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''[[http://web.archive.org/web/20210509221404/https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant.
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''[[http://web.archive.org/web/20210509221404/https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''.''Franchise/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Roy hits his DespairEventHorizon after his trusted comrade and ImpliedLoveInterest Riza dies. In his grief, he [[spoiler:tries to commit EquivalentExchange to get Alphonse back]], but he's [[InterruptedSuicide stopped]] by [[spoiler:Ed]]. This is [[spoiler:how he lost an arm]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Roy hits his DespairEventHorizon after his trusted comrade and ImpliedLoveInterest Riza dies. In his grief, he [[spoiler:tries to commit EquivalentExchange to get Alphonse back]], but he's [[InterruptedSuicide stopped]] by [[spoiler:Ed]]. This is [[spoiler:how he lost an arm]]arm.]]
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** Discussed and subverted. Roy thinks Winry is treating him as a replacement for Edward, and Winry wonders if he sees her as a replacement for Riza, but there's more to their complex relationship besides these passing similarities to pass loves.
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** Discussed and subverted. Roy thinks Winry is treating him as a replacement for Edward, and Winry wonders if he sees her as a replacement for Riza, but there's more to their complex relationship besides these passing similarities to pass past loves.
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* HurtComfortFic: With a strong emphasis on the "hurt" and very little "comfort". Roy turns up at Winry's house, bloody and missing an arm. She nurses him, but it's incredibly awkward because of Winry hates Roy's guts and he's deeply ashamed of what he did to her family.
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* HurtComfortFic: With a strong emphasis on the "hurt" and very little "comfort". Roy turns up at Winry's house, bloody and missing an arm. She nurses him, but it's incredibly awkward because of Winry hates Roy's guts and he's deeply ashamed of what he did to her family.
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* ElephantInTheRoom: Until chapter 5, Winry and Roy skirt around the issue of Roy having killed Winry's parents.
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* ElephantInTheRoom: ElephantInTheLivingRoom: Until chapter 5, Winry and Roy skirt around the issue of Roy having killed Winry's parents.
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Winry is doing another all-nighter. She's been staying up late more frequently due to the war going on in the East. On the particularly rainy night, a soldier turns up at her Rockbell Automail begging for an automail arm. It's the last person Winry had ever expected to see turn up at her door again: Roy Mustang.
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Winry is doing another all-nighter. She's been staying up late more frequently due to the war going on in the East. On the particularly rainy night, a soldier turns up at her Rockbell Automail begging for an automail arm. It's the last person Winry had ever expected to see turn up at her door again: Roy Mustang.
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* ChildSoldiers: Discussed when Winry monologues that one of thr things she hates about Roy is that he drafted a twelve year old into the military, no matter how smart or mature for his age that Edward was.
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* ChildSoldiers: Discussed when Winry monologues that one of thr the things she hates about Roy is that he drafted a twelve year old into the military, no matter how smart or mature for his age that Edward was.
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->''"I looked at him and saw Ed sometimes. He looked at me and saw Riza Hawkeye a few times, too. Maybe we were both just using one another? Maybe that's what he thought, and I must have thought that at some point, too".\\
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* GenderFlip: Den is mistakingly referred to as male. In canon, Den is a female dog.
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* SnowEqualsDeath: It starts snowing when Roy's health takes a turn for the worst. Subverted in that he doesn't die.
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* SnowEqualsDeath: SnowMeansDeath: It starts snowing when Roy's health takes a turn for the worst. Subverted in that he doesn't die.
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->''I looked at him and saw Ed sometimes. He looked at me and saw Riza Hawkeye a few times, too. Maybe we were both just using one another? Maybe that's what he thought, and I must have thought that at some point, too.\\
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant to canon.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant to canon.canon-compliant.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Winry tentatively names her new puppy "Den II", though she thinks about naming him "Roy" because his destructive nature brings to mind the alchemist.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Discussed and subverted. Roy thinks Winry is treating him as a replacement for Edward, and Winry wonders if he sees her as a replacement for Riza, but there's more to their complex relationship besides these passing similarities to pass loves.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: ReplacementGoldfish:
** Discussed and subverted. Roy thinks Winry is treating him as a replacement for Edward, and Winry wonders if he sees her as a replacement for Riza, but there's more to their complex relationship besides these passing similarities to passloves.loves.
** Winry adopts a puppy that looks a lot like Den. She hasn't decided on a name yet but tentatively names him "Den II".
** Discussed and subverted. Roy thinks Winry is treating him as a replacement for Edward, and Winry wonders if he sees her as a replacement for Riza, but there's more to their complex relationship besides these passing similarities to pass
** Winry adopts a puppy that looks a lot like Den. She hasn't decided on a name yet but tentatively names him "Den II".
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* DiedInYourArms: It's mentioned that Riza died in Roy's arms.
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* DiedInYourArms: DiedInYourArmsTonight: It's mentioned that Riza died in Roy's arms.
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->''I looked at him and saw Ed sometimes. He looked at me and saw Riza Hawkeye a few times, too. Maybe we were both just using one another? Maybe that's what he thought, and I must have thought that at some point, too.//
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->''I looked at him and saw Ed sometimes. He looked at me and saw Riza Hawkeye a few times, too. Maybe we were both just using one another? Maybe that's what he thought, and I must have thought that at some point, too.//\\
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->''I looked at him and saw Ed sometimes. He looked at me and saw Riza Hawkeye a few times, too. Maybe we were both just using one another? Maybe that's what he thought, and I must have thought that at some point, too.//
They were both wrong. She knew that, and he would figure it out, eventually.''
They were both wrong. She knew that, and he would figure it out, eventually.''
* AlternateUniverseFic: ''Conqueror of Shamballa'' never happened and [[spoiler:Alphonse brought Ed back to Amestris, but at the cost of being sent to the other side of the Gate himself]].
* BloodFromTheMouth: Subverted. After installing Roy's automail arm, Winry notices that he's bleeding from the mouth. It turns out to be nothing serious. Roy just bit his tongue.
* DrivenToSuicide: Roy hits his DespairEventHorizon after his trusted comrade and ImpliedLoveInterest Riza dies. In his grief, he [[spoiler:tries to commit EquivalentExchange to get Alphonse back]], but he's [[InterruptedSuicide stopped]] by [[spoiler:Ed]]. This is [[spoiler:how he lost an arm]]
* BloodFromTheMouth: Subverted. After installing Roy's automail arm, Winry notices that he's bleeding from the mouth. It turns out to be nothing serious. Roy just bit his tongue.
* DrivenToSuicide: Roy hits his DespairEventHorizon after his trusted comrade and ImpliedLoveInterest Riza dies. In his grief, he [[spoiler:tries to commit EquivalentExchange to get Alphonse back]], but he's [[InterruptedSuicide stopped]] by [[spoiler:Ed]]. This is [[spoiler:how he lost an arm]]
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* SnowEqualsDeath: It starts snowing when Roy's health takes a turn for the worst.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Discussed and subverted. Roy thinks Winry is treating him as a replacement for Edward, and Winry wonders if he sees her as a replacement for Riza, but there's more to their complex relationship besides these passing similarities to pass loves.
* SnowEqualsDeath: It starts snowing when Roy's health takes a turn for the worst. Subverted in that he doesn't die.
* SnowEqualsDeath: It starts snowing when Roy's health takes a turn for the worst. Subverted in that he doesn't die.
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** In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in his grief.
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** In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in his grief. It's later shown that [[spoiler:he ''thought'' of it but ultimately didn't]].
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* DiedInYourArms: It's mentioned that Riza died in Roy's arms.
* ElephantInTheRoom: Until chapter 5, Winry and Roy skirt around the issue of Roy having killed Winry's parents.
* ElephantInTheRoom: Until chapter 5, Winry and Roy skirt around the issue of Roy having killed Winry's parents.
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* WhamLine: In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in his grief.
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* WhamLine: SnowEqualsDeath: It starts snowing when Roy's health takes a turn for the worst.
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** In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in hisgrief.grief.
** By the end of chapter five, the reader understands why everyone wants to know where Ed is after Winry reads the headline "''Fullmetal Alchemist named as a suspect in the likely death of General Roy Mustang, currently missing and last seen with Major Elric shortly after the latest attack on the border.''"
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** In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in his
** By the end of chapter five, the reader understands why everyone wants to know where Ed is after Winry reads the headline "''Fullmetal Alchemist named as a suspect in the likely death of General Roy Mustang, currently missing and last seen with Major Elric shortly after the latest attack on the border.''"
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Winry is doing another all-nighter. She's been staying up late more frequently due to the war going on in the East. On the particularly rainy night, a soldier turns up at her Rockbell Automail begging for an automail arm. It's the last person Winry had ever expected to see turn up at her door again: Roy Mustang.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant to canon.
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!!''The Planets'' provides examples of:
* ChildSoldiers: Discussed when Winry monologues that one of thr things she hates about Roy is that he drafted a twelve year old into the military, no matter how smart or mature for his age that Edward was.
* HeroicSacrifice: Deconstructed with Riza. She traded her life for Roy's by taking shots aimed for him. Winry admits it's a heroic death from a woman who pledged her loyalty to protect Roy at all times, but it still makes her uncomfortable to think about and she wonders if Riza regretted it. The sacrifice also traumatized Roy.
* HurtComfortFic: With a strong emphasis on the "hurt" and very little "comfort". Roy turns up at Winry's house, bloody and missing an arm. She nurses him, but it's incredibly awkward because of Winry hates Roy's guts and he's deeply ashamed of what he did to her family.
* WhamLine: In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in his grief.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2648620/1/The-Planets The Planets]]'' is a Winry/Roy-themed fanfic based off of ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist''. It's set a few years post-series and is considered an AU due to some differences in canon, but it's mostly canon-compliant to canon.
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!!''The Planets'' provides examples of:
* ChildSoldiers: Discussed when Winry monologues that one of thr things she hates about Roy is that he drafted a twelve year old into the military, no matter how smart or mature for his age that Edward was.
* HeroicSacrifice: Deconstructed with Riza. She traded her life for Roy's by taking shots aimed for him. Winry admits it's a heroic death from a woman who pledged her loyalty to protect Roy at all times, but it still makes her uncomfortable to think about and she wonders if Riza regretted it. The sacrifice also traumatized Roy.
* HurtComfortFic: With a strong emphasis on the "hurt" and very little "comfort". Roy turns up at Winry's house, bloody and missing an arm. She nurses him, but it's incredibly awkward because of Winry hates Roy's guts and he's deeply ashamed of what he did to her family.
* WhamLine: In chapter two, Winry reads a newspaper and sees that Roy is MIA and presumed dead. That's not the Wham Line--the next one is: "''Mustang's disappearance occurred shortly after the death of his trusted aide and second-in-command, Major Riza Hawkeye''". It makes the reader wonder if Roy tried to resurrect Riza in his grief.
