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Actually, the original phrasing may have been right after all. Forgot about a comment from Luffy during the Whole Cake Island arc.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he’s completely [[ObliviousToLove oblivious]]. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]].
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he’s completely [[ObliviousToLove oblivious]].just not interested. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]].
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I’m not sure Luffy even realizes Hancock is in love with him.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he just isn't interested. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]].
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he just isn't interested.he’s completely [[ObliviousToLove oblivious]]. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]].
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* RankUp: Luffy has risen up in the ranks of Marines from Captain to eventually Vice-Admiral.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Despite being a Marine, Luffy is on good terms with Ace who in turn is supportive of his little adoptive brother's choice of career when they meet at Alabasta.
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* CoatCape: As a high ranking Marine officer, Luffy wears this.
* CustomUniform: Aside from the standard CoatCape in the Marines, the Straw Hat Marine Unit wear whatever they like.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking a mortally-wounded Luffy. And also because Garp needs his Devil Fruit for said mortally-wounded Luffy.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking a mortally-wounded Luffy. And also because Garp needs his Devil Fruit for said mortally-wounded Luffy.Luffy to save his life.]]
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** While the Strawhats are getting ready to leave Skypia, Enel manages to blindside and nearly kill him.
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** While the Strawhats are getting ready to leave Skypia, Skypiea, Enel manages to blindside and nearly kill him.
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* DeadFic
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* DeadFicDeadFic: Last update was on August 2019
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Luffy]] is bitten by the Kestia instead of Vivi
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Luffy]] is bitten by the Kestia instead of ViviNami
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Luffy]] is bitten by the Kestia instead of Vivi
** While the Strawhats are getting ready to leave Skypia, Enel manages to blindside and nearly kill him.
** While the Strawhats are getting ready to leave Skypia, Enel manages to blindside and nearly kill him.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he just isn't interested. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]]. This could be an exaggeration on her part but Luffy doesn't deny it.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he just isn't interested. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]]. This could be an exaggeration on her part but Luffy doesn't deny it.
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*AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy but he just isn't interested. Here, Hancock is Luffy's [[spoiler:fiance]]. This could be an exaggeration on her part but Luffy doesn't deny it.
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To Protect Everything is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6857494/LordDraekai LordDraekai]] on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11322176/1/To-Protect-Everything FanFiction.net]] that, at 47 chapters, depicts the protagonist, Monkey D. Luffy, as a Marine Officer who leads his personal "Straw Hat Marine" Unit (consisting of his canonical crew members in the Straw Hat Pirates) with the goal of protecting those dear to them.
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To Protect Everything is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6857494/LordDraekai LordDraekai]] on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11322176/1/To-Protect-Everything FanFiction.net]] that, at 47 chapters, chapters as of now, depicts the protagonist, Monkey D. Luffy, as a Marine Officer who leads his personal "Straw Hat Marine" Unit (consisting of his canonical crew members in the Straw Hat Pirates) with the goal of protecting those dear to them.
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* BountyHunter: Effectively, the Straw Hats of this ‘verse are World Government-sanctioned bounty hunters, rather than full Marines.
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* BountyHunter: Effectively, the Straw Hats of this ‘verse are World Government-sanctioned bounty hunters, rather than full Marines.in addition to Marines. While they don’t have the same support that other Marine crews have, they also don’t have the same restrictions.
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* AdaptationalBadass: As a result of training from his grandfather, CP9, and Admirals Aokiji and Kizaru, Luffy debuts in the East Blue Saga as a Rokushiki master as well as a user of all three variants of Haki. [[spoiler: He then later becomes a Lightning Human as well.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: As a result of training from his grandfather, CP9, [=CP9=], and Admirals Aokiji and Kizaru, Luffy debuts in the East Blue Saga as a Rokushiki master as well as a user of all three variants of Haki. [[spoiler: He then later becomes a Lightning Human as well.]]]]
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Luffy gets just as many results using strategy and his authority as a Marine officer as he does by punching people.
* AllLovingHero: That title? It’s not hyperbole. Luffy’s goal is to become the kind of Admiral that can keep ''everyone'' safe.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Luffy gets just as many results using strategy and his authority as a Marine officer as he does by punching people.
* AllLovingHero: That title? It’s not hyperbole. Luffy’s goal is to become the kind of Admiral that can keep ''everyone'' safe.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking a mortally wounded Luffy.]]
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* BountyHunter: Effectively, the Straw Hats of this ‘verse are World Government-sanctioned bounty hunters, rather than full Marines.
* CoolUncle: Aokiji and Kizaru have this relationship with Luffy.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking amortally wounded mortally-wounded Luffy. And also because Garp needs his Devil Fruit for said mortally-wounded Luffy.]]]]
* EnragedByIdiocy: Luffy does not take incompetent subordinates well. Especially when that incompetence results in apprehended pirates making a clean getaway.
* CoolUncle: Aokiji and Kizaru have this relationship with Luffy.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking a
* EnragedByIdiocy: Luffy does not take incompetent subordinates well. Especially when that incompetence results in apprehended pirates making a clean getaway.
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* MilitaryMaverick: Akainu's reaction to Luffy's justification for protecting Nico Robin (suggestible proof that she didn't destroy Marine Battleships) wasn't pleasing to say the least.
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* MilitaryMaverick: Akainu's reaction to Luffy's justification for protecting Nico Robin (suggestible proof that she didn't destroy Marine Battleships) wasn't pleasing to say the least.least.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Garp is pretty loud, boisterous, and obnoxious normally, so his TranquilFury as he [[spoiler: beats Enel to death]] is pretty goddamn scary.
* ShockAndAwe: Enel, as per usual. [[spoiler: Luffy gets this after Enel dies.]]
* TheCorrupter: Luffy is an inversion, as his presence, cheerful demeanor, and kind-hearted nature seems to be making his fellow Marines much less cruel and jaded than in canon. Even Akainu, to some extent.
* TooDumbToLive: After watching Luffy [[CurbStompBattle utterly trounce]] Arlong, Nezumi first tries to bully his way into claiming credit for Arlong’s defeat (as well as all the money he extorted), then, when Luffy places him under arrest, tries to kill Luffy and all the witnesses present. Even if [[spoiler: Garp hadn’t showed up]], pointing a mere gun at [[BadassNormal Luffy]] is still tantamount to suicide.
* TranquilFury: Both Luffy and Garp have their moments. Like grandfather, like grandson.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Garp is pretty loud, boisterous, and obnoxious normally, so his TranquilFury as he [[spoiler: beats Enel to death]] is pretty goddamn scary.
* ShockAndAwe: Enel, as per usual. [[spoiler: Luffy gets this after Enel dies.]]
* TheCorrupter: Luffy is an inversion, as his presence, cheerful demeanor, and kind-hearted nature seems to be making his fellow Marines much less cruel and jaded than in canon. Even Akainu, to some extent.
* TooDumbToLive: After watching Luffy [[CurbStompBattle utterly trounce]] Arlong, Nezumi first tries to bully his way into claiming credit for Arlong’s defeat (as well as all the money he extorted), then, when Luffy places him under arrest, tries to kill Luffy and all the witnesses present. Even if [[spoiler: Garp hadn’t showed up]], pointing a mere gun at [[BadassNormal Luffy]] is still tantamount to suicide.
* TranquilFury: Both Luffy and Garp have their moments. Like grandfather, like grandson.
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* ForWantOfANail: As a result of a change of words on Shanks' part, a kid Luffy aspires to become a Marine Admiral after being saved from the Lord of the Coast.
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* ForWantOfANail: As a result of a change of words on Shanks' part, a kid Luffy aspires to become a Marine Admiral after being saved from the Lord of the Coast.Coast.
* MildlyMilitary: To his subordinates, Luffy is as casual with them as he is in canon. He has a similar attitude with Smoker (who he nicknamed Smokey) and Hina as well since they were involved in his earlier exploits as a Marine trainee.
* MilitaryMaverick: Akainu's reaction to Luffy's justification for protecting Nico Robin (suggestible proof that she didn't destroy Marine Battleships) wasn't pleasing to say the least.
* MildlyMilitary: To his subordinates, Luffy is as casual with them as he is in canon. He has a similar attitude with Smoker (who he nicknamed Smokey) and Hina as well since they were involved in his earlier exploits as a Marine trainee.
* MilitaryMaverick: Akainu's reaction to Luffy's justification for protecting Nico Robin (suggestible proof that she didn't destroy Marine Battleships) wasn't pleasing to say the least.
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To Protect Everything is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse FanFiction by LordDraekai on FanFiction.net that, at 47 chapters, depicts the protagonist, Monkey D. Luffy, as a Marine Officer who leads his personal "Straw Hat Marine" Unit (consisting of his canonical crew members in the Straw Hat Pirates) with the goal of protecting those dear to them.
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To Protect Everything is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse FanFiction by LordDraekai [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6857494/LordDraekai LordDraekai]] on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11322176/1/To-Protect-Everything FanFiction.net net]] that, at 47 chapters, depicts the protagonist, Monkey D. Luffy, as a Marine Officer who leads his personal "Straw Hat Marine" Unit (consisting of his canonical crew members in the Straw Hat Pirates) with the goal of protecting those dear to them.
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First article I made on here. Please add on to it.
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"After Shanks saved his life, Luffy swore that he would become a Marine Admiral in order to protect everything dear to him. After training in the Marines, Luffy sets off to prove that he is the greatest Marine since his Grandfather. No devil fruit Luffy in the beginning. Slight OOC Marine!Luffy. A Luffy who wants to be the Hero and share the meat."
To Protect Everything is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse FanFiction by LordDraekai on FanFiction.net that, at 47 chapters, depicts the protagonist, Monkey D. Luffy, as a Marine Officer who leads his personal "Straw Hat Marine" Unit (consisting of his canonical crew members in the Straw Hat Pirates) with the goal of protecting those dear to them.
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*AdaptationalBadass: As a result of training from his grandfather, CP9, and Admirals Aokiji and Kizaru, Luffy debuts in the East Blue Saga as a Rokushiki master as well as a user of all three variants of Haki. [[spoiler: He then later becomes a Lightning Human as well.]]
*BadassNormal: As a result of not eating the Gum-Gum Fruit, Luffy fights his foes with Rokushiki and Haki instead. [[spoiler:At least until he is fed Enel's Devil Fruit when he is at death's door.]]
*DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking a mortally wounded Luffy.]]
*ForWantOfANail: As a result of a change of words on Shanks' part, a kid Luffy aspires to become a Marine Admiral after being saved from the Lord of the Coast.
To Protect Everything is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse FanFiction by LordDraekai on FanFiction.net that, at 47 chapters, depicts the protagonist, Monkey D. Luffy, as a Marine Officer who leads his personal "Straw Hat Marine" Unit (consisting of his canonical crew members in the Straw Hat Pirates) with the goal of protecting those dear to them.
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!Examples
*AdaptationalBadass: As a result of training from his grandfather, CP9, and Admirals Aokiji and Kizaru, Luffy debuts in the East Blue Saga as a Rokushiki master as well as a user of all three variants of Haki. [[spoiler: He then later becomes a Lightning Human as well.]]
*BadassNormal: As a result of not eating the Gum-Gum Fruit, Luffy fights his foes with Rokushiki and Haki instead. [[spoiler:At least until he is fed Enel's Devil Fruit when he is at death's door.]]
*DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Enel is killed by Garp after mocking a mortally wounded Luffy.]]
*ForWantOfANail: As a result of a change of words on Shanks' part, a kid Luffy aspires to become a Marine Admiral after being saved from the Lord of the Coast.
