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* AssholeVictim: While King Ro was innocent of killing Jade, he was also kind of a homophobic jackass.
* GreaterScopeVillain: King Nikolas only appears in two chapters; he's still responsible for pretty much everything that went wrong for both Eternia AND Etheria over the previous 1000 years (and since what happens on Eternia effects the entire universe, that means he's also responsible for Horde Prime's rise to power). He's also the guy who saved Skeletor's life when he was mortally wounded and is implied to have taught him the ways of being evil.
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** Nikolas wasn't Mara's father in the She-Ra series or a member of the Grayskull family at all.
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* TeensAreMonsters: Evil-Lyn kidnapped Adora and Adam when she was a teenager; Webstor also worked for Skeletor as a teenager.
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* EmotionallyTongueTied: Frosta is so attracted to Adam when they first meet, she can't even form a real word arounf him and passes out.
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* EmotionallyTongueTied: Frosta is so attracted to Adam when they first meet, she can't even form a real word arounf around him and passes out.
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* EmotionallyTongueTied: Frosta is so attracted to Adam when they first meet, she can't even form a real word arounf him and passes out.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Scorpia is a lesbian in canon, but here she has ShipTease with Mekanek.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Perfuma and Scorpia is a lesbian end up together in canon, but here the former explicitly states she prefers boys and the latter has ShipTease with Mekanek.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Scorpia is a lesbian in canon, but here she has ShipTease with Mekanek.
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** As the Crimson Wastes are part of Scorpia's territory in this fic, Huntara works for the Horde.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: When Hordak first invaded Eternia, he got his ass handed pretty easily and was kind of a loser thanks to King Miro frequently making a fool of him. When h first arrived on Etheria and started his conquest, however, he quickly became TheDreaded due to being against a planet of pacifists who didn't know the first thing about warfare.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: When Hordak first invaded Eternia, he got his ass handed pretty easily and was kind of a loser thanks to King Miro frequently making a fool of him. When h he first arrived on Etheria and started his conquest, however, he quickly became TheDreaded due to being against a planet of pacifists who didn't know the first thing about warfare.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: When Hordak first invaded Eternia, he got his ass handed pretty easily and was kind of a loser thanks to King Miro frequently making a fool of him. When h first arrived on Etheria and started his conquest, however, he quickly became TheDreaded due to being against a planet of pacifists who didn't know the first thing about warfare.
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* {{Mooks}}: The Horde army. When Entrapta asks Emily which of the 12,082 soldiers stationed at the Amethyst Tower are considered expendable, Emily simply states that ''all'' of them are.
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* AntiHero: King Ro, the last He-Man before Adam, was this of the [[NominalHero nominal variety]]. He did do protecting, but he'd only do so if he could gain something out of it and was all-in-all, a complete asshole most of the time.
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* AntiHero: King Ro, the last He-Man before Adam, was this of the [[NominalHero nominal variety]]. He did do protecting, but he'd only do so if he could gain something out of it and was was, all-in-all, a complete asshole most of the time.
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** It is implied something happened between the Sorceress and Shadow Weaver before Adam and Adora showed up. Something the Sorceress rather not talk about.
** In the thirteenth week of Adora's time with her family, she and Adam were somehow turned into birds (an owl and raven respectively). Absolutely no explanation is given for how this happened.
** In the thirteenth week of Adora's time with her family, she and Adam were somehow turned into birds (an owl and raven respectively). Absolutely no explanation is given for how this happened.
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** It is It's implied something ''something'' happened between the Sorceress and Shadow Weaver before Adam and Adora showed up. Something the Sorceress rather not talk about.
** In the thirteenth week of Adora's time with her family, she and Adam were somehow turned into birds (an owl and raven respectively). Absolutely no explanation is given for how thishappened.happened and it's undone in the next scene transition.
** In the thirteenth week of Adora's time with her family, she and Adam were somehow turned into birds (an owl and raven respectively). Absolutely no explanation is given for how this
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* WouldHurtAChild: Skeletor and Evil-Lyn go way beyond this since they kidnapped Adam and Adora when they were babies and attempted to throw them into a deathly wormhole to a potentially horrid DeathWorld or a vacuum.
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** The Heart of Etheria doesn't exist here since the story was written before Season 4.
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** The Heart of Etheria doesn't exist here since seeing as the story was written before Season 4.
