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* TakeThat: It's subtle, but chapter 95 gives on to the [[Fanon/{{Naruto}} idea of Naruto being physically abused during his academy days]], with the ANBU Kido saying that only a fool would willingly assault Konoha's only Jinchuuriki.
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* TakeThat: It's subtle, but chapter 95 gives on one to the [[Fanon/{{Naruto}} idea of Naruto being physically abused during his academy days]], with the ANBU Kido saying that only a fool would willingly assault Konoha's only Jinchuuriki.
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* TakeThat: It's subtle, but chapter 95 gives on to the [[Fanon/{{Naruto}} idea of Naruto being physically abused during his academy days]], with the ANBU Kido saying that only a fool would willingly assault Konoha's only Jinchuuriki.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Hiashi's father had no name in neither the manga nor the anime. This fic gives him the name "Yoshikane".
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** Hiashi's father had no name in neither the manga nor the anime. This fic gives him the name"Yoshikane"."Yoshikane".
** Hiashi’s wife is given the name Hitomi.
** Hiashi's father had no name in neither the manga nor the anime. This fic gives him the name
** Hiashi’s wife is given the name Hitomi.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Contrary to his [[AbusiveParents usual]] depiction in fanon, Hiashi Hyuuga is one. While he begins distant as usual, his views begin to change during the pitched match between Neji and Hinata. After the Invasion, he personally begins training the two, in hopes of convincing the clan elders to change traditions on the Cursed Seal.
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** Contrary to his [[AbusiveParents usual]] depiction in fanon, Hiashi Hyuuga is one. While he begins distant as usual, his views begin to change during the pitched match between Neji and Hinata. After the Invasion, he personally begins training the two, in hopes of convincing the clan elders to change traditions on the CursedSeal.Seal.
** In a similar vein, Koharu and Homura are shown to be reasonable in the limited screen time they get.
** Contrary to his [[AbusiveParents usual]] depiction in fanon, Hiashi Hyuuga is one. While he begins distant as usual, his views begin to change during the pitched match between Neji and Hinata. After the Invasion, he personally begins training the two, in hopes of convincing the clan elders to change traditions on the Cursed
** In a similar vein, Koharu and Homura are shown to be reasonable in the limited screen time they get.
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* MasterofIllusion: Sakura is one and in Chapter 94, uses her Genjutsu in conjunction with Fuinjutsu.
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** [[spoiler: Dosu and Tayuya pull a HeelFaceTurn and became Konoha nin]] after the Sand-Sound Invasion.
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* DoorStopper: A monster of more than a million words, you'll find very few fanfics longer than this one.
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** [[spoiler: Dosu and Tayuya pull a HeelFaceTurn]] after the Sand-Sound Invasion.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Sasuke isn't tempted to pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II, especially since [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
** Sasuke isn't tempted to pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II, especially since [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-SoundInvasion.Invasion.
** [[spoiler: Dosu and Tayuya pull a HeelFaceTurn]] after the Sand-Sound Invasion
** Sasuke isn't tempted to pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II, especially since [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound
** [[spoiler: Dosu and Tayuya pull a HeelFaceTurn]] after the Sand-Sound Invasion
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The fic is ongoing, currently sitting at over half a million words and counting.
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** During the Shippuden part of the story, we see Kurotsuchi learning Dust Release from Onoki.
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** During the Shippuden part of the story, we see Kurotsuchi learning being able to use Dust Release from Onoki.Release.
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** During the Shippuden part of the story, we see Kurotsuchi learning Dust Release from Onoki.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: Sasuke isn't tempted to pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: Sasuke isn't tempted to pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].II, especially since [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: Sasuke isn't tempted to pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: Sasuke doesn't isn't tempted pull a FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: Sasuke doesn't pull a HeelFaceTurn FaceHeelTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: Sasuke doesn't pull a HeelFace Turn HeelFaceTurn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, spoiler: Sasuke doesn't pull a [[Heel–Face Turn]] and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, spoiler: [[spoiler: Sasuke doesn't pull a [[Heel–Face Turn]] HeelFace Turn and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II.II]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Because [[spoiler: Orochimaru dies]] during the Sand-Sound Invasion, [[spoiler: spoiler: Sasuke doesn't pull a [[Heel–Face Turn]] and remains a loyal Konoha nin during Part II]].II.
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** [[spoiler: Sai]], another character who made all the way to the epilogue, is killed by Sakura during the Root Arc.
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** Same for [[spoiler: Sai]], another character who made all the way to the epilogue, is killed by Sakura during the Root Arc.
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** [[spoiler: Sai]] also kicks the bucket, killed by Sakura during the Root Arc.
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* DemotedToExtra: The rest of Team 7 (Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi) recieve much less focus, due to the protagonist being on a different team. However, Sasuke does receive significant development during the Chunin Exams, even being convinced to not pull a FaceHeelTurn. Sakura is later developed during a return mission to Nami no Kuni, dealing with her feeling of CantCatchUp. Both also become close friends of Naruto regardless.
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* DemotedToExtra: The rest of Team 7 (Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi) recieve receive much less focus, due to the protagonist being on a different team. However, Sasuke does receive significant development during the Chunin Exams, even being convinced to not pull a FaceHeelTurn. Sakura is later developed during a return mission to Nami no Kuni, dealing with her feeling of CantCatchUp. Both also become close friends of Naruto regardless.
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** [[spoiler: Sai]] also kicks the bucket, killed by Sakura during the Root Arc.
* EvilCounterpart: Tatsuma Aburame is this to Shino. While the latter (and presumably, the rest of his clan) shows a lot of care of his kikaichu, Tatsuma only sees them as tools and submits them to harsh conditions in order to make them stronger, not caring that most of them die as a result.
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-->""Disgusting." Naruto finished Han's sentence with a slight growl. The blonde was clenching his fists tightly. "…even if he lost most of his clan, even if Kiba was also being an ass, that is no excuse for that. He looked like he was going to straight up kill him, and Kiba didn't do a damn thing! He wasn't the one who killed anyone in war." The Uzumaki turned his look over to where Risho was in the corner of the room. His eyes narrowed. "It's disgusting and pathetic!""
*** Later {{Subverted}} : when meeting Risho's cousin, who's even more of a {{Jerkass}}, verbally abuses Risho and threatened to have him thrown out of the clan, Naruto quickly sympathizes with Risho.
*** Later {{Subverted}} : when meeting Risho's cousin, who's even more of a {{Jerkass}}, verbally abuses Risho and threatened to have him thrown out of the clan, Naruto quickly sympathizes with Risho.
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*** Later {{Subverted}} : when meeting Risho's cousin, who's even more of a {{Jerkass}}, verbally abuses Risho and threatened to have him thrown out of the clan, Naruto quickly sympathizes with Risho.
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** [[spoiler: Orchimaru and Baki]] die during the Sound-Sand invasion.
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** An old woman explains to Shikamaru and Suigetsu in Chapter 45 that she is excited about the execution of 5 bloodline wielders because her husband and children were killed by the Kaguya clan (who happens to have bloodlines). While they hide it, Suigetsu (who has a bloodline himself) later tells Shikamaru that he's not sympathetic at all and that he's sure that the people about to be executed have nothing to do with the woman's family's death. Shikamaru agrees.
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** An old woman explains to Shikamaru and Suigetsu in Chapter 45 that she is excited about the execution of 5 five bloodline wielders because her husband and children were killed by the Kaguya clan (who happens to have bloodlines). While they hide it, Suigetsu (who has a bloodline himself) later tells Shikamaru that he's not sympathetic at all and that he's sure that the people about to be executed have nothing to do with the woman's family's death. Shikamaru agrees.
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** [[BadassGrandma Koharu]] is the "Grim Reaper of Konoha". Chapter 57 shows that she more than lives up to the name.
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** [[BadassGrandma Koharu]] is the "Grim Reaper of Konoha". Chapter 57 shows that she more than lives up to the name.
** [[FantasticRacism Karitoriki]] is Kirigakure's [[FinalSolution "Bloodline Hunter/Executioner"]]. In his first appearance, in chapter 45, he executes 5 people who happened to have bloodlines.
** [[BadassGrandma Koharu]] is the "Grim Reaper of Konoha". Chapter 57 shows that she more than lives up to the name.
** [[FantasticRacism Karitoriki]] is Kirigakure's [[FinalSolution "Bloodline Hunter/Executioner"]]. In his first appearance, in chapter 45, he executes 5 people who happened to have bloodlines.
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** When Hiruzen orders Tsunade to come back to Konoha, he tells her that the loss of Dan and Nawaki is not an excuse to become bitter towards Konoha, as it would dishonor the very thing Dan and Nawaki fought for.
-->'''Hiruzen''' : I know what happened to Nawaki and Dan, Tsunade. I know you are still affected by the events, but we have all experienced loss. I gave you all of the time in the world to mourn; I did not give you time to allow your grief to consume you. And I did not give you time to place any form of bitterness against Konoha, the very village that both Nawaki and Dan loved above all else! They would both be honored to see you as the Hokage and you know that. Don't reject the title [of Hokage] out of bitterness; the very action is a direct insult against everything they stood for!"
-->'''Hiruzen''' : I know what happened to Nawaki and Dan, Tsunade. I know you are still affected by the events, but we have all experienced loss. I gave you all of the time in the world to mourn; I did not give you time to allow your grief to consume you. And I did not give you time to place any form of bitterness against Konoha, the very village that both Nawaki and Dan loved above all else! They would both be honored to see you as the Hokage and you know that. Don't reject the title [of Hokage] out of bitterness; the very action is a direct insult against everything they stood for!"