through Digglett's Tunnel their Pokémon find the local Diglett sing "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ytWz0qVvBZ0 Diggy Diggy Hole]]" while they dig. Nox notes that the Digglett back home sing something closer to "[[WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs Hi Ho]]", and the humans can't seem to tell the difference.
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* When Ruby and Weiss go through Digglett's Diglett's Tunnel their Pokémon find the local Diglett sing "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ytWz0qVvBZ0 Diggy Diggy Hole]]" while they dig. Nox notes that the Digglett back home sing something closer to "[[WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs Hi Ho]]", and the humans can't seem to tell the difference.
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* Cue SmashCut where Team RWBY are standing on top of a pile of dead Grimm, the portal they just ran through is now gone, and Ruby, Weiss, and Blake are glaring at Yang.*\\
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* Why did Guzma give Gladion the job of taking Team RWBY down a peg, despite not thinking that he could do it? Either way, it would be funny.
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** After their latest battle with Yang, Tapu Koko gets impatient with the ceremonial grandstanding of Hala's and steals the Fightinium Z out of his hand, much to Hala's visible annoyance.
* A Cenitaur breaks off its acid attack and almost desperately scrabbles at the edge of its burrow before Diglett drag it back under. When Whisper teleports over she hears the Diglett whooping it up down below.
* A Cenitaur breaks off its acid attack and almost desperately scrabbles at the edge of its burrow before Diglett drag it back under. When Whisper teleports over she hears the Diglett whooping it up down below.
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** After their latest battle with Yang, Tapu Koko gets impatient with the Hala's ceremonial grandstanding of Hala's and steals the Fightinium Z out of his hand, pocket, much to Hala's visible annoyance.
* A Cenitaur breaks off its acid attack and almost desperately scrabbles at the edge of its burrow before Diglett drag it back under. When Whisper teleports over she hears the Diglett whooping it up downbelow.below, complete with war cries.
-->'''Diglett:''' [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Baruk Diglett! Diglett ai-mênu!]]
* A Cenitaur breaks off its acid attack and almost desperately scrabbles at the edge of its burrow before Diglett drag it back under. When Whisper teleports over she hears the Diglett whooping it up down
-->'''Diglett:''' [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Baruk Diglett! Diglett ai-mênu!]]
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** Gladion's attempt to intimidate them fails miserably, especially since he's overheating because he was dumb enough to wear all black in the tropical Alola.
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* Guzma keeps trying to make grandiose speeches to reassure the other Skulls while Team RWBY storms Po Town but repeatedly cuts himself off as they calmly use their powers to make their way up to him.
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* As a gun nut, Ruby dismissing the Desert Braviary owned by Lt Surge on the basis of it not being powerful enough is hilarious. The [[HandCannon Desert Eagle]] is known for being impractical due to high recoil, high weight, high encumbrance, and low magazine size, with its [[AwesomeYetImpractical overkill factor not getting even close to justifying all these flaws]]. Yet to Ruby, the Desert Eagle might as well be a snub nosed pistol trying to be a Thompson machine gun.
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* As a gun nut, Ruby dismissing the Desert Braviary owned by Lt Lt. Surge on the basis of it not being powerful enough is hilarious. The [[HandCannon Desert Eagle]] is known for being impractical due to high recoil, high weight, high encumbrance, and low magazine size, with its [[AwesomeYetImpractical overkill factor not getting even close to justifying all these flaws]]. Yet to Ruby, the Desert Eagle might as well be a snub nosed pistol trying to be a Thompson machine gun.
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!'''''All'' spoilers on this page are left unmarked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!'''
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!'''''All'' spoilers on this page are left unmarked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!'''[[{{Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned}} You Have Been Warned!]]'''
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'''Yang''': ''I said I was sorry!''
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* Cue SmashCut where Team RWBY are standing on top of a pile of dead Grimm, the portal they just ran through is now gone, and Ruby, Weiss, and Blake are glaring at Yang.*\\
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--> Yang lowered her voice to a husky contralto, using seductive tones that had never failed to get the undivided attention of any guy she directed them at. "Oh, it would be so nice to have a big strong man to show us around…"\\
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--> '''Yang:''' [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged WHAT JUST]] ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5XJKbvEPuFQ&feature=youtu.be&t=1m47s/ HAPPENED!?]]''
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