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--->'''[Yumi rolled her eyes, as if the act was too much for her to handle.]'''
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-->'''Haruka:''' I'm gonna bet the class wasn't on fire safety, hm?
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-->'''Haruka:''' I'm ''I'm gonna bet the class wasn't on fire safety, hm?hm?''
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* Haruka and Kana having a "heated debate" and Aiko not knowing what a [[UsefulNotes/FurryFandom furry]] is. ItMakesSenseInContext.
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* Haruka and Kana having a "heated debate" and Aiko not knowing what a [[UsefulNotes/FurryFandom furry]] is. ItMakesSenseInContext.
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* Haruka's "apology" to the other girls for how she acted yesterday. It's the second time she's apologized and taken it back immediately after, too.
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* Haruka's "apology" to the other girls for how she acted yesterday. It's the second time she's apologized and taken it back immediately after, immediately, too.
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-->'''Haruka:''' Hey - so! I'm just like, sorry I guess. ''[[BackhandedApology ᴮᵘᵗ ᴵ'ᵐ ⁿᵒᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ˢᵒʳʳʸ, ᴵ ᵈᶦᵈⁿ'ᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵈᵒ ᵃⁿʸᵗʰᶦⁿᵍ, ˢᵒ ʷʰᵃᵗᵉᵛᵉʳ, ʲᵘˢᵗ, ᴵ'ᵐ ˢᵒʳʳʸ, ᴵ ᵍᵘᵉˢˢ, ᵒᵏᵃʸ.]]''
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-->'''Haruka:''' Hey - so! I'm just like, sorry I guess. ''[[BackhandedApology ᴮᵘᵗ ᴵ'ᵐ ⁿᵒᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ˢᵒʳʳʸ, ᴵ ᵈᶦᵈⁿ'ᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵈᵒ ᵃⁿʸᵗʰᶦⁿᵍ, ˢᵒ ʷʰᵃᵗᵉᵛᵉʳ, ʲᵘˢᵗ, ᴵ'ᵐ ˢᵒʳʳʸ, ᴵ ᵍᵘᵉˢˢ, ᵒᵏᵃʸ.Bᴜᴛ I'ᴍ ɴᴏᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴛʜᴀᴛ sᴏʀʀʏ, I ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴅᴏ ᴀɴʏᴛʜɪɴɢ, sᴏ ᴡʜᴀᴛᴇᴠᴇʀ, ᴊᴜsᴛ, I'ᴍ sᴏʀʀʏ, I ɢᴜᴇss, ᴏᴋᴀʏ.]]''
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-->'''Haruka:''' Hey - so! I'm just like, sorry I guess. ''[[BackhandedApology But I'm not even that sorry, I didn't even do anything, so whatever, just, I'm sorry, I guess, okay.]]''
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-->'''Haruka:''' Hey - so! I'm just like, sorry I guess. ''[[BackhandedApology But I'm not even that sorry, I didn't even do anything, so whatever, just, I'm sorry, I guess, okay.ᴮᵘᵗ ᴵ'ᵐ ⁿᵒᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ˢᵒʳʳʸ, ᴵ ᵈᶦᵈⁿ'ᵗ ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵈᵒ ᵃⁿʸᵗʰᶦⁿᵍ, ˢᵒ ʷʰᵃᵗᵉᵛᵉʳ, ʲᵘˢᵗ, ᴵ'ᵐ ˢᵒʳʳʸ, ᴵ ᵍᵘᵉˢˢ, ᵒᵏᵃʸ.]]''
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-->'''[Player Name]:''' Why are you here so early?
-->'''Haruka:''' I want to get to school early so we can work out a strategy. We might even be able to switch groups around.
-->'''[Player Name]:''' We can't change our groups around.
-->'''[A thud against the door sounded. I can only assume Haruka had slapped the door.]'''
-->'''Haruka:''' Don't be so negative! I'm sure we can convince someone to change. Or force them.
-->'''[Player Name]:''' Haruka, you need to let this go. We're working with them, you might as well get used to it.
-->'''Haruka:''' I want to get to school early so we can work out a strategy. We might even be able to switch groups around.
-->'''[Player Name]:''' We can't change our groups around.
-->'''[A thud against the door sounded. I can only assume Haruka had slapped the door.]'''
-->'''Haruka:''' Don't be so negative! I'm sure we can convince someone to change. Or force them.
-->'''[Player Name]:''' Haruka, you need to let this go. We're working with them, you might as well get used to it.
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-->'''Haruka:''' I want to get to school early so we can work out a strategy. We might even be able to switch groups around.
-->'''[Player Name]:''' We can't change our groups around.
-->'''[A thud against the door sounded. I can only assume Haruka had slapped the door.]'''
-->'''Haruka:''' Don't be so negative! I'm sure we can convince someone to change. Or force them.
-->'''[Player Name]:''' Haruka, you need to let this go. We're working with them, you might as well get used to it.
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--->'''Haruka:''' I never did get why you liked her. I guess she's [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], and [[HeadTurningBeauty pretty]], and [[BrainyBrunette smart]], and [[YouAnsweredYourOwnQuestion smells nice, but like, what else?]]
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--->'''Haruka:''' I never did get why you liked her. I guess she's [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], and [[HeadTurningBeauty pretty]], and [[BrainyBrunette smart]], and [[SmellsSexy smells nice]], [[YouAnsweredYourOwnQuestion smells nice, but like, what else?]]
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--->'''Yumi:''' ''"Why'd you choose me? Why not the lovely Haruka?"''
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--->'''Yumi:''' ''"Why'd you choose me? Why not the lovely [[SarcasmMode lovely]] Haruka?"''
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--->'''[I snapped my other hand to my mouth, as if that'd kill the laughter and the blushing. The fact she could write rather than speak had the hidden benefit of being able to be so brash.]'''
--->'''[I snatched the pen up, and shot Yumi a look of defiance.]'''
--->'''[Player Choice]:'''
--->'''[Don't make me regret my choice of partner.]'''
--->'''[I've got a whole year to settle that.]'''
--->'''[Are you always this crass?]'''
--->'''[I snatched the pen up, and shot Yumi a look of defiance.]'''
--->'''[Player Choice]:'''
--->'''[Don't make me regret my choice of partner.]'''
--->'''[I've got a whole year to settle that.]'''
--->'''[Are you always this crass?]'''
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[[folder: Yumi's Route]]
* Yumi teasing the MC.
--->'''[Yumi smirked as she dug out a notebook. She had two, one for class, and one... For me. Or rather, for anyone aside from Aiko. No one else spoke sign language that I knew of. She set to sprawling her question, and slid the book when she was done.]'''
--->'''Yumi:''' ''"Why'd you choose me? Why not the lovely Haruka?"''
--->'''[Player Name]:''' I thought the change of pace would be a good idea this year.
--->'''Yumi:''' ''"So no deep, unbridled passion you're carrying for me, then?"''
--->'''[I snapped my hand to my mouth as I read that, to mask the sound of shock and laughter. Yumi cackled in her unique way, her voice laden with whatever prevented her speech. It wasn't quite broken...More, fragmented, like it resonated from the wrong spot in her throat.]'''
--->'''[Player Name]:''' That isn't it, no.
--->'''Yumi:''' ''"I low-balled that to you. You could've easily lost your virginity before college. Ah, I guess you have it that long, you get attached."''
[[folder: Yumi's Route]]
* Yumi teasing the MC.
--->'''[Yumi smirked as she dug out a notebook. She had two, one for class, and one... For me. Or rather, for anyone aside from Aiko. No one else spoke sign language that I knew of. She set to sprawling her question, and slid the book when she was done.]'''
--->'''Yumi:''' ''"Why'd you choose me? Why not the lovely Haruka?"''
--->'''[Player Name]:''' I thought the change of pace would be a good idea this year.
--->'''Yumi:''' ''"So no deep, unbridled passion you're carrying for me, then?"''
--->'''[I snapped my hand to my mouth as I read that, to mask the sound of shock and laughter. Yumi cackled in her unique way, her voice laden with whatever prevented her speech. It wasn't quite broken...More, fragmented, like it resonated from the wrong spot in her throat.]'''
--->'''[Player Name]:''' That isn't it, no.
--->'''Yumi:''' ''"I low-balled that to you. You could've easily lost your virginity before college. Ah, I guess you have it that long, you get attached."''
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--->'''Haruka:''' I never did get why you liked her. [[YouAnsweredYourOwnQuestion I guess she's tall, and pretty, and smart, and smells nice, but like, what else?]]
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--->'''Haruka:''' I never did get why you liked her. I guess she's [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], and [[HeadTurningBeauty pretty]], and [[BrainyBrunette smart]], and [[YouAnsweredYourOwnQuestion I guess she's tall, and pretty, and smart, and smells nice, but like, what else?]]
