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The story having had ScheduleSlip for a while and not having updated since 2018, it is either on a SeriesHiatus or a DeadFic.
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The story having had ScheduleSlip for a while and not having updated since 2018, it is either on and was ultimately declared a SeriesHiatus or a DeadFic.
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->''We are now approaching the C2 junction at Itabashi...This is ideal. I almost take a deep breath. Suppress it. This must be as unexpected as possible.\\
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I hit the pavement arms-first...and skid, leaving not blood and torn flesh but sparks in my wake, as a torrent of stored mana floods all but a few square inches of my skin. I spring to my feet and press myself against the side wall of the highway, just in time for a car to miss hitting me by barely a centimetre...I look down: the drop is nearly twenty metres into the city below. I hope I am not overestimating the strength of this spell as I leap forward.\\
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I have never been skydiving, or ridden a roller coaster, or done anything much more exciting than ride a fast elevator. As I go into free fall, as my entire body floods with adrenaline and my every sense tells me I am about to die, I feel something amazing, something ''indescribable.\\
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I have never been skydiving, or ridden a roller coaster, or done anything much more exciting than ride a fast elevator. As I go into free fall, as my entire body floods with adrenaline and my every sense tells me I am about to die, I feel something amazing, something ''indescribable.\\
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->''We are now approaching the C2 junction at Itabashi...This is ideal. I almost take a deep breath. Suppress it. This must be as unexpected as possible.\\
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I have never been skydiving, or ridden a roller coaster, or done anything much more exciting than ride a fast elevator. As I go into free fall, as my entire body floods with adrenaline and my every sense tells me I am about to die, I feel something amazing, something ''indescribable.\\
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I have never been skydiving, or ridden a roller coaster, or done anything much more exciting than ride a fast elevator. As I go into free fall, as my entire body floods with adrenaline and my every sense tells me I am about to die, I feel something amazing, something ''indescribable.
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* MakeoutKids: Answer C of this question:
-->Riddle me this. A handsome teenage boy and a pretty teenage girl are standing together on a bridge....They're staring into each other's eyes, faces slightly flushed. What does the girl say to the boy? Is it:\\\
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-->Riddle me this. A handsome teenage boy and a pretty teenage girl are standing together on a bridge....They're staring into each other's eyes, faces slightly flushed. What does the girl say to the boy? Is it:\\\
A) "The stars are so beautiful tonight..."\\\
B) "I love you...so much."\\\
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* DelayedReaction: Mikoto's narration when she first meets Uiharu. After getting over Uiharu's [[FlowerInHerHair headband]], she describes her age, size, hair color, eye color, bare feet, clothing...and then does a mental DoubleTake at the bare feet. It happens again when Uiharu comments on Mikoto's pajamas.
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* DelayedReaction: Mikoto's narration when she first meets Uiharu. After getting over Uiharu's [[FlowerInHerHair headband]], headband, she describes her age, size, hair color, eye color, bare feet, clothing...and then does a mental DoubleTake at the bare feet. It happens again when Uiharu comments on Mikoto's pajamas.
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* BadDreams: Mikoto suffers from these two weeks after the incident with the AIM Burst. [[spoiler:It's implied to be the Sisters memories.]]
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* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:Harumi Kiyama]]. While [[spoiler:she]] is already [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge tragic enough]] in canon, in this fanfic, however, it's [[DespairEventHorizon so] [[SanitySlippage much]] [[AndIMustScream worse]].
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* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:Harumi Kiyama]]. While [[spoiler:she]] is already [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge tragic enough]] in canon, in this fanfic, however, it's [[DespairEventHorizon so] so]] [[SanitySlippage much]] [[AndIMustScream worse]].
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** The orphans that drove Kiyama to make Level Upper (Level Plus): [[spoiler:All but one dead from brain hemorrhaging, no coma. The last one turns out to be another canon character...]]
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** The orphans that drove Kiyama to make Level Upper (Level Plus): [[spoiler:All but one dead from brain hemorrhaging, no coma. The last one turns out to be another canon character...character, and a rather infamous one...]]
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* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:Harumi Kiyama]]. While [[spoiler:she]] is already [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge tragic enough]] in canon, in this fanfic, however, it's [[DespairEventHorizon so] [[SanitySlippage much]] [[AndIMustScream worse]].
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: [[spoiler:Accelerator]], the sole survivor from [[spoiler:Kiyama]]'s class in the past. Even after he TookALevelInCynic, he still manages to mourn for his friends' deaths and cares enough to present flowers on their graves.
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The story having had ScheduleSlip for a while and not having updated since 2018, it is either on a SeriesHiatus or a DeadFic.
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* OrwellianRetcon: The author made a minor change to the end of chapter 6. The distorted voice coming out of the speaker was originally described as "A tired-sounding woman's voice".
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* AdaptationalSexuality: [[spoiler:Motoharu and Pierce are straight in canon. In the fic, Motoharu is BiTheWay and is in an on-again, off-again relationship with Pierce...er, the blue haired guy whose name Touma can't remember.]]
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* AdaptationalSexuality: [[spoiler:Motoharu and Pierce are straight in canon. In the fic, Motoharu is BiTheWay bi and is in an on-again, off-again relationship with Pierce...er, the blue haired guy whose name Touma can't remember.]]
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* {{Mana}}: Index actually explains that it used to be called [[LifeEnergy "life force", "vital energy"]] or [[KiAttacks "qi"]], and that the word "mana" is currently in vogue among magicians ''because'' of all the fictional works that use it.
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* {{Mana}}: Index actually explains that it used to be called [[LifeEnergy "life force", "vital energy"]] or [[KiAttacks [[KiManipulation "qi"]], and that the word "mana" is currently in vogue among magicians ''because'' of all the fictional works that use it.
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* {{Geis}}: Part of Index's PowerLimiter. There's also a kind of geis that makes the recipient die if they don't complete a specific task. According to WordOfGod, [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/page-30#post-11905170 a geis is unbreakable.]] [[spoiler:Unless Touma touches you with his AntiMagic arm.]]
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* {{Geis}}: {{Geas}}: Part of Index's PowerLimiter. There's also a kind of geis that makes the recipient die if they don't complete a specific task. According to WordOfGod, [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/page-30#post-11905170 a geis is unbreakable.]] [[spoiler:Unless Touma touches you with his AntiMagic arm.]]
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* UnreliableExpositor: In chapter 9 Stephen Magnus tells Index that he secretly tried to help her escape and that Kanzaki put a completion {{geis}} on him. He goes on to say that he's willing to let the completion geis kill him if it means letting Index go free. Index accepts his words at face value, but Touma quickly sees that it's just an act to make Index go with Stephen willingly. In chapter 13 [[spoiler:Stephen admits that while he was trying to get Index to go with him, what he said still was true.]]
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* UnreliableExpositor: In chapter 9 Stephen Magnus tells Index that he secretly tried to help her escape and that Kanzaki put a completion {{geis}} {{geas}} on him. He goes on to say that he's willing to let the completion geis kill him if it means letting Index go free. Index accepts his words at face value, but Touma quickly sees that it's just an act to make Index go with Stephen willingly. In chapter 13 [[spoiler:Stephen admits that while he was trying to get Index to go with him, what he said still was true.]]
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* PowerLimiter: Index's {{geis}} only allows her to use magic when she's in danger. It's sensitive enough to activate just by [[EarlyBirdCameo Accelerator]] looking at her. [[spoiler:Touma inadvertently breaks it.]]
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* PowerLimiter: Index's {{geis}} {{geas}} only allows her to use magic when she's in danger. It's sensitive enough to activate just by [[EarlyBirdCameo Accelerator]] looking at her. [[spoiler:Touma inadvertently breaks it.]]
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* AltumVidetur:
** The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
** "Pax Christiana" of course. The name is a reference to the [[UsefulNotes/TheRomanEmpire Pax Romana]].
** The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
** "Pax Christiana" of course. The name is a reference to the [[UsefulNotes/TheRomanEmpire Pax Romana]].
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* GratuitousLatin:
** The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
** "Pax Christiana" of course. The name is a reference to the [[UsefulNotes/TheRomanEmpire Pax Romana]].
** The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
** "Pax Christiana" of course. The name is a reference to the [[UsefulNotes/TheRomanEmpire Pax Romana]].
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* BadDreams: Mikoto suffers from these two weeks after the incident with the AIM Burst. [[spoiler:It's implied to be the Sisters memories.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Touma once had a girlfriend which didn't end in good terms. He's now paranoid about meeting his ex-girlfriend who is hinted to be a powerful esper.
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* ConservationOfNinjutsu : As an InUniverse superpower. [[spoiler:Kanzaki is always as strong as the sum of all the opponents facing her at any one time. This makes ZergRush and escalation ''very'' bad tactics against her because it only makes her that much stronger -- for example, a SWAT team unloading their automatic assault rifles at her made Kanzaki capable of [[DodgeTheBullet dodging bullets]] and [[ImplausibleFencingPowers parrying them with her sword]]. Touma {{Exploit|edTrope}}s this by making sure of fighting her alone, limiting her strength to that of a single unarmed (almost) normal person and counting on his AntiMagic hand to deal with surprises. He ends up winning as planned, but Kanzaki was still far from an easy opponent even in that situation.]]
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** Chapter 14. Kaori ends up defeating severals several Academy City police and Anti-Skill Officers.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Chapter 13 Stephen reappears and tells Index he's on her side. When Index asks why she should believe that, he wonders the same thing himself and admits he should have made a better plan.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Chapter 13 Stephen reappears and tells Index he's on her side. When Index asks why she should believe that, he wonders the same thing himself and admits he should have made a better plan.
* OrwellianRetcon: The author made a minor change to the end of chapter 6. The distorted voice coming out of the speaker was originally described as "A tired-sounding woman's voice".
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-->''"And [[NamesTheSame Akemi]], what did you do there?" I ask. "Did you teleport or something?" I frown. "Wait, don't tell me you [[TimeStandsStill time]][[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica -st—]]"''
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-->''"And [[NamesTheSame Akemi]], what did you do there?" I ask. "Did you teleport or something?" I frown. "Wait, don't tell me you [[TimeStandsStill time]][[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica -st—]]"''
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** Chapter 10: One of the names is Kim [[VisualNovel/AnalogueAHateStory Hyun-ae]].
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** In the Epilogue, [[spoiler:Index's new identity]] is "Jessica Ivy Kincaid", which is a reference to two characters from ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.
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** In the Epilogue, [[spoiler:Index's new identity]] is "Jessica Ivy Kincaid", which is a reference to two characters The Archive from ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.''Literature/TheDresdenFiles'' -- who similarly to Index carries vast amounts of dangerous knowledge in her head -- with her caretaker/bodyguard's surname.
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* StrongAsTheyNeedToBe: Kanzaki [[spoiler:grows stronger with every challenge she faces. So when she faces Touma, it registers him as a none-factor and limits her strength.]]
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--> But nonetheless, the prey flees. For the prey has looked into the eyes of the hunter, and seen nothing--no hate, no fury, no malice--nothing but the cold, unflinching desire to hunt, to kill. The prey saw this, and on that day the prey knew fear.
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--> The prey turns a corner and stops, out of breath, out of energy, out of time. Better to make a stand here, while it still has strength left to defend itself. It steels itself, knowing it cannot afford to show mercy now, that the briefest instant of weakness could be fatal.
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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', has been completed and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A discussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.1540/ here]] or [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]]. The second story ''A Thousand Shattered Mirrors'', is currently in the works [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/45707911/ here]].
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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', has been completed and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A discussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.1540/ here]] or [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]]. The second story ''A Thousand Shattered Mirrors'', is currently in the works and can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12891546/1/A-Thousand-Shattered-Mirrors here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14206416/chapters/32748321 here]], while a discussion thread for the story can be found [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/45707911/ here]] and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/a-thousand-shattered-mirrors-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au-sequel-to-in-memoriam.46545/ here]].
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* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: How the experiment appears from Accelerator's perspective. He's constantly being hunted down by a Hunter that continues to come back and learns each and every time she's killed.
* PerspectiveFlip: The act of one of the experiments has been flipped from the Sisters' perspective to Accelerator's.
* TiredOfRunning: The reason Accelerator forces the confrontation against #RN-582.
* PerspectiveFlip: The act of one of the experiments has been flipped from the Sisters' perspective to Accelerator's.
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* ActionPrologue: The Prologue opens with an experiment in progress between hunter and hunted. The catch? [[spoiler:Accelerator is the prey and the Sister Clone is the hunter.]]
* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: How the experiment appears fromAccelerator's [[spoiler:Accelerator's perspective. He's constantly being hunted down by a Hunter that continues to come back and learns each and every time she's killed.
killed, with nothing but cold eyes that are meant to kill.]]
--> But nonetheless, the prey flees. For the prey has looked into the eyes of the hunter, and seen nothing--no hate, no fury, no malice--nothing but the cold, unflinching desire to hunt, to kill. The prey saw this, and on that day the prey knew fear.
* PerspectiveFlip: The act of one of the experiments has been flipped fromthe [[spoiler:the Sisters' perspective to Accelerator's.
Accelerator's.]]
* TiredOfRunning: The reasonAccelerator [[spoiler:Accelerator]] forces the confrontation against #RN-582.at the end of the ActionPrologue.
* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: How the experiment appears from
--> But nonetheless, the prey flees. For the prey has looked into the eyes of the hunter, and seen nothing--no hate, no fury, no malice--nothing but the cold, unflinching desire to hunt, to kill. The prey saw this, and on that day the prey knew fear.
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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', has been completed and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A discussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.1540/ here]] or [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]]. The second story ''A Thousand Shattered Mirrors'', is currently in the works.
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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', has been completed and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A discussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.1540/ here]] or [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]]. The second story ''A Thousand Shattered Mirrors'', is currently in the works.
works [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/45707911/ here]].
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* YouWouldntShootMe: In Chapter 18, [[spoiler:Kanzaki tells Touma she won't stop looking for Index unless Touma kills her...but also says that since he hasn't killed her already, she doubts he has the nerve to do so. She's right]]
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* YouWouldntShootMe: In Chapter 18, [[spoiler:Kanzaki tells Touma she won't stop looking for Index unless Touma kills her...but also says that since he hasn't killed her already, she doubts he has the nerve to do so. She's right]]right]]
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* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: How the experiment appears from Accelerator's perspective. He's constantly being hunted down by a Hunter that continues to come back and learns each and every time she's killed.
* PerspectiveFlip: The act of one of the experiments has been flipped from the Sisters' perspective to Accelerator's.
* TiredOfRunning: The reason Accelerator forces the confrontation against #RN-582.
--> The prey turns a corner and stops, out of breath, out of energy, out of time. Better to make a stand here, while it still has strength left to defend itself. It steels itself, knowing it cannot afford to show mercy now, that the briefest instant of weakness could be fatal.
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* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: How the experiment appears from Accelerator's perspective. He's constantly being hunted down by a Hunter that continues to come back and learns each and every time she's killed.
* PerspectiveFlip: The act of one of the experiments has been flipped from the Sisters' perspective to Accelerator's.
* TiredOfRunning: The reason Accelerator forces the confrontation against #RN-582.
--> The prey turns a corner and stops, out of breath, out of energy, out of time. Better to make a stand here, while it still has strength left to defend itself. It steels itself, knowing it cannot afford to show mercy now, that the briefest instant of weakness could be fatal.
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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', has been completed and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A discussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.1540/ here]] or [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]].
here]]. The second story ''A Thousand Shattered Mirrors'', is currently in the works.
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* NoodleIncident: Touma once had a girlfriend which didn't end in good terms. He's now paranoid about meeting his ex-girlfriend who is hinted to be a powerful esper.
* BaitAndSwitch: At first readers were led to believe Maika won't let Index sleep on her brother's bunk bed due to ADateWithRosiePalms only to reveal that her brother farts a lot in bed.
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** Chapter 5. [[spoiler:Kuroko versus one of the bombers. Her opponent didn't stand a chance.]]]]
** Chapter 14. Kaori ends up defeating severals Academy City police and Anti-Skill Officers.
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** Chapter 14. Kaori ends up defeating severals Academy City police and Anti-Skill Officers.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: The normally cheerful and nice Uiharu suddenly turns cold on Mikoto and orders her to leave after [[spoiler:the latter becomes InnocentlyInsensitive to Saten when she tries to cheer her up by telling her to work hard to gain espers powers even though Saten has been trying for years.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Chapter 13 Stephen reappears and tells Index he's on her side. When Index asks why she should believe that, he comes to a realization and admits he should have made a better plan.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Chapter 13 Stephen reappears and tells Index he's on her side. When Index asks why she should believe that, he comes to a realization wonders the same thing himself and admits he should have made a better plan.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Chapter 13 Stephen reappears and tells Index he's on her side. When Index asks why she should believe that, he comes to a realization and admits he should have made a better plan.
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* DramaticIrony: Attentive readers will notice that Kiyama mistakes Mikoto for a clone when they first meet.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: During his fight with Kanzaki, Touma notes that she's tired - presumably from fighting a powerful esper employed by Anti-Skill. On the other hand, Touma points out that he's tired too, and also injured on top of it.
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*** On that note, Mikoto doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]. The in-universe explanation is that she needs to know how computers and programming work in detail, and she's not a computer person. The out-of-universe reason is probably to avoid CastSpeciation with Uiharu.
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* AdaptedOut: According to WordOfGod, Kakine "Dark Matter" Teitoku [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44565718/ is not the second ranked Level-5 Esper in this fic]], and in fact [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44566447/ there are no plans for him to appear]].
* AdaptedOut: According to WordOfGod, Kakine "Dark Matter" Teitoku [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44565718/ is not the second ranked Level-5 Esper in this fic]], and in fact [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44566447/ there are no plans for him to appear]].
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-->'''Komoe:''' “She’s...she’s so tiny, though...where does it all go?”
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-->'''Komoe:''' “She’s...she’s "She's...she's so tiny, though...where does it all go?”go?"
* ChildProdigy: Uiharu bluntly states Maika is smarter than her.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Touma as in canon. Mikoto tries to avoid this but ultimately can't look away when there's a problem. Index is eithier this or InHarmsWay - at one point in ''In Memoriam'' she's teleported out of danger only to sneak away to confront another danger.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Touma as in canon. Mikoto tries to avoid this but ultimately can't look away when there's a problem. Index is eithier this or InHarmsWay - at one point in ''In Memoriam'' she's teleported out of danger only to sneak away to confront another danger.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Touma as in canon. Mikoto tries to avoid this but ultimately can't look away when there's a problem. Index is eithier this or InHarmsWay - at one point in ''In Memoriam'' she's teleported out of danger only to sneak away to confront another danger.
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* CompositeCharacter: As confirmed [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44810434/ here]] by WordOfGod [[spoiler: the fic's version of the AIM Burst becomes the fic's version of Kazakiri Hyouka.]]
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* CompositeCharacter: As confirmed [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44810434/ here]] by WordOfGod [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the fic's version of the AIM Burst becomes the fic's version of Kazakiri Hyouka.]]
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** ChildProdigy: Uiharu bluntly states Maika is smarter than her.
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*** Chapter 14 of ''In Memoriam'' has [[spoiler:Mikoto experience Harumi Kiyama's memories in a PensieveFlashback. Kiyama's narration is fairly straightforward while Mikoto makes parenthetical observations.]]
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*** Chapter 10 of ''In Memoriam'' has narration from a third grade Saten, which is unsurprisingly childish.
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* AltumVidetur: The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
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* AltumVidetur: AltumVidetur:
** The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
** The title is a small example: ''In memoriam'' is a Latin phrase equivalent to "in the memory of", mostly found in obituaries and epitaphs.
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: Kiyama's final fate. She's so brain damaged that all she can do is lie in the hospital and recite her list of names.]]
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: Kiyama's [[spoiler:Kiyama's final fate. She's so brain damaged that all she can do is lie in the hospital and recite her list of names.]]
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* CanonCharacterAllAlong: An interesting case, since it's an example of [[CompositeCharacter one canon character actually being another]]. It is implied in the Epilogue and confirmed [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44810434/ here]] by WordOfGod that [[spoiler: the fic's version of the AIM Burst became the fic's version of Kazakiri Hyouka.]]
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* CanonCharacterAllAlong: An interesting case, since it's an example of [[CompositeCharacter one canon character actually being another]]. It is implied in the Epilogue and confirmed [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44810434/ here]] by WordOfGod that [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the fic's version of the AIM Burst became the fic's version of Kazakiri Hyouka.]]
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* CardboardPrison: During the Epilogue [[spoiler: Kanzaki and Steven are being held in jail until someone casts a spell over the phone, befuddling the police into letting them go.]]
* ChekhovsGunman: When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of the first chapter, he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.
* ChekhovsGunman: When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of the first chapter, he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.
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* CardboardPrison: During the Epilogue [[spoiler: Kanzaki [[spoiler:Kanzaki and Steven are being held in jail until someone casts a spell over the phone, befuddling the police into letting them go.]]
*ChekhovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman:
** When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of the first chapter, he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.
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** When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of the first chapter, he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.
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* DeadPersonImpersonation: In the Epilogue, it's suggested [[spoiler: Index's false identity]] may be a case of this, since it's [[spoiler: one of the names on Kiyama's list]]. The character seems unaware of this, however.
* DeadPersonImpersonation: In the Epilogue, it's suggested [[spoiler:Index's false identity]] may be a case of this, since it's [[spoiler:one of the names on Kiyama's list]]. The character seems unaware of this, however.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Mikoto [[spoiler: obliterates most of the IPD entity]] by shooting construction beams at it. [[spoiler: Then Index kills it with what is basically a large dispel magic spell]].
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Mikoto [[spoiler: obliterates [[spoiler:obliterates most of the IPD entity]] by shooting construction beams at it. [[spoiler: Then [[spoiler:Then Index kills it with what is basically a large dispel magic spell]].
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* DispelMagic: [[spoiler: Index casts an overcharged one to destroy the IPD entity. Even Mikoto temporarily loses her powers afterward.]]
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* DispelMagic: [[spoiler: Index [[spoiler:Index casts an overcharged one to destroy the IPD entity. Even Mikoto temporarily loses her powers afterward.]]
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*** Similarly in the tenth chapter [[spoiler:one of the names is Banri Edasaki.]] In chapter 14 [[spoiler:both Banri and Erii appear in the WholeEpisodeFlashback. Said flashback ends in the reveal that Kiyama's students aren't in comas...instead,[[DeathByAdaptation they're all dead.]] (Well one survived, but see below.)]]
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* FetusTerrible: As in canon. [[spoiler: Except this time it calls Kiyama mother.]]
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* FetusTerrible: As in canon. [[spoiler: Except [[spoiler:Except this time it calls Kiyama mother.]]
* FromASingleCell: The IPD entity is heavily implied to be physically indestructible; it can take damage but it will eventually regenerate it's physical form.
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* FromASingleCell: The IPD entity is heavily implied to be physically indestructible; it can take damage but it will eventually regenerate it's physical form.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: At the end of Chapter 18 [[spoiler:Saten is fully brought down to normal, to the point where she isn't even an esper anymore. Since she can just go through the Kihara process again, Mikoto encourages Saten to work hard to increase her powers. Saten nearly snaps and tells Mikoto she was working hard for ''six years'' already, and the only thing that gave her results kills people.]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: At the end of Chapter 18 [[spoiler: Saten is fully brought down to normal, to the point where she isn't even an esper anymore. Since she can just go through the Kihara process again, Mikoto encourages Saten to work hard to increase her powers. Saten nearly snaps and tells Mikoto she was working hard for ''six years'' already, and the only thing that gave her results kills people.]]
* ItCanThink: At the end of Chapter 17 [[spoiler: the IPD entity actually starts talking. Unfortunately Index is already casting her spell...]]
* ItCanThink: At the end of Chapter 17 [[spoiler: the IPD entity actually starts talking. Unfortunately Index is already casting her spell...]]
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* MonsterIsAMommy: Inversion, [[spoiler:the monster considers itself someone's child.]]
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* MonsterIsAMommy: Inversion, [[spoiler: the monster considers itself someone's child.]]
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* MysteriousWatcher: In the Epilogue, [[spoiler: Othinus]].
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* MysteriousWatcher: In the Epilogue, [[spoiler: Othinus]].[[spoiler:Othinus]].
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* NotQuiteDead: In the Epilogue, it's hinted - and confirmed [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44810434/ here]] by WordOfGod - that [[spoiler: the IPD entity somehow became the "daughter" that visits Kiyama]].
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* NotQuiteDead: In the Epilogue, it's hinted - and confirmed [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/44810434/ here]] by WordOfGod - that [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the IPD entity somehow became the "daughter" that visits Kiyama]].
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* PostModernMagick: Index uses an {{Invisibility}} spell [[BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy developed by the]] UsefulNotes/{{OSS}}, which has the incantation "''Let Liberty be my cloak in the night.''"
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* PostModernMagick: PostModernMagick:
** Index uses an {{Invisibility}} spell [[BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy developed by the]] UsefulNotes/{{OSS}}, which has the incantation "''Let Liberty be my cloak in the night.''"
** Index uses an {{Invisibility}} spell [[BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy developed by the]] UsefulNotes/{{OSS}}, which has the incantation "''Let Liberty be my cloak in the night.''"
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* RealityEnsues: In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler:Harumi Kiyama. She's not trying to save her students - [[DeathByAdaptation they're all dead.]] Instead, she's going to try and make Gensei Kihara pay, and she wants to make sure [[HeHadAName everyone remembers her students' names.]]]] [[spoiler: It's implied the IPD entity was literally born from this desire, making it a physical manifestation of this trope.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler:Harumi Kiyama. She's not trying to save her students - [[DeathByAdaptation they're all dead.]] Instead, she's going to try and make Gensei Kihara pay, and she wants to make sure [[HeHadAName everyone remembers her students' names.]]]] [[spoiler: It's [[spoiler:It's implied the IPD entity was literally born from this desire, making it a physical manifestation of this trope.]]
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** In the Epilogue, [[spoiler: Index's new identity]] is "Jessica Ivy Kincaid", which is a reference to two characters from ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.
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** In the Epilogue, [[spoiler: Index's [[spoiler:Index's new identity]] is "Jessica Ivy Kincaid", which is a reference to two characters from ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.
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* UnreliableExpositor: In chapter 9 Stephen Magnus tells Index that he secretly tried to help her escape and that Kanzaki put a completion {{geis}} on him. He goes on to say that he's willing to let the completion geis kill him if it means letting Index go free. Index accepts his words at face value, but Touma quickly sees that it's just an act to make Index go with Stephen willingly.
** In chapter 13 [[spoiler:Stephen admits that while he was trying to get Index to go with him, what he said still was true.]]
* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: Touma makes a plan in Chapter 16. We don't see what it is until he puts into practice two chapters later. [[spoiler: The plan was simply that his anti-magic would let him fight off Kanzaki. It works.]]
** In chapter 13 [[spoiler:Stephen admits that while he was trying to get Index to go with him, what he said still was true.]]
* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: Touma makes a plan in Chapter 16. We don't see what it is until he puts into practice two chapters later. [[spoiler: The plan was simply that his anti-magic would let him fight off Kanzaki. It works.]]
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* UnreliableExpositor: In chapter 9 Stephen Magnus tells Index that he secretly tried to help her escape and that Kanzaki put a completion {{geis}} on him. He goes on to say that he's willing to let the completion geis kill him if it means letting Index go free. Index accepts his words at face value, but Touma quickly sees that it's just an act to make Index go with Stephen willingly.
**willingly. In chapter 13 [[spoiler:Stephen admits that while he was trying to get Index to go with him, what he said still was true.]]
* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: Touma makes a plan in Chapter 16. We don't see what it is until he puts into practice two chapters later.[[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The plan was simply that his anti-magic would let him fight off Kanzaki. It works.]]
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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: Touma makes a plan in Chapter 16. We don't see what it is until he puts into practice two chapters later.
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* WhamEpisode: The Epilogue. [[spoiler: Accelerator turns out to have been one of Kiyama's students, Othinus was watching the whole thing, and it's implied that the fic's version of the AIM Burst somehow survived and became the fic's version of Kazakiri Hyouka]].
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* WhamEpisode: The Epilogue. [[spoiler: Accelerator [[spoiler:Accelerator turns out to have been one of Kiyama's students, Othinus was watching the whole thing, and it's implied that the fic's version of the AIM Burst somehow survived and became the fic's version of Kazakiri Hyouka]].
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*** The first occurs when [[spoiler: Kiyama]] [[spoiler:Kiyama]] gets a guest.
--->''"[[spoiler:Hi, Mama...it’s it's me]]"''
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* YouWouldntShootMe: In Chapter 18, [[spoiler: Kanzaki tells Touma she won't stop looking for Index unless Touma kills her...but also says that since he hasn't killed her already, she doubts he has the nerve to do so. She's right]]
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* YouWouldntShootMe: In Chapter 18, [[spoiler: Kanzaki [[spoiler:Kanzaki tells Touma she won't stop looking for Index unless Touma kills her...but also says that since he hasn't killed her already, she doubts he has the nerve to do so. She's right]]
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Saten's powers, for the brief time she has them. Instead of Aero Hand she gets electromagnetism like Mikoto. The change is for thematic reasons - she wanted to be like Mikoto, and it happens.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Saten's powers, for the brief time she has them. Instead of Aero Hand she gets electromagnetism like Mikoto. The change is for thematic reasons - she wanted to be like Mikoto, and it happens.so gets the same power set.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Saten's powers, for the brief time she has them. Instead of Aero Hand she gets electromagnetism like Mikoto. The change is for thematic reasons - she wanted to be like Mikoto, and it happens.
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** "Labrys, part III "
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** "Labrys, part III "III"
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--->''"[[spoiler:Hi, Mama...it’s me]]"''
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*** The first occurs when [[spoiler: Kiyama]] gets a guest.
--->''"[[spoiler:Hi, Mama...it’s me]]"''
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