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--->'''Jacob''': (''during his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Leah'') [[spoiler:[[NiceJobFixingItVillain You're no part of my pack -- of]] ''[[NiceJobFixingItVillain any]]'' [[NiceJobFixingItVillain pack!]]]]
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: As the boys point out, the whole point of an outdoor wedding is to use the natural beauty of the surroundings. Instead, the enormous gaudy tent that Renesmee's wedding takes place in means the wedding might as well not been on the beach in the first place.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: As the boys point out, the whole point of an outdoor wedding is to use the natural beauty of the surroundings. Instead, the enormous gaudy tent that Renesmee's wedding takes place in means the wedding might as well not been be on the beach in the first place.
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** During Bella's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Castiel, Leah sees how many of her pack is very uncomfortable with how Bella states that humans are just part of the food chain. They still don't openly object to this, out of compliance to maintain the peace or because Jacob might have made it impossible for them to even attempt such a thing, since his order at [[TokenGoodTeammate Embry]] to stay where he is when the he tried getting Jacob to stop beating up Leah quite literally stopped him in his tracks by force.
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** During Bella's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Castiel, Leah sees how many of her pack is very uncomfortable with how Bella states that humans are just part of the food chain. They still don't openly object to this, out of compliance to maintain the peace or because Jacob might have made it impossible for them to even attempt such a thing, since his order at [[TokenGoodTeammate Embry]] to stay where he is when the he tried getting Jacob to stop beating up Leah quite literally stopped him in his tracks by force.dead on the spot.
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--> Leah drops him in one blow to the mouth.
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--> Leah ''Leah drops him in one blow to the mouth.''
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** Leah is ostracised and looked down on by the rest of her pack...despite her being the only one adhering to their whole purpose by continuing to hunt vampires and protect humans with Sam and Dean, while the very wolves who look down on her have all effectively become permissive LesCollaborateurs thanks to Jacob's imprinting on Renesemee and changing the treaty to let vampires onto their lands, even to hunt humans.]]
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** Leah is ostracised and looked down on by the rest of her pack...despite her being the only one adhering to their whole purpose by continuing to hunt vampires and protect humans with Sam and Dean, while the very wolves who look down on her have all effectively become permissive LesCollaborateurs thanks to Jacob's imprinting on Renesemee and changing the treaty to let vampires onto their lands, even to hunt humans.]]
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** The vampires are already starting to laugh among themselves as Dean goes to stab Benjamin, believing that he's all talk and doesn't have what it takes to hurt them. Cue Benjamin getting petrified and shattered by the Angel Blade Dean just stuck into him.
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** The vampires are already starting to laugh among themselves as Dean goes [[spoiler:goes to stab Benjamin, Benjamin]], believing that he's all talk and doesn't have what it takes to hurt them. Cue Benjamin [[spoiler:Benjamin]] getting petrified and shattered by the Angel Blade Dean just stuck into him.
** Leah is ostracised and looked down on by the rest of her pack...despite her being the only one adhering to their whole purpose by continuing to hunt vampires and protect humans with Sam and Dean, while the very wolves who look down on her have all effectively become permissive LesCollaborateurs thanks to Jacob's imprinting on Renesemee and changing the treaty to let vampires onto their lands, even to hunt humans.]]
* KarmicJackpot: After putting up with years of abuse and mistreatment at the hands of the ''Twilight'' cast, with even more piled on through the story thanks to their CondescendingCompassion, Leah ''finally'' catches a big break when [[spoiler:an angry Jacob accidentally frees her from his Alpha control, allowing her to not only stand up for herself properly but also cut them out of her life forever and get a truly fresh start with the ''Supernatural'' lot...starting by [[RelationshipUpgrade hooking up]] with Castiel.]]
* KarmicJackpot: After putting up with years of abuse and mistreatment at the hands of the ''Twilight'' cast, with even more piled on through the story thanks to their CondescendingCompassion, Leah ''finally'' catches a big break when [[spoiler:an angry Jacob accidentally frees her from his Alpha control, allowing her to not only stand up for herself properly but also cut them out of her life forever and get a truly fresh start with the ''Supernatural'' lot...starting by [[RelationshipUpgrade hooking up]] with Castiel.]]
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** Bella has always acted like she was practically perfect in every way and that anyone that wasn't a vampire was pathetic. In short order in the climax; [[spoiler:Cas easily curb-stomps her and cuts her off mid-sentence, her father disowns her, and she ends up turning the entire vampire community against her and the Cullens]].
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** Bella has always acted like she was practically perfect in every way and that anyone that wasn't a vampire was pathetic. In short order in the climax; [[spoiler:Cas easily curb-stomps her and [[spoiler:Castiel cuts off her off mid-sentence, attempted BadassBoast and flicks her away without her being able to do anything, her father disowns her, and she ends up turning the entire vampire community against her and the Cullens]]. Cullens by invoking the wrath of an actual angel]].
* LesCollaborateurs: The La Push Werewolves have effectively become this thanks to Jacob's Imprinting, whether by choice or the latter's Alpha order. Despite their whole purpose being to protect humans from vampires, they're now allowing 'red-eye' vampires onto their land as guests and doing nothing to stop them killing humans as snacks before the wedding, something that [[AllTheOtherReindeer Leah]] finds utterly abhorrent.
* LesCollaborateurs: The La Push Werewolves have effectively become this thanks to Jacob's Imprinting, whether by choice or the latter's Alpha order. Despite their whole purpose being to protect humans from vampires, they're now allowing 'red-eye' vampires onto their land as guests and doing nothing to stop them killing humans as snacks before the wedding, something that [[AllTheOtherReindeer Leah]] finds utterly abhorrent.
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** Bella declares that her vampirism gives her, among other things, the power to protect her family from people like Team Free Will. Two seconds later, Castiel sends her flying with a wave of his hand and she can't stop him at all. In fact, it's ''[[Irony Claire]] who winds up protecting the vampires and werewolves by convincing Team Free Will to go the CruelMercy instead of KillEmAll route.
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** Bella declares that her vampirism gives her, among other things, the power to protect her family from people like Team Free Will. Two seconds later, Castiel sends her flying with a wave of his hand and she can't stop him at all. In fact, it's ''[[Irony Claire]] ''[[{{Irony}} Claire]]'' who winds up protecting the vampires and werewolves by convincing Team Free Will to go the CruelMercy instead of KillEmAll route.
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: Thrice in the climax.
** The vampires are already starting to laugh among themselves as Dean goes to stab Benjamin, believing that he's all talk and doesn't have what it takes to hurt them. Cue Benjamin getting petrified and shattered by the Angel Blade Dean just stuck into him.
** After [[spoiler: Jacob [[FuryFuelledFoolishness accidentally]] frees Leah from his Alpha control and]] she stands up to him properly, he starts moving to attack her again and this happens:
--> '''Jacob''': "I don't need Alpha orders to give you what-"
--> Leah drops him in one blow to the mouth.
** Bella declares that her vampirism gives her, among other things, the power to protect her family from people like Team Free Will. Two seconds later, Castiel sends her flying with a wave of his hand and she can't stop him at all. In fact, it's ''[[Irony Claire]] who winds up protecting the vampires and werewolves by convincing Team Free Will to go the CruelMercy instead of KillEmAll route.
** The vampires are already starting to laugh among themselves as Dean goes to stab Benjamin, believing that he's all talk and doesn't have what it takes to hurt them. Cue Benjamin getting petrified and shattered by the Angel Blade Dean just stuck into him.
** After [[spoiler: Jacob [[FuryFuelledFoolishness accidentally]] frees Leah from his Alpha control and]] she stands up to him properly, he starts moving to attack her again and this happens:
--> '''Jacob''': "I don't need Alpha orders to give you what-"
--> Leah drops him in one blow to the mouth.
** Bella declares that her vampirism gives her, among other things, the power to protect her family from people like Team Free Will. Two seconds later, Castiel sends her flying with a wave of his hand and she can't stop him at all. In fact, it's ''[[Irony Claire]] who winds up protecting the vampires and werewolves by convincing Team Free Will to go the CruelMercy instead of KillEmAll route.
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** All it takes is one hand for him to hold Jacob in place to stop him attacking Leah, with the Alpha being completely unable to break free even when he pulls with all his strength.
** Tia flat-out ''bounces'' off of him when he intercepts her attempted charge against Dean. He then lights her up with a single gesture when he tries attacking ''him''.
** Tia flat-out ''bounces'' off of him when he intercepts her attempted charge against Dean. He then lights her up with a single gesture when he tries attacking ''him''.
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* SmugSuper: The vampires and to a lesser extent the werewolves, especially [[Bella ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers]], Benjamin, Eleazar and Jacob all love gloating and preening, internally or externally, about how much better it is being a vampire or werewolf than a weakling little human. [[spoiler:The climax sees all of them have a change in attitude...except Benjamin, who just plain dies.]]
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* SmugSuper: The vampires and to a lesser extent the werewolves, especially [[Bella ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers]], [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers Bella]], Benjamin, Eleazar and Jacob all love gloating and preening, internally or externally, about how much better it is being a vampire or werewolf than a weakling little human. [[spoiler:The climax sees all of them have a change in attitude...except Benjamin, who just plain dies.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers: The default vampire attitude, with the Cullens themselves (particularly [[TranshumanTreachery Bella) being no exception, is that they can do whatever they want; say what they want; mock who they want; go where they like; [[BreadEggsMilkSquick kill and eat who they like]] and those PunyHumans will just sit there and take it like the cattle they are, because vampires are so ''obviously'' '''far above''' such silly little things as ''laws'' and ''morals''. [[spoiler:In the climax, Castiel proves that they are very much ''not''.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers: The default vampire attitude, with the Cullens themselves (particularly [[TranshumanTreachery Bella) Bella]]) being no exception, is that they can do whatever they want; say what they want; mock who they want; go where they like; [[BreadEggsMilkSquick kill and eat who they like]] and those PunyHumans will just sit there and take it like the cattle they are, because vampires are so ''obviously'' '''far above''' such silly little things as ''laws'' and ''morals''. [[spoiler:In the climax, Castiel proves that they are very much ''not''.]]
