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* Comments: The best Volturi writer I've ever read. The vocabulary she puts into her stories are just incredible and her writing style keeps you reading for more. Her fics tend to prove that the Volturi wives aren't just StrangledByTheRedString and have a real romance which is hidden within the walls.
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* Comments: The best Volturi writer I've ever read. The vocabulary she puts into her stories are just incredible and her writing style keeps you reading for more. Her fics tend to prove that the Volturi wives aren't just StrangledByTheRedString and have a real romance which is hidden within the walls.walls(''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5329604/1/A_Thousand_Stairs A Thousand Stairs]]''). She also wrote two angsty AU's for Breaking Dawn (''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4648093/1/A_Fractured_Sort_of_Forever A Fractured Sort of Forever]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4797268/1/Finitum Finitum]]'') which left me wondering which ending was [[DiScontinuity the real one]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1501899/Kyilliki Kyilliki]]
* Recommended by: mollypop23
* Comments: The best Volturi writer I've ever read. The vocabulary she puts into her stories are just incredible and her writing style keeps you reading for more. Her fics tend to prove that the Volturi wives aren't just StrangledByTheRedString and have a real romance which is hidden within the walls.
* Recommended by: mollypop23
* Comments: The best Volturi writer I've ever read. The vocabulary she puts into her stories are just incredible and her writing style keeps you reading for more. Her fics tend to prove that the Volturi wives aren't just StrangledByTheRedString and have a real romance which is hidden within the walls.
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***Agreed. I read and liked Cowboys and Indians a lot. However, the link appears to be broken, as far as I can tell.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4999187/1/Twilight_the_Rewrite Twilight the Rewrite]], by Tprinces
* Recommended by @/YonTroper
* Synopsis: A rewrite of ''Twilight'', fixing some sequencing, logic and writing issues.
* ''Comments'': An excellent rewrite for people who didn't like the original book. Very well-written and actually quite tense and exciting at parts, and the more glaring [[PlotHole Plot Holes]], pacing issues and MarySue tendencies are fixed. The author's also done a re-written version of ''New Moon'' and is working on a new version of ''Eclipse''.
* Recommended by @/YonTroper
* Synopsis: A rewrite of ''Twilight'', fixing some sequencing, logic and writing issues.
* ''Comments'': An excellent rewrite for people who didn't like the original book. Very well-written and actually quite tense and exciting at parts, and the more glaring [[PlotHole Plot Holes]], pacing issues and MarySue tendencies are fixed. The author's also done a re-written version of ''New Moon'' and is working on a new version of ''Eclipse''.
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** Make that eight. :) Alice here, seconding this rec. I really like this story, pretty intense. Myself and a few other reviewers were shocked with how far the author went but it's a good thing and it is really getting exciting, in my opinion.
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* ''Comments'': A very original but very dark fic, Bella as a ghost is fun to read and aspects of her that were informed traits in the book, such as her love for reading and literature are actually demonstrated in her POVs. The characterization and development starts out fine, but really becomes great as the fic progresses. It's in-progress, though the author says it is nearly finished (six out of ten chapters are posted, and the author updates daily if not more often).
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* ''Comments'': A very original but very dark fic, Bella as a ghost is fun to read and aspects of her that were informed traits in the book, such as her love for reading and literature are actually demonstrated in her POVs. The characterization and development starts out fine, but really becomes great as the fic progresses. There's so much suspense in not knowing whether Bella survives or not, among other things. It's in-progress, though the author says it is nearly finished (six (seven out of an estimate of ten chapters are posted, and the author updates daily if not more often).
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6659952/1/Un_Fantasma_Tra_Noi Un Fantasma Tra Noi]]'' by DearTestament
* Recommended by DarkGrapefruit
* Pairing: Jasper/Bella
* ''Synopsis'': Jasper seeks Bella out before she even has the chance to attend the first day of her new school. He loses control, and now he finds himself falling in love with a girl he may have already killed. Lemons, violence, slight AU, Darksper, and Ghost!Bella.
* ''Comments'': A very original but very dark fic, Bella as a ghost is fun to read and aspects of her that were informed traits in the book, such as her love for reading and literature are actually demonstrated in her POVs. The characterization and development starts out fine, but really becomes great as the fic progresses. It's in-progress, though the author says it is nearly finished (six out of ten chapters are posted, and the author updates daily if not more often).
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[[http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-20882/Joyful+Four+Square.htm Four Square]], by Joyful
* Recommended by @/{{Zadia}}
* ''Synopsis'': [[BuffyTheVampireSlayer Buffy and Dawn]] move to Forks and become a part of an entirely new supernatural world.
* ''Comments'': A very long (72 chapters and counting) work-in-progress that's a crossover with BuffyTheVampireSlayer. It's incredibly well-written and fun to read.
* Recommended by @/{{Zadia}}
* ''Synopsis'': [[BuffyTheVampireSlayer Buffy and Dawn]] move to Forks and become a part of an entirely new supernatural world.
* ''Comments'': A very long (72 chapters and counting) work-in-progress that's a crossover with BuffyTheVampireSlayer. It's incredibly well-written and fun to read.
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* Your Mileage May Vary, since the grammar certainly leaves something to be desired, but if you don't mind editing it in your head, the actual content is good.
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* Reason: Your Mileage May Vary, since the grammar certainly leaves something to be desired, but if you don't mind editing it in your head, the actual content is good.
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* Your Mileage May Vary, since the grammar certainly leaves something to be desired, but if you don't mind editing it in your head, the actual content is good.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900267/13/A_Very_Underestimated_Emotion A Very Underestimated Emotion]] by Rockstorm
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900267/13/A_Very_Underestimated_Emotion net/s/5900267/1/A_Very_Underestimated_Emotion A Very Underestimated Emotion]] by Rockstorm
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* ''Synopsis'': A take on the phone-call between Bella and Rosalie in Breaking Dawn.
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* ''Synopsis'': A take on the phone-call between Bella and Rosalie in Breaking Dawn.''Breaking Dawn''.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4820396/1/Your_Call Your Call]] by [=SteneMichele=]
* Recommended by Twiddler
* ''Synopsis'': A take on the phone-call between Bella and Rosalie in Breaking Dawn.
* ''Comments'': What's said out loud here could have easily been canon, but it's Rosalie's thoughts, narration, and internal snark that make this one-shot what it is.
* Recommended by Twiddler
* ''Synopsis'': A take on the phone-call between Bella and Rosalie in Breaking Dawn.
* ''Comments'': What's said out loud here could have easily been canon, but it's Rosalie's thoughts, narration, and internal snark that make this one-shot what it is.
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** DOTMW: Can you say [[BetterThanCanon Better Than Canon?]] Seconded from someone who disliked the source material immensely. Bella is immediately more likable and she shares much better chemistry with Alice than Edward (though that may be more of a testament to the author's skill). If you thought the romance in Twilight was plodding and boring, this is a '''huge''' improvement
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6347942/1/going_nowhere_going_somewhere Going Nowhere, Going Somewhere]] by Estora
* Recommended by Ryan Lohner
* ''Synopsis'': Post-series, the Cullens decide to attend college, and Edward is stuck with the human roommate Caden Mills, an emotional pop culture junkie. Though initially dismissive and uncomfortable with the arrangement, Edward slowly takes more of an interest in Caden, and the entire 21st century.
* ''Comments'': Not slash, whatever that synopsis may indicate. Rather, it's an attempt to actually give Edward a personality, and though written by someone who hates the series (before this, Estora specialized in sad and disturbing one-shots about the {{Unfortunate Implications}} of the books) Edward is written as quite likable in his {{Defrosting Ice Queen}} phase. Also, Caden himself is not written as a Mary Sue on his own, which was my biggest fear going into this.
* Recommended by Ryan Lohner
* ''Synopsis'': Post-series, the Cullens decide to attend college, and Edward is stuck with the human roommate Caden Mills, an emotional pop culture junkie. Though initially dismissive and uncomfortable with the arrangement, Edward slowly takes more of an interest in Caden, and the entire 21st century.
* ''Comments'': Not slash, whatever that synopsis may indicate. Rather, it's an attempt to actually give Edward a personality, and though written by someone who hates the series (before this, Estora specialized in sad and disturbing one-shots about the {{Unfortunate Implications}} of the books) Edward is written as quite likable in his {{Defrosting Ice Queen}} phase. Also, Caden himself is not written as a Mary Sue on his own, which was my biggest fear going into this.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4677218/1/Sometimes_We_Kick_Ass Sometimes, We Kick Ass]]'' by Tuna Salad Sonnet
* Recommended by Lysandra
* Pairings: Emmett/Angela
* ''Synopsis'': A series of drabbles for an unusual pairing.
* ''Comments'': Takes place in an alternate universe in which Angela is a witch. It's an odd pairing, to be sure, but the author makes it work wonderfully. Warm fuzzies galore.
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** Thirded by Tropers/RedWren, who would like to point out it has [[Fanfic/{{Luminosity}} its own page now]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5422370/1/bFull_b_bMoon_b Full Moon]] by Alydia Rackham
* Recommended by Sarah1281
*''Synopsis'': Jacob said: "I was the natural path your life would have taken…If the world was the way it was supposed to be."Is that true? AU, a reimagining of Twilight, starting at the beginning. Jacob/Bella, Bella's POV
*''Comments'': Bella moves to Forks a semester before she does in the books and before Edward arrives so she gets a chance to get to know Jacob first. There was just so many times while reading this story that one of the things in the book that drove me crazy is completely subverted and the characters make intelligent choices. What's more, Bella? She actually cares about non-mythological creatures!
* Recommended by Sarah1281
*''Synopsis'': Jacob said: "I was the natural path your life would have taken…If the world was the way it was supposed to be."Is that true? AU, a reimagining of Twilight, starting at the beginning. Jacob/Bella, Bella's POV
*''Comments'': Bella moves to Forks a semester before she does in the books and before Edward arrives so she gets a chance to get to know Jacob first. There was just so many times while reading this story that one of the things in the book that drove me crazy is completely subverted and the characters make intelligent choices. What's more, Bella? She actually cares about non-mythological creatures!
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[[http://impishidea.com/writing/589/eternal-night Eternal Night]] by Asahel
* Recommended by {{Tropers}}/NateWinchester
* ''Synopsis'': An examination of the full consequences of Bella's choice, and what Edward did to her.
* ''Comments'': Dark with a humorous punchline.
* Recommended by {{Tropers}}/NateWinchester
* ''Synopsis'': An examination of the full consequences of Bella's choice, and what Edward did to her.
* ''Comments'': Dark with a humorous punchline.
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* ''Comments'': Also known as ''The Paper Doll Kindergarten'''s good twin. It addresses the same topic and the same issues, but it a [[{{WAFF}} totally different way]]. The last fact is three simple statements that contain as much genuine happiness as all four {{Doorstopper}}s did, and then some.
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* ''Comments'': Also known as ''The Paper Doll Kindergarten'''s good twin. It addresses the same topic and the same issues, but it a [[{{WAFF}} totally different way]]. The last fact is three simple statements that contain as much genuine happiness as all four {{Doorstopper}}s did, and then some.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900267/13/A_Very_Underestimated_Emotion A Very Underestimated Emotion]] by Rockstorm
* Recommended by Otaku998
* Pairings: Jacob/Edward
* ''Synopsis'': Basically a rewrite of Eclipse that fills in the the plot holes by creating a relationship between Jacob and Edward.
* ''Comments'': This story is incredible. The author truly talented, and that's not something I say lightly. I despise Twilight on many different levels, but this story makes it bearable, and I swear to God that Rockstorm writes the characters better than Meyer could ever hope of doing; making them more believable, relatable, and realistic. It goes for gritty realism rather than an idealised love story, and pulls it off perfectly.
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** Seconded by FelicitySprings. This troper can't stand the Twilight canon without a Rifftrax and found this fic enjoyable, to the point that it's made her more sympathetic to canon than she wants to be.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6106929/1/Bree_Cullen_My_Daughter]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1986492/]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6106929/1/Bree_Cullen_My_Daughter]]'' net/s/6106929/1/Bree_Cullen_My_Daughter Bree Cullen, My Daughter]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1986492/]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4450121/1/ Friday's Child]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/85779/Lisse Lisse]]
* Recommended by {{Tropers}}/ThinksTooMuch
* ''Synopsis'': 10 facts on Reneesmee, starting at her equivalent of sixteen and continuing onwards as she grows away from her parents and into her own person.
* ''Comments'': Also known as ''The Paper Doll Kindergarten'''s good twin. It addresses the same topic and the same issues, but it a [[{{WAFF}} totally different way]]. The last fact is three simple statements that contain as much genuine happiness as all four {{Doorstopper}}s did, and then some.
* Recommended by {{Tropers}}/ThinksTooMuch
* ''Synopsis'': 10 facts on Reneesmee, starting at her equivalent of sixteen and continuing onwards as she grows away from her parents and into her own person.
* ''Comments'': Also known as ''The Paper Doll Kindergarten'''s good twin. It addresses the same topic and the same issues, but it a [[{{WAFF}} totally different way]]. The last fact is three simple statements that contain as much genuine happiness as all four {{Doorstopper}}s did, and then some.
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*"Synopsis": Bella, compulsive sketcher of wolves, has not dreamed in years. Unexpectedly, she begins to dream again the night tragedy takes away her first and greatest love. E x B, sort of.
*"Comments": Storytelling at its best. An AlternateUniverseFic, the story starts with a death and doesn't necessarily get much happier from there, but the writing is beautiful and heartbreaking. If it wasn't fanfic, I'd be giving a copy to everyone I know for their birthday.
*"Comments": Storytelling at its best. An AlternateUniverseFic, the story starts with a death and doesn't necessarily get much happier from there, but the writing is beautiful and heartbreaking. If it wasn't fanfic, I'd be giving a copy to everyone I know for their birthday.
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''[[http://luminous.elcenia.com/ Luminosity]] by Alicorn
*Recommended by {{Ronfar}}
*Pairings: AU!Bella/Edward
*''Synopsis'': In the spirit of Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMethodsOfRationality, a very different Bella Swan moves into Forks, and discovers there's something strange about a certain family...
*''Comments'': It's much more subdued than Methods of Rationality, because the world (as opposed to the characters) of the Twilight series isn't as easy to mock as the Harry Potter universe is, but it's still a nice example of "doing rationality to" a book series with, shall we say, "issues".
