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** Things get better after Kim faces the situation honestly. The closest thing to a negative reaction is her mom's disappointment that a wedding and kids are now less likely. Her dad is [[OverprotectiveDad just happy that he can stop worrying about Kim]] [[ComicallyMissingThePoint getting involved with boys]].
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** Things get better after Kim faces the situation honestly. The closest thing to a negative reaction is her mom's disappointment that a wedding and kids are now less likely. Her dad is [[OverprotectiveDad just happy that he can stop worrying about Kim]] Kim [[ComicallyMissingThePoint getting involved with boys]].
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome ruined]]'' [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome their ability to take initiative]] when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome ''[[{{Deconstruction}} ruined]]'' [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome [[{{Deconstruction}} their ability to take initiative]] when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''ruined'' their ability to take initiative when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''ruined'' ''[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome ruined]]'' [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome their ability to take initiative initiative]] when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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* MeaningfulName: [[SentientVehicle Sappho]] shamelessly flirts with Shego, getting particularly saucy when Shego [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow pilots]] her.
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* MeaningfulName: [[SentientVehicle Sappho]] shamelessly flirts with Shego, getting particularly saucy when Shego [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow pilots]] pilots her.
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome ruined]]'' their ability to take initiative when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome ruined]]'' ''ruined'' their ability to take initiative when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: After Bonnie outs Kim, Josh Mankey realizes [[AlphaBitch just how mean-spirited she is]] and breaks up with her. Bonnie [[NeverMyFault blames Kim]], and agrees to help Dementor lure her into a trap. She regrets doing that... when she [[WhatAnIdiot belatedly realizes]] [[OhCrap the potential consequences]] (being charged as an accessory to Dementor's crimes and losing Josh forever) if she gets caught.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: After Bonnie outs Kim, Josh Mankey realizes [[AlphaBitch just how mean-spirited she is]] and breaks up with her. Bonnie [[NeverMyFault blames Kim]], and agrees to help Dementor lure her into a trap. She regrets doing that... when she [[WhatAnIdiot [[OhCrap belatedly realizes]] [[OhCrap the potential consequences]] (being charged that if she gets caught she's likely to be implicated as an accessory to Dementor's crimes and losing lose Josh forever) if she gets caught.forever.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10099962/1/Send-Out-the-Clones Send Out the Clones]]'' (in progress, [[TimeSkip set three years after]] ''[=UtMWT=]'').
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10099962/1/Send-Out-the-Clones Send Out the Clones]]'' (in progress, (incomplete and possibly a DeadFic, [[TimeSkip set three years after]] ''[=UtMWT=]'').
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''ruined'' their ability to take initiative when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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** Also, Gemini's habit of [[YouHaveFailedMe dropping unsuccessful agents down trapdoors]] has ''ruined'' ''[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome ruined]]'' their ability to take initiative when a situation goes off-script, a flaw [[spoiler:the hostages at the Space Center]] are able to exploit at a critical moment.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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** Shego has [[BiTheWay enjoyed both male and female encounters]], but considers Kim to be special because she's her one and only equal.
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** Shego has [[BiTheWay enjoyed both male and female encounters]], encounters, but considers Kim to be special because she's her one and only equal.
