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* TheBusCameBack: After being eliminated, [[spoiler:Brick and Trent, joined by Cody,]] get to return to the competition as a result of popular vote.
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. [[HulkingOut He also mentally reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry.]]
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. [[HulkingOut He also mentally reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry.]]
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* BigBad: Justin takes on the role of the most villainous contestant after Jo and Scott are eliminated, just as he tried to be in ''Action''.
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. [[HulkingOut He also mentally reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry.]]
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state]] state whenever he gets angry.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Justin and Scott are only out for themselves, and are willing to use their other teammates' feelings for them (Sadie for Justin, Anne Maria for Scott) to win by any means necessary.
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* TheBusCameBack: After being eliminated, [[spoiler:Brick, Trent and Cody]] get to return to the competition as a result of popular vote.
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* TheBusCameBack: After being eliminated, [[spoiler:Brick, Trent [[spoiler:Brick and Cody]] Trent, joined by Cody,]] get to return to the competition as a result of popular vote.
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. [[spoiler:He He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state]] whenever he gets angry]].angry.
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* SplitPersonality: All five of Mike's canonical alternate personalities appear at one time or another.are here: Chester, Svetlana, Vito and Manitoba Smith all make apppearances. [[spoiler:Mal also appears during the obstacle course race after Mike [[RageBreakingPoint becomes incredibly angry]] out of fear that Zoey only likes him for his personalities and not for Mike himself.]]
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** Dakota keeps her orange skin and green hair from her time as the monstrous Dakotazoid, as well as some of her mutant strength.
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** Dakota keeps her orange skin and green hair from her time as the monstrous Dakotazoid, as well as some of her mutant strength. [[spoiler:It all disappears by the time she fully reverts to her human form, at which point she gets eliminated]].
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. He [[spoiler:He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state]] whenever [[spoiler:he he gets angry]].
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* HulkingOut: Ezekiel [[spoiler:mentally reverts to his feral state whenever [[spoiler:he gets angry]].
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* HulkingOut: Ezekiel spoiler:mentally [[spoiler:mentally reverts to his feral state whenever [[spoiler:he gets angry]].
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* DeadFic: Appears to be the case, as the The fic hasn't been updated since 2015.
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** Dakota keeps her orange skin and green hair from her time as Dakotazoid, as well as some of her mutant strength. [[spoiler:It all disappears by the time she fully reverts to her human form, at which point she gets eliminated]].
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours]]. [[spoiler:He He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state state]] whenever he [[spoiler:he gets angry]].]]
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* SplitPersonality: All of Mike's personalities are here: Chester, Svetlana, Vito and Manitoba Smith all make apppearances. [[spoiler:Mal also appears during the obstacle course race after Mike [[RageBreakingPoint becomes incredibly angry]] out of fear that Zoey only likes him for his personalities and not for Mike himself.]]
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* SplitPersonality: All five of Mike's canonical alternate personalities are here: Chester, Svetlana, Vito and Manitoba Smith all make apppearances. [[spoiler:Mal also appears during the obstacle course race after Mike [[RageBreakingPoint becomes incredibly angry]] out of fear that Zoey only likes him for his personalities and not for Mike himself.]]appear at one time or another.
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* TheBusCameBack: After being eliminated, [[spoiler:Brick and Trent as well as Cody get to make a return to the competition as a result of popular vote]].
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* HulkingOut: [[spoiler:Ezekiel [[HulkingOut reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry]].]]
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* ShrinkingViolet: Ezekiel is noticeably more timid and prone to hiding under his toque as a result of his feral incident.
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* SplitPersonality: All of Mike's personalities are here: Chester, Svetlana, Vito and Manitoba Smith all make apppearances. [[spoiler:Mal also appears during the obstacle course race after Mike [[RageBreakingPoint becomes incredibly angry]] out of fear that Zoey only likes him for his personalities and not for Mike himself.]]
* SplitPersonality: All of Mike's personalities are here: Chester, Svetlana, Vito and Manitoba Smith all make apppearances. [[spoiler:Mal also appears during the obstacle course race after Mike [[RageBreakingPoint becomes incredibly angry]] out of fear that Zoey only likes him for his personalities and not for Mike himself.]]
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* ShrinkingViolet: Ezekiel is noticeably more timid and prone to hiding under his toque as a result of his feral incident.
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* TheCameo: All the non-competing campers from ''Island'', ''World Tour'' and ''Revenge of the Island'' get to make guest appearances for certain challenges.
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** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as [[TheNoseKnows an improved sense of smell smell]] and [[RunningOnAllFours running really fast on all-fours.all-fours]]. [[spoiler:He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry]].]]
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* AscendedExtra: A major point of the fic is that it allows various early eliminations in canon to get more focus here, such as Eva, Ezekiel, Dawn and B.
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Chris brings back 22 teens from past seasons that haven't won a season yet, based on the US rankings (except Season 4), and pits the team of originals (from across the first three seasons) against the the team of the latest losers.
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* GenderEqualEnsemble: [[DeprivedKidsShowHost Chris]] invokes this with the starting cast, which consists of eleven males and eleven females. The main reason he chose Beth and Bridgette to compete despite [[FarmGirl Beth]] being a former finalist and [[GranolaGirl Bridgette]] competing in the first three seasons despite only making it to the top ten once was to have an equal cast.
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* GenderEqualEnsemble: [[DeprivedKidsShowHost [[DepravedKidsShowHost Chris]] invokes this with the starting cast, which consists of eleven males and eleven females. The main reason he chose Beth and Bridgette to compete despite [[FarmGirl Beth]] being a former finalist and [[GranolaGirl Bridgette]] competing in the first three seasons despite only making it to the top ten once was to have an equal cast.
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* GenderEqualEnsemble: [[DeprivedKidsShowHost Chris]] invokes this with the starting cast, which consists of eleven males and eleven females. The main reason he chose Beth and Bridgette to compete despite [[FarmGirl Beth]] being a former finalist and [[GranolaGirl Bridgette]] competing in the first three seasons despite only making it to the top ten once was to have an equal cast.
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A ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1648360/chrisATD1 chrisATD1]]
Chris brings back 22 teens from past seasons that haven't won a season yet, based on the US rankings (except Season 4), and pits the team of originals against the the team of the latest losers.
!!The teams are:
* '''Old Losers''': Katie, Sadie, Eva, Geoff, Trent, Justin, Beth, Ezekiel, Noah, Tyler, Bridgette
* '''New Losers''': Staci, Dakota, B, Dawn, Sam, Brick, Anne Maria, Mike, Jo, Scott, Zoey
It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8024702/1/Total-Drama-Avengeance-Old-Losers-vs-New-Losers here]].
!!Tropes
* BaseballEpisode: The very first challenge of the fic is a baseball game with improbable wind conditions, sponge balls and plastic bats.
* LockedIntoStrangeness: Both Ezekiel and Dakota retain various aspects from their mutated states:
** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as an improved sense of smell and running really fast on all-fours. [[spoiler:He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry]].]]
** Dakota keeps her orange skin and green hair from her time as Dakotazoid, as well as some of her mutant strength. [[spoiler:It all disappears by the time she fully reverts to her human form, at which point she gets eliminated]].
Chris brings back 22 teens from past seasons that haven't won a season yet, based on the US rankings (except Season 4), and pits the team of originals against the the team of the latest losers.
!!The teams are:
* '''Old Losers''': Katie, Sadie, Eva, Geoff, Trent, Justin, Beth, Ezekiel, Noah, Tyler, Bridgette
* '''New Losers''': Staci, Dakota, B, Dawn, Sam, Brick, Anne Maria, Mike, Jo, Scott, Zoey
It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8024702/1/Total-Drama-Avengeance-Old-Losers-vs-New-Losers here]].
!!Tropes
* BaseballEpisode: The very first challenge of the fic is a baseball game with improbable wind conditions, sponge balls and plastic bats.
* LockedIntoStrangeness: Both Ezekiel and Dakota retain various aspects from their mutated states:
** Ezekiel still has green skin from his time as a feral beast, and while his hair's mostly grown back it's still not as long as it once was. He also retains several abilities from that period, such as an improved sense of smell and running really fast on all-fours. [[spoiler:He also [[HulkingOut mentally reverts to his feral state whenever he gets angry]].]]
** Dakota keeps her orange skin and green hair from her time as Dakotazoid, as well as some of her mutant strength. [[spoiler:It all disappears by the time she fully reverts to her human form, at which point she gets eliminated]].
