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* Stephen Hawking traps Robo on a year-long flight to Mars, with nothing to do or read, and Robo doesn't have a sleep mode. [[spoiler:He retaliates by arranging countless martian rocks to proclaim 'Steven Hawking is a bastard' in letters big enough to be seen from space.]]
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* Stephen Hawking traps Robo on a year-long flight to Mars, with nothing to do or read, and Robo doesn't have a sleep mode. [[spoiler:He retaliates by arranging countless martian rocks to proclaim 'Steven 'Stephen Hawking is a bastard' in letters big enough to be seen from space.]]
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* Combining funny with heartrending, as Robo and ALAN stand before [[spoiler: Jenkins']] grave they one the set up for Bernard at the beginning of the volume now reads [[CameBackStrong "Nevermind"]]
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* Combining funny with heartrending, as Robo and ALAN stand before [[spoiler: Jenkins']] grave the one they one the set up for Bernard at the beginning of the volume now reads [[CameBackStrong "Nevermind"]]
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* Robo and ALAN struggling to explain the latter's origin story, which ends with ALAN clarifying that Robo didn't kill Alan Turing.
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* The "new kids" dealing with a VillainTeamUp that missed Robo leaving by like a day. Shortly after Ben suggests they could wait there until he gets back (earning a DopeSlap for his trouble), TheCavalry arrives: Dr Dinosaur, driving a hovertruck, while singing a mangled version of "Lookin' Out My Back Door" by Music/CreedenceClearwaterRevival, and wearing a ridiculous set of purple shades.
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* The "new kids" dealing with a VillainTeamUp that missed Robo leaving by like a day. Shortly after Ben suggests they could wait there until he gets back (earning a DopeSlap for his trouble), TheCavalry arrives: Dr Dinosaur, driving a hovertruck, while singing a mangled version of "Lookin' Out My Back Door" by Music/CreedenceClearwaterRevival, and wearing a ridiculous set of purple shades.shades.
* Ben insists that the members of the VillainTeamUp are all "stone cold science villains" who wouldn't [[EvilIsPetty waste time wrecking their stuff]]. [[DescriptionCut Cut to]] Helsingard wrecking Olivia's room, Undead Edison wrecking Margot's room, and...Tyrantula [[TrashOfTheTitans looking at the hellscape that is Ben's room]] and wondering how she could wreck it worse than Ben already has.
* Ben insists that the members of the VillainTeamUp are all "stone cold science villains" who wouldn't [[EvilIsPetty waste time wrecking their stuff]]. [[DescriptionCut Cut to]] Helsingard wrecking Olivia's room, Undead Edison wrecking Margot's room, and...Tyrantula [[TrashOfTheTitans looking at the hellscape that is Ben's room]] and wondering how she could wreck it worse than Ben already has.
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* In the wake of his role as the Zorth Expert, Dr Dinosaur decides he gets to move in with Robo now and claims a room at Tesladyne, where [[ItsAllAboutMe he expects Robo to apologise for interfering in his supervillainy]] (and claiming that it counts when Robo's rant includes the lines "I'm sorry, but-"). For bonus points, he's got a towel piled up on his head like he's just washed his hair...even though, as a ''Film/JurassicPark''-styled dinosaur, he doesn't have any.
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* In the wake of his role as the Zorth Expert, Dr Dinosaur decides he gets to move in with Robo now and claims a room at Tesladyne, where [[ItsAllAboutMe he expects Robo to apologise for interfering in his supervillainy]] (and claiming that it counts when Robo's rant includes the lines "I'm sorry, but-"). For bonus points, he's got a towel piled up on his head like he's just washed his hair...even though, as a ''Film/JurassicPark''-styled dinosaur, he doesn't have any.any.
* The "new kids" dealing with a VillainTeamUp that missed Robo leaving by like a day. Shortly after Ben suggests they could wait there until he gets back (earning a DopeSlap for his trouble), TheCavalry arrives: Dr Dinosaur, driving a hovertruck, while singing a mangled version of "Lookin' Out My Back Door" by Music/CreedenceClearwaterRevival, and wearing a ridiculous set of purple shades.
* The "new kids" dealing with a VillainTeamUp that missed Robo leaving by like a day. Shortly after Ben suggests they could wait there until he gets back (earning a DopeSlap for his trouble), TheCavalry arrives: Dr Dinosaur, driving a hovertruck, while singing a mangled version of "Lookin' Out My Back Door" by Music/CreedenceClearwaterRevival, and wearing a ridiculous set of purple shades.
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* Combining funny with heartrending, as Robo and ALAN stand before [[spoiler: Jenkins']] grave they one the set up for Bernard at the beginning of the volume now reads [[CameBackStrong "Nevermind"]]
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--->'''Dr Dinosaur:''' Today we're cooking stew! Oh, I'm sorry. I meant Stu.\\
'''Stu, the cameraman:''' [[OhCrap Uh, wait-]]
'''Stu, the cameraman:''' [[OhCrap Uh, wait-]]
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--->'''Dr Dinosaur:''' Today we're cooking stew! Oh, I'm sorry. [[ImAHumanitarian I meant Stu.\\
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'''Stu, the cameraman:''' [[OhCrap Uh,wait-]]wait-]][[note]]Judging by the label on the flask in Dr Dinosaur's suitcase in "The Vengeful Dead", [[BlackComedyCannibalism Stu doesn't make it]][[/note]]
'''Stu, the cameraman:''' [[OhCrap Uh,
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** Just Robo being such an old man that he's apparently quite easy to distract and send off into off-topic stories about his "glory days".
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** Just Robo being such an old man that he's apparently quite easy to distract and send off into off-topic stories about his "glory days".days".
* In the wake of his role as the Zorth Expert, Dr Dinosaur decides he gets to move in with Robo now and claims a room at Tesladyne, where [[ItsAllAboutMe he expects Robo to apologise for interfering in his supervillainy]] (and claiming that it counts when Robo's rant includes the lines "I'm sorry, but-"). For bonus points, he's got a towel piled up on his head like he's just washed his hair...even though, as a ''Film/JurassicPark''-styled dinosaur, he doesn't have any.
* In the wake of his role as the Zorth Expert, Dr Dinosaur decides he gets to move in with Robo now and claims a room at Tesladyne, where [[ItsAllAboutMe he expects Robo to apologise for interfering in his supervillainy]] (and claiming that it counts when Robo's rant includes the lines "I'm sorry, but-"). For bonus points, he's got a towel piled up on his head like he's just washed his hair...even though, as a ''Film/JurassicPark''-styled dinosaur, he doesn't have any.
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* The ending of "The Savage Sword of Doctor Dinosaur" which ends with [[spoiler: Robo trapped back in 1870, is hilarious because it inadvertently proves that Doctor Dinosaur's origin of using crystals to travel back in time may be somewhat accurate as well as Robo's belief that time travel is impossible incorrect. In short, the crazy, scientifically-impossible, talking dinosaur was right and the super smart super robot was wrong.]]
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* The ending of "The Savage Sword of Doctor Dinosaur" which ends with [[spoiler: Robo trapped back in 1870, is hilarious because it inadvertently proves that Doctor Dinosaur's origin of using crystals to travel back in time may be somewhat accurate as well as Robo's belief that time travel is impossible incorrect. In short, the crazy, scientifically-impossible, talking dinosaur was right and the super smart super robot was wrong. To make it even funnier, back in the present, the other action scientists use zorth interactions as they're putting together what happened, meaning that the crazy, scientifically-impossible talking dinosaur ended up being right ''because of Robo's own theory''.]]
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-->'''Tesladyne Scientist:''' Robo, there's a pyramid in Egypt!\\
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'''Robo:''' Yes, thank you, that's super.
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'''Robo:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, thank you, that's super.Vik. That's super. Thank you.]]
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'''Action Scientist:''' Really?\\
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''Alan, his clothes on fire, slams into the top of the car with a FWAM noise''\\
'''Alan:''' Hello. My name is Alan. [[ARareSentence Ordinarily I'm not on fire.]]\\
'''Alan:''' Hello. My name is Alan. [[ARareSentence Ordinarily I'm not on fire.]]\\
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* [[https://www.atomic-robo.com/atomicrobo/14ch3-page-22 BEHOLD!!! THE ZORTH EXPERT!!!]]
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* [[https://www.atomic-robo.com/atomicrobo/14ch3-page-22 BEHOLD!!! THE ZORTH EXPERT!!!]]EXPERT!!!]]
* Most of the short stories dealing with the career of the "Four Musketeers" between starting at Tesladyne and the whole "vampire dimension" fiasco are funny and/or touching.
** ALAN 2.0 makes friends.
--->'''Robo:''' In the interests of full disclosure, there was another ALAN before this one. One that was cut off from humanity for sixty years and nearly sterilised the Earth with radioactive fire to break free.\\
'''Margot:''' Are you saying we have to be nice to ALAN or he'll cook the planet?\\
'''ALAN:''' [[BluntYes Yes.]]\\
'''Robo:''' NO!
** "Now Ur Cooking with Doctor Dinosaur"
--->'''Dr Dinosaur:''' Today we're cooking stew! Oh, I'm sorry. I meant Stu.\\
'''Stu, the cameraman:''' [[OhCrap Uh, wait-]]
** Olivia introducing ALAN to ''VideoGame/ChronoTrigger''.
--->'''Olivia:''' Looking up a walkthrough.\\
'''ALAN:''' But isn't that like cheating?\\
'''Olivia:''' Well, here's how I see it. ''No.''
** How to deal with Jenkins's "obstacle course":
--->'''Lang:''' I got the new kids working on it for extra credit.\\
'''Foley:''' Good thinking. If they're gonna be Action Scientists, they need to know how to overcome a madman's lair filled with traps.
** Just Robo being such an old man that he's apparently quite easy to distract and send off into off-topic stories about his "glory days".
* Most of the short stories dealing with the career of the "Four Musketeers" between starting at Tesladyne and the whole "vampire dimension" fiasco are funny and/or touching.
** ALAN 2.0 makes friends.
--->'''Robo:''' In the interests of full disclosure, there was another ALAN before this one. One that was cut off from humanity for sixty years and nearly sterilised the Earth with radioactive fire to break free.\\
'''Margot:''' Are you saying we have to be nice to ALAN or he'll cook the planet?\\
'''ALAN:''' [[BluntYes Yes.]]\\
'''Robo:''' NO!
** "Now Ur Cooking with Doctor Dinosaur"
--->'''Dr Dinosaur:''' Today we're cooking stew! Oh, I'm sorry. I meant Stu.\\
'''Stu, the cameraman:''' [[OhCrap Uh, wait-]]
** Olivia introducing ALAN to ''VideoGame/ChronoTrigger''.
--->'''Olivia:''' Looking up a walkthrough.\\
'''ALAN:''' But isn't that like cheating?\\
'''Olivia:''' Well, here's how I see it. ''No.''
** How to deal with Jenkins's "obstacle course":
--->'''Lang:''' I got the new kids working on it for extra credit.\\
'''Foley:''' Good thinking. If they're gonna be Action Scientists, they need to know how to overcome a madman's lair filled with traps.
** Just Robo being such an old man that he's apparently quite easy to distract and send off into off-topic stories about his "glory days".
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'''Lang:''' (quietly) I meant, like, a ''big'' fire.
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'''Lang:''' (quietly) I meant, like, a ''big'' fire.fire.
* [[https://www.atomic-robo.com/atomicrobo/14ch3-page-22 BEHOLD!!! THE ZORTH EXPERT!!!]]
* [[https://www.atomic-robo.com/atomicrobo/14ch3-page-22 BEHOLD!!! THE ZORTH EXPERT!!!]]
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''ALAN, his clothes on fire, slams into the top of the car with a FWAM noise''\\
'''ALAN:''' Hello. My name is ALAN. [[ARareSentence Ordinarily I'm not on fire.]]\\
'''ALAN:''' Hello. My name is ALAN. [[ARareSentence Ordinarily I'm not on fire.]]\\
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-->'''Tesla:''' Leave those poor people alone! They only wish to entertain!\\
'''Robo:''' [[NoodleIncident Oh, that hack responsible for the mole men episode had it coming!]]
'''Robo:''' [[NoodleIncident Oh, that hack responsible for the mole men episode had it coming!]]
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'''Tesla:''' Tell me you're not planning to
'''Robo:''' [[NoodleIncident Oh,
'''Tesla:''' Leave those poor people alone. They only wish to entertain.
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* Robo ends up captured during an infiltration mission that turns out to be an ambush. [[http://www.atomic-robo.com/atomicrobo/v2ch5-page-10 He ends up rescued by a commando who is spouting various nigh-incomprehensible Scottishisms the entire time]]. Robo later beats a German soldier with another German soldier.
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* Robo ends up captured during an infiltration mission that turns out to be an ambush. [[http://www.atomic-robo.com/atomicrobo/v2ch5-page-10 He ends up rescued by a commando who is spouting various nigh-incomprehensible Scottishisms the entire time]]. Robo later beats a German soldier with another German soldier.
* From the same issue as the above, Robo beating up a German soldier with [[GrievousHarmWithABody another German soldier]].
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* Robo's First words [[spoiler:after having his head revived after spending decades in storage due to time-travel related shenanigans? "My Everything Hurts".]]
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* Robo's First first words [[spoiler:after having his head revived after spending decades in storage due to time-travel related shenanigans? "My Everything Hurts".everything hurts".]]
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* In "Why Dr. Dinosaur hates Atomic Robo", Dr. Dinosaur keeps Robo contained in an glowing, blue electromagnetic field. Turns out that the glow is just for ambience, he can turn that part of without deactivating the field.
