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* The story only shows what happened to Maquia and Leillia. Think about what this means for other female Iorphs and let that sink in for a second.
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* The story only shows what happened to Maquia and Leillia. Think about what this means for other female Iorphs and let that sink in for a second.
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* The name of Ariel and Dita's daughter is never given. But when you think about it there's only one name they would have given her. The name of the woman who raised Ariel and was there for Dita in childbirth. ''Maquia.''
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* Maquia almost always feel lonely. In an early scene where Leillia leave for home after work, Maquia's parents are never shown. She instead go to clan elder Racine who doesn't seem to be part of her family. It is likely that Maquia's parents died when she was young, and being an Iorph the isolation must've been long.
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* Maquia almost always feel lonely. In an early scene where Leillia leave for home after work, Maquia's parents are never shown. She instead go to clan elder Racine who doesn't seem to be part of her family. It is likely that Maquia's parents died when she was young, and being an Iorph the isolation must've been longer than usual.long.
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* Maquia always looked lonely. In an early scene where Leillia leave for home after work, Maquia's parents are never shown. She instead go to clan elder Racine who doesn't seem to be part of her family.
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* Maquia almost always looked feel lonely. In an early scene where Leillia leave for home after work, Maquia's parents are never shown. She instead go to clan elder Racine who doesn't seem to be part of her family. It is likely that Maquia's parents died when she was young, and being an Iorph the isolation must've been longer than usual.
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* The Hibiol fabric. Why does someone creates a language that is slow to 'write' and involves literally spotting thousands of tiny little threads? That would take forever to decip- [[SocietyOfImmortals Oh wait]].
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*Maquia always looked lonely. In an early scene where Leillia leave for home after work, Maquia's parents are never shown. She instead go to clan elder Racine who doesn't seem to be part of her family.
*The story only shows what happened to Leillia. Think about what this means for other female Iorphs and let that sink in for a second.
* The Hibiol fabric. Why does someone creates a language that is slow to 'write' and involves literally spotting thousands of tiny little threads? That would take forever to decip- [[SocietyOfImmortals Oh wait]].
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*Maquia always looked lonely. In an early scene where Leillia leave for home after work, Maquia's parents are never shown. She instead go to clan elder Racine who doesn't seem to be part of her family.
*The story only shows what happened to Leillia. Think about what this means for other female Iorphs and let that sink in for a second.
