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* BigBrotherInstinct: Both Allen and Gretel qualify, though in Allen's case he's the younger one.
* BigFancyHouse: Allen's opinion of his childhood home, to the point of being suffocating.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Allen, naturally. Riliane, Ney and Lemy also fit in to an extent.
* DissonantSerenity: Riliane in chapter 4.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Riliane and Allen, and Hansel and Gretel.
* HitmanWithAHeart: Ney and Lemy qualify.
* DissonantSerenity: Riliane in chapter 4.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Riliane and Allen, and Hansel and Gretel.
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%% * DeadpanSnarker: Allen, naturally. Riliane, Ney and Lemy also fit in to an extent.
%% * DissonantSerenity: Riliane in chapter 4.
%% * HalfIdenticalTwins: Riliane and Allen, and Hansel and Gretel.
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* OddFriendship: Allen and Gretel.
* SceneryPorn: A distinct trait of silencvial.
* KnifeNut: Lemy and Riliane.
* LadyAndKnight / MistressAndServantBoy: Two of the layers of Riliane and Allen's relationship to one another.
* OddFriendship: Allen and Gretel.
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%% * KarmicThief: Allen tries to be this.
* KnifeNut: Lemy and Riliane.
%% * LadyAndKnight / MistressAndServantBoy: Two of the layers of Riliane and Allen's relationship to one another.
%% * OddFriendship: Allen and Gretel.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489 the yellow rose]]'' is an Franchise/EvilliousChronicles ''Music/EvilliousChronicles'' fanfic made by
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->''“My brother had the same,”'' said Ney. ''“It didn’t pan out well.”''
->''“Hansel? Truly?”''
->''“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
* WithholdingTheirName: Hansel and Gretel are introduced as Lemy and Ney to the Yellow Rose.
->''“Hansel? Truly?”''
->''“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
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->''“My brother had the same,”'' said Ney. ''“It didn’t pan out well.”''
->''“Hansel? Truly?”''
->''“No,”\\
“Hansel? Truly?”//
“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
”''
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->''“Hansel? Truly?”''
->''“No,
“Hansel? Truly?”//
“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.
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* BigFancyHouse: Allen's opinion of his childhood home, to the point of being suffocating.
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''“My brother had the same,”'' said Ney. ''“It didn’t pan out well.”''
''“Hansel? Truly?”''
''“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
''“Hansel? Truly?”''
''“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
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* I Have Many Names: Besides Allen, he is also known as Alexiel (his birth name) and Kokutan-douji. As the story is still in the beginning, he might have more.
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* Odd Friendship: Allen and Gretel.
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''https://archiveofourown.org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489 the yellow rose'' is an Franchise/EvilliousChronicles fanfic made by
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial
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''https://archiveofourown.org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489'' is an Franchise/EvilliousChronicles fanfic made by
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
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''https://archiveofourown.org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489'' org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489 the yellow rose'' is an Franchise/EvilliousChronicles fanfic made by
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial].org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.
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->''The more things change, the more they stay the same. The fact that 'Princess' Riliane was the head of the Lucifenian mafia wasn't the strangest thing.''
-->-- '''The summary.'''
''https://archiveofourown.org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489'' is an Franchise/EvilliousChronicles fanfic made by
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
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!! ''the yellow rose'' contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Ney.
* TheAlcoholic: Germaine, even though she hates the taste of alcohol. It's hinted that she became this after Allen disappeared.
* alllowercaseletters: The titles of each chapter and story itself, as well as its prequel story, are stylized this way.
* AlternateUniverseFic
* BigBrotherInstinct: Both Allen and Gretel qualify, though in Allen's case he's the younger one.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: The Lucifen and the Salmhofer/Moonlit twins have particularly dark and messy pasts, with abandonment, murder (one implied and the other, [[spoiler: an accidental poisoning.]]) and arduous training to become assassins.
* DeadpanSnarker: Allen, naturally. Riliane, Ney and Lemy also fit in to an extent.
* DissonantSerenity: Riliane in chapter 4.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Riliane and Allen, and Hansel and Gretel.
* HitmanWithAHeart: Ney and Lemy qualify.
* I Have Many Names: Besides Allen, he is also known as Alexiel (his birth name) and Kokutan-douji. As the story is still in the beginning, he might have more.
* IronicEcho: Considering Allen's fate in canon, it's quite ironic for him to say that he would "give the [Lucifen] House his head himself" for not knowing the customs.
* KarmicThief: Allen tries to be this.
* KnifeNut: Lemy and Riliane.
* Odd Friendship: Allen and Gretel.
* Scenery Porn: A distinct trait of silencvial.
* ShoutOut: Kyle's ringtone in chapter 4 is "Otome Kaibou" (Girl Dissection), a song by DECO*27.
* TheMafia: The Lucifen family, obviously.
* TraumaButton: After [[spoiler:his father's poisoning, watching people drink wine and dying in a party.]] in chapter 4 triggered Allen, to the point of having hallucinations.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Riliane and Hansel, if chapter 2 is any indication.
* WhamLine: This part in chapter 3:
''“My brother had the same,”'' said Ney. ''“It didn’t pan out well.”''
''“Hansel? Truly?”''
''“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
* Withholding Their Name: Hansel and Gretel are introduced as Lemy and Ney to the Yellow Rose.
-->-- '''The summary.'''
''https://archiveofourown.org/works/14879033/chapters/34454489'' is an Franchise/EvilliousChronicles fanfic made by
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HeartOfInk/pseuds/HeartOfInk HeartOfInk]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/silencvial/pseuds/silencvial].]It centers around Allen Avadonia, the servant and brother of Riliane Lucifen d'Autriche, the heiress of the Lucifenian mafia known as Yellow Rose. While it starts introducing the crumbling criminal empires and the twin assassins Ney Phutapie and Lemy Abelard, the plot slowly thickens with a present from Prim Marlon to Riliane: a hand mirror that supposedly is part of the Lost Mirror of Lucifenia.
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!! ''the yellow rose'' contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Ney.
* TheAlcoholic: Germaine, even though she hates the taste of alcohol. It's hinted that she became this after Allen disappeared.
* alllowercaseletters: The titles of each chapter and story itself, as well as its prequel story, are stylized this way.
* AlternateUniverseFic
* BigBrotherInstinct: Both Allen and Gretel qualify, though in Allen's case he's the younger one.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: The Lucifen and the Salmhofer/Moonlit twins have particularly dark and messy pasts, with abandonment, murder (one implied and the other, [[spoiler: an accidental poisoning.]]) and arduous training to become assassins.
* DeadpanSnarker: Allen, naturally. Riliane, Ney and Lemy also fit in to an extent.
* DissonantSerenity: Riliane in chapter 4.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Riliane and Allen, and Hansel and Gretel.
* HitmanWithAHeart: Ney and Lemy qualify.
* I Have Many Names: Besides Allen, he is also known as Alexiel (his birth name) and Kokutan-douji. As the story is still in the beginning, he might have more.
* IronicEcho: Considering Allen's fate in canon, it's quite ironic for him to say that he would "give the [Lucifen] House his head himself" for not knowing the customs.
* KarmicThief: Allen tries to be this.
* KnifeNut: Lemy and Riliane.
* Odd Friendship: Allen and Gretel.
* Scenery Porn: A distinct trait of silencvial.
* ShoutOut: Kyle's ringtone in chapter 4 is "Otome Kaibou" (Girl Dissection), a song by DECO*27.
* TheMafia: The Lucifen family, obviously.
* TraumaButton: After [[spoiler:his father's poisoning, watching people drink wine and dying in a party.]] in chapter 4 triggered Allen, to the point of having hallucinations.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Riliane and Hansel, if chapter 2 is any indication.
* WhamLine: This part in chapter 3:
''“My brother had the same,”'' said Ney. ''“It didn’t pan out well.”''
''“Hansel? Truly?”''
''“No, the real son of the woman I’m supposed to be a daughter of,”'' said Ney. ''“He’s a very kind man at heart; of the dense sort, but kind. He wanted to be a painter. Mum gave him [[spoiler: a mirror]] as a present for being a good son, one that looked exactly like this, and he… changed.”''
* Withholding Their Name: Hansel and Gretel are introduced as Lemy and Ney to the Yellow Rose.
