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* Just like the BoobsOfSteel entry also details, the larger a character's bust is, the more likely they'll fight with slower, but harder-hitting strikes. This extends in the other direction, where the girl with the smallest bust fights almost entirely with ranged weapons with few actual physical attacks.
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* Just like the BoobsOfSteel entry also details, the The larger a character's bust is, the more likely they'll fight with slower, but harder-hitting strikes. This extends in the other direction, where the girl with the smallest bust fights almost entirely with ranged weapons with few actual physical attacks.
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* Just like the BoobsOfSteel entry also details, the larger a characters' bust is, the more likely they'll fight with slower, but harder-hitting strikes. This extends in the other direction, where the girl with the smallest bust fights almost entirely with ranged weapons with few actual physical attacks.
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* Just like the BoobsOfSteel entry also details, the larger a characters' character's bust is, the more likely they'll fight with slower, but harder-hitting strikes. This extends in the other direction, where the girl with the smallest bust fights almost entirely with ranged weapons with few actual physical attacks.
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* The Hebijo story in Shinovi Versus is about Suzune assigning Miyabi's group to reform Hebijo and [[spoiler: dispose of Homura's group and the other schools that had to do with Hebijo's decay. This is while Ryona and Ryobi plot revenge on Miyabi for Ryoki's death after transferring from Death Cram. After conflict with each other, they settle things and restore new pride to Hebijo]]. It looks like a happy ending, but then it leaves an ''off'' feeling afterwards.
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* The Hebijo story in Shinovi Versus is about Suzune assigning Miyabi's group to reform Hebijo and [[spoiler: dispose of Homura's group and the other schools that had to do with Hebijo's decay. This is while Ryona Ryōna and Ryobi Ryōbi plot revenge on Miyabi for Ryoki's Ryōki's death after transferring from Death Cram.Gessen. After conflict with each other, they settle things and restore new pride to Hebijo]]. It looks like a happy ending, but then it leaves an ''off'' feeling afterwards.
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* You know how Hibari is supposedly unskilled in combat, and she's DifficultButAwesome to reflect that? It's the other way around, she's not the best in combat ''because'' her fighting style is DifficultButAwesome. She chooses to fight that way, yet unlike pro Hibari players, she hasn't mastered it yet.
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* You know how Hibari is supposedly unskilled in combat, and she's DifficultButAwesome to reflect that? It's the other way around, around; she's not the best in combat ''because'' her fighting style is DifficultButAwesome. She chooses to fight that way, yet unlike pro Hibari players, she hasn't mastered it yet.
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* Ryōna is a masochist who's ninja animal is the pig. Being called something like a pig is an insult that most masochists enjoy taking pleasure out of.
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* Ryōna is a masochist who's whose ninja animal is the pig. Being called something like a pig is an insult that most masochists enjoy taking pleasure out of.
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* One of the more difficult enemies are turtle ninjas. StoneWall ninja who specialize in defense with occasional shooting. What's the stone wall tactic they're executing? Why ''turtling'' of course.
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* One of the more difficult enemies are turtle ninjas. ninjas, StoneWall ninja ninjas who specialize in defense with occasional shooting. What's the stone wall tactic they're executing? Why ''turtling'' of course.
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*** However, the Hebijo story in Shinovi Versus [[spoiler: is sort of a WhatIf. So it's as if none of it really happened. That being said, even if a guide says otherwise it is recommended that you clear the Hebijo story first so that the resulting PlayerPunch isn't as harsh as if it was cleared later]].
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*** However, the Hebijo story in Shinovi Versus [[spoiler: is sort of a WhatIf. So it's as if none of it really happened. That being said, even if a guide says otherwise otherwise, it is recommended that you clear the Hebijo story first so that the resulting PlayerPunch isn't as harsh as if it was cleared later]].
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** Crimson Girl' story in ''Shinovi Versus'' seems to suggest that she acts as her adoptive father's bodyguard. And considering that he seems to have no problem sending her after bunch of protestors, it could be any one's blood.
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** Crimson Her 'Crimson Girl' story in ''Shinovi Versus'' seems to suggest that she acts as her adoptive father's bodyguard. And considering that he seems to have no problem sending her after a bunch of protestors, protesters, it could be any one's anyone's blood.
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** Likewise, Minori is considered the lowest-tiered character in Shinovi Versus - but that's likely because she's not only [[TokenMiniMoe the YOUNGEST in the entire cast]] (a stark 15 compared to Hibari's 16), but also has the personality of a BrattyHalfPint despite being a teenager, and [[LethalChef basically fighting with oversized food]]. She's not taking the shinobi training that seriously as a result of her childishness, and isn't extremely skilled but lazy (like Hikage) or refuses to train but has a massive well of power to draw from (like Murasaki).
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** Likewise, Minori is considered the lowest-tiered character in Shinovi Versus - but that's likely because she's not only [[TokenMiniMoe the YOUNGEST in the entire cast]] (a stark 15 compared to Hibari's 16), but also has the personality of a BrattyHalfPint despite being a teenager, and is [[LethalChef basically fighting with oversized food]]. She's also not taking the shinobi training that seriously as a result of her childishness, and doesn't have some other positive strength to balance it out; i.e. she isn't extremely skilled but lazy (like Hikage) or refuses to train but has a massive well of power to draw from (like Murasaki).
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* The Hebijo story in Shinovi Versus is about Suzune assigning Miyabi's group to reform Hebijo and [[spoiler: dispose of Homura's group and the other schools that had to do with Hebijo's decay. While Ryona & Ryobi plot revenge on Miyabi for Ryoki's death after transferring from Death Cram. After conflict with each other, they settle things and restore new pride to Hebijo]]. It looks like a happy ending, but then it leaves an ''off'' feeling afterwards.
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* The Hebijo story in Shinovi Versus is about Suzune assigning Miyabi's group to reform Hebijo and [[spoiler: dispose of Homura's group and the other schools that had to do with Hebijo's decay. While This is while Ryona & and Ryobi plot revenge on Miyabi for Ryoki's death after transferring from Death Cram. After conflict with each other, they settle things and restore new pride to Hebijo]]. It looks like a happy ending, but then it leaves an ''off'' feeling afterwards.
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** Likewise, Minori is considered the lowest-tiered character in Shinovi Versus - but that's likely because she's not only [[TokenMiniMoe the YOUNGEST in the entire cast]] (a stark 15 compared to Hibari's 16), but also has the personality of a PintSizedBrat, and [[LethalChef basically fighting with oversized food]].
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** Likewise, Minori is considered the lowest-tiered character in Shinovi Versus - but that's likely because she's not only [[TokenMiniMoe the YOUNGEST in the entire cast]] (a stark 15 compared to Hibari's 16), but also has the personality of a PintSizedBrat, BrattyHalfPint despite being a teenager, and [[LethalChef basically fighting with oversized food]].food]]. She's not taking the shinobi training that seriously as a result of her childishness, and isn't extremely skilled but lazy (like Hikage) or refuses to train but has a massive well of power to draw from (like Murasaki).
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* If one were to look from another perspective, the reason for not admitting to defeat so easily and disclosing the battle may be out of self-preservation. If they admitted they were committed to a fight, then retreated upon losing, they would be [[DeliberateValuesDissonance executed]] upon returning to their school. Though this may be likely for evil ninja.
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* If one were to look from another perspective, the reason for shinobi not admitting to defeat so easily and disclosing dismissing the battle may be out of self-preservation. If they admitted they were committed to a fight, then retreated upon losing, they would be [[DeliberateValuesDissonance executed]] upon returning to their school. Though this may be likely for evil ninja.
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** Considering that pigs are associated with gluttony, it's also a StealthPun: She's a glutton for punishment.
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** Likewise, Minori is considered the lowest-tiered character in Shinvoi Versus - but that's likely because she's not only [[TokenMiniMoe the YOUNGEST in the entire cast]] (a stark 15 compared to Hibari's 16), but also has the personality of a PintSizedBrat, and [[LethalChef basically fighting with oversized food]].
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** Likewise, Minori is considered the lowest-tiered character in Shinvoi Shinovi Versus - but that's likely because she's not only [[TokenMiniMoe the YOUNGEST in the entire cast]] (a stark 15 compared to Hibari's 16), but also has the personality of a PintSizedBrat, and [[LethalChef basically fighting with oversized food]].
