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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11664071/1/ The Third ShadowClan Reich]] is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fanfiction published on fanfiction.net by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7317258/ VolcanicPizza]]. The plot follows a Fanfiction troll named Luke who is turned into a cat in the Warrior Clans. A byproduct of this is that his memory is erased until he is apprenticed so that he doesn't mess things up the way [=StarClan=] wants him to. However, the instant he regains his memory he goes on to [[Main/{{NiceJobBreakingItHero}} royally screw Warriors history up]] by [[spoiler:giving [=ShadowClan=] guns and literacy]], [[spoiler:erasing Dovewing from existence]], and [[HilarityEnsues generally causing confusion and chaos.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11664071/1/ The Third ShadowClan Reich]] is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fanfiction published on fanfiction.net by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7317258/ VolcanicPizza]]. The plot follows a Fanfiction troll named Luke who is turned into a cat in the Warrior Clans. A byproduct of this is that his memory is erased until he is apprenticed so that he doesn't mess tamper with events too early. Upon regaining his memories, however, Luke/Snakepaw promptly screws things up the way [=StarClan=] wants him to. However, the instant he regains his memory he goes on to [[Main/{{NiceJobBreakingItHero}} royally screw Warriors history up]] by [[spoiler:giving giving [=ShadowClan=] guns firearms and literacy]], [[spoiler:erasing the ability to read, erasing Dovewing from existence]], existence, and [[HilarityEnsues generally causing confusion and chaos.]]
chaos just because he can.
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* HilarityEnsues: This trope is done to death by the author. Here's a few examples:
** In the first chapter, Luke's younger brother Albert comes racing into the room whining that he broke his toy lightsaber. Luke proceeds to tell him that that's what he gets for dueling Vader with Chinese merchandise, then informs him that the problem is that he has a screw loose... in his head.
** Every single time Snakekit/Snakepaw breaks the fourth wall.
** When Snakekit calls his sister Redkit a "dickface", and she responds in kind.
** When Snakekit says that "le wild Redkit derped in." He then realizes that the reader doesn't like people using "le," "herp," and "derp," and proceeds to fill an entire chapter with only those words.
** Snakekit tries to do a Nazi salute and fails because his foreleg can't reach high enough.
** Snakekit's monologue before the BigBadassBattleSequence.
** Snakepaw acts disrespectfully in all of the [=StarClan=] dream sequences, calling Raggedstar "Raggy" and referring to Sagewhisker as "that white she-cat." Later, he refers to Nighstar as a "black tom" and notes that he isn't sure of his identity, although he can't think of any other black [=ShadowClan=] toms. He then realizes how racist this sounds and hastily attempts to amend this.
** Snakepaw's monologue at the beginning of Chapter 12.
** Snakepaw's explanation to [=StarClan=] about what Hollyleaf's power should be, followed by [[spoiler:[[{{TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou}} his battle with the author]].]]
** In the first chapter, Luke's younger brother Albert comes racing into the room whining that he broke his toy lightsaber. Luke proceeds to tell him that that's what he gets for dueling Vader with Chinese merchandise, then informs him that the problem is that he has a screw loose... in his head.
** Every single time Snakekit/Snakepaw breaks the fourth wall.
** When Snakekit calls his sister Redkit a "dickface", and she responds in kind.
** When Snakekit says that "le wild Redkit derped in." He then realizes that the reader doesn't like people using "le," "herp," and "derp," and proceeds to fill an entire chapter with only those words.
** Snakekit tries to do a Nazi salute and fails because his foreleg can't reach high enough.
** Snakekit's monologue before the BigBadassBattleSequence.
** Snakepaw acts disrespectfully in all of the [=StarClan=] dream sequences, calling Raggedstar "Raggy" and referring to Sagewhisker as "that white she-cat." Later, he refers to Nighstar as a "black tom" and notes that he isn't sure of his identity, although he can't think of any other black [=ShadowClan=] toms. He then realizes how racist this sounds and hastily attempts to amend this.
** Snakepaw's monologue at the beginning of Chapter 12.
** Snakepaw's explanation to [=StarClan=] about what Hollyleaf's power should be, followed by [[spoiler:[[{{TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou}} his battle with the author]].]]
