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Changed line(s) 20 (click to see context) from:
* TheBlacksmith: Charlie, one of the few adults who goes out of his way to help Natty.
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* TheBlacksmith: Charlie, one of the few adults who goes out of his way to help Natty.Natty, works pounding iron.
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* GentleGiant / TheGrotesque: Charlie the blacksmith.
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* GentleGiant / TheGrotesque: Charlie the blacksmith.blacksmith is a huge guy, a huge sweetheart, and has a partially-melted face.
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* SceneryPorn: While trying to reach her father, Natty travels through some gorgeous mountains and prairies that go on and on, although this is occasionally deconstructed with a NatureIsNotNice moment, such as when she nearly freezes during a sudden rainstorm.
