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* Punch Clock Villain : Miror B, and, to a lesser extent, Dakim.
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* RalphWiggum: Jimmy. Sometimes Johnson as well.
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** Dakim, while lecturing several Cipher office workers, makes a reference to TeamFortress2. Specifically, to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h42d0WHRSck the Meet the Soldier video]].
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** Dakim, while lecturing several Cipher office workers, makes a reference to TeamFortress2.VideoGame/TeamFortress2. Specifically, to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h42d0WHRSck the Meet the Soldier video]].
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** Another minor case is having one of Folly's Whismur one of the two that previously battled Wes, as it said 'not you guys again' to Umbreon and Espeon, but it's a diffrent one because it's a male, while the two Whismur's that battled Wes the first time were female.
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** Another minor case is having one of Folly's Whismur one of the two that previously battled Wes, as it said 'not you guys again' to Umbreon and Espeon, but it's a diffrent different one because it's a male, while the two Whismur's that battled Wes the first time were female.female.
*** Genders of opposing Pokemon have been known to switch despite the Pokemon being the same in the Genius Sonority games because they're randomised if they are not snaggable (e.g. Zook's Zangoose in XD can change gender between the first battle and the second when it is snaggable, but clearly Zook does not have two shadow Zangoose). The Whismur would not have pre-defined genders so it's a matter of chance of what gender they have - so the same one being in both battles is perfectly possible if it appeared that way for the author. (And as the battle in the story was breezed over, maybe a third Whismur had been sent out after the first two?) Bit too nitpicky there.
*** Genders of opposing Pokemon have been known to switch despite the Pokemon being the same in the Genius Sonority games because they're randomised if they are not snaggable (e.g. Zook's Zangoose in XD can change gender between the first battle and the second when it is snaggable, but clearly Zook does not have two shadow Zangoose). The Whismur would not have pre-defined genders so it's a matter of chance of what gender they have - so the same one being in both battles is perfectly possible if it appeared that way for the author. (And as the battle in the story was breezed over, maybe a third Whismur had been sent out after the first two?) Bit too nitpicky there.
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** Another minor case is having one of Folly's Whismur one of the two that previously battled Wes, as it said 'not you guys again' to Umbreon and Espeon, but it's a diffrent one because it's a male, while the two Whismur's that battled Wes the first time were female.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Makuhita is the red oni to Croconaw's blue oni.
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** Dakim, while lecturing several Cipher office workers, makes a reference to TeamFortress2. Specifically, to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h42d0WHRSck the Meet the Soldier video]].
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*TokenEvilTeamMate: Makuhita. DEFINETLEY Makuhita.
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** One unfortunate Magnemite shouts out "[[TheLegendOfZelda I am error!]]" as it gets KO'd.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Dakim BEATING UP A BUNCH OF POLICE WITH A CACTUS.
** Johnson defeating a Cipher peon with a ''Magikarp''.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Pretty much anything involving Tom.
** '''Cipher peons''': (Singing) "We are Cipher, we are here, something something we like beer! Gonna go kick up a fuss, all your base are belong to us..." (Notices the police force)
** The huge battle in the Pyrite Building. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Which involves Tom]].
** Johnson ''is'' a Crowning Moment Of Funny.
** Johnson defeating a Cipher peon with a ''Magikarp''.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Pretty much anything involving Tom.
** '''Cipher peons''': (Singing) "We are Cipher, we are here, something something we like beer! Gonna go kick up a fuss, all your base are belong to us..." (Notices the police force)
** The huge battle in the Pyrite Building. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Which involves Tom]].
** Johnson ''is'' a Crowning Moment Of Funny.
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: Tom, the Pyrite city town drunk.
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** The author addressed this in the next chapter.
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** Prominent examples include Rui(sometimes subverted because she was ocaisonally acts it out), Umbreon, and especially Mirror B.
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* WelcomeToCorneria: The NPCs in the Phenac Pokemon Center, very much so.
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* WelcomeToCorneria: The NPCs [=NPCs=] in the Phenac Pokemon Center, very much so.
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* SixthColumn: As revealed in Chapter 17, [[spoiler: Miror B. is working against Cipher from within, and has recruited Skrub to his cause.]]
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* WelcomeToCorneria: The NPCs in the Phenac Pokemon Center, very much so.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: A minor case, but Mayor Es Cade is referred to as being mayor of the whole Orre region. He's only the mayor of Phenac City, and the whole Orre region has a governor, not mayor.
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** The truth serum mentioned in chapter six has the same side-effect as eating a Glowstem from ''{{Pikmin}}'': uncontrollable episodes of impromptu break dancing.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "Or the failed attempt to get the Time Flute. Which failed."
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** Also, what happens to someone who breaks Orre's "double battles only" law.
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** Dakim's Golem goes through the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Black Knight]] routine, and his Metang makes several competitive battling references.
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* DumbMuscle: Dakim
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** Makuhita [[SuperSmashBros fights for his friends]].
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* [[INeedToGoIronMyDog We Have To Go Buy A Dishwasher]]
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Ein certainly has some unique ways to turn a Pokemon shadow.
** And he can even produce an umbrella and maracas out of it!
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* HammerSpace: During Wes' battle with Miror B, Miror B produces an umbrella and some maracas out of no where. [[FunnyAfro Some people think he may have pulled them out of his hair, though.]]
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* HammerSpace: During Wes' battle with Miror B, Miror B produces an umbrella and some maracas out of no where. [[FunnyAfro Some people think he may have pulled them out of his hair, though.]]
** Probably because the story ''specifically states''GoLookAtTheDistraction: Hey, is that they were pulled from his afro.a Gym Leader?
** Probably because the story ''specifically states''
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* AerithAndBob: Well, this story is based on PokemonColosseum, SoYeah. This has been lampshaded.
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* CaffeineBulletTime: Subverted; Yanma doesn't actually get his coffee beforehand, but is able to obliterate Dakim's Camerupt in hyperspeed on the promise of coffee as a reward. Yanma is in a perpetual caffeine high, anyway.
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** Not quite a ''food'', but Yanma loves coffeecoffeecoffee!
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* AntiVillain: Miror B. and Dakim to an extent, due to being PunchClockVillains. [[spoiler: Miror B. also betrayed Nascour and informed the police of the Mt. Battle attack.]]
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* DoNotTauntCthulhu: Duncan gets angry at Entei for standing on [[CargoShip his lawn]], and pokes it with a rake. It burns the rake and his lawn.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: [[spoiler: Es Cade puts out an arrest order on Wes after the Mt. Battle incident. Thankfully, Johnson is sent to arrest him and manages to tell him everything. After that, it's a simple matter of "correcting" Johnson about his orders and escaping to The Under.]]
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*AntiVillain: Miror B. and Dakim to an extent, due to being PunchClockVillains. [[spoiler: Miror B. also betrayed Nascour and informed the police of the Mt. Battle attack.]]
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-->'''Espeon''': Esp. (SPLAT.)
-->'''Umbreon''': Umbreon! Umbre... (And he has a [[BadassMoustache handlebar moustache]]! I wish I had one...)
-->'''Wes''': He [Entei] avoided the ground completely when he fell off of that platform – if that Poke Ball didn't hit though he's have gone...
-->'''Espeon''': Esp. (SPLAT.)
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*ShoutOut: In Chapter 17, a reporter [[PokemonSnap throws an apple at Quagsire before taking its photo]], claiming that's how they were taught to take pictures of Pokemon
**Dakim's Golem goes through the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Black Knight]] routine, and his Metang makes several competitive battling references.
**One chapter referenced YouTubePoop, with the Relic Stone being claimed to double as a football.
**Johnson at one point mistakenly refers to Trudly and Folly as [[HarryPotter George and Fred]].
*SixthColumn: As revealed in Chapter 17, [[spoiler: Miror B. is working against Cipher from within, and has recruited Skrub.]]
*SurrogateSoliloquy: Many times, but mainly for the comedic effect of a character assuming an inanimate object can talk. Johnson has tried questioning a statue and a pebble, and several reporters tried to interview a sandstorm.
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**One chapter referenced YouTubePoop, with the Relic Stone being claimed to double as a football.
**Johnson at one point mistakenly refers to Trudly and Folly as [[HarryPotter George and Fred]].
*SixthColumn: As revealed in Chapter 17, [[spoiler: Miror B. is working against Cipher from within, and has recruited Skrub.]]
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-->'''Wes''': [[DeadpanSnarker I have a feeling he likes Miror B.]]
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