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'''Iroh''': But if the Fire Nation discovers us, we'll be turned over to Azula.\\
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'''Iroh''': But if the Fire Nation discovers us, we'll be turned over to Azula.''Azula''.\\
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**Almost immediately after, Katara makes a comment about how beautiful the stars out, then makes a remark about how Toph can't see them, causing Toph to earth-bend Katara in retaliation. The first thought would be she's making a comment about Toph being unable to see because of her stone tent. But then you remember that Toph is [[CrossestheLineTwice blind and unable to see anything that's not touching the ground.]]
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* Azula and Aang breaking their fight on the drill as they struggle to keep their balance while covered in slurry, resulting in Azula crashing into Aang, knocking him into a wall and them both ricocheting off in different directions.
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* Azula and Aang breaking their Aang's fight on the drill as they struggle being interrupted by them being unable to keep their balance while covered in slurry, resulting in slurry. The usually-adroit Azula goes crashing into Aang, knocking knocks him into a the wall and them they both ricocheting ricochet off in different directions.
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* Azula and Aang breaking their fight on the drill as they struggle to keep their balance while covered in slurry, resulting in Azula crashing into Aang, knocking him into a wall and them both ricocheting off in different directions.
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* It's a minor one, but when everyone is cheering Aang for winning against Toph is the tournament, Sokka is so happy he outright ''hugs'' Xin Fu.
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* It's a minor one, but when everyone is cheering Aang for winning against Toph is in the tournament, Sokka is so happy he outright ''hugs'' Xin Fu.
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'''Katara:''' ''(irritated)'' You've been hallucinating on cactus juice all day and then [[AesopAmnesia you just]] [[WhatAnIdiot lick something you find stuck to the wall of a cave?!]]\\
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'''Katara:''' ''(irritated)'' You've been hallucinating on cactus juice all day and then [[AesopAmnesia you just]] [[WhatAnIdiot just]] lick something you find stuck to the wall of a cave?!]]\\cave?!\\
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* They had spent the entire episode running around and actually finding plenty of evidence that Kyoshi did not kill Chin since all of the city's evidence is wrong (and their version of justice is literally "my word vs your word" with "my" being the judge). Which makes Kyoshi coming out and confessing to the crime all the more hilarious since ''absolutely nothing'' hinted that she did the act.
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-->'''Zuko:''' If the Earth Kingdom finds us, they'll have us killed!\\
'''Iroh:''' But if the Fire Nation finds us, we'll be turned over to ''Azula.''\\
''({{beat}})''\\
'''Zuko:''' Earth Kingdom it is.
'''Iroh:''' But if the Fire Nation finds us, we'll be turned over to ''Azula.''\\
''({{beat}})''\\
'''Zuko:''' Earth Kingdom it is.
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'''Iroh:'''
'''Iroh''': But if the Fire Nation
''({{beat}})''\\
'''Zuko:'''
''*beat*''\\
'''Zuko''': Earth Kingdom it is.
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* Aang getting hopped up on tea. In normal benders, it increases their strength and energy tenfold, according to an Earth Kingdom general. GilliganCut to Aang [[CaffeineBulletTime Air Scootering circles around everyone present like a human hummingbird]], all while asking rapidly [[MotorMouth "Is-it-working-is-it-working?-I-can't-tell-Someone-tell-me-if-I'm-in-the-Avatar-State-because-I-don't-really-have-a-good-view-of-myself-Am-I-talking-too-loud?".]]
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* Aang getting hopped up on tea. In normal benders, it increases their strength and energy tenfold, according to an Earth Kingdom general. GilliganCut to Aang [[CaffeineBulletTime Air Scootering circles around everyone present like a human hummingbird]], hummingbird, all while asking rapidly [[MotorMouth "Is-it-working-is-it-working?-I-can't-tell-Someone-tell-me-if-I'm-in-the-Avatar-State-because-I-don't-really-have-a-good-view-of-myself-Am-I-talking-too-loud?".]]
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-->'''Aang:''' "How did you get them to tell you?"
-->'''Katara:''' (coyly) [[IHaveMyWays "Oh, a girl has her ways."]]
--> (cut to the two guys frozen to a wall by their feet)
-->'''Katara:''' (coyly) [[IHaveMyWays "Oh, a girl has her ways."]]
--> (cut to the two guys frozen to a wall by their feet)
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-->'''Aang:''' "How How did you get them to tell you?"
-->'''Katara:''' (coyly)you?\\
'''Katara:''' ''(coyly)'' [[IHaveMyWays"Oh, Oh, a girl has her ways."]]
--> (cut]]\\
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-->'''Katara:''' (coyly)
'''Katara:''' ''(coyly)'' [[IHaveMyWays
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** Azula's near-encounter with the whole is also about the ''only'' time we see her with an expression of actual ''terror'' on her face.
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'''Sokka:''' [seethes with rage]
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'''Sokka:''' [seethes ''[seethes with rage]rage]''
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* At a bar in the desert, Iroh opens a Pai Sho match by using a White Lotus title to reveal to his opponent that he is a member of the Order of the White Lotus, but he leaves this association a mystery to Zuko. His frustrated nephew has some... ''choice'' words:
-->'''Old Man:''' Welcome, brother. The White Lotus opens wide to those who know her secrets.\\
'''Zuko:''' What are you old gasbags talking about?
-->'''Old Man:''' Welcome, brother. The White Lotus opens wide to those who know her secrets.\\
'''Zuko:''' What are you old gasbags talking about?
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* Further, Iroh asking the Rough Rhinos [[CasualDangerDialogue if any of them wanted tea]], and specifically asking Kachi if he liked jasmine tea.
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* Upon first meeting Toph at her family home, she asks how they found her. Aang tells her the truth: "A crazy king told me to find an earthbender who listens to the earth. And then I had a vision in a magic swamp", before Katara cuts him off. Toph's reaction is to be expected given that that sounds crazy... but the ''real'' humor comes from the realization that due to her lie-detector senses, she was likely thinking "How the hell is this kid telling the truth!?"
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** Also, since he drinks (hot) [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tea]] just before, it's almost like that BreathOfFire was ''tea-powered''.
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** Also, since he drinks (hot) [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tea]] just before, it's almost like that BreathOfFire BreathWeapon was ''tea-powered''.
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-->''Colonel Mongke and the Rough Rhinos are legendary – each one is a different kind of weapon specialist. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking They are also a very capable singing group]].''
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* Iroh's description of the Rough Rhinos.
-->''Colonel Mongke and the Rough Rhinos are legendary – each one is a different kind of weapon specialist. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking They are also a very capable singing group]].''
-->''Colonel Mongke and the Rough Rhinos are legendary – each one is a different kind of weapon specialist. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking They are also a very capable singing group]].''
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-->'''Katara:'' It's called a baby, and I helped her deliver plenty of those too.
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* While Katara delivers a baby:
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* While Katara delivers a baby:When Ying is about to give birth to Hope, Sokka freaks out.
-->'''Ying:''' The baby's coming!
-->'''Sokka:''' *WHAT?! NOW?! CAN'T YOU HOLD IT IN OR SOMETHING?!*
-->'''Katara:''' Sokka, calm down. I helped Gran-Gran deliver lots of babies back home.
-->'''Ying:''' The baby's coming!
-->'''Sokka:''' *WHAT?! NOW?! CAN'T YOU HOLD IT IN OR SOMETHING?!*
-->'''Katara:''' Sokka, calm down. I helped Gran-Gran deliver lots of babies back home.
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-->'''Katara:'' It's called a baby, and I helped her deliver plenty of those too.
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** The best part is, in a case of FreezeFrameBonus, ''[[https://external-preview.redd.it/P2ITfd4NMO-x1gRF-P922JttQxzuf7eZJD2WPjZmWY8.png?auto=webp&s=74d5b632237300b1f126a92304dd8d204a0a3656 there really was a slug in the cabbages]]''.
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** The best part is, in a case of FreezeFrameBonus, ''[[https://external-preview.redd.it/P2ITfd4NMO-x1gRF-P922JttQxzuf7eZJD2WPjZmWY8.png?auto=webp&s=74d5b632237300b1f126a92304dd8d204a0a3656 ''[[https://www.cap-that.com/avatar/212/images/avatar-the-last-airbender2x12_0378.jpg there really was a slug in the cabbages]]''.
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* [[LemonWackyHello "Drink cactus juice."]] [[MushroomSamba "It's the quenchiest!"]]
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* [[LemonWackyHello "Drink cactus juice."]] It'll quench ya.]] [[HilarityEnsues Nothing's quenchier.]] [[MushroomSamba "It's It's the quenchiest!"]]
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--> '''Sokka:''' ... I guess my head's not quite over that cactus juice as I thought it was.
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'''Sokka:''' What?! [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I didn't steal anything!]] Who told you that? ''(points accusingly at Momo)'' IT WAS '''YOU'''!!! YOU RATTED ME OUT!!!\\
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'''Sokka:''' What?! [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I didn't steal anything!]] Who told you that? ''(points accusingly at Momo)'' IT WAS '''YOU'''!!! '''YOU!''' YOU RATTED ME OUT!!!\\OUT!\\
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--> '''Toph:''' Yesterday my mouth tasted like mud, now it tastes like sand. Never thought I'd miss the taste of mud so much.
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--> '''Toph:''' Ahhhhhh, finally! (''falls into the ground'') Solid ground!
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* Meanwhile, in the B-plot, Zuko and Iroh [[MortonsFork are in a but of a dilemma]].
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* Meanwhile, in the B-plot, Zuko and Iroh [[MortonsFork are in face a but bit of a dilemma]].
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''Zuko is furious and gives the Off with Your Head Gesture, [[{{Adorkable}} but then stiffens back up when Song turns around to look at him]]''
** The fake name Zuko gives Iroh is even funnier when you realize that [[BilingualBonus in Japanese]], "mushi" means ''insect.''
** The fake name Zuko gives Iroh is even funnier when you realize that [[BilingualBonus in Japanese]], "mushi" means ''insect.''
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''Zuko is furious and gives the Off "Off with Your Head Gesture, your head" gesture, [[{{Adorkable}} but then stiffens back up when Song turns around to look at him]]''
** The fake name Zuko gives Iroh is even funnier when you realize that [[BilingualBonus in Japanese]],"mushi" ''mushi'' means ''insect.''
** The fake name Zuko gives Iroh is even funnier when you realize that [[BilingualBonus in Japanese]],
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--> '''Mai's father:''' Pentapox? Hmmmm, [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike I'm pretty sure I've heard of that.]]
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--> '''Mai's father:''' '''Ukano:''' Pentapox? Hmmmm, [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike I'm pretty sure I've heard of that.]] ]]
** And then there's Mai [[PassThePopcorn nonchalantly munching on fire flakes, and offering some to her dad]].
** And then there's Mai [[PassThePopcorn nonchalantly munching on fire flakes, and offering some to her dad]].
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* Sokka's detective outfit was JustForFun/MadeOfWin. Not only the pipe, but a hat with a little set of magnifying glasses on a track around the brim! He's a freaking ''contextually-consistent'' Sherlock Holmes parody. And guess what? That hat is [[ShownTheirWork based on a real kind of]] [[http://m.bulkyosesang.co.kr/web/product/medium/naeccu_5732.jpg Korean hat]].
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* Sokka's detective outfit was JustForFun/MadeOfWin. Not only the pipe, but a hat with a little set of magnifying glasses on a track around the brim! He's a freaking ''contextually-consistent'' Sherlock Holmes Literature/SherlockHolmes parody. And guess what? That hat is [[ShownTheirWork based on a real kind of]] [[http://m.bulkyosesang.co.kr/web/product/medium/naeccu_5732.jpg Korean hat]].
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'''Zuko:''' '''''What turmoil?!'''''
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'''Zuko:''' '''''What turmoil?!''''''''''[[HypocriticalHumor What turmoil]]?!'''''
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* Meanwhile, in the B-plot.
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* Meanwhile, in the B-plot.B-plot, Zuko and Iroh [[MortonsFork are in a but of a dilemma]].
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** Sokka's first (and accidental) haiku:
---> I am so sorry.
---> Something's struck me in the rear.
---> I just wound up here.
---> I am so sorry.
---> Something's struck me in the rear.
---> I just wound up here.
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** The best part is, in a case of FreezeFrameBonus, ''[[https://external-preview.redd.it/P2ITfd4NMO-x1gRF-P922JttQxzuf7eZJD2WPjZmWY8.png?auto=webp&s=74d5b632237300b1f126a92304dd8d204a0a3656 there really was a slug in the cabbages]]''.
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* One of Iroh's proposed names for his tea shop.
-->'''Iroh:''' "The Tea Weevil! No, that's ''stupid.''"
-->'''Iroh:''' "The Tea Weevil! No, that's ''stupid.''"
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* After Toph invents metalbending and leaves her captors trapped inside her former prison:
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* The prompt for Toph inventing metalbending? Being told even ''she'' couldn't bend metal. Cue Toph, basically out of spite ''inventing the discipline'', then riding off proclaiming herself as the best Earthbender in the world.
** After Toph invents metalbending and leaves her captors trapped inside her former prison:
** After Toph invents metalbending and leaves her captors trapped inside her former prison:
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* While it is a [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome cool moment as well]], Iroh casually mentioning his [[RedBaron "Dragon of the West]] title like it's nothing, and Azula reacting like he's going to go on a tangent. Zuko just [[PassThePopcorn smirks]].
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* While it is a [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome cool moment as well]], Iroh casually mentioning his [[RedBaron "Dragon of the West]] West]]" title like it's nothing, and Azula reacting like he's going to go on a tangent. Zuko just [[PassThePopcorn smirks]].
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** Considering he's her uncle, he may well have been so blase about other matters.
** Iroh's face when Zuko stays behind to face Azula. It's less worry and more "oh, come on!"
** Iroh's face when Zuko stays behind to face Azula. It's less worry and more "oh, come on!"
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** Considering he's her uncle, he may well have ''have'' been so blase about other matters.
** Iroh's face when Zuko stays behind to face Azula. It's less worry and more"oh, "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe oh, come on!" on!]]"
** Iroh's face when Zuko stays behind to face Azula. It's less worry and more
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** Nomad: Uh... I forgot the next line, but then it goes: SECRET TUNNEL!!!!! Secret Tunnel!!!
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** Nomad: Uh... I forgot the next line, but then it goes: [[SuddenlyShouting SECRET TUNNEL!!!!! Secret Tunnel!!!Tunnel!!!]]
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--> The stomach is the source of energy in your body. It is called the "Sea of ''Qi''".... Only [[SelfDeprecation in my case, it is more like a vast ocean]].
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--> The stomach is the source of energy in your body. It is called the "Sea of ''Qi''".... Only [[SelfDeprecation in my case, it is more like a vast ocean]].
ocean]]. ''[chuckles at his own joke]''