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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', set in the ''VideoGame/Persona4'' universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana[[note]]Yes, ''that'' [[VideoGame/{{Persona3}} Universe Arcana.]][[/note]] to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana[[note]]Yes, ''that'' [[VideoGame/{{Persona3}} Universe Arcana.]][[/note]] to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', set in the ''VideoGame/Persona4'' universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue an OC joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana[[note]]Yes, ''that'' [[VideoGame/{{Persona3}} Universe Arcana.]][[/note]] to fight against the killer. It's a classicMarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are is all from dollmakers.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana[[note]]Yes, ''that'' [[VideoGame/{{Persona3}} Universe Arcana.]][[/note]] to fight against the killer. It's a classic
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', set in the VideoGame/{{Persona4}} universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', set in the VideoGame/{{Persona4}} ''VideoGame/Persona4'' universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
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** And Alice gets ''another'' one from Haruka in Chapter 7, almost revealing that Haruka was trans again.
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** And Alice gets ''another'' one from Haruka in Chapter 7, almost revealing that Haruka was trans again.
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** Everyone ignoring Alice.
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** And Alice gets ''another'' one from Haruka in Chapter 7, almost revealing that Haruka was trans again.
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There are five semi-long chapters[[note]]Well, long compared to [=SiT=].[[/note]] out so far. Chapter one is [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/The-Second-Hand-Fool-A-Persona-4-Fanfic-Cht-1-518723411 here]].
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There are five six semi-long chapters[[note]]Well, long compared to [=SiT=].[[/note]] out so far. Chapter one is [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/The-Second-Hand-Fool-A-Persona-4-Fanfic-Cht-1-518723411 here]].
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Alice gets messages in her dreams from the Velvet Room
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Alice gets messages in her dreams from the Velvet RoomRoom. She also got the Universe Arcana that way.
* GratuitousJapanese: Par for the course when Kawaiiwolf is involved.
* GratuitousJapanese: Par for the course when Kawaiiwolf is involved.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: According to Alice's bio, the reason her Shadow shows up. [[spoiler:It hasn't ahppened yet, but once she accepts it, it turns into her Ultimate Persona.]]
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: According to Alice's bio, the reason her Shadow shows up. [[spoiler:It hasn't ahppened happened yet, but once she accepts it, it turns into her Ultimate Persona.]]
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* OutOfFocus: The main cast get ''[[IncrediblyLamePun cast]]'' aside in favor of focus on Alice.
* PurpleProse: Especially when she's describing Yukiko.
* PurpleProse: Especially when she's describing Yukiko.
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* CurbStompBattle: Alice utterly destroys Haruka's Shadow with ''two Garu spells''.
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* TheAce: Alice.
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* DangerouslyShortSkirt: Alice legit says that about her winter outfit.
* ForeignExchangeStudent: Alice herself.
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* DangerouslyShortSkirt: DreamingOfThingsToCome: Alice legit says that about gets messages in her winter outfit.
* ForeignExchangeStudent: Alice herself.dreams from the Velvet Room
* ForeignExchangeStudent: Alice herself.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: According to Alice's bio, the reason her Shadow shows up. [[spoiler:Once she accepts it, it turns into her Ultimate Persona.]]
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: According to Alice's bio, the reason her Shadow shows up. [[spoiler:Once [[spoiler:It hasn't ahppened yet, but once she accepts it, it turns into her Ultimate Persona.]]
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* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up that role.
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* {{Transsexual}}/{{Transgender}}: Haruka is male-to-female trans, as is said in her bio, and reveled by her Shadow in Chapter 5.
** EasySexChange: Implied. Even though [[spoiler:her family rejected her]], her bio reveals that she's been on hormones for a year.
** EasySexChange: Implied. Even though [[spoiler:her family rejected her]], her bio reveals that she's been on hormones for a year.
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* ZettaiRyouiki: Alice, Type B in her winter clothes
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', based in the VideoGame/{{Persona}} universe, specifically Persona 4. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana (yes, the same Arcana that the P3 protag used to ''seal away a great evil'') to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana (yes, the same Arcana that the P3 protag used to ''seal away a great evil'') to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', based set in the VideoGame/{{Persona}} universe, specifically Persona 4.VideoGame/{{Persona4}} universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the UniverseArcana (yes, the same Arcana that the P3 protag used to ''seal away a great evil'') Arcana[[note]]Yes, ''that'' [[VideoGame/{{Persona3}} Universe Arcana.]][[/note]] to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
dollmakers.
The most interesting part of it is that, while Alice is obviously a Sue, there's a secondary character that's a legit OC for Katie, named Haruka Fujiwara. While the fic has just started, Haruka is shaping up to be the only one who won't be taking Alice's shit.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe
The most interesting part of it is that, while Alice is obviously a Sue, there's a secondary character that's a legit OC for Katie, named Haruka Fujiwara. While the fic has just started, Haruka is shaping up to be the only one who won't be taking Alice's shit.
* HeroicBlueScreenOfDeath: Haruka suffers one when she first confronts her Shadow.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Alice ends up leading Haruka to the latter's Shadow.]]
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** EasySexChange: Implied. Even though her family rejected her, her bio reveals that she's been on hormones for a year.
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** EasySexChange: Implied. Even though her [[spoiler:her family rejected her, her]], her bio reveals that she's been on hormones for a year.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Haruka gives one to Alice after the latter ran off because she was bored.
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* TheAce: Alice. She
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* TheAce: Alice. She
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: According to Alice's bio, the reason her Shadow shows up. [[spoiler:Once she accepts it, it turns into her Ultimate Persona.]]
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* TrollFic: The author of ''[[SwimmingInTerror SiT]]'' strikes again!
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* StealthPun: Nekomimisama, her base Persona, is a pun on ''nekomimi'' (cat ears) and ''kamisama'' (god). [[spoiler:Her Ultimate Persona, [[RidiculouslyLongName Mewnekamisamami]], is even more obvious that it's "cat eared goddess."]]
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* StealthPun: Nekomimisama, her base Persona, is a pun on ''nekomimi'' (cat ears) and ''kamisama'' (god). [[spoiler:Her Ultimate Persona, [[RidiculouslyLongName [[OverlyLongName Mewnekamisamami]], is even more obvious that it's "cat eared goddess."]]
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* ForeignExchangeStudent: Alice herself
* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up that role
* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up that role
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* DangerouslyShortSkirt: Alice legit says that about her winter outfit.
* ForeignExchangeStudent: Aliceherself
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* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up thatrolerole.
* ForeignExchangeStudent: Alice
* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up that
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* RunningGag: Narukami saying "I'm worth it," because of a misspelling in Chapter 1 (she misspelled "okay" as "olay).
* StealthPun: Nekomimisama, her base Persona, is a pun on ''nekomimi'' (cat ears) and ''kamisama'' (god). [[spoiler:Her Ultimate Persona, [[RidiculouslyLongName Mewnekamisamami]], is even more obvious that it's "cat eared goddess."]]
* ZettaiRyouiki: Alice, Type B in her winter clothes
* StealthPun: Nekomimisama, her base Persona, is a pun on ''nekomimi'' (cat ears) and ''kamisama'' (god). [[spoiler:Her Ultimate Persona, [[RidiculouslyLongName Mewnekamisamami]], is even more obvious that it's "cat eared goddess."]]
* ZettaiRyouiki: Alice, Type B in her winter clothes
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* {{Transsexual}}/{{Transgender}}: Haruka is male-to-female trans, as is said in her bio, and reveled by her Shadow in Chapter 5.
** EasySexChange: Implied. Even though her family rejected her, her bio reveals that she's been on hormones for a year.
** EasySexChange: Implied. Even though her family rejected her, her bio reveals that she's been on hormones for a year.
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''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana (yes, the same Arcana that the P3 protag used to ''seal away a great evil'') to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
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''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, [[ForeignExchangeStudent she got accepted into a transfer program, program]], bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana (yes, the same Arcana that the P3 protag used to ''seal away a great evil'') to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
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* ForeignExchangeStudent: Alice herself
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''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
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TO BE FINISHED
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''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. Alice gains the Universe Arcana (yes, the same Arcana that the P3 protag used to ''seal away a great evil'') to fight against the killer. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
TO BE FINISHEDThere are five semi-long chapters[[note]]Well, long compared to [=SiT=].[[/note]] out so far. Chapter one is [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/The-Second-Hand-Fool-A-Persona-4-Fanfic-Cht-1-518723411 here]].
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!!Tropes Associated with ''The Second-Hand Fool''
* AscendedExtra: The weather girl on the roof in ''P4'' becomes one of Alice's friends, Haruka Fujiwara.
* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up that role
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Lampshaded in the fifth chapter, with Alice's idea of splitting up being taken as a good idea... until [[OnlySaneMan Haruka]] says what a stupid idea it was.
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!!Tropes Associated with ''The Second-Hand Fool''
* AscendedExtra: The weather girl on the roof in ''P4'' becomes one of Alice's friends, Haruka Fujiwara.
* OnlySaneMan: Haruka seems to be taking up that role
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Lampshaded in the fifth chapter, with Alice's idea of splitting up being taken as a good idea... until [[OnlySaneMan Haruka]] says what a stupid idea it was.
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', based in the VideoGame/Persona4 universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba.
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'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', based in the VideoGame/Persona4 universe.VideoGame/{{Persona}} universe, specifically Persona 4. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
TO BE FINISHED
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba. She arrives with Yuu Narukami, and the same events start happening. It's a classic MarySue story, but it's interesting to note that Katie actually drew all of the art for each chapter, though the other character art are all from dollmakers.
TO BE FINISHED
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--> My name is Alice Walker. I know, I know, I'm not from Japan.
'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', based in the VideoGame/Persona4 universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba.
'''''The Second-Hand Fool''''' is a TrollFic written by [=Kawaiiwolf3=], the author of ''FanFic/SwimmingInTerror'', based in the VideoGame/Persona4 universe. Just like [=SiT=], ''Fool'' is about a MarySue joining the main character's main team and being so much better than them.
''Fool'' follows a girl named Alice Walker, an American school girl who is so smart, she got accepted into a transfer program, bringing her to Inaba.
