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** Yang's eaction to a Golbat's [[{{Cephalothorax}} physiology]], openly wondering whre it's ''everything'' is.
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** Yang's eaction reaction to a Golbat's [[{{Cephalothorax}} physiology]], openly wondering whre where it's ''everything'' is.
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* Apparently Weiss got one of her Z-Crystals by beating Totem Oricorio in a ''hula-dance contest''.
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** Yang's eaction to a Golbat's [[{{Cephalothorax}} physiology]], openly wondering whre it's ''everything'' is.
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* The RunningGag of [=CRDL=] trying to throw their weight around the Pokemon Trainers (specifically [[RuleOfThree Gary, Casey, and Lillie]]), only to get humiliated in nearly the exact same way; one pinned to the ground, one held aloft telepathically (except for with Casey, where they're being held by Pidgeot), one in a grapple, and Cardin with his head in a Pokemon's jaws, nervously trying to diffuse the situation.
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* Yang catches Whisper reading ''Ninjas of Love''. She does a bit of teasing only to be embarassed by a question Whisper asks about the book's content.
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* Yang catches Whisper reading ''Ninjas of Love''. She does a bit of teasing only Whisper begs Yang not to be embarassed by a question tell Weiss.
** Then Whisper asks her a question about a part of thebook's content.story.
--->'''Whisper:''' Is this actually possible? Because I didn't think humans could bend like that!\\
'''Yang:''' ''(reads the paragraph and [[LuminescentBlush blushes]])'' Uh... wow. That's... ''wow''. ''([[{{Beat}} she clears her throat,]] [[HeadTiltinglyKinky tilts her head]])'' Um... maybe? If they practiced yoga for long enough first?
* Cinder calls Salem to tell her that not only was she unable to kill Absol as ordered, but Team RWBY has returned and people from Earth have made diplomatic contact with Ozpin and Ironwood. When she mentions Nebby, Salem cuts the call, leaving Cinder stunned... and she gets a call from ''Hazel''.
-->As soon as she accepted the call and raised the scroll to her ear, Cinder could hear distant crashes, the rumble of collapsing stone, and an unending ''shriek'' of pure, elemental, unholy '''''rage'''''.\\
It was enough that she barely made out Hazel's blunt, forceful, and slightly ''terrified'' question.\\
"[[PunctuatedForEmphasis What. Did. You. DO?!]]"
* Weiss and Yang ''finally'' get to tease Jaune for taking so long to realize Pyrrha's feelings for him.
* Blake mentions she got the Ghost Z-Crystal, but doesn't remember how. A flashback shows that she, Shade, and Mal took [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Forget-Me-Shots]] to [[BrainBleach erase]] what they saw when Totem Mimikyu used its Z-Move on them. Apparently, it was so disturbing that Mal [[DiseaseBleach turned into his Shiny version]].
-->'''Mal:''' WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN CANNOT BE UNSEEN!
* When Jacques shows up to pull Weiss out of Beacon accompanied by his bodyguards, Weiss decides to pull his leg first.
-->'''Jacques:''' Weiss. ''We are leaving. Immediately.''\\
'''Weiss:''' So soon after arriving? That's unfortunate, but I know how busy you are.
** Then, when Jacques claims her behavior isn't proper of a Schnee, Weiss fires back by reminding him he's not a Schnee by birth, and states that perhaps ''he'' should learn from ''her'' example.
--->'''Weiss:''' ''(thinking)'' My, turning that shade of purple ''can't'' be healthy.
** Then Whisper asks her a question about a part of the
--->'''Whisper:''' Is this actually possible? Because I didn't think humans could bend like that!\\
'''Yang:''' ''(reads the paragraph and [[LuminescentBlush blushes]])'' Uh... wow. That's... ''wow''. ''([[{{Beat}} she clears her throat,]] [[HeadTiltinglyKinky tilts her head]])'' Um... maybe? If they practiced yoga for long enough first?
* Cinder calls Salem to tell her that not only was she unable to kill Absol as ordered, but Team RWBY has returned and people from Earth have made diplomatic contact with Ozpin and Ironwood. When she mentions Nebby, Salem cuts the call, leaving Cinder stunned... and she gets a call from ''Hazel''.
-->As soon as she accepted the call and raised the scroll to her ear, Cinder could hear distant crashes, the rumble of collapsing stone, and an unending ''shriek'' of pure, elemental, unholy '''''rage'''''.\\
It was enough that she barely made out Hazel's blunt, forceful, and slightly ''terrified'' question.\\
"[[PunctuatedForEmphasis What. Did. You. DO?!]]"
* Weiss and Yang ''finally'' get to tease Jaune for taking so long to realize Pyrrha's feelings for him.
* Blake mentions she got the Ghost Z-Crystal, but doesn't remember how. A flashback shows that she, Shade, and Mal took [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Forget-Me-Shots]] to [[BrainBleach erase]] what they saw when Totem Mimikyu used its Z-Move on them. Apparently, it was so disturbing that Mal [[DiseaseBleach turned into his Shiny version]].
-->'''Mal:''' WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN CANNOT BE UNSEEN!
* When Jacques shows up to pull Weiss out of Beacon accompanied by his bodyguards, Weiss decides to pull his leg first.
-->'''Jacques:''' Weiss. ''We are leaving. Immediately.''\\
'''Weiss:''' So soon after arriving? That's unfortunate, but I know how busy you are.
** Then, when Jacques claims her behavior isn't proper of a Schnee, Weiss fires back by reminding him he's not a Schnee by birth, and states that perhaps ''he'' should learn from ''her'' example.
--->'''Weiss:''' ''(thinking)'' My, turning that shade of purple ''can't'' be healthy.
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* Yang catches Whisper reading ''Ninjas of Love''. She does a bit of teasing only to be embarassed by a question Whisper asks about the book's content.
* Even Team CRDL supports Weiss when she stands up to her father. Not because they agree with the sentiment, but because everyone else is and even they wouldn't ruin the moment.
* Even Team CRDL supports Weiss when she stands up to her father. Not because they agree with the sentiment, but because everyone else is and even they wouldn't ruin the moment.
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** When talking to Kali and Ghira about it, Ruby tries to pretend that Blake hates that kind of stuff... and can't even finish the ''sentence'' with a straight face before she and Yang crack up. It's then revealed that Blake hides said literature ''behind their textbooks'', and somehow thinks that they aren't aware of it.
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* Ghira's fury when he learns what Adam did interrupts Ozpin and Ironwood's chess match... much to the latter's relief, since his military skill does ''not'' translate to the game, to Ozpin's amusement.
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* When Weiss points out how bad Blake's PaperThinDisguise was (enrolling under her own name, which is well known as that of Menagerie's leaders, and only having her ribbon to hide her Faunus features), Blake replies that it ''worked''.
* Winter is described as trying to flirt with Riley - and Lucario is {{Face Palm}}ing because Winter is doing a terrible job and Riley is completely oblivious.
* Winter is described as trying to flirt with Riley - and Lucario is {{Face Palm}}ing because Winter is doing a terrible job and Riley is completely oblivious.
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* Marian gets incredibly flustered after watching Lux evolve.
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* A student pipes up to ask Glynda whether the three-on-four matchup of Ruby and her Pokémon vs Team CRDL is unfair, which she admits is the case.
-->'''Glynda:''' As Huntsmen and Huntresses, unfair matchups and poor odds are simply a fact of life, and one must be prepared to deal with them. Team CRDL will simply need to buckle down and try their best.
-->'''Glynda:''' As Huntsmen and Huntresses, unfair matchups and poor odds are simply a fact of life, and one must be prepared to deal with them. Team CRDL will simply need to buckle down and try their best.
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* Taiyang's reaction when he realizes that Pyrrha's in love with Jaune while the latter is ObliviousToLove: {{dope slap}}ping him and shouting at him to ask Pyrrha out.
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* When Sun tries to find Blake in her room by looking through the window, he accidentally steps on Mal's tail. When Blake at the floor outside, she finds Mal wrecking Sun.
* During the fight with Team SSSN, Blake just sits back and lets Shade's illusions keep the boys distracted while she and Mal toss an attack every once in a while.
* During the fight with Team SSSN, Blake just sits back and lets Shade's illusions keep the boys distracted while she and Mal toss an attack every once in a while.
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* When Casey's Pokédex fails to identify Silvally, she complains that she ''just'' got it fixed.
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* When Casey's Pokédex fails to identify Silvally, she complains that [[CallBack she ''just'' got it fixed.]]
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* Lux and Nox try to get Sabra out of her shock at seeing Yang fight Tapu Koko by using ReversePsychology on her. Unfortunately, this works a bit ''too'' well, and Sabra promptly tries to gnaw off Yang's arm.
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* Lux and Nox try to get Sabra out of her shock at seeing Yang fight Tapu Koko by using ReversePsychology on her. Unfortunately, this works a bit ''too'' well, and Sabra promptly tries to gnaw off Yang's arm. While Yang and the rest of her team were explaining how Aura can protect the user from injuries. The conversation continues while Yang nonchalantly pries Sabra off her arm.
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* Jaune got a mission for Team JNPR... but unfortunately, it was with Port. Then [[RightBehindMe he shows up behind Jaune when he's telling them this]], and Jaune manages to [[VerbalBackPedal backtrack]] in time.
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* Jaune got a mission for Team JNPR... but unfortunately, it was with Port. Then [[RightBehindMe he shows up behind Jaune when he's telling them this]], and Jaune manages to [[VerbalBackPedal [[VerbalBackspace backtrack]] in time.
