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* CommonalityConnection:
** One of the things that first drew Cyclonis to Piper (besides their shared intelligence and knowledge of Crystals) is the fact that [[spoiler:They've both lost family in the war]].
** Cyclonis bonds with [[spoiler:Dove]] over their mutual {{Gayngst}}.
** One of the things that first drew Cyclonis to Piper (besides their shared intelligence and knowledge of Crystals) is the fact that [[spoiler:They've both lost family in the war]].
** Cyclonis bonds with [[spoiler:Dove]] over their mutual {{Gayngst}}.
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* NotSoDifferent:
** One of the things that first drew Cyclonis to Piper (besides their shared intelligence and knowledge of Crystals) is the fact that [[spoiler:They've both lost family in the war]].
** Cyclonis bonds with [[spoiler:Dove]] over their mutual {{Gayngst}}.
** One of the things that first drew Cyclonis to Piper (besides their shared intelligence and knowledge of Crystals) is the fact that [[spoiler:They've both lost family in the war]].
** Cyclonis bonds with [[spoiler:Dove]] over their mutual {{Gayngst}}.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Suzy Lu offhandedly mentions that while she doesn't lean towards same-sex relationships, she's not opposed to the idea if the right girl comes along.
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The fic is currently Dormant, as the author is focusing on a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanfic called "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11689623/1/Linked-in-Life-and-Love Linked in Life and Love]]".
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The fic is currently Dormant, as the author is focusing on a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanfic called "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11689623/1/Linked-in-Life-and-Love Linked in Life and Love]]"."Fanfic/LinkedInLifeAndLove".
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Despite having nothing but dislike for Cyclonis, Starling valiantly fails to hold back laughter when Cyclonis spooks Harrier into fainting.
* BiTheWay: Suzy Lu offhandedly mentions that while she doesn't lean towards same-sex relationships, she's not opposed to the idea if the right girl comes along.
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* BuunyEarsLawyer: Cyclonis' assessment of the Storm Hawks, though, after meeting the Forty-Below's, she's considering applying that to Skyknights in general.
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* BuunyEarsLawyer: BunnyEarsLawyer: Cyclonis' assessment of the Storm Hawks, though, after deeming them a group of quantifiably insane individuals that somehow still work together perfectly. After meeting the Forty-Below's, [[CloudCuckooLander Absolute Zeroes]], she's considering applying that to Skyknights in general.
* InMediasRes: The story begins with Piper being captured by Cyclonia, and much of the next chapter focuses on how it happened.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Harrier might be a beligerent ass-hat, but he makes a good argument that Piper having a relationship with Cyclonis makes her credibility about the latter's HeelFaceTurn questionable. Subverted when Blister makes the equally good argument that Piper a) has formulated plans that have near-single-handedly saved their butts, and b) is smart enough to make good judgement calls.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Harrier might be a beligerent belligerent ass-hat, but he makes a good argument that Piper having a relationship with Cyclonis makes her credibility about the latter's HeelFaceTurn questionable. Subverted when Blister makes the equally good argument that Piper a) has formulated plans that have near-single-handedly saved their butts, and b) is smart enough to make good judgement calls.calls.
* LastNameBasis: Cyclonis is Master Cyclonis's last name, and she prefers to go by that instead of her first name, Lark.
* LeeroyJenkins:
** Piper rushing in towards a group of crystals which turned out to be a trap. She even lampshades it after the fact, saying that it would be something more like what Finn would do.
** Aerrow calls Starling out for jumping the gun and attacking Cyclonis aboard the ''Condor'' without getting the full picture, injuring Finn in the process. Starling retorts that he failed to mention that their VIP was [[BigBad Master Cyclonis]].
* LivingLieDetector: Radarr, Aerrow actually saying the trope word for word when explaining [[spoiler:why he trusted Master Cyclonis enough to bring her to Atmosia]].
* LastNameBasis: Cyclonis is Master Cyclonis's last name, and she prefers to go by that instead of her first name, Lark.
* LeeroyJenkins:
** Piper rushing in towards a group of crystals which turned out to be a trap. She even lampshades it after the fact, saying that it would be something more like what Finn would do.
** Aerrow calls Starling out for jumping the gun and attacking Cyclonis aboard the ''Condor'' without getting the full picture, injuring Finn in the process. Starling retorts that he failed to mention that their VIP was [[BigBad Master Cyclonis]].
* LivingLieDetector: Radarr, Aerrow actually saying the trope word for word when explaining [[spoiler:why he trusted Master Cyclonis enough to bring her to Atmosia]].
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* LastNameBasis: Cyclonis is Master Cyclonis's last name, and she prefers to go by that instead of her first name, Lark.
* LeeroyJenkins: Piper rushing in towards a group of crystals which turned out to be a trap, she even lampshades it after the fact, saying that it would be something more like what Finn would do.
* LivingLieDetector: Radarr, Aerrow actually saying the trope word for word when explaining [[spoiler:why he trusted Master Cyclonis enough to bring her to Atmosia]].
* LeeroyJenkins: Piper rushing in towards a group of crystals which turned out to be a trap, she even lampshades it after the fact, saying that it would be something more like what Finn would do.
* LivingLieDetector: Radarr, Aerrow actually saying the trope word for word when explaining [[spoiler:why he trusted Master Cyclonis enough to bring her to Atmosia]].
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* ParanoiaFuel: In universe, [[spoiler:Cyclonis realizes that whoever was brainwashing her was someone close to her, meaning she can't trust ''anyone'' in Cyclonia until they find out who's behind it.]].
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* ParanoiaFuel: In universe, [[spoiler:Cyclonis realizes that whoever was brainwashing her was someone close to her, meaning she can't trust ''anyone'' in Cyclonia until they find out who's behind it.]].]]
* RefugeInAudacity: Cyclonis helping Piper get over her {{Gayngst}} by planting a ForcefulKiss on her. She even mentally admits that it's insane and would mess everything up if it didn't work... but it did.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Master Cyclonis originally expected the Storm Hawks to be a case of this, based off her own experiences with Snipe, Ravess, etc.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Master Cyclonis originally expected the Storm Hawks to be a case of this, [[EvilCannotComprehendGood based off her own experiences with Snipe, Ravess, etc.]]
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* WrenchWench: Ravess apparently became this, working tirelessly to keep a single Talon Switchblade Elite operational well past the warrenty's expiration.
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* WrenchWench: Ravess apparently became this, working tirelessly to keep a single Talon Switchblade Elite operational well past the warrenty's warranty's expiration.
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* BuunyEarsLawyer: Cyclonis' assessment of the Storm Hawks, though, after meeting the Forty-Below's, she's considering applying that to Skyknights in general.
** As Cyclonis notes, Finn. Kid's a savant with a ranged weapon, but put him in melee range, and he falls like a house of cards.
* GuiltByAssociation: A major part of Starling's hatred for Cyclonis stems from the death of her squad. At the hands of Repton and the Raptors. Who currently work for Cyclonis.
** Finn walking in on Piper and an un-cloaked Cyclonis making out.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Harrier might be a beligerent ass-hat, but he makes a good argument that Piper having a relationship with Cyclonis makes her credibility about the latter's HeelFaceTurn questionable. Subverted when Blister makes the equally good argument that Piper a) has formulated plans that have near-single-handedly saved their butts, and b) is smart enough to make good judgement calls.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Harrier might be a beligerent ass-hat, but he makes a good argument that Piper having a relationship with Cyclonis makes her credibility about the latter's HeelFaceTurn questionable. Subverted when Blister makes the equally good argument that Piper a) has formulated plans that have near-single-handedly saved their butts, and b) is smart enough to make good judgement calls.
** Earlier, when Finn walks in on Piper making out with an un-cloaked Cyclonis, which both of them lampshade whilst waiting for him to wake up from his fainting spell.
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** Aerrow calls Starling out for [[spoiler:attacking Cyclonis unprovoked (after he had explained that there was a VIP on board, and that it was a complicated situation), and injuring Finn when he got in the way]].
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** Aerrow calls Starling out for [[spoiler:attacking Cyclonis unprovoked (after he had explained that there was a VIP on board, and that it was a complicated situation), and injuring Finn when he got in the way]].way]].
* WrittenByTheWinners: An Atmosian history book Cyclonis finds mentions an Atmosian/Cyclonian battle that ended in the latter's favor due to a 'freak storm', which Cyclonis attributes to her grandmother's abilities.
* WrittenByTheWinners: An Atmosian history book Cyclonis finds mentions an Atmosian/Cyclonian battle that ended in the latter's favor due to a 'freak storm', which Cyclonis attributes to her grandmother's abilities.
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* BiggerBad: Someone sabotaged the Cyclonian warships and interfered with the invasion, as well as tipping off Murk Raiders to the location of Cyclonis' flag ship, and possibly killing Master Cyclonis' grandmother. The same person is supposedly the one who [[spoiler: brainwashed Cyclonis and turned her into the despot she is.]]
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* CripplingOverspecialization: Cyclonian war-tech is devoted to power at the cost of excluding everything else.
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* CripplingOverspecialization: As Piper notes, Cyclonian war-tech is devoted to power at the cost of excluding everything else.
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing, to say nothing of their mutual feelings for each other]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], and the two of them start acting like close friends. Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, putting up with her [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing, to say nothing of their mutual feelings for each other]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], and the two of them start acting like close friends. The rest of the Storm Hawks are similarly quick to accept her (although [[BigBrotherInstinct Aerrow]] takes a bit longer than most and [[TheParanoiac Stork]] only calms down when he's made sure that mind worms weren't involved). Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, putting up with her [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* HopeSpot: Piper gets one when Aerrow tries to rescue her, only to get hit with a fire blast by Dark Ace, and Piper is forced to tell her team to flee in order to keep them from being shot down.
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* HopeSpot: Piper gets one when Aerrow tries to rescue her, only to get hit with a fire blast by Dark Ace, and Piper is forced to [[IWillOnlySlowYouDown tell her team to flee in order to keep them from being shot down. down]].
* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Finn tries to pull this one on Cyclonis. Key word being "tries" as he realizes halfway through that [[BullyingADragon Cyclonis is way out of his weight class]].
* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Finn tries to pull this one on Cyclonis. Key word being "tries" as he realizes halfway through that [[BullyingADragon Cyclonis is way out of his weight class]].
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* TheManBehindTheMan: Someone sabotaged the Cyclonian warships and interfered with the invasion, as well as tipping off Murk Raiders to the location of Cyclonis' flag ship, and possibly killing Master Cyclonis' grandmother. The same person is supposedly the one who [[spoiler: brainwashed Cyclonis and turned her into the despot she is.]]
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* RewatchBonus: On a second reading with knowledge of the plot, you may notice numerous unsubtle hints that suggest [[spoiler:Dark Ace is the one mind-controlling Cyclonis. Note all the snippets in the early story where Cyclonis's expression changes to mirror that of the Dark Ace, or her sudden mood swings when he enters the picture, for instance.]]
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing, to say nothing of their mutual feelings for each other]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], and the two of them quickly become amicable, with Piper relating their behavior to that of people who've been friends for years. Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, putting up with her [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing, to say nothing of their mutual feelings for each other]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], and the two of them quickly become amicable, with Piper relating their behavior to that of people who've been friends for years.start acting like close friends. Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, putting up with her [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], with the two of them quickly becoming friends. Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, putting up with her [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]. brainwashing, to say nothing of their mutual feelings for each other]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], with and the two of them quickly becoming friends.become amicable, with Piper relating their behavior to that of people who've been friends for years. Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, putting up with her [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], while everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, [[spoiler: putting up with her more out of a hope for peace than out of forgiveness]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], while with the two of them quickly becoming friends. Meanwhile, everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, [[spoiler: putting up with her more out of a hope [[spoiler: in hopes that her desire for peace is legitimate, rather than out of forgiveness]].forgiving her or believing her to be remorseful]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]). Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], while everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, [[spoiler: putting up with her more out of a hope for peace than out of forgiveness]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and much later realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]).brainwashing]]. Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], while everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, [[spoiler: putting up with her more out of a hope for peace than out of forgiveness]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]). Everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, [[spoiler:are putting up with her more out of a hope for peace than out of forgiveness]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Zigzagged, given the circumstances. Piper is very forgiving of Cyclonis, mainly due to [[spoiler:seeing into Cyclonis's mind and realizing that she's the victim of brainwashing]]). Everyone Finn decides to trust Cyclonis because [[DoYouTrustMe he completely trusts in Piper]], while everyone else is far more skeptical and wary, [[spoiler:are [[spoiler: putting up with her more out of a hope for peace than out of forgiveness]].
