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* "Synopsis:" "As he held the still and small body in his hands, he shattered." Saying anything further would spoil this provocative and emotional one-shot story. I would also suggest that you have tissues handy.
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* "Synopsis:" ''Synopsis:'' "As he held the still and small body in his hands, he shattered." Saying anything further would spoil this provocative and emotional one-shot story. I would also suggest that you have tissues handy.
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* "Synopsis:" "As he held the still and small body in his hands, he shattered." A one-shot AU where in Naruto died still-born and Madara never attacked. This fic is a total tear-jerker and very well written. This troper cried buckets so have tissues handy!
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* "Synopsis:" "As he held the still and small body in his hands, he shattered." A Saying anything further would spoil this provocative and emotional one-shot AU where in Naruto died still-born and Madara never attacked. This fic is a total tear-jerker and very well written. This troper cried buckets so story. I would also suggest that you have tissues handy!handy.
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* Recommended by Awika
* "Synopsis:" "As he held the still and small body in his hands, he shattered." A one-shot AU where in Naruto died still-born and Madara never attacked. This fic is a total tear-jerker and very well written. This troper cried buckets so have tissues handy!
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6418801/1/Uchiha_Obito_Ghost!]] Uchiha Obito Ghost!''
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6418801/1/Uchiha_Obito_Ghost!]] Uchiha Obito Ghost!''
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* ''Synopsis:'' Minato coming back to help Naruto along? So cliche. Let's bring Obito back instead! Basically, this is a story about the changes created by a certain Uchiha Obito coming back to help Naruto along- as a ghost. Although the chapters before the Chuunin Exams may be somewhat similar to canon, I highly suggest you stick through to at least the end of the Chuunin Exams before making a decision or not. Desciptions may be sometimes scarse, but it is still a good story. Very funny, too- this author likes to sometimes include funny extras at the end. But even without those, this is a humor fanfiction.
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* ''Synopsis:'' Minato coming back to help Naruto along? So cliche. Let's bring Obito back instead! Basically, this is a story about the changes created by a certain Uchiha Obito coming back to help Naruto along- as a ghost. Although the chapters before the Chuunin Exams may be somewhat similar to canon, I highly suggest you stick through to at least the end of the Chuunin Exams before making a decision or not. Desciptions may be sometimes scarse, but it is still a good story. Very funny, too- this author likes to sometimes include funny extras at the end. But even without those, this is a humor fanfiction.fanfiction.
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by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2581556/Namikaze_Artemis]]''net/u/2581556/Namikaze_Artemis]]Namikaze Artemis''
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*Recommended by luciamalpense
* ''Synopsis:'' Minato coming back to help Naruto along? So cliche. Let's bring Obito back instead! Basically, this is a story about the changes created by a certain Uchiha Obito coming back to help Naruto along- as a ghost. Although the chapters before the Chuunin Exams may be somewhat similar to canon, I highly suggest you stick through to at least the end of the Chuunin Exams before making a decision or not. Desciptions may be sometimes scarse, but it is still a good story. Very funny, too- this author likes to sometimes include funny extras at the end. But even without those, this is a humor fanfiction.
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* ''Comments'': The fic is well written and has an interesting plot, and the author does have a pretty good grip on the cannon's character's personalities. It is from his OC's viewpoint most of the time, but manages to sidestep the familiar trap of gary sue-dom by giving the cannon characters their chances to shine and by focusing most of Koyaiba's attention on said cannon characters. Chapters are short, but updates are frequent, and the fic is currently midway through the chunin exams.
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* ''Comments'': The fic is well written and has an interesting plot, and the author does have a pretty good grip on the cannon's character's personalities. It is from his OC's viewpoint most of the time, but manages to sidestep the familiar trap of gary sue-dom by giving the cannon characters their chances to shine and by focusing most of Koyaiba's attention on said cannon characters. Chapters are short, but updates are frequent, and the fic is currently midway through the chunin exams.
exams have just ended. (30/05/11)
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* Reccomended by capeclare
* ''Synopsis:'' Kakashi shortly after the Wave mission decides to give his cute little Genin the talk the how have already been explained at the academy but the why's are no Kakashis job. Kakashi is captured so birlliantly in this fic as are all the other character scene there is humor Kakaashis perspective is great for that but it tackles some serious issues and does it with class and style that is hard to match.
* Reccomended by capeclare
* ''Synopsis:'' Kakashi shortly after the Wave mission decides to give his cute little Genin the talk the how have already been explained at the academy but the why's are no Kakashis job. Kakashi is captured so birlliantly in this fic as are all the other character scene there is humor Kakaashis perspective is great for that but it tackles some serious issues and does it with class and style that is hard to match.
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* Reccomended by capeclare
* ''Synopsis:'' Kakashi, shortly after the Wave mission, decides to give his cute little Genin the talk (the how having already been explained at the academy, but the why's are not Kakashis job). Kakashi is captured so brilliantly in this fic as are all the other characters. Kakaashi's perspective is great for humor but it tackles some serious issues and does it with class and style that is hard to match.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5734698/1/The_Talk_Shinobi_Version]]''by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/343547/Sakiku]]''
* Reccomended by capeclare
* ''Synopsis:'' Kakashi shortly after the Wave mission decides to give his cute little Genin the talk the how have already been explained at the academy but the why's are no Kakashis job. Kakashi is captured so birlliantly in this fic as are all the other character scene there is humor Kakaashis perspective is great for that but it tackles some serious issues and does it with class and style that is hard to match.
* Reccomended by capeclare
* ''Synopsis:'' Kakashi shortly after the Wave mission decides to give his cute little Genin the talk the how have already been explained at the academy but the why's are no Kakashis job. Kakashi is captured so birlliantly in this fic as are all the other character scene there is humor Kakaashis perspective is great for that but it tackles some serious issues and does it with class and style that is hard to match.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6778637/1/Naruto_Ink_reign_supreme]]'', by kadaverific
* recommended by Ironypus
* ''Synopsis'': In a world where nipples spontaneously combust...not really though, just a story I'm writing with no idea where the plot is going.
* ''Comments'': It's rather good but quite new and at times seems to make fun of some of the silly bits in the original Manga, in short. Go read it.
* recommended by Ironypus
* ''Synopsis'': In a world where nipples spontaneously combust...not really though, just a story I'm writing with no idea where the plot is going.
* ''Comments'': It's rather good but quite new and at times seems to make fun of some of the silly bits in the original Manga, in short. Go read it.
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* Recommended by Ironypus
* ''Synopsis'': In a world where nipples spontaneously combust...not really though, just a story I'm writing with no idea where the plot is going.
* ''Comments'': It's rather good but quite new and at times seems to make fun of some of the silly bits in the original Manga, in short. Go read it.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6778637/1/Naruto_Ink_reign_supreme]]'', by kadaverific
* recommended by Ironypus
* ''Synopsis'': In a world where nipples spontaneously combust...not really though, just a story I'm writing with no idea where the plot is going.
* ''Comments'': It's rather good but quite new and at times seems to make fun of some of the silly bits in the original Manga, in short. Go read it.
* recommended by Ironypus
* ''Synopsis'': In a world where nipples spontaneously combust...not really though, just a story I'm writing with no idea where the plot is going.
* ''Comments'': It's rather good but quite new and at times seems to make fun of some of the silly bits in the original Manga, in short. Go read it.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6655257/1/He_Died_Smiling He Died Smiling]]'' by Animeperson798[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2385925/animeperson798 Animeperson798]]
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* ''Synopsis'': Beneath all the lies and deception, Uchiha Itachi is still a human being. Not just a human being, but a teenage boy, and is still subject to all the wants and desires thereof.
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* ''Synopsis'': Beneath all the lies lies, fears, hatred and deception, Uchiha Itachi is still a human being. Not just a human being, but a teenage boy, and is still subject to all the wants and desires thereof.
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* ''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. Also, according to the Author Note at the beginning, we will be treated to Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
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* ''Synopsis'': While Beneath all the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove lies and deception, Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan is still a human being. Not just a human being, but a teenage boy, and spare his brother, is still subject to all the wants and how he struggles desires thereof.
*''Comments'': This author seems toreconcile himself with his past. Also, according be attempting to [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstruct]] the Author Note theory that Itachi was [[IncorruptiblePurePureness incorruptible]], as well as paint Madara as a ManipulativeBastard. It is still ongoing at about twelve chapters, last time I checked, and the beginning, we will be treated to Itachi's struggles with mental illness.writer is practically ''begging'' for constructive criticism.
*''Comments'': This author seems to
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6655257/1/He_Died_Smiling He Died Smiling]]'' by Animeperson798
* Recommended by Animeartist999
* ''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. Also, according to the Author Note at the beginning, we will be treated to Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
* Recommended by Animeartist999
* ''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. Also, according to the Author Note at the beginning, we will be treated to Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
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* Recommended by Animeartist999
* ''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. Also, according to the Author Note at the beginning, we will be treated to Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
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* Recommended by Animeperson999, Avalon's bestest buddy and (not-so) HeterosexualLifePartner
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* ''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. And, according to the AuthorFilibuster at the beginning, Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
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* ''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. And, Also, according to the AuthorFilibuster Author Note at the beginning, we will be treated to Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6655257/1/He_Died_Smiling He Died Smiling]] by Animeperson798
*Recommended by Animeperson999, Avalon's bestest buddy and (not-so) HeterosexualLifePartner
*''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. And, according to the AuthorFilibuster at the beginning, Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
*Recommended by Animeperson999, Avalon's bestest buddy and (not-so) HeterosexualLifePartner
*''Synopsis'': While the fic is still ongoing, the plot basically explores what drove Uchiha Itachi to kill his clan and spare his brother, and how he struggles to reconcile himself with his past. And, according to the AuthorFilibuster at the beginning, Itachi's struggles with mental illness.
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*** Not my cup of tea. Naruto reaches almost GodModeSue level and the blatant dislike of Sasuke is painful to read.
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**Some laugh-out-loud moments (Sasuke [[BreakTheHaughty suffers so well]]) and unbelievably romantic. She also has such a good explanation for Naruto's [[ObliviousToLove obliviousness]] towards Hinata I'm surprised that no-one's made the connection before. My only criticism is that it becomes a bit samey - towards the end, I was having trouble telling who was with who, who'd had a baby or who wanted to get married, etcetera. - @/AckSed
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***Noremac This is very well written, but contains a lot of OOC-ness. If you don't mind that, though, a very good read.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745473/1/b_Accidental_b_Companions_b]]" net/s/5745473/1/b_Accidental_b_Companions_b]]Accidental Companions" by Windschild8178
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* ''Synopsis'': One of the most unusual, angsty works I have ever read. Basically, Kakashi goes away on a five week mission, and Team 7 looks after three of his dogs. Guruko happens to be the dog Naruto looks after. As the two form a friendship, Guruko learns that there is another side to Naruto. Saying anything else will ruin it!
* ''Comments'': Though not always perfectly written, I've fallen in love with this fic because of its deeper look in to exactly what Naruto's mental state is really like. Its currently got 16 chapters, and was updated earlier last month. Come on, give it a chance! :)
* ''Comments'': Though not always perfectly written, I've fallen in love with this fic because of its deeper look in to exactly what Naruto's mental state is really like. Its currently got 16 chapters, and was updated earlier last month. Come on, give it a chance! :)
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* ''Synopsis'': One of the most unusual, angsty works I have ever read. Basically, Kakashi goes away on a five week mission, and Team 7 looks after three of his dogs. Guruko happens to be the dog Naruto looks after. As the two form a friendship, Guruko learns that there is another side to Naruto. This is a very dark fic at times, so go in expecting the worst! Saying anything else will ruin it!
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* ''Comments'': Though not always perfectly written, I've fallen in love with this fic because of its deeper look in to exactly what Naruto's mental state is really like. Its currently got 16 chapters, and was updated earlier last month. Come on, give it a chance! :)
* ''Comments'': Though not always perfectly written, I've fallen in love with this fic because of its deeper look in to exactly what Naruto's mental state is really like. Its currently got 16 chapters, and was updated earlier last month. Come on, give it a chance! :)
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745473/1/_b_Accidental_bCompanions_b]]" net/s/5745473/1/b_Accidental_b_Companions_b]]" by Windschild8178
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* ''Comments'': The fic is well written and has an interesting plot, and the author does have a pretty good grip on the cannon's character's personalities. It is from his OC's viewpoint most of the time, but manages to sidestep the familiar trap of gary sue-dom by giving the cannon characters their chances to shine and by focusing most of Koyaiba's attention on said cannon characters. Chapters are short, but updates are frequent, and the fic is currently midway through the chunin exams.
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* ''Comments'': The fic is well written and has an interesting plot, and the author does have a pretty good grip on the cannon's character's personalities. It is from his OC's viewpoint most of the time, but manages to sidestep the familiar trap of gary sue-dom by giving the cannon characters their chances to shine and by focusing most of Koyaiba's attention on said cannon characters. Chapters are short, but updates are frequent, and the fic is currently midway through the chunin exams.exams.
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745473/1/_b_Accidental_bCompanions_b]]" by Windschild8178
* Recommended by LadyVenamisa
* ''Synopsis'': One of the most unusual, angsty works I have ever read. Basically, Kakashi goes away on a five week mission, and Team 7 looks after three of his dogs. Guruko happens to be the dog Naruto looks after. As the two form a friendship, Guruko learns that there is another side to Naruto. Saying anything else will ruin it!
* ''Comments'': Though not always perfectly written, I've fallen in love with this fic because of its deeper look in to exactly what Naruto's mental state is really like. Its currently got 16 chapters, and was updated earlier last month. Come on, give it a chance! :)
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745473/1/_b_Accidental_bCompanions_b]]" by Windschild8178
* Recommended by LadyVenamisa
* ''Synopsis'': One of the most unusual, angsty works I have ever read. Basically, Kakashi goes away on a five week mission, and Team 7 looks after three of his dogs. Guruko happens to be the dog Naruto looks after. As the two form a friendship, Guruko learns that there is another side to Naruto. Saying anything else will ruin it!
* ''Comments'': Though not always perfectly written, I've fallen in love with this fic because of its deeper look in to exactly what Naruto's mental state is really like. Its currently got 16 chapters, and was updated earlier last month. Come on, give it a chance! :)
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** Catt: I avoided this story for quite some time, dismissing it as another OC horrorfest. I'm glad I finally decided to give it a go. This story is incredibly interesting, avoiding most of the over used cliché’s and hang-ups that plague Naruto fanfics. Most. Civilian's treat Naruto worse than Canon, though thankfully not to [[WallBanger Mob]] levels, Naruto turns to Angst whenever the Kyuubi is mentioned and alot of Naruto's problems are due to the academy instructors sabotaging him. However, God Mode Naruto is majorly averted, Aiko is most definitely not a MarySue, there is an interesting take on Sasuke and Sakura's character, and an even more interesting portrayal of Naruto and Kyuubi. I was especially pleased with [[spoiler: Kyuubi trying to turn on the charm in order to persuade Naruto, using the term Kit, considering that it was rather obviously a ploy.]] Though you should be warned, while still relatively Idealistic, it is further down on the Cynical side than Canon. This is not necessarily a bad thing.
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** Catt: I avoided this story for quite some time, dismissing it as another OC horrorfest. I'm glad I finally decided to give it a go. This story is incredibly interesting, avoiding most of the over used cliché’s and hang-ups that plague Naruto fanfics. Most. Civilian's treat Naruto worse than Canon, though thankfully not to [[WallBanger Mob]] Mob levels, Naruto turns to Angst whenever the Kyuubi is mentioned and alot of Naruto's problems are due to the academy instructors sabotaging him. However, God Mode Naruto is majorly averted, Aiko is most definitely not a MarySue, there is an interesting take on Sasuke and Sakura's character, and an even more interesting portrayal of Naruto and Kyuubi. I was especially pleased with [[spoiler: Kyuubi trying to turn on the charm in order to persuade Naruto, using the term Kit, considering that it was rather obviously a ploy.]] Though you should be warned, while still relatively Idealistic, it is further down on the Cynical side than Canon. This is not necessarily a bad thing.
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*** @/USABobcat I have loved this fic for a long time, and am glad to see it up here. Highlights are Kyuubi's rampant pervertedness and [[spoiler: Itachi and Kisame]] finding Naruto by playing a street concert, figuring that he will find them sooner or later. Also: Kisame's love for [[spoiler: Jaws, even rooting for the shark.]] Really, it came out of nowhere, but I loved it.
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*** @/USABobcat I have loved this fic for a long time, and am glad to see it up here. Highlights are Kyuubi's rampant pervertedness and [[spoiler: Itachi and Kisame]] finding Naruto by playing a street concert, [[GenreSavvy figuring that he will find them sooner or later.later]]. Also: Kisame's love for [[spoiler: Jaws, even rooting for the shark.]] Really, it came out of nowhere, but I loved it.
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** Josher: Even though it's well written there are some jarring points: Through [[TookALevelInBadass extensive training Naruto is somewhat superpowered]], Sasuke has JerkAss levels up to Chunin Exam Day, and DeusAngstMachina is employed liberally against Naruto. Added edit: The writer follows TheStationsOfTheCanon to the point of even including most of the conversations word for word from the first couple chapters of the manga, Kakashi also experiences a minor version of the DeusAngstMachina and is sympathetic, and extremely jarring is when [[spoiler: the Hokage allows [[WallBanger Kakashi to guilt trip Naruto into forming Team 7,]] [[PlotInducedStupidity despite all the blatant evidence showing in the story that]] [[AxCrazy Sasuke is a sociopath]], [[TheChick Sakura is]] [[TheLoad unprepared to be a ninja]], and [[BadAss Naruto is leagues ahead of both of them]], and that the team is completely incompatible. The Hokage can't do anything else because of the Council.]]
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** Josher: Even though it's well written there are some jarring points: Through [[TookALevelInBadass extensive training Naruto is somewhat superpowered]], Sasuke has JerkAss levels up to Chunin Exam Day, and DeusAngstMachina is employed liberally against Naruto. Added edit: The writer follows TheStationsOfTheCanon to the point of even including most of the conversations word for word from the first couple chapters of the manga, Kakashi also experiences a minor version of the DeusAngstMachina and is sympathetic, and extremely jarring is when [[spoiler: the Hokage allows [[WallBanger Kakashi to guilt trip Naruto into forming Team 7,]] 7, [[PlotInducedStupidity despite all the blatant evidence showing in the story that]] [[AxCrazy Sasuke is a sociopath]], [[TheChick Sakura is]] [[TheLoad unprepared to be a ninja]], and [[BadAss Naruto is leagues ahead of both of them]], and that the team is completely incompatible. The Hokage can't do anything else because of the Council.]]