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* WindmillCrusader: Played with, and ''maybe'' [[NoMereWindmill averted]]. Defendor may be completely wrong about the person who is the BigBad, but he is nevertheless an evil that must be stopped, has enough connections and men with guns supporting him to feel like a Lex Luthor-esque villain, and maybe [[spoiler:the leader is the man who killed Defendor's mother.]]
* WrongGenreSavvy: Defendor seems to think that he's in a light-hearted superhero popcorn flick. Too bad he'a actually in a dark superhero movie. Downplayed though, in that he's at least right that he's in a superhero movie.
* WrongGenreSavvy: Defendor seems to think that he's in a light-hearted superhero popcorn flick. Too bad he'a actually in a dark superhero movie. Downplayed though, in that he's at least right that he's in a superhero movie.
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* WindmillCrusader: Played with, and ''maybe'' [[NoMereWindmill averted]]. Defendor may be completely wrong about the person who is the BigBad, but he is nevertheless an evil that must be stopped, has enough connections and men with guns supporting him to feel like a Lex Luthor-esque villain, and maybe [[spoiler:the leader is the man who killed Defendor's mother.]]
mother]].
* WrongGenreSavvy: Defendor seems to think that he's in a light-hearted superhero popcorn flick. Too badhe'a he's actually in a dark superhero movie. Downplayed though, in that he's at least right that he's in a superhero movie.
* WrongGenreSavvy: Defendor seems to think that he's in a light-hearted superhero popcorn flick. Too bad
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Arthur and Paul's son, Jack.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Arthur and Paul's son, Jack.Jack, ever since Art saved him from getting hit by a car.
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* BalkanBastard: "Captain Industry" AKA Radovan Kristic is a Serbian drug trafficker.
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler:Defendor dies in Kat's arms.]]
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler:Defendor dies in Kat's arms.arms after being fatally shot.]]
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* GroinAttack: Dooney, with a gun.
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* GroinAttack: Dooney, with a gun.[[spoiler: Kat ends up shooting Dooney in the nards to [[DamselOutOfDistress escape from him]]]].
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* BalkanBastard: The main villain is Radovan Kristic, a Serbian crimelord involved with drugs and prostitution.
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* BigBad: Radovan Kristic, AKA "Captain Industry".
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* BigBad: The main villain, and the man Arthur believes is "Captain Industry", is Radovan Kristic, AKA "Captain Industry".a [[BalkanBastard Serbian crimelord]] involved with drugs and prostitution.
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* BalkanBastard: The main villain is Radovan Kristic, a Serbian crimelord involved with drugs and prostitution.
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* BigBad: "Captain Industry", AKA Serbian crimelord Radovan Kristic.
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* BigBad: Radovan Kristic, AKA "Captain Industry", AKA Serbian crimelord Radovan Kristic.Industry".
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* TheMafiya: The main villain is a Serbian crimelord involved with drugs and prostitution.
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* InsistentTerminology: It's not "Defender", it's "Defendor".
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Defendor's WrongGenreSavvy leads to him running around thinking he is Batman (with dollar-store budget). His equipment is woefully useless against angry men with machine guns, [[spoiler:and it [[TheHeroDies eventually gets him killed]].]]
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* WindmillCrusader: Played with, and ''maybe'' [[NoMereWindmill averted]].
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* WindmillCrusader: Played with, and ''maybe'' [[NoMereWindmill averted]]. Defendor may be completely wrong about the person who is the BigBad, but he is nevertheless an evil that must be stopped, has enough connections and men with guns supporting him to feel like a Lex Luthor-esque villain, and maybe [[spoiler:the leader is the man who killed Defendor's mother.]]
